Chapter 160: The Eterna Forest - First Encounter with Buizel!

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As their journey continued, Ash and his friends entered a vast and lush area known as the Eterna Forest. This forest was so immense that it practically surrounded the entire Eterna City. The moment one stepped out of Eterna City, they would find themselves within the dense greenery of this ancient woodland. The forest was teeming with Bug-type and Grass-type Pokémon, making it a popular destination for both adventurers and trainers looking to catch new Pokémon. A long and winding river also ran through the heart of the forest. While the forest belonged to Bug- and Grass-types, this river was undoubtedly a battleground for Water-type Pokémon. Ash's excitement grew as he walked. — If the timing is right, then that prideful Buizel should still be around here somewhere... In the original storyline, Dawn was the one who captured Buizel. But after some time, realizing that Buizel loved battling while Aipom had a passion for Pokémon Contests, Dawn and Ash decided to trade. — A tough and competitive Pokémon like that... I definitely can't miss this chance! As the trio continued deeper into the forest, they suddenly spotted someone standing under a large tree. It was a young man, holding two Poké Balls, his expression troubled. Dawn, always polite and kind, stepped forward. "Excuse me, is something wrong?" she asked. The young man looked up, seemingly surprised by their approach. Noticing that all three of them carried fishing rods, he quickly understood their purpose. "Ah... You guys are heading to the river to fish, right?" he sighed, shaking his head. "If that's the case, I'd strongly advise against it." His words caught their attention. "Why?" asked Ash, intrigued. The young man let out another sigh before explaining. "There's a particularly powerful Buizel in that section of the river. Every trainer who fishes it up and battles it has lost. No exceptions." Ash's eyes gleamed with interest. "And that's not all," the young man continued. "Whenever Buizel wins, it takes the losing trainer's fishing rod! It treats them like Gym Badges or Contest Ribbons—a trophy for its victories." The young man shook his head again, clearly frustrated. "I battled it twice. Even my Magneton—a Pokémon with an advantage over Water-types—stood no chance. That Buizel is a monster." With that, he turned and walked away. "Anyway, I need to get to the Pokémon Center. You guys should really reconsider." Ash, however, smiled. — This is it. That's the Buizel I'm looking for. This Buizel wasn't just strong—it was also incredibly determined. It trained itself rigorously, constantly pushing its own limits. But there was something else. — It has pride. It won't listen to a weak trainer... but with the right bond, it'll become an unstoppable force. Anabel's eyes sparkled with excitement. "A strong and undefeated Buizel? This sounds fun! Ash, Dawn, shall we check it out?" The answer was obvious. They pressed forward, eventually arriving at the Eterna Forest River. The water was deep and still, reflecting the sky like a mirror. Ash picked up a stone and tossed it in. It barely made a splash. "This river is deep..." Ash noted. Dawn, already holding her fishing rod, grinned. "Alright, let's make this a contest! Let's see who can fish up Buizel first!" "Piplup!" her partner chirped in agreement, its determination mirroring its trainer's. As Dawn and Anabel cast their lines, Ash pulled out something unusual. A custom lure—shaped like a tiny girl. Anabel tilted her head. "Huh? Ash, what is that?" Dawn's curiosity was piqued as well. "It looks like... a doll?" Ash chuckled, rubbing his nose. "It's a special lure... a keepsake from an old friend. I thought I'd try it out." Dawn smirked teasingly. "Oh~? An old friend, huh?" She didn't press further, but Ash could tell she was amused. Just then— "Oh! You guys are here too? What a coincidence!" A familiar voice rang out. They turned to see a girl wearing sunglasses, a fishing rod in hand. Zoey. Dawn beamed. "Zoey! It's been a while! I'm so happy to see you again!" Then, her expression turned competitive. "Wait, don't tell me—you're here for Buizel too?" Zoey blinked. "...Buizel?" She had simply come over after spotting them, unaware of the infamous Buizel's reputation. But before anyone could say more— Dawn's fishing rod twitched. Zoey pointed at it. "Hey, Dawn—your rod's caught something." Dawn gasped. "Yes! We did it! We're the first ones to fish it up!" With all her strength, she pulled— SPLASH! Water erupted from the river as a sleek, orange Water-type Pokémon burst out. "Bui! Bui!" Buizel. Dawn's eyes widened. "This is it! That's the one!" The Buizel looked at Dawn—then smirked. It lifted its hands and gestured toward Piplup, signaling a challenge. Zoey's eyes lit up. "Ooooh, a confident one! It wants to battle!" Ash chuckled. "Dawn, looks like it's your turn first." Dawn didn't hesitate. "Piplup! Let's go! Use Peck!" "Pipluppp!" Piplup charged forward, its beak glowing as it aimed for Buizel. But Buizel's eyes flashed with annoyance. — Too slow. It fired a Water Gun—hitting Piplup head-on. "Piplup!" Dawn gasped as her Pokémon was blasted backward. Buizel landed gracefully on the river's edge, stomping the ground. Water gathered around it, swirling and rising. "That's—Aqua Jet?!" Anabel exclaimed. A powerful stream of water wrapped around Buizel's body. Then— "Bui!" Buizel shot forward at incredible speed. "Piplup, Bubble Beam!" Dawn commanded. But the Aqua Jet tore straight through the bubbles, smashing into Piplup with brutal force. BOOM! Piplup was launched into the air. Before it could recover— "Bui!" Buizel's tails flicked, unleashing two Sonic Booms in quick succession. The first strike hit. The second one finished the job. "Piplup!" Dawn rushed forward, catching her partner as it fell, fainted. A flawless victory. Buizel crossed its arms, nodding in satisfaction. Ash smirked. — A tough one, alright. But he wasn't about to let it end there. This battle had only just begun. -------------- T/N: Access 40 Chapters in Advance on my P@treon: [email protected]/PokePals

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Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend Author:PokePals
Chapter 1: I am Ash Ketchum Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2: Sign-In Rewards and System Starter Pack! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3: May, I'll Wait for You! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4: Mewtwo Becomes My Guardian! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5: Pidgeot, I'm Here to Pick You Up! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6: Scott and Granny Agatha! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ash's Elite Battle! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8: Going Home, Signing In Again! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Clash of Jealous Hearts! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10: Team Rocket's Double Trouble! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11: Ash Saves Misty and May! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12: Training Triumphs and a New Journey Begins! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Swarm of Beedrill VS Fusion of Wind, Fire, and Thunder! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14: Moonlight Dance, Signing in at Mount Moon! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15: The Flames of Friendship: Charizard's Return! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16: Charizard VS Articuno! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17: Charizard’s Battle to Become a Legend! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18: Victory! Triple Experience Critical Hit! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19: "The Road to Saffron: Gordon’s Stolen Invention!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20: "Miracle Candy and a Giant Caterpie!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21: Ash's Preparation for the Future! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22: Saffron Soak: Rest and Relaxation! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ash’s Insight: Legendary Power! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24: Harley’s Green Hat! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25: Is Ash Acting Sneaky? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Saffron Con, Dazzling Performances! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27: Red-Bandana May vs Green-Hat Harley! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29: Haunter of the Ghost Tower! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30: Catching Haunter, the Deserted Ghost Town! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Two Girls’ Fear! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ponyta's Evolution, Rapidash! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33: Kirlia and Ralts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34: Jame’s Family Villa Castle Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35: Sign-In Battle Arena! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36: Grovyle VS Hariyama! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37: Evolution, Sceptile’s Rise! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38: Snorlax’s War of Attrition! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Symbol of Guts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Pokémon Breeding Center! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41: Pikachu Learns Volt Tackle! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42: Pokémon Eggs and Training! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Silver Town Contest! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Roaring Youth and the Silver Ribbon! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Lake of Dragonair! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 46: Evolution, Crawdaunt! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 47: Misty and May Join Forces! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 48: Signing in for the Battle Dome! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 49: First Encounter with Elesa! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Battle with Tucker! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 51: Fusion of Fire and Water vs. Earth Storm! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Symbol of Tactics! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 53: Ash’s Electrifying Encounter with Elekid! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 54: Purchasing Items, the Soothe Bell! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 55: Scyther and the Surprise Hatching! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 56: A Call from Ash! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Pokémon Rangers! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 58: Encounter with Celebi! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 59: True Friendship! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 60: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 1! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 61: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 2! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 62: Signing In to Battle Pike! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 63: Battle Pike Showdown! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 64: Pikachu Enters the Pike! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Gold Symbol of Luck! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 66: A Fond Goodbye to Brock! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Wisteria Pokémon Contest! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 68: Munchlax's Comeback – A One-Hit Victory! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 69: A Gastly Challenge at Maiden’s Peak! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 70: The Duel of Titans! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Awakening of Haunter Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 72: Battle Palace Beckons, Mewtwo's Shadow Looms Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 73: Signing In to Battle Palace! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 74: VS Spenser, Jungle Battle! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 75: Intense Battle! Synced Experience! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gold Symbol of Spirits! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 77: Lapras, Long Time No See! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 78: The Red Lightning of Commerce City! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 79: Destination Gardenia Town! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 80: A Pleasant Surprise – Ralts Evolves! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 81: May vs. Jessie! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 82: The Gardenia Ribbon! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 83: The Arrival of Anabel! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 84: Team Rocket Strikes Again! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 85: Challenge at the Battle Tower – VS Anabel! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 86: A Fierce Duel! Gengar vs. Metagross! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 87: The Symbol of Ability Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 88: Anabel, Join Me on My Journey! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 89: Primeape, It’s Been a While! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 90: Primeape’s First Battle, Fairy-Type Revealed! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 91: Arrival at Mount Silver – The Poachers' Scheme! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 92: Bug-Type Pokémon and a Ghostly Encounter! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 93: The Dance of Volbeat and Illumise! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 94: Larvitar, Long Time No See! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 95: Training Plans! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 96: Level Grinding – Kirlia Evolves! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 97: Team Transformation – Evolution and Power Surge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 98: The Tyrant of the Sands, Tyranitar! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 99: Misty and May’s Decision! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 100: A Special Night and Arrival at Mulberry City! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 101: A New Alliance – Harley and Team Rocket! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 102: Cursed Doll vs. Blaziken! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 103: May's Fifth Ribbon Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 104: Brock and Lucy at Pewter Gym! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 105: Brandon, The Battle Pyramid Awaits! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 106: Ash vs. Brandon – The Clash Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 107: Charizard Victorious, Snorlax vs. Regirock! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 108: Snorlax Crushes the Rock Titan Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 109: Steel Resolve – The Last Battle Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 110: Conquering the Battle Frontier! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 111: Giovanni's Ambitions Unveiled! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 112: Return to the Indigo Plateau! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 113: The Grand Festival Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 114: The First Round – Performance Review! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 115: Fate’s Design – A Rivalry Reignited! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 116: A Dominating Victory—Advancing in Style! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 117: Ash and Aipom! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 118: The Power of Viridian! May vs. Drew! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 119: Blaziken vs. Flygon! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 120: May’s Journey Continues – A Reunion with Squirtle! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 121: Exploring the Water Capital! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 122: The Legend of Latios and Latias Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 123: A Reunion in the Water Capital – Latias’ Longing! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 124: Tour de Alto Mare Begins! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 125: Parting Ways for a Greater Reunion! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 126: The Marina Group's Water Shows! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 127: The Ocean Prince's Egg! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 128: The Pirate Phantom & the Birth of Manaphy! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 129: Manaphy Speaks! "Mama… Maybe…?" Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 130: The Sea Temple Begins to Sink! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 131: Ash, the King of the Vast Sea! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 132: May’s Farewell! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 133: Charizard vs. Metagross! A Clash of Champions! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 134: Returning to Pallet Town – Gary's Arrival! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 135: Plans and Preparations! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 136: Latias Masters Its Power! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 137: A New Journey—Destination: Sinnoh! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 138: Dawn and Piplup! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 139: First Encounter with Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 140: Pikachu Crushes Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 141: The Wandering Bard, Nando! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 142: First Encounter with Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 143: Capturing Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 144: The Baby Stantler and the Rampaging Ursaring! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 145: Pikachu's Little Fangirl? Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 146: Dawn and Buneary! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 147: Dawn’s First Pokémon Contest! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 148: Dawn vs. Zoey Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 149: Signing In at the Oreburgh Gym! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 150: Sceptile’s Blade Cuts Down Fossil! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 151: Battle Against Roark! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 152: Turtwig’s First Battle! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 153: The Final One, VS Rampardos! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 154: The Coal Badge, Dawn, and Pachirisu! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 155: First Encounter with Pokémon Hunter J! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 156: Pidgeot vs. Salamence! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 157: The Fragrant Floaroma Town! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 158: Dawn’s Victory and the Legend of Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 159: An Encounter with Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 160: The Eterna Forest - First Encounter with Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 161: Capturing Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 162: The Elite Four, Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 163: Ash vs. Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
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