Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon!

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"Aria!" As soon as Ariados appeared, its large fanged mouth started clicking menacingly as it stared at Squirtle, looking as if it wanted to tear it apart. "Squirtle, don't be afraid, we can win this! Squirtle, use Ice Beam!" Ice Beam was the strongest move Squirtle had recently mastered, showing that May's Squirtle was indeed of high potential. "I know your Squirtle has learned Ice Beam, so how could I not be prepared? Ariados, use String Shot and trip Squirtle!" Just as Squirtle launched Ice Beam, Ariados used String Shot, tripping Squirtle. As a result, Ice Beam missed Ariados and instead added some sparkle to its appearance. May's score was deducted. "Heh heh, Ariados, don't let Squirtle get away! Keep using String Shot and cover the entire stage!" "Aria!" Ariados kept shooting webs, and soon, the whole stage resembled a web-covered lair. May's score was deducted once more. Because Squirtle had been tripped and had web tangled around its legs, it couldn't free itself. "Squirtle, follow the web on your legs and use Ice Beam again—this time, it's sure to hit! Go for it!" May didn't panic; she was completely immersed in the battle. And with Ash's recent training, Squirtle had improved a lot! This time, Ice Beam successfully hit Ariados, and Harley's score began to drop. "Aria..." "Oh! Ariados is completely frozen by the direct hit from Ice Beam! Squirtle, thanks to the Ice Beam, has also freed itself from the webs. The situation has completely reversed!" Lilian was also stunned—what would Harley do now? "This is our chance! Squirtle, keep using Ice Beam on Ariados!" May issued a command that shocked everyone except Ash. Even though Ariados was already frozen, she ordered another Ice Beam! This was something Ash had taught May during their training sessions. So she instinctively followed his advice. "Squirtle!" Squirtle nodded adorably and continued using Ice Beam! Soon, the ice around Ariados thickened and grew larger. Finally, it became a small mountain of ice, with Ariados trapped right in the center, completely immobilized! Even though Harley was frantically jumping up and down, he had no way to communicate with Ariados. Frustrated, he yelled at Lilian, "That's cheating! She broke the rules! This is unfair! My poor King of Cool, Ariados!" Harley's face was full of frustration. Lilian was briefly shocked, but... May hadn't broken any rules! The three judges exchanged glances, including Nurse Joy, who was somewhat sympathetic to Harley. After a moment, they each raised a red card. A yellow card would have been a warning, but a red card meant immediate disqualification! Harley's Ariados could no longer perform or battle! "Ariados is unable to break free from the ice mountain. The three judges unanimously declare May as the winner of this final match. Congratulations, May!" What!? How could this be!? Harley almost lost it when he heard the result. This was completely unexpected! Ash had been watching the entire time, and May's strategy was flawless. When Lilian handed her the ribbon, May jumped for joy! "Yes! I did it! I got my first ribbon in the Kanto region, Saffron Ribbon!" "Squirtle, Squirtle!" Squirtle was just as thrilled. "Ugh, just you wait, May. Next time, I won't lose to you!" Harley took his Ariados to the Pokémon Center. And with that, the Saffron Pokémon Contest came to a satisfying end. Since it was still early, Ash and his friends decided to head toward Lavender Town, which wasn't far from Saffron City. Ash wanted to visit the Pokémon Tower in Lavender Town to see if his old friend Haunter was still there. However, it was already night by the time they arrived due to the long journey. Along the way, Misty had explained the unique history of Lavender Town to May. So, as they walked through the inky darkness, both girls instinctively moved closer to Ash, one on each side of him. -------------- T/N: Access 30 Chapters in Advance on my P@treon: [email protected]/PokePals (Replace '@' with 'a')

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Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend Author:PokePals
Chapter 1: I am Ash Ketchum Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2: Sign-In Rewards and System Starter Pack! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3: May, I'll Wait for You! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4: Mewtwo Becomes My Guardian! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5: Pidgeot, I'm Here to Pick You Up! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6: Scott and Granny Agatha! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ash's Elite Battle! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8: Going Home, Signing In Again! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Clash of Jealous Hearts! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10: Team Rocket's Double Trouble! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11: Ash Saves Misty and May! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12: Training Triumphs and a New Journey Begins! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Swarm of Beedrill VS Fusion of Wind, Fire, and Thunder! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14: Moonlight Dance, Signing in at Mount Moon! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15: The Flames of Friendship: Charizard's Return! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16: Charizard VS Articuno! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17: Charizard’s Battle to Become a Legend! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18: Victory! Triple Experience Critical Hit! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19: "The Road to Saffron: Gordon’s Stolen Invention!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20: "Miracle Candy and a Giant Caterpie!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21: Ash's Preparation for the Future! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22: Saffron Soak: Rest and Relaxation! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ash’s Insight: Legendary Power! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24: Harley’s Green Hat! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25: Is Ash Acting Sneaky? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Saffron Con, Dazzling Performances! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27: Red-Bandana May vs Green-Hat Harley! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29: Haunter of the Ghost Tower! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30: Catching Haunter, the Deserted Ghost Town! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Two Girls’ Fear! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ponyta's Evolution, Rapidash! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33: Kirlia and Ralts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34: Jame’s Family Villa Castle Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35: Sign-In Battle Arena! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36: Grovyle VS Hariyama! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37: Evolution, Sceptile’s Rise! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38: Snorlax’s War of Attrition! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Symbol of Guts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Pokémon Breeding Center! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41: Pikachu Learns Volt Tackle! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42: Pokémon Eggs and Training! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Silver Town Contest! Sep 26th, 2025
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