Chapter 129: Manaphy Speaks! "Mama… Maybe…?"

Words : 1051 Updated : Oct 6th, 2025
"Mana?" The tiny creature emerged from its egg, blinking its big, bright eyes. The first thing it saw was May staring at it in shock. And then— "Waaahhh... Waaaahhh!" The newborn Pokémon immediately burst into tears. May had never dealt with something like this before. She panicked, rocking the little Manaphy in her arms. "Oh, oh, there, there... Manaphy, don't cry..." Perhaps her gentle voice had an effect. Manaphy sniffled and, just like that, stopped crying. It curiously looked at May before snuggling against her arm with a contented sigh. Then, as quickly as it had woken up, Manaphy fell asleep. It was peaceful once more. "No... My prince of the sea... my precious egg... Urgh—" Phantom struggled to speak, but Ash's foot pressing down on him made it nearly impossible. "Sheesh. Ash, can you just tie him up already? And his crew too?" Jack sighed, rubbing his temples. As a Pokémon Ranger, he couldn't do what Ash wanted to do. If Ash had his way, Phantom wouldn't be waking up ever again. But with Jack here—an official Pokémon Ranger under the League—things were complicated. The Pokémon Rangers will not tolerate trainers killing people. Nor would Jack turn a blind eye if Ash tried. Still, Ash had no intention of letting Phanton and Galen off easy. So— With a sharp crack, Ash kicked both of Phantom's legs, snapping the bones like twigs. "AAAHHHH—!" Or at least, Phantom wanted to scream. But his pride as a pirate forced him to grit his teeth and endure it, though his face turned deathly pale. Meanwhile, Ash let Charizard and Anabel's Metagross take care of Phantom's crew. Within minutes, every last one of them was rounded up, tied tightly, and left immobilized. "Alright, let's go," Jack declared. "We'll leave them here for Officer Jenny to pick up." Grandpa Shep nodded in approval and led everyone into the People of the Water ruin site. As they entered, Ash activated his Aura Power to scan the area. Nothing seemed out of place, so he recalled Charizard. "Come on, Anabel, return Metagross. May, hold onto Manaphy." "Pika!" Pikachu, perched on Ash's shoulder, suddenly glanced toward a distant mountain. Something felt off... "What is it, Pikachu?" Ash asked. But Pikachu simply shook its head. Meanwhile... On that very mountain— "Heh, heh, that brat is strong, but I bet he never expected us to be lurking around!" "Phantom and Pirate Galen might still be useful to us... Maybe we should cut a deal with them!" "Exactly, nya! We help him out, but he has to pay us! Then, while he fights that twerp, we can snatch the real treasure! Meowth, that's right!" The Team Rocket trio shared a wicked grin. "Heh heh heh..." Why were they here? Well— After they tried to steal Manaphy's egg earlier, Ash's Pidgeot's Hurricane attack had sent them blasting off again! And as luck would have it, they crash-landed on this very mountain—not far from the Sea Temple. With a telescope, they had just witnessed Ash wrecking Phantom. That was when an idea struck them. Phantom hated Ash, and he still had resources. If they helped him now, they could cash in big-time later! What none of them realized was that Pikachu had sensed their presence. Unfortunately, the mountain was just outside Ash's Aura range. Had Latias been actively using its abilities, it might have detected them—but the young Legendary wasn't fully trained yet. Soon enough, Team Rocket reached Phantom. Desperate and furious, Phantom agreed to their offer. With their help, he was untied and immediately tended to his broken legs with medication. "Damn that brat! Next time I see him, I'll tear him apart limb by limb!" He slammed a fist against the ground. "We're moving out. Deploy all our flying ships. If they're heading to the Sea Temple of Manaphy(i.e, Samiya), they have to travel by sea. We have a few days before the lunar eclipse... That's more than enough time for my legs to heal." His lips curled into a wicked grin. "That Sea Crown will be mine. I will become the true King of the Sea!" Team Rocket smirked, thinking only of their payday. But deep down, they all had their own greedy ambitions. Back with Ash and the others... Shep led everyone to an ancient People of the Water ruin site and unlocked its entryway after solving a puzzle with his heritage blue stone bracelet. The hidden passage is leading to the Sea Temple, Samiya. From here, Manaphy would eventually find its way home. After nearly half a day of traveling, they finally reached a port town. "Haha! Alright, everyone, time to switch to my old sea cruiser! I call it the Blue Lagoon! My friend just brought it to the harbor—let's go!" Grandpa Shep laughed heartily. Just then— "Waaaaahh!" Manaphy woke up. And immediately started crying. "Oh, oh, Manaphy, shhh, don't cry!" May quickly cradled the tiny Pokémon, gently rocking it in her arms. Manaphy blinked up at her, then stopped crying. Instead, it turned its big, curious eyes toward Latias—who was currently disguised as Bianca. To Manaphy, something felt odd. It could sense that this "human" wasn't quite... human. Latias, in turn, tilted her head, just as intrigued by Manaphy. "May, it's possible that Manaphy sees you as its mother," Ash said with a small smile. "Some Pokémon imprint on the first person they see after hatching." "That's true," Anabel added. "I've seen many Pokémon form bonds this way." May looked down at the tiny Manaphy in her arms. "Maybe... you're right." And then— "Mama... Maybe... Maybe...?" !!! Manaphy had actually spoken. Not only had it called May Mama, but it had also repeated her words—Maybe! May's eyes went wide. She had just become the mama of a Legendary Pokémon?! -------------- Hello, Readers! Due to certain reasons, I have changed the fanfic title from Pokémon: Ash's New Journey to Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend. Please don't be confused by the name change—everything else, including the chapters and content, remains the same. -------------- T/N: Access 40 Chapters in Advance on my P@treon: [email protected]/PokePals

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Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend Author:PokePals
Chapter 1: I am Ash Ketchum Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2: Sign-In Rewards and System Starter Pack! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3: May, I'll Wait for You! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4: Mewtwo Becomes My Guardian! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5: Pidgeot, I'm Here to Pick You Up! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6: Scott and Granny Agatha! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ash's Elite Battle! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8: Going Home, Signing In Again! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Clash of Jealous Hearts! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10: Team Rocket's Double Trouble! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11: Ash Saves Misty and May! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12: Training Triumphs and a New Journey Begins! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Swarm of Beedrill VS Fusion of Wind, Fire, and Thunder! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14: Moonlight Dance, Signing in at Mount Moon! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15: The Flames of Friendship: Charizard's Return! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16: Charizard VS Articuno! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17: Charizard’s Battle to Become a Legend! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18: Victory! Triple Experience Critical Hit! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19: "The Road to Saffron: Gordon’s Stolen Invention!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20: "Miracle Candy and a Giant Caterpie!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21: Ash's Preparation for the Future! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22: Saffron Soak: Rest and Relaxation! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ash’s Insight: Legendary Power! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24: Harley’s Green Hat! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25: Is Ash Acting Sneaky? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Saffron Con, Dazzling Performances! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27: Red-Bandana May vs Green-Hat Harley! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29: Haunter of the Ghost Tower! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30: Catching Haunter, the Deserted Ghost Town! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Two Girls’ Fear! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ponyta's Evolution, Rapidash! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33: Kirlia and Ralts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34: Jame’s Family Villa Castle Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35: Sign-In Battle Arena! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36: Grovyle VS Hariyama! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37: Evolution, Sceptile’s Rise! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38: Snorlax’s War of Attrition! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Symbol of Guts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Pokémon Breeding Center! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41: Pikachu Learns Volt Tackle! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42: Pokémon Eggs and Training! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Silver Town Contest! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Roaring Youth and the Silver Ribbon! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Lake of Dragonair! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 46: Evolution, Crawdaunt! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 47: Misty and May Join Forces! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 48: Signing in for the Battle Dome! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 49: First Encounter with Elesa! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Battle with Tucker! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 51: Fusion of Fire and Water vs. Earth Storm! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Symbol of Tactics! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 53: Ash’s Electrifying Encounter with Elekid! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 54: Purchasing Items, the Soothe Bell! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 55: Scyther and the Surprise Hatching! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 56: A Call from Ash! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Pokémon Rangers! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 58: Encounter with Celebi! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 59: True Friendship! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 60: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 1! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 61: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 2! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 62: Signing In to Battle Pike! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 63: Battle Pike Showdown! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 64: Pikachu Enters the Pike! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Gold Symbol of Luck! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 66: A Fond Goodbye to Brock! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Wisteria Pokémon Contest! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 68: Munchlax's Comeback – A One-Hit Victory! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 69: A Gastly Challenge at Maiden’s Peak! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 70: The Duel of Titans! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Awakening of Haunter Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 72: Battle Palace Beckons, Mewtwo's Shadow Looms Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 73: Signing In to Battle Palace! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 74: VS Spenser, Jungle Battle! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 75: Intense Battle! Synced Experience! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gold Symbol of Spirits! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 77: Lapras, Long Time No See! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 78: The Red Lightning of Commerce City! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 79: Destination Gardenia Town! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 80: A Pleasant Surprise – Ralts Evolves! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 81: May vs. Jessie! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 82: The Gardenia Ribbon! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 83: The Arrival of Anabel! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 84: Team Rocket Strikes Again! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 85: Challenge at the Battle Tower – VS Anabel! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 86: A Fierce Duel! Gengar vs. Metagross! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 87: The Symbol of Ability Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 88: Anabel, Join Me on My Journey! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 89: Primeape, It’s Been a While! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 90: Primeape’s First Battle, Fairy-Type Revealed! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 91: Arrival at Mount Silver – The Poachers' Scheme! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 92: Bug-Type Pokémon and a Ghostly Encounter! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 93: The Dance of Volbeat and Illumise! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 94: Larvitar, Long Time No See! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 95: Training Plans! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 96: Level Grinding – Kirlia Evolves! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 97: Team Transformation – Evolution and Power Surge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 98: The Tyrant of the Sands, Tyranitar! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 99: Misty and May’s Decision! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 100: A Special Night and Arrival at Mulberry City! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 101: A New Alliance – Harley and Team Rocket! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 102: Cursed Doll vs. Blaziken! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 103: May's Fifth Ribbon Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 104: Brock and Lucy at Pewter Gym! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 105: Brandon, The Battle Pyramid Awaits! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 106: Ash vs. Brandon – The Clash Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 107: Charizard Victorious, Snorlax vs. Regirock! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 108: Snorlax Crushes the Rock Titan Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 109: Steel Resolve – The Last Battle Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 110: Conquering the Battle Frontier! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 111: Giovanni's Ambitions Unveiled! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 112: Return to the Indigo Plateau! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 113: The Grand Festival Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 114: The First Round – Performance Review! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 115: Fate’s Design – A Rivalry Reignited! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 116: A Dominating Victory—Advancing in Style! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 117: Ash and Aipom! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 118: The Power of Viridian! May vs. Drew! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 119: Blaziken vs. Flygon! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 120: May’s Journey Continues – A Reunion with Squirtle! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 121: Exploring the Water Capital! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 122: The Legend of Latios and Latias Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 123: A Reunion in the Water Capital – Latias’ Longing! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 124: Tour de Alto Mare Begins! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 125: Parting Ways for a Greater Reunion! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 126: The Marina Group's Water Shows! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 127: The Ocean Prince's Egg! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 128: The Pirate Phantom & the Birth of Manaphy! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 129: Manaphy Speaks! "Mama… Maybe…?" Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 130: The Sea Temple Begins to Sink! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 131: Ash, the King of the Vast Sea! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 132: May’s Farewell! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 133: Charizard vs. Metagross! A Clash of Champions! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 134: Returning to Pallet Town – Gary's Arrival! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 135: Plans and Preparations! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 136: Latias Masters Its Power! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 137: A New Journey—Destination: Sinnoh! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 138: Dawn and Piplup! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 139: First Encounter with Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 140: Pikachu Crushes Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 141: The Wandering Bard, Nando! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 142: First Encounter with Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 143: Capturing Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
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