Chapter 178: Dawn’s Tears!

Words : 1080 Updated : Oct 10th, 2025
Ash and Dawn each headed toward their respective destinations. Ash made his way to the Hearthome Gym, while Dawn went to register for the Hearthome City Pokémon Contest. Concerned for Dawn, Anabel decided to accompany her. Ash planned to use Chimchar in the Hearthome Gym battle, allowing it to experience just how much stronger it had become. However, when Ash arrived at the gym, disappointment washed over him. "Oh, right... I almost forgot. At this point in time, the Hearthome Gym Leader is away on a journey. That means I'll have to postpone my Gym battle." "Pika..." Both Ash and Pikachu sighed as they stared at the tightly shut gym doors. "Well, there's nothing we can do about it. Let's go, Pikachu! The Hearthome Battle Hall is also hosting a Tag Battle Competition in three days. It sounds pretty interesting—let's sign up for that!" "Pika!" Pikachu raised its tiny paw in agreement. Besides, Paul would also be entering this Tag Battle Competition. Very soon, he would witness just how much Chimchar had changed. Ash was certain that Paul would be surprised. __ As Ash stood near the gym, a familiar voice called out. "Ash, long time no see." Nando approached, carrying his signature harp. "Ah, Nando! It really has been a while. The last time we met was at the Eterna Historical Museum. Since then, it looks like you've caught some strong new Pokémon." "Pikachu!" Ash and Pikachu looked at the Pokémon standing beside Nando—Kricketune. Kricketune gracefully moved its blade-like arms, producing a series of musical notes as they rubbed together. "Thank you for the compliment. This Pokémon is indeed a wonderful partner. However, it's unfortunate... I had planned to challenge the Hearthome Gym with Kricketune, but with the Gym Leader away, it seems I'll have to wait. Instead, I'll be competing in the Hearthome Pokémon Contest." With a slight bow of respect, Nando took his leave, heading toward the Contest Hall with Kricketune. Ash watched him go and then turned to Pikachu. "Nando seems to have improved a lot... Let's go register for the Tag Battle Competition first, and then we'll head to the Contest Hall to cheer Dawn on." In the original timeline, Dawn had failed to pass the first round of this Hearthome Contest. That loss had shaken her confidence, causing her to fall into a slump. Would things be different this time? Would Dawn's fate change, or would it remain the same? __ Meanwhile, Dawn and Anabel arrived at the Hearthome Contest Hall. After successfully registering, they ran into Zoey and Nando. During their conversation, Zoey learned that Nando planned to compete in both the Sinnoh League and Pokémon Contests. That immediately made her frown. Zoey had seen far too many trainers attempt both paths, only to fail at both due to a lack of focus. She strongly believed that a trainer's time was limited, making it nearly impossible to truly master both battling and coordinating. She couldn't stand people who tried to do everything but excelled at nothing. __ As time passed, the Contest Hall buzzed with excitement. At exactly 2:00 PM, the Hearthome Pokémon Contest officially began! As always, Marian opened the event with a lively introduction, followed by the three contest judges greeting the audience. Then, the first contestant took the stage. Nando! "Come forth, Sunflora and Kricketune!" For this Contest, Nando had chosen music as his performance theme. As their Poké Balls opened, blue musical notes emerged, flowing like a river through the air. Since Hearthome Contests required two Pokémon to perform together, the challenge tested not only a coordinator's creativity but also their ability to synchronize two Pokémon at once. "Let the music play! Sunflora, use Grass Whistle! Kricketune, use Sing!" Both moves—Grass Whistle and Sing—were typically used to put opponents to sleep. However, when controlled skillfully, they could blend into a beautiful melody rather than an attack. As the two Pokémon played their respective tunes, it felt as if they had transformed into musicians performing in a vast meadow. Their performance captivated the audience, perfectly showcasing their charm. The crowd cheered loudly, and Nando's score reflected their enthusiasm. With that, the Contest continued as other coordinators took the stage. Finally, it was Dawn's turn. __ Dawn chose Piplup and Pachirisu for her performance. The moment Ash saw her strategy, he lightly shook his head. Dawn had Piplup use Bubble Beam, wrapping Pachirisu's Sweet Kiss inside the glowing bubbles. A visually stunning combination, but not what the judges were truly looking for. Ash sighed. She still hadn't realized it. A Pokémon Contest wasn't just about making moves look pretty. What truly mattered was showcasing a Pokémon's individual charm—the essence of its personality and abilities. Move combinations were only secondary. Ash could have told Dawn this directly, but he didn't. Some lessons could only be learned through experience. Understanding something on your own was completely different from simply being told. Dawn needed to discover this truth for herself. Only through failure would she truly grow stronger. Anabel, noticing Ash's reaction, became nervous. She silently prayed that Dawn would make it through to the next round. After Dawn, Zoey took the stage with her Shellos and Glameow. Soon, all the performances were finished. Now came the moment of truth—announcing the top eight coordinators moving on to the next round! __ Backstage, in the waiting room, Dawn casually chatted with Zoey. She confidently declared that she would show Zoey her best skills and even defeat her. Zoey, however, was too focused on the screen, watching the results appear. The names were revealed one by one. Zoey advanced. Nando advanced. Even Jessie, disguised as "Jessilina," advanced. However... Dawn's name was missing. She hadn't made it. The smile vanished from Dawn's face. For a moment, she sat there in shock, unable to process what had just happened. Then, the tears came. No matter how hard she tried to hold them back, they fell anyway. Why? Why, despite all her hard work, had she failed to even pass the first round? Author's Note: (I won't spend too much time on Contests, since they aren't as popular among readers. The upcoming Hearthome Tag Battle Competition will be a major highlight, focusing on Ash vs. Paul and showcasing Chimchar's transformation!) -------------- T/N: Access Advance Chapters on my P@treon: [email protected]/PokePals

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Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend Author:PokePals
Chapter 1: I am Ash Ketchum Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2: Sign-In Rewards and System Starter Pack! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3: May, I'll Wait for You! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4: Mewtwo Becomes My Guardian! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5: Pidgeot, I'm Here to Pick You Up! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6: Scott and Granny Agatha! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ash's Elite Battle! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8: Going Home, Signing In Again! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Clash of Jealous Hearts! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10: Team Rocket's Double Trouble! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11: Ash Saves Misty and May! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12: Training Triumphs and a New Journey Begins! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Swarm of Beedrill VS Fusion of Wind, Fire, and Thunder! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14: Moonlight Dance, Signing in at Mount Moon! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15: The Flames of Friendship: Charizard's Return! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16: Charizard VS Articuno! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17: Charizard’s Battle to Become a Legend! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18: Victory! Triple Experience Critical Hit! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19: "The Road to Saffron: Gordon’s Stolen Invention!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20: "Miracle Candy and a Giant Caterpie!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21: Ash's Preparation for the Future! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22: Saffron Soak: Rest and Relaxation! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ash’s Insight: Legendary Power! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24: Harley’s Green Hat! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25: Is Ash Acting Sneaky? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Saffron Con, Dazzling Performances! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27: Red-Bandana May vs Green-Hat Harley! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29: Haunter of the Ghost Tower! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30: Catching Haunter, the Deserted Ghost Town! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Two Girls’ Fear! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ponyta's Evolution, Rapidash! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33: Kirlia and Ralts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34: Jame’s Family Villa Castle Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35: Sign-In Battle Arena! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36: Grovyle VS Hariyama! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37: Evolution, Sceptile’s Rise! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38: Snorlax’s War of Attrition! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Symbol of Guts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Pokémon Breeding Center! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41: Pikachu Learns Volt Tackle! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42: Pokémon Eggs and Training! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Silver Town Contest! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Roaring Youth and the Silver Ribbon! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Lake of Dragonair! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 46: Evolution, Crawdaunt! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 47: Misty and May Join Forces! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 48: Signing in for the Battle Dome! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 49: First Encounter with Elesa! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Battle with Tucker! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 51: Fusion of Fire and Water vs. Earth Storm! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Symbol of Tactics! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 53: Ash’s Electrifying Encounter with Elekid! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 54: Purchasing Items, the Soothe Bell! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 55: Scyther and the Surprise Hatching! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 56: A Call from Ash! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Pokémon Rangers! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 58: Encounter with Celebi! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 59: True Friendship! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 60: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 1! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 61: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 2! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 62: Signing In to Battle Pike! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 63: Battle Pike Showdown! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 64: Pikachu Enters the Pike! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Gold Symbol of Luck! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 66: A Fond Goodbye to Brock! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Wisteria Pokémon Contest! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 68: Munchlax's Comeback – A One-Hit Victory! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 69: A Gastly Challenge at Maiden’s Peak! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 70: The Duel of Titans! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Awakening of Haunter Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 72: Battle Palace Beckons, Mewtwo's Shadow Looms Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 73: Signing In to Battle Palace! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 74: VS Spenser, Jungle Battle! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 75: Intense Battle! Synced Experience! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gold Symbol of Spirits! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 77: Lapras, Long Time No See! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 78: The Red Lightning of Commerce City! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 79: Destination Gardenia Town! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 80: A Pleasant Surprise – Ralts Evolves! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 81: May vs. Jessie! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 82: The Gardenia Ribbon! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 83: The Arrival of Anabel! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 84: Team Rocket Strikes Again! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 85: Challenge at the Battle Tower – VS Anabel! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 86: A Fierce Duel! Gengar vs. Metagross! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 87: The Symbol of Ability Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 88: Anabel, Join Me on My Journey! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 89: Primeape, It’s Been a While! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 90: Primeape’s First Battle, Fairy-Type Revealed! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 91: Arrival at Mount Silver – The Poachers' Scheme! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 92: Bug-Type Pokémon and a Ghostly Encounter! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 93: The Dance of Volbeat and Illumise! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 94: Larvitar, Long Time No See! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 95: Training Plans! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 96: Level Grinding – Kirlia Evolves! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 97: Team Transformation – Evolution and Power Surge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 98: The Tyrant of the Sands, Tyranitar! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 99: Misty and May’s Decision! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 100: A Special Night and Arrival at Mulberry City! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 101: A New Alliance – Harley and Team Rocket! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 102: Cursed Doll vs. Blaziken! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 103: May's Fifth Ribbon Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 104: Brock and Lucy at Pewter Gym! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 105: Brandon, The Battle Pyramid Awaits! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 106: Ash vs. Brandon – The Clash Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 107: Charizard Victorious, Snorlax vs. Regirock! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 108: Snorlax Crushes the Rock Titan Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 109: Steel Resolve – The Last Battle Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 110: Conquering the Battle Frontier! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 111: Giovanni's Ambitions Unveiled! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 112: Return to the Indigo Plateau! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 113: The Grand Festival Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 114: The First Round – Performance Review! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 115: Fate’s Design – A Rivalry Reignited! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 116: A Dominating Victory—Advancing in Style! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 117: Ash and Aipom! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 118: The Power of Viridian! May vs. Drew! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 119: Blaziken vs. Flygon! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 120: May’s Journey Continues – A Reunion with Squirtle! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 121: Exploring the Water Capital! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 122: The Legend of Latios and Latias Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 123: A Reunion in the Water Capital – Latias’ Longing! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 124: Tour de Alto Mare Begins! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 125: Parting Ways for a Greater Reunion! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 126: The Marina Group's Water Shows! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 127: The Ocean Prince's Egg! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 128: The Pirate Phantom & the Birth of Manaphy! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 129: Manaphy Speaks! "Mama… Maybe…?" Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 130: The Sea Temple Begins to Sink! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 131: Ash, the King of the Vast Sea! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 132: May’s Farewell! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 133: Charizard vs. Metagross! A Clash of Champions! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 134: Returning to Pallet Town – Gary's Arrival! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 135: Plans and Preparations! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 136: Latias Masters Its Power! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 137: A New Journey—Destination: Sinnoh! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 138: Dawn and Piplup! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 139: First Encounter with Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 140: Pikachu Crushes Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 141: The Wandering Bard, Nando! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 142: First Encounter with Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 143: Capturing Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 144: The Baby Stantler and the Rampaging Ursaring! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 145: Pikachu's Little Fangirl? Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 146: Dawn and Buneary! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 147: Dawn’s First Pokémon Contest! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 148: Dawn vs. Zoey Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 149: Signing In at the Oreburgh Gym! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 150: Sceptile’s Blade Cuts Down Fossil! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 151: Battle Against Roark! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 152: Turtwig’s First Battle! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 153: The Final One, VS Rampardos! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 154: The Coal Badge, Dawn, and Pachirisu! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 155: First Encounter with Pokémon Hunter J! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 156: Pidgeot vs. Salamence! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 157: The Fragrant Floaroma Town! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 158: Dawn’s Victory and the Legend of Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 159: An Encounter with Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 160: The Eterna Forest - First Encounter with Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 161: Capturing Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 162: The Elite Four, Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 163: Ash vs. Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 164: The Legend of Sinnoh’s Space-Time! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 165: Signing in at Eterna Gym! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 166: Turtwig Evolves, Grotle! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 167: The Forest Badge, Cynthia Appears! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 168: Paul Challenges Cynthia! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 169: The Power of Champion Cynthia! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 170: The Gentle Cynthia! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 171: Chimchar, Come With Me! (Part 1) Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 172: Chimchar, Come With Me! (Part 2) Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 173: I’ve Caught Chimchar! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 174: The Awakening of Blaze! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 175: Shieldon, and the Return of Gary! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 176: J’s Escape Route Cut Off—The Airship Falls! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 177: J’s Reluctant Retreat, Arrival in Hearthome City! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 178: Dawn’s Tears! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 179: The Hearthome City Tag Battle Competition! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 180: Chimchar’s Outburst! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 181: Evolution – Monferno! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 182: Arrival at Alamos Town! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 183: Showdown at the Space-Time Tower! (Part 1) Oct 10th, 2025
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