Chapter 79: Destination Gardenia Town!

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The little girl behind the chaos was named Luna, and she was the trainer of the so-called Red Lightning. Bored with her solitary life, Luna, along with her Pokémon, invented the persona of Red Lightning. Equipping her Scizor with a small camera and loudspeaker, she remotely controlled it to pose as Red Lightning, challenging anyone in Commerce City with a Pokémon. Refusing wasn't an option—her Scizor would fire off a Hyper Beam to ensure compliance. Currently, Luna sat atop her high-rise home, remotely directing Scizor. Meanwhile, Ash's Charizard took to the skies without needing instruction. As Ash's strongest Pokémon, it had an exceptional ability to battle independently. "Hyper Beam!" Red Lightning launched a Hyper Beam, but Charizard effortlessly evaded it with a flap of its wings and prepared to counterattack with Flamethrower. Remembering Ash's earlier instruction to hold back, it switched to Fire Spin instead. Red Lightning's speed was impressive, but Charizard was faster. With a significant level advantage, it overwhelmed the opponent. "Swift!" Red Lightning attempted to retaliate with Swift, but Charizard's Fire Spin encased it, reducing its red cape to ashes. Overwhelmed by Charizard's speed, Red Lightning let out a cry of frustration before disappearing into the wind, retreating before anyone could get a clear look. "That was amazing, Charizard! You got revenge for us! If it hadn't run off, I'd have wanted to draw on its face in return!" Misty and May were thrilled with Charizard's swift victory. "Roar!" Charizard snorted nonchalantly, uninterested in battling such a low-level opponent. "Alright, everyone, let's track down that Red Lightning. I think I know where it went," Ash said. He climbed onto Charizard, called out Pidgeot for Misty and May to ride, and directed them to Commerce City's tallest building, the one Luna lived in according to his memory from the original storyline. As expected, the disguised Scizor had returned to the rooftop of the building. "Scizor, are you okay? Did the flames hurt you?" Luna anxiously checked her Pokémon. Her parents were genius scientists but rarely spent time with her. For Luna, Scizor was her most important companion, irreplaceable even by her parents. Scizor's injuries were minor, thanks to Charizard holding back. "That Charizard was so strong. Scizor, we..." Luna started to speak but froze when she saw Charizard and Pidgeot landing on her rooftop. "How did you get into my house?! Get out! You're not welcome here!" Luna shouted, trying to sound fierce but coming off adorably angry. "You were right, Ash—Red Lightning is a Scizor! That thing on its neck must be the camera and speaker!" "Hey, how can you go around causing mischief in the city? The Pokémon you've messed with, and the kids who own them, are really upset!" Misty and May scolded Luna, their anger boiling over. At that moment, Luna's butler arrived, and she turned her frustration on him. Through their discussion, Misty and May learned about Luna's loneliness, which immediately softened their hearts. "Luna, so that's why you've been acting out? Being alone at home must be tough. I totally understand how you feel!" May said, holding her Squirtle and approaching Luna. "Yeah, Luna, I've got three older sisters, but they never took me along when they went out. I was always stuck at home with my Pokémon as my only company," Misty added. Their goal was clear: to convince Luna to leave home and start her own journey. "My dad's a Gym Leader and always busy, so he didn't spend much time with us either," Misty continued. The two girls shared their experiences of traveling with friends, seeing new places, and growing through their adventures. "Even when we fail and feel disappointed, having companions around helps us bounce back and keep striving toward our goals. You can do it too, Luna!" Moved by their words, Luna became intrigued. Her butler, too, was pleased—if Luna started traveling, her mischievous antics in the city would finally stop. After introducing himself, Ash explained that he might need her parents' help in the future and asked for her support. Luna readily agreed; her parents were always indulgent with her requests. Before leaving, the butler informed them that a Pokémon Contest would be held in Gardenia Town in two days, just ahead of Commerce City. Excited by the news, the group set off, gaining Luna's support for Ash's upcoming research on Mega Evolution and Dynamax. -------------- T/N: Access 30 Chapters in Advance on my P@treon: [email protected]/PokePals

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Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend Author:PokePals
Chapter 1: I am Ash Ketchum Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2: Sign-In Rewards and System Starter Pack! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3: May, I'll Wait for You! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4: Mewtwo Becomes My Guardian! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5: Pidgeot, I'm Here to Pick You Up! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6: Scott and Granny Agatha! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ash's Elite Battle! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8: Going Home, Signing In Again! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Clash of Jealous Hearts! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10: Team Rocket's Double Trouble! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11: Ash Saves Misty and May! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12: Training Triumphs and a New Journey Begins! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Swarm of Beedrill VS Fusion of Wind, Fire, and Thunder! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14: Moonlight Dance, Signing in at Mount Moon! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15: The Flames of Friendship: Charizard's Return! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16: Charizard VS Articuno! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17: Charizard’s Battle to Become a Legend! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18: Victory! Triple Experience Critical Hit! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19: "The Road to Saffron: Gordon’s Stolen Invention!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20: "Miracle Candy and a Giant Caterpie!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21: Ash's Preparation for the Future! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22: Saffron Soak: Rest and Relaxation! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ash’s Insight: Legendary Power! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24: Harley’s Green Hat! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25: Is Ash Acting Sneaky? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Saffron Con, Dazzling Performances! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27: Red-Bandana May vs Green-Hat Harley! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29: Haunter of the Ghost Tower! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30: Catching Haunter, the Deserted Ghost Town! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Two Girls’ Fear! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ponyta's Evolution, Rapidash! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33: Kirlia and Ralts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34: Jame’s Family Villa Castle Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35: Sign-In Battle Arena! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36: Grovyle VS Hariyama! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37: Evolution, Sceptile’s Rise! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38: Snorlax’s War of Attrition! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Symbol of Guts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Pokémon Breeding Center! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41: Pikachu Learns Volt Tackle! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42: Pokémon Eggs and Training! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Silver Town Contest! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Roaring Youth and the Silver Ribbon! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Lake of Dragonair! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 46: Evolution, Crawdaunt! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 47: Misty and May Join Forces! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 48: Signing in for the Battle Dome! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 49: First Encounter with Elesa! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Battle with Tucker! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 51: Fusion of Fire and Water vs. Earth Storm! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Symbol of Tactics! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 53: Ash’s Electrifying Encounter with Elekid! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 54: Purchasing Items, the Soothe Bell! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 55: Scyther and the Surprise Hatching! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 56: A Call from Ash! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Pokémon Rangers! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 58: Encounter with Celebi! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 59: True Friendship! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 60: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 1! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 61: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 2! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 62: Signing In to Battle Pike! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 63: Battle Pike Showdown! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 64: Pikachu Enters the Pike! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Gold Symbol of Luck! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 66: A Fond Goodbye to Brock! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Wisteria Pokémon Contest! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 68: Munchlax's Comeback – A One-Hit Victory! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 69: A Gastly Challenge at Maiden’s Peak! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 70: The Duel of Titans! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Awakening of Haunter Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 72: Battle Palace Beckons, Mewtwo's Shadow Looms Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 73: Signing In to Battle Palace! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 74: VS Spenser, Jungle Battle! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 75: Intense Battle! Synced Experience! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gold Symbol of Spirits! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 77: Lapras, Long Time No See! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 78: The Red Lightning of Commerce City! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 79: Destination Gardenia Town! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 80: A Pleasant Surprise – Ralts Evolves! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 81: May vs. Jessie! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 82: The Gardenia Ribbon! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 83: The Arrival of Anabel! Sep 30th, 2025
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