Chapter 172: Chimchar, Come With Me! (Part 2)

Words : 1077 Updated : Oct 10th, 2025
"I can't help you master that power, and even if I explained, you wouldn't understand. But if you could control it... I'd be able to stand against even Elite Four and Champions. What a shame." Paul shook his head. Regret? Why would he regret it? He wasn't a child anymore. Every decision he made, he had already prepared himself to bear the consequences. Wasting time on this Chimchar? He would rather go catch a stronger Pokémon! Because of his brother Reggie's influence, his current goal was crystal clear—he wanted to accomplish what Reggie had failed to do. To defeat Brandon at his peak. The Battle Pyramid's King—Brandon! Chimchar stood frozen, still in shock. Before it had gone to sleep, all it could think about was how it needed to work even harder the next day. After all, Paul had high expectations for it—higher than for any other Pokémon in his team. It just had to push itself further. But no matter how much it tried, as long as it failed to control that special Blaze power, Paul never once gave it an approving glance. In fact, just seeing Paul filled Chimchar with an instinctive fear. "Chimchar, leaving this guy is the best thing for both of you. Where do you want to go? You're still injured, so why don't you stay with us for now? Once you've recovered, we'll figure things out." "Pika! Pika-chu!" Ash's voice, along with Pikachu's, reached Chimchar's ears. Chimchar had seen how Ash treated his Pokémon during their battle. It looked... warm. It had wished, countless times, for Paul to praise it just once. Just once would have been enough. But that had never happened. Because as long as it failed to control that special Blaze, Paul would never acknowledge it. "Tch. You... You're the kind of person I hate the most. Just like my brother, treating Pokémon with kindness. That only spoils them. Overindulged Pokémon waste their own potential." Paul had already released Chimchar from its Poké Ball. Without another word, he turned around and walked away. Tomorrow morning, he planned to leave with his injured Pokémon—no matter their condition. He believed that recovering from injuries through battle was the best way to improve a Pokémon's strength. As long as they weren't at risk of dying, it didn't matter. Ash watched as Paul's figure disappeared into the night. Above, a Murkrow let out an eerie caw from its perch on a nameless tree. The night felt darker than ever. Chimchar felt like its heart was sinking into an abyss. "Chimchar, from now on, you have to live for yourself. We all have to grow stronger for our own sake." "Pika, Pikachu." Pikachu nodded, standing firmly on Ash's shoulder. A feeling Chimchar had never experienced before spread through its chest. But the pain of being abandoned was too overwhelming, and its eyelids grew heavier and heavier... Ash didn't put it into a Poké Ball. Instead, he held Chimchar in his arms and carried it back to the Pokémon Center. He was certain that Chimchar wasn't seriously hurt—just emotionally devastated. After a good night's sleep, things would be different. "Paul... You're going to regret this." Muttering under his breath, Ash held the sleeping Chimchar close as he returned to the Pokémon Center. Without waking anyone, he simply stayed by Chimchar's side for the night. He knew how much this moment meant. Chimchar's journey—from rejection to becoming a fighter who would shine the brightest—was what made it special. Blaze? That was secondary. What truly mattered was its story. Because this wasn't a game. This was a real world, where Pokémon had feelings. — The Next Morning As soon as Chimchar woke up, it instinctively tried to leave. Its body moved on its own. Because that was its routine—wake up, train until exhaustion, then push itself even further. It had always been that way. "Chimchar, where are you going? You're free now. Come have breakfast with us." "Pika!" Ash and Pikachu's voices snapped Chimchar out of its daze. Right... things had changed. Soon, Dawn and Anabel arrived. Dawn took one look at Chimchar and shot Ash a questioning glance. Ash gave a small shake of his head, signaling her not to ask too much. Once Chimchar wasn't paying attention, he briefly explained the situation. Dawn's disgust for Paul immediately skyrocketed. "Thank Arceus Chimchar left him early! Who knows what would've happened if it stayed?" She and Anabel both agreed—they needed to help Chimchar move on from being abandoned. — Not far from the Pokémon Center, a vast grassy field stretched out under the morning sun. They decided this would be the perfect place for breakfast. And because of Chimchar, Ash—for the first time in a long while—volunteered to cook. "Alright, everyone! Come on out!" With a bright flash of light, Ash's Pokémon emerged one by one: Tyranitar, Buizel, Sceptile, Gengar, Pidgeot, Latias, Electabuzz, and of course, Pikachu. Dawn and Anabel did the same, releasing their teams. Piplup, Pachirisu, Aipom, Buneary... Stantler, Espeon, Metagross... Pokémon that had battled together, trained together, grown together—they knew exactly what to do. Without any orders, they instinctively divided tasks among themselves, getting everything ready for breakfast. Chimchar stood there, eyes wide with disbelief. Is... is this really how a meal is supposed to be? Everyone working together? Setting up tables, chairs, dishes? Laughing as they cooked? How... warm. Compared to its time with Paul... "Here. Eat. Don't waste time. After this, more training. And we're increasing the intensity." It was night and day. "Chimchar, you're recovering well. You can help too! We need your fire to light the stove." "Pika, Pikachu!" Ash pointed at the pile of wood beneath the pot. Chimchar hesitated, then took a deep breath. A small burst of flames ignited the firewood. The warmth flickered across Chimchar's face. For the first time... It didn't feel alone. The Pokémon around it—laughing, chatting, smiling. This is... happiness? It clenched its tiny fists. I want to stay here. — Author's Notes: (I made some minor adjustments to Chimchar's storyline and moved some events forward. Personally, I think it works pretty well! Thanks for all your support everyone!) -------------- T/N: Access Advance Chapters on my P@treon: [email protected]/PokePals

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Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend Author:PokePals
Chapter 1: I am Ash Ketchum Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2: Sign-In Rewards and System Starter Pack! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3: May, I'll Wait for You! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4: Mewtwo Becomes My Guardian! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5: Pidgeot, I'm Here to Pick You Up! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6: Scott and Granny Agatha! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ash's Elite Battle! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8: Going Home, Signing In Again! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Clash of Jealous Hearts! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10: Team Rocket's Double Trouble! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11: Ash Saves Misty and May! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12: Training Triumphs and a New Journey Begins! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Swarm of Beedrill VS Fusion of Wind, Fire, and Thunder! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14: Moonlight Dance, Signing in at Mount Moon! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15: The Flames of Friendship: Charizard's Return! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16: Charizard VS Articuno! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17: Charizard’s Battle to Become a Legend! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18: Victory! Triple Experience Critical Hit! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19: "The Road to Saffron: Gordon’s Stolen Invention!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20: "Miracle Candy and a Giant Caterpie!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21: Ash's Preparation for the Future! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22: Saffron Soak: Rest and Relaxation! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ash’s Insight: Legendary Power! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24: Harley’s Green Hat! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25: Is Ash Acting Sneaky? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Saffron Con, Dazzling Performances! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27: Red-Bandana May vs Green-Hat Harley! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29: Haunter of the Ghost Tower! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30: Catching Haunter, the Deserted Ghost Town! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Two Girls’ Fear! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ponyta's Evolution, Rapidash! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33: Kirlia and Ralts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34: Jame’s Family Villa Castle Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35: Sign-In Battle Arena! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36: Grovyle VS Hariyama! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37: Evolution, Sceptile’s Rise! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38: Snorlax’s War of Attrition! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Symbol of Guts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Pokémon Breeding Center! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41: Pikachu Learns Volt Tackle! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42: Pokémon Eggs and Training! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Silver Town Contest! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Roaring Youth and the Silver Ribbon! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Lake of Dragonair! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 46: Evolution, Crawdaunt! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 47: Misty and May Join Forces! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 48: Signing in for the Battle Dome! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 49: First Encounter with Elesa! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Battle with Tucker! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 51: Fusion of Fire and Water vs. Earth Storm! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Symbol of Tactics! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 53: Ash’s Electrifying Encounter with Elekid! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 54: Purchasing Items, the Soothe Bell! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 55: Scyther and the Surprise Hatching! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 56: A Call from Ash! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Pokémon Rangers! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 58: Encounter with Celebi! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 59: True Friendship! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 60: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 1! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 61: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 2! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 62: Signing In to Battle Pike! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 63: Battle Pike Showdown! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 64: Pikachu Enters the Pike! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Gold Symbol of Luck! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 66: A Fond Goodbye to Brock! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Wisteria Pokémon Contest! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 68: Munchlax's Comeback – A One-Hit Victory! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 69: A Gastly Challenge at Maiden’s Peak! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 70: The Duel of Titans! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Awakening of Haunter Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 72: Battle Palace Beckons, Mewtwo's Shadow Looms Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 73: Signing In to Battle Palace! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 74: VS Spenser, Jungle Battle! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 75: Intense Battle! Synced Experience! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gold Symbol of Spirits! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 77: Lapras, Long Time No See! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 78: The Red Lightning of Commerce City! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 79: Destination Gardenia Town! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 80: A Pleasant Surprise – Ralts Evolves! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 81: May vs. Jessie! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 82: The Gardenia Ribbon! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 83: The Arrival of Anabel! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 84: Team Rocket Strikes Again! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 85: Challenge at the Battle Tower – VS Anabel! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 86: A Fierce Duel! Gengar vs. Metagross! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 87: The Symbol of Ability Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 88: Anabel, Join Me on My Journey! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 89: Primeape, It’s Been a While! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 90: Primeape’s First Battle, Fairy-Type Revealed! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 91: Arrival at Mount Silver – The Poachers' Scheme! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 92: Bug-Type Pokémon and a Ghostly Encounter! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 93: The Dance of Volbeat and Illumise! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 94: Larvitar, Long Time No See! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 95: Training Plans! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 96: Level Grinding – Kirlia Evolves! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 97: Team Transformation – Evolution and Power Surge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 98: The Tyrant of the Sands, Tyranitar! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 99: Misty and May’s Decision! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 100: A Special Night and Arrival at Mulberry City! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 101: A New Alliance – Harley and Team Rocket! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 102: Cursed Doll vs. Blaziken! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 103: May's Fifth Ribbon Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 104: Brock and Lucy at Pewter Gym! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 105: Brandon, The Battle Pyramid Awaits! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 106: Ash vs. Brandon – The Clash Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 107: Charizard Victorious, Snorlax vs. Regirock! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 108: Snorlax Crushes the Rock Titan Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 109: Steel Resolve – The Last Battle Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 110: Conquering the Battle Frontier! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 111: Giovanni's Ambitions Unveiled! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 112: Return to the Indigo Plateau! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 113: The Grand Festival Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 114: The First Round – Performance Review! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 115: Fate’s Design – A Rivalry Reignited! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 116: A Dominating Victory—Advancing in Style! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 117: Ash and Aipom! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 118: The Power of Viridian! May vs. Drew! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 119: Blaziken vs. Flygon! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 120: May’s Journey Continues – A Reunion with Squirtle! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 121: Exploring the Water Capital! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 122: The Legend of Latios and Latias Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 123: A Reunion in the Water Capital – Latias’ Longing! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 124: Tour de Alto Mare Begins! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 125: Parting Ways for a Greater Reunion! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 126: The Marina Group's Water Shows! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 127: The Ocean Prince's Egg! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 128: The Pirate Phantom & the Birth of Manaphy! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 129: Manaphy Speaks! "Mama… Maybe…?" Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 130: The Sea Temple Begins to Sink! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 131: Ash, the King of the Vast Sea! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 132: May’s Farewell! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 133: Charizard vs. Metagross! A Clash of Champions! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 134: Returning to Pallet Town – Gary's Arrival! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 135: Plans and Preparations! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 136: Latias Masters Its Power! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 137: A New Journey—Destination: Sinnoh! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 138: Dawn and Piplup! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 139: First Encounter with Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 140: Pikachu Crushes Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 141: The Wandering Bard, Nando! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 142: First Encounter with Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 143: Capturing Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 144: The Baby Stantler and the Rampaging Ursaring! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 145: Pikachu's Little Fangirl? Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 146: Dawn and Buneary! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 147: Dawn’s First Pokémon Contest! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 148: Dawn vs. Zoey Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 149: Signing In at the Oreburgh Gym! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 150: Sceptile’s Blade Cuts Down Fossil! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 151: Battle Against Roark! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 152: Turtwig’s First Battle! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 153: The Final One, VS Rampardos! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 154: The Coal Badge, Dawn, and Pachirisu! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 155: First Encounter with Pokémon Hunter J! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 156: Pidgeot vs. Salamence! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 157: The Fragrant Floaroma Town! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 158: Dawn’s Victory and the Legend of Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 159: An Encounter with Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 160: The Eterna Forest - First Encounter with Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 161: Capturing Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 162: The Elite Four, Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 163: Ash vs. Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 164: The Legend of Sinnoh’s Space-Time! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 165: Signing in at Eterna Gym! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 166: Turtwig Evolves, Grotle! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 167: The Forest Badge, Cynthia Appears! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 168: Paul Challenges Cynthia! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 169: The Power of Champion Cynthia! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 170: The Gentle Cynthia! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 171: Chimchar, Come With Me! (Part 1) Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 172: Chimchar, Come With Me! (Part 2) Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 173: I’ve Caught Chimchar! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 174: The Awakening of Blaze! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 175: Shieldon, and the Return of Gary! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 176: J’s Escape Route Cut Off—The Airship Falls! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 177: J’s Reluctant Retreat, Arrival in Hearthome City! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 178: Dawn’s Tears! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 179: The Hearthome City Tag Battle Competition! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 180: Chimchar’s Outburst! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 181: Evolution – Monferno! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 182: Arrival at Alamos Town! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 183: Showdown at the Space-Time Tower! (Part 1) Oct 10th, 2025
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