Chapter 148: Dawn vs. Zoey

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"Misdreavus, take the stage!" Zoey's choice for this round was Misdreavus. She had decided to showcase different Pokémon for her first and second performances. "Misdreavus, use Double Team within the mist!" The Capsule Seal attached to Misdreavus's Poké Ball released a swirling mist as the Ghost-type appeared. Taking full advantage of the fog, Misdreavus swiftly executed Double Team, creating multiple illusions of itself. Then, with a dazzling flash, it followed up with Confuse Ray, the glowing orbs weaving eerily through the fog, adding an ethereal touch to the display. Finally, Zoey commanded Misdreavus to wrap up with a well-rehearsed move—Thunder Wave. The golden electrical waves crackled through the mist, illuminating Misdreavus's illusions in a mesmerizing spectacle. With three distinct techniques, Misdreavus delivered a captivating performance, earning unanimous praise from the judges. Dawn's Turn Backstage in the waiting room, Dawn watched Zoey's performance on the large screen. A tight knot of nerves twisted in her stomach. Zoey... She really is strong. No wonder she already has a Ribbon. But she shook her head and clenched her fists. No! I can do this! Dawn, you've got this! Go for it! You're the best! Contestants took the stage one after another, each trying to outshine the others with their dazzling routines. Meanwhile, in the audience, Anabel turned to Ash with a worried expression. "Ash, I wonder how Dawn is feeling right now... It's her first contest, so she must be really nervous." Ash nodded, his eyes fixed on the stage. "She's definitely nervous. That's just how it is the first few times. She'll get used to it after more contests. It's part of the process. But that Zoey girl you just met—her Misdreavus's Thunder Wave was strong, and her performance style fits the judges' preferences really well. She's probably a top contender for the win. Dawn still has a lot to learn. I just hope she doesn't get too discouraged if things don't go her way." "Pika pika, Pikachu!" "Huh? Pikachu, are you saying this is just like when May entered her first contest?" "Pika!" Pikachu nodded. Finally, it was Dawn's turn! "You got this, Dawn! Go!" Taking a deep breath, Dawn stepped forward as the curtain rose. Ash, Anabel, Zoey—who had returned to the waiting room—and her mother, Johanna, watching from home, all had their eyes locked on her. So nervous... For a moment, doubt crept in. But she shook it off. "Piplup, take the stage with style!" Dawn had attached a Bubble Seal to Piplup's Poké Ball. As the small blue penguin emerged, shimmering bubbles floated around it, reflecting the stage lights beautifully. "Pip-piplup!" Piplup swayed its tiny body cutely, and Dawn began her commands. "Piplup, use Bubble Beam! Mix your bubbles with the ones from the Capsule Seal!" "Pipluuup!" Piplup released a stream of bubbles that intertwined with the existing ones. The contrast between the Capsule Seal's crystal-clear bubbles and Piplup's deeper blue ones created a mesmerizing effect, making the display even more enchanting. "Great! Now, use Peck—focus all your power into your beak!" "Pipluuup!" Piplup's beak elongated, glowing with energy as it leaped into the air. Then— Pop! Pop! Pop! It pecked at the bubbles, bursting them one by one in a stunning chain reaction! "Whoa! Everyone, look at that! Piplup's beak extended—this is a sign of precise control! What an impressive display!" As the bubbles burst, tiny water droplets sparkled in the air, showering down and making Piplup's feathers glisten beautifully. "A unique performance—very impressive." "Oh my, I love it!" "The scattered water droplets highlight Piplup's charm even more, making its color stand out. A wonderful presentation!" The judges showered Dawn with praise. Applause erupted across the venue, waves of cheers rolling through the audience. "Thank you, Miss Dawn and Piplup, for that delightful performance! Now, let's welcome our next contestant—" ..... Once all the performances were completed, tension filled the air. The judges now had to select the top eight Coordinators who would advance to the next round—the battle performances! "Dun-dun-duuun! Everyone, look at the screen! These are the eight contestants who made it to the next round! And now, let's see how the battle matchups will be decided—random selection by the computer!" Dawn held her breath as the names appeared on the big screen. She made it! Zoey did too! And then— Dawn's opponent was... Zoey! Her heart skipped a beat. "I'm so nervous... But Zoey looks so calm, so confident. I still have so much to learn... But no worries! I'll do my best, catch up to everyone, and then surpass them!" Battle Round Begins! The second round kicked off! Dawn chose her newly caught Buneary, while Zoey sent out her Glameow. "Dawn, even though we're friends, I won't go easy on you! Glameow, use Shadow Claw!" "Of course not! Buneary, jump and use Ice Beam!" Since Buneary was a Normal-type, Shadow Claw wouldn't affect it. Dawn's logic was sound. But Zoey was a seasoned competitor, with far more experience in making moves look stunning in battle performances. The moment Shadow Claw and Ice Beam clashed, the icy attack tried to freeze over the spectral claw—but Shadow Claw tore right through the forming ice, shattering it into glittering shards that rained down beautifully around Glameow. The judges awarded points to Zoey for style. Meanwhile, Dawn's score dropped! "So amazing... I didn't know it could work like that..." But she wasn't giving up. "Buneary, you're still in the air—use Bounce into a Jump Kick!" "Bun!" Dawn had planned this from the start! Jump Kick, a Fighting-type move, landed cleanly on Glameow, causing Zoey's score to drop more than Dawn's had. The judges noted that Dawn's move not only dealt damage but also effectively showcased Buneary's natural jumping ability—highlighting its charm. "Not bad, Dawn! But I won't let you have another free hit! Glameow, charge in—Shadow Claw again!" "You're using it again? Buneary, freeze the ground with Ice Beam!" A thin layer of ice coated the stage! "Now's our chance! Buneary, go for another Jump Kick!" Dawn's eyes lit up as Glameow slipped slightly on the ice. Another hit—Zoey's score dropped further! But— "Glameow, use Shadow Claw on the ice!" Zoey's quick thinking allowed Glameow to shatter the ice beneath its paws, creating a cascade of tiny ice shards. The unexpected debris disrupted Buneary's landing—sending it crashing down instead! Dawn's points dropped again! "Glameow, use your tail to jump—Steel Tail, now!" "Meow!" "Buneary, grab Glameow's tail with your ears!" The crowd was on the edge of their seats. Both Zoey and Dawn commanded their Pokémon with precision, making full use of their unique abilities. Whether it was Glameow's elegant agility or Buneary's incredible jumps, both Pokémon shone in their own way. The clock ticked down. Neither side had secured a decisive lead. Then— Time ran out! -------------- T/N: Access 40 Chapters in Advance on my P@treon: [email protected]/PokePals

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Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend Author:PokePals
Chapter 1: I am Ash Ketchum Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2: Sign-In Rewards and System Starter Pack! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3: May, I'll Wait for You! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4: Mewtwo Becomes My Guardian! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5: Pidgeot, I'm Here to Pick You Up! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6: Scott and Granny Agatha! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ash's Elite Battle! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8: Going Home, Signing In Again! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Clash of Jealous Hearts! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10: Team Rocket's Double Trouble! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11: Ash Saves Misty and May! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12: Training Triumphs and a New Journey Begins! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Swarm of Beedrill VS Fusion of Wind, Fire, and Thunder! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14: Moonlight Dance, Signing in at Mount Moon! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15: The Flames of Friendship: Charizard's Return! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16: Charizard VS Articuno! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17: Charizard’s Battle to Become a Legend! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18: Victory! Triple Experience Critical Hit! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19: "The Road to Saffron: Gordon’s Stolen Invention!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20: "Miracle Candy and a Giant Caterpie!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21: Ash's Preparation for the Future! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22: Saffron Soak: Rest and Relaxation! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ash’s Insight: Legendary Power! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24: Harley’s Green Hat! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25: Is Ash Acting Sneaky? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Saffron Con, Dazzling Performances! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27: Red-Bandana May vs Green-Hat Harley! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29: Haunter of the Ghost Tower! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30: Catching Haunter, the Deserted Ghost Town! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Two Girls’ Fear! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ponyta's Evolution, Rapidash! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33: Kirlia and Ralts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34: Jame’s Family Villa Castle Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35: Sign-In Battle Arena! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36: Grovyle VS Hariyama! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37: Evolution, Sceptile’s Rise! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38: Snorlax’s War of Attrition! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Symbol of Guts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Pokémon Breeding Center! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41: Pikachu Learns Volt Tackle! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42: Pokémon Eggs and Training! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Silver Town Contest! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Roaring Youth and the Silver Ribbon! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Lake of Dragonair! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 46: Evolution, Crawdaunt! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 47: Misty and May Join Forces! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 48: Signing in for the Battle Dome! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 49: First Encounter with Elesa! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Battle with Tucker! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 51: Fusion of Fire and Water vs. Earth Storm! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Symbol of Tactics! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 53: Ash’s Electrifying Encounter with Elekid! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 54: Purchasing Items, the Soothe Bell! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 55: Scyther and the Surprise Hatching! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 56: A Call from Ash! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Pokémon Rangers! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 58: Encounter with Celebi! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 59: True Friendship! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 60: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 1! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 61: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 2! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 62: Signing In to Battle Pike! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 63: Battle Pike Showdown! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 64: Pikachu Enters the Pike! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Gold Symbol of Luck! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 66: A Fond Goodbye to Brock! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Wisteria Pokémon Contest! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 68: Munchlax's Comeback – A One-Hit Victory! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 69: A Gastly Challenge at Maiden’s Peak! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 70: The Duel of Titans! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Awakening of Haunter Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 72: Battle Palace Beckons, Mewtwo's Shadow Looms Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 73: Signing In to Battle Palace! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 74: VS Spenser, Jungle Battle! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 75: Intense Battle! Synced Experience! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gold Symbol of Spirits! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 77: Lapras, Long Time No See! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 78: The Red Lightning of Commerce City! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 79: Destination Gardenia Town! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 80: A Pleasant Surprise – Ralts Evolves! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 81: May vs. Jessie! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 82: The Gardenia Ribbon! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 83: The Arrival of Anabel! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 84: Team Rocket Strikes Again! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 85: Challenge at the Battle Tower – VS Anabel! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 86: A Fierce Duel! Gengar vs. Metagross! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 87: The Symbol of Ability Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 88: Anabel, Join Me on My Journey! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 89: Primeape, It’s Been a While! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 90: Primeape’s First Battle, Fairy-Type Revealed! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 91: Arrival at Mount Silver – The Poachers' Scheme! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 92: Bug-Type Pokémon and a Ghostly Encounter! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 93: The Dance of Volbeat and Illumise! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 94: Larvitar, Long Time No See! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 95: Training Plans! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 96: Level Grinding – Kirlia Evolves! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 97: Team Transformation – Evolution and Power Surge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 98: The Tyrant of the Sands, Tyranitar! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 99: Misty and May’s Decision! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 100: A Special Night and Arrival at Mulberry City! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 101: A New Alliance – Harley and Team Rocket! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 102: Cursed Doll vs. Blaziken! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 103: May's Fifth Ribbon Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 104: Brock and Lucy at Pewter Gym! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 105: Brandon, The Battle Pyramid Awaits! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 106: Ash vs. Brandon – The Clash Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 107: Charizard Victorious, Snorlax vs. Regirock! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 108: Snorlax Crushes the Rock Titan Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 109: Steel Resolve – The Last Battle Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 110: Conquering the Battle Frontier! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 111: Giovanni's Ambitions Unveiled! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 112: Return to the Indigo Plateau! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 113: The Grand Festival Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 114: The First Round – Performance Review! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 115: Fate’s Design – A Rivalry Reignited! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 116: A Dominating Victory—Advancing in Style! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 117: Ash and Aipom! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 118: The Power of Viridian! May vs. Drew! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 119: Blaziken vs. Flygon! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 120: May’s Journey Continues – A Reunion with Squirtle! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 121: Exploring the Water Capital! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 122: The Legend of Latios and Latias Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 123: A Reunion in the Water Capital – Latias’ Longing! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 124: Tour de Alto Mare Begins! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 125: Parting Ways for a Greater Reunion! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 126: The Marina Group's Water Shows! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 127: The Ocean Prince's Egg! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 128: The Pirate Phantom & the Birth of Manaphy! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 129: Manaphy Speaks! "Mama… Maybe…?" Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 130: The Sea Temple Begins to Sink! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 131: Ash, the King of the Vast Sea! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 132: May’s Farewell! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 133: Charizard vs. Metagross! A Clash of Champions! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 134: Returning to Pallet Town – Gary's Arrival! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 135: Plans and Preparations! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 136: Latias Masters Its Power! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 137: A New Journey—Destination: Sinnoh! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 138: Dawn and Piplup! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 139: First Encounter with Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 140: Pikachu Crushes Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 141: The Wandering Bard, Nando! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 142: First Encounter with Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 143: Capturing Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 144: The Baby Stantler and the Rampaging Ursaring! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 145: Pikachu's Little Fangirl? Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 146: Dawn and Buneary! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 147: Dawn’s First Pokémon Contest! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 148: Dawn vs. Zoey Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 149: Signing In at the Oreburgh Gym! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 150: Sceptile’s Blade Cuts Down Fossil! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 151: Battle Against Roark! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 152: Turtwig’s First Battle! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 153: The Final One, VS Rampardos! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 154: The Coal Badge, Dawn, and Pachirisu! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 155: First Encounter with Pokémon Hunter J! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 156: Pidgeot vs. Salamence! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 157: The Fragrant Floaroma Town! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 158: Dawn’s Victory and the Legend of Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 159: An Encounter with Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 160: The Eterna Forest - First Encounter with Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 161: Capturing Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 162: The Elite Four, Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 163: Ash vs. Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
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