Chapter 78: The Red Lightning of Commerce City!

Words : 1061 Updated : Sep 30th, 2025
After their playful reunion, Ash turned to Lapras with a warm smile and asked, "Lapras, how is your pod doing these days?" His tone carried both curiosity and concern. Ash knew the decision to take Lapras back on his journey would be complicated if there wasn't another capable leader in its group. Lapras, understanding Ash's intentions, leaned forward and nuzzled his head gently, letting out soft, melodic cries. Ash closed his eyes, his Aura connecting to Lapras' emotions, allowing him to understand its thoughts clearly. He nodded and smiled, patting Lapras' smooth, cool head. "I see, I see. That's great to hear!" he said reassuringly. "Pikachu!" Pikachu chirped excitedly, leaping onto Lapras' back. Through his Aura communication, Ash discovered that a new leader had already emerged in the Lapras pod. This eased his concern, and he chuckled softly. "Then, Lapras, say goodbye to your companions. Don't worry—we'll visit Tangelo Island from time to time so you can meet them again." Lapras cried happily, its large eyes glistening. It turned to its pod, swimming toward the group. From within the pod, another Lapras emerged, displaying a confident and protective demeanor. This was the successor Lapras had mentioned. The two exchanged a series of harmonious cries, a farewell filled with mutual respect and understanding. Ash and his friends watched the touching scene unfold. Misty sighed, her heart warmed by the display. "They're saying their goodbyes. It's so heartwarming to see," she said, glancing at her Water Pokémon, who had also bonded with Lapras during their time on the island. May nodded, holding her Squirtle. "It's moments like this that make me love being a Trainer even more." Ash swapped Lapras' original Poké Ball for a Heal Ball, carefully recalling it. With Lapras officially back on his team, they boarded a passenger ferry departing Tangelo Island, heading toward the Kanto mainland. During the journey, Ash decided to make use of the time by teaching Misty and May some basic cooking skills. "If you want to eat delicious meals like the ones I made yesterday, you'll need to learn to cook," he teased. Though initially hesitant, the girls eventually joined in. They chopped vegetables under Ash's supervision, occasionally bursting into laughter at each other's mistakes. Pikachu watched from the side, offering enthusiastic encouragement. As the ferry cruised toward their destination, the hours flew by. By evening, they arrived at Commerce City, a bustling metropolis teeming with life. Once docked, May's eyes sparkled at the sight of the city's many shops and Pokémon stores. She dragged Misty off for a shopping spree, leaving Ash to handle the Pokémon Center visit alone. Meanwhile, Ash headed to the Pokémon Center to have Nurse Joy check his Pokémon's health. Midway, Brock called via video. He appeared on screen alongside Pike Queen Lucy, both looking content. After some casual conversation, Ash learned that both sets of parents already knew about their relationship. "Lightning fast, huh..." "Ash, haha! You better get moving too! Misty, May, and Elesa are all great options. As for me and Lucy, we've decided to take some time off to travel again as Pokémon Breeders. Who knows? We might even join you on your journey! Oh, by the way, Lucy said that the Pyramid King Brandon is a terrifyingly strong Trainer, even tougher than an average Elite Four member. Good luck conquering the Battle Frontier!" The call ended, leaving Ash genuinely happy for Brock. While Nurse Joy checked his Pokémon, Ash overheard commotion near the entrance. Three kids, around his age, burst in, their expressions filled with frustration. "Nurse Joy! The Red Lightning showed up again! It challenged me, and my Poliwag lost!" one boy exclaimed, cradling his graffiti-covered Pokémon. Ash blinked, then chuckled softly. "The Red Lightning? Let me guess—Scizor in a red cloak?" he said aloud, recalling a similar incident from the original series. The kids stared at him incredulously. "Scizor? No way! The Red Lightning is a legend here!" they protested. That Red Lightning Scizor belonged to a girl named Luna, whose parents were brilliant inventors and researchers. Thinking about Mega Evolution and Dynamax, Ash decided it was worth meeting Luna. Ash shrugged, leaving the kids to their argument. He stepped outside just in time to see Misty and May rushing toward him, their faces red with anger. "Ash!" Misty fumed. "Look at what happened to Starmie!" She pointed to her Pokémon, whose elegant gem had been defaced with crude doodles. "Squirtle too!" May wailed, holding her equally defaced Pokémon. Ash held back laughter, then explained his theory about the Red Lightning being a disguised Scizor. Upon hearing this, Misty and May immediately volunteered to join him in finding and confronting the culprit. "Let's handle this quickly," Ash said, releasing Charizard from its Poké Ball. The fiery Pokémon roared, eager for action. Ash patted its head. "Charizard, hold back a bit, okay? No knocking it out in one shot." Charizard snorted, exhaling a plume of smoke. It didn't take long to find their target. Near a park, a red-cloaked figure floated briefly on a strong gust of wind between two buildings, landing gracefully on the street below. "There it is!" May exclaimed, pointing. "Red Lightning, huh? More like Scizor playing dress-up," Ash said, smirking. The figure tilted its head, clearly taken aback. "What did you say? Scizor? I'm the legendary Red Lightning!" it retorted, its voice amplified through a hidden speaker. Ash stepped forward, crossing his arms. "If you're so legendary, prove it. Let's battle." Charizard roared in agreement, spreading its wings wide. The Red Lightning hesitated but then issued a command. "Hyper Beam, now!" Meanwhile, on a nearby rooftop, a young girl Luna watched the scene unfold on her laptop, visibly annoyed. The so-called Red Lightning was indeed her Scizor in disguise. But she hadn't expected someone to see through it. Luna, the mastermind behind the Red Lightning, had outfitted her Scizor with a red cloak, a camera, and a voice modulator to create the illusion of a mysterious challenger. For her, it was all harmless fun—until now. "Hmph! If that's how it is, I'll beat him and cover his Charizard in graffiti too!" -------------- T/N: Access 30 Chapters in Advance on my P@treon: [email protected]/PokePals

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Contents
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend Author:PokePals
Chapter 1: I am Ash Ketchum Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2: Sign-In Rewards and System Starter Pack! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3: May, I'll Wait for You! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4: Mewtwo Becomes My Guardian! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5: Pidgeot, I'm Here to Pick You Up! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6: Scott and Granny Agatha! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ash's Elite Battle! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8: Going Home, Signing In Again! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Clash of Jealous Hearts! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10: Team Rocket's Double Trouble! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11: Ash Saves Misty and May! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12: Training Triumphs and a New Journey Begins! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Swarm of Beedrill VS Fusion of Wind, Fire, and Thunder! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14: Moonlight Dance, Signing in at Mount Moon! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15: The Flames of Friendship: Charizard's Return! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16: Charizard VS Articuno! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17: Charizard’s Battle to Become a Legend! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18: Victory! Triple Experience Critical Hit! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19: "The Road to Saffron: Gordon’s Stolen Invention!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20: "Miracle Candy and a Giant Caterpie!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21: Ash's Preparation for the Future! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22: Saffron Soak: Rest and Relaxation! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ash’s Insight: Legendary Power! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24: Harley’s Green Hat! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25: Is Ash Acting Sneaky? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Saffron Con, Dazzling Performances! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27: Red-Bandana May vs Green-Hat Harley! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29: Haunter of the Ghost Tower! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30: Catching Haunter, the Deserted Ghost Town! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Two Girls’ Fear! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ponyta's Evolution, Rapidash! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33: Kirlia and Ralts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34: Jame’s Family Villa Castle Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35: Sign-In Battle Arena! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36: Grovyle VS Hariyama! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37: Evolution, Sceptile’s Rise! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38: Snorlax’s War of Attrition! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Symbol of Guts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Pokémon Breeding Center! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41: Pikachu Learns Volt Tackle! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42: Pokémon Eggs and Training! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Silver Town Contest! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Roaring Youth and the Silver Ribbon! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Lake of Dragonair! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 46: Evolution, Crawdaunt! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 47: Misty and May Join Forces! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 48: Signing in for the Battle Dome! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 49: First Encounter with Elesa! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Battle with Tucker! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 51: Fusion of Fire and Water vs. Earth Storm! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Symbol of Tactics! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 53: Ash’s Electrifying Encounter with Elekid! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 54: Purchasing Items, the Soothe Bell! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 55: Scyther and the Surprise Hatching! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 56: A Call from Ash! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Pokémon Rangers! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 58: Encounter with Celebi! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 59: True Friendship! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 60: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 1! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 61: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 2! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 62: Signing In to Battle Pike! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 63: Battle Pike Showdown! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 64: Pikachu Enters the Pike! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Gold Symbol of Luck! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 66: A Fond Goodbye to Brock! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Wisteria Pokémon Contest! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 68: Munchlax's Comeback – A One-Hit Victory! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 69: A Gastly Challenge at Maiden’s Peak! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 70: The Duel of Titans! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Awakening of Haunter Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 72: Battle Palace Beckons, Mewtwo's Shadow Looms Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 73: Signing In to Battle Palace! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 74: VS Spenser, Jungle Battle! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 75: Intense Battle! Synced Experience! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gold Symbol of Spirits! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 77: Lapras, Long Time No See! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 78: The Red Lightning of Commerce City! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 79: Destination Gardenia Town! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 80: A Pleasant Surprise – Ralts Evolves! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 81: May vs. Jessie! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 82: The Gardenia Ribbon! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 83: The Arrival of Anabel! Sep 30th, 2025
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