Chapter 216: Sudden Mutation!

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"Ugh... Where... where am I?" Conway, who had just been pulled back by Dusknoir, finally came to his senses after that eerie little girl vanished. His head still spinning, he glanced to his side—only to be horrified by the sight of a towering cliff that dropped into a bottomless abyss. Even more chilling was the lingering coldness in the air, as if that sinister presence hadn't quite dispersed. It made his skin crawl. "Aaah! Why am I here? Wait, that eerie little girl—wasn't she supposed to be my teammate?! Aaah! A G-G-Ghost!" Conway suddenly caught sight of Dusknoir beside him. With yellow and gray accents on its body and that glowing red eye, especially in the gloom of the cliffside, it was nothing short of terrifying. Just as he finished speaking, Conway passed out again from sheer fright. "Huuuh?" Dusknoir tilted its head in confusion, not expecting this kind of reaction. It awkwardly hovered down, trying to wake him up. That was when Gengar arrived—followed closely by Darkrai, Ash, Dawn, and Anabel. "What are you doing!?" Dawn, who had once teamed up with Conway in the tag battle back in Hearthome City, immediately recognized him. Seeing Conway unconscious and Dusknoir looming over him, she instinctively shouted in alarm. Dusknoir, realizing they had misunderstood, shook its head frantically in denial. "Dawn, wait! You've got it wrong," Ash quickly intervened. "Dusknoir was helping Conway —it wasn't hurting him. Let's hear what it has to say." Dusknoir, who had originally been planning to leave, stopped and began explaining itself. Anabel interpreted its words for everyone. Conway, who had just regained consciousness again, listened carefully. Only now did he realize... the teammate he thought he had been traveling with was something else entirely—something unclean, unnatural. Something... ghostly. He looked at Dusknoir with deep gratitude. Dusknoir sheepishly scratched the back of its head. But then—Dusknoir suddenly turned toward a direction in the forest. Its eye narrowed. It let out a few warning sounds before bolting off at full speed. "It's sensed something again!" Ash exclaimed. "That eerie girl must've reappeared. Gengar, you felt it too, didn't you?" Gengar nodded, then flew off like a shadow into the woods. Ash and the others wasted no time chasing after it. Deep in the forest... A Shinx stood motionless, its eyes dull and lifeless. Standing before it was that pale, short-haired girl—her skin white as death, her laughter sharp and bone-chilling. She waved toward Shinx, beckoning it forward. Beyond the girl, a dark cave loomed. It was gaping wide, its pitch-black interior like a demon's maw that devoured all light. "Hehehe... come on... come play..." Shinx remained completely unaware of the danger. This Shinx belonged to a student named Angie, who had also attended Professor Rowan's lecture. Angie was a Pokémon Caretaker. Right now, she was panicking—her Shinx had vanished. Following its trail, she eventually arrived at the mountaintop ruins. These ruins had been under repair, but after a construction accident, work had been halted. No one had returned since. When Angie got there, she finally spotted her Shinx—being led toward the cave by that same creepy little girl. "Shinx! What are you doing here? And who is that girl?!" Angie looked straight at her. But the girl didn't respond. Instead, she stepped right up to the cave's edge. Suddenly, a powerful pulling force erupted from within! Shinx, lightweight as it was, was yanked toward the abyss! Angie lunged forward, catching it just in time—but the pull was now dragging her in too. It felt like the very mountain was trying to swallow her whole. Angie was terrified. "Huaaa!" A figure suddenly swooped down from the sky—Dusknoir! It grabbed Angie and stabbed its roots deep into the ground, anchoring them in place, refusing to be dragged in. "Hehehe... come on now... let's all play..." The girl slowly opened her eyes. They were blood red—like pools of thick, dripping blood. Monstrous. Deranged. "Huuuuuh!" Dusknoir snarled and whipped around—launching a Shadow Ball straight at her! BOOM! The Shadow Ball struck the girl head-on, blasting her backward—right into the black cave behind her. The pull stopped immediately. Ash and the others finally caught up. "Angie! Are you alright?" Conway recognized her right away. Both had been attending the same lecture. "I—I'm okay... that thing was terrifying... my Shinx, it was acting all weird too, but the moment that girl disappeared, it snapped out of it..." She glanced fearfully at the cave, her body trembling. She was just a young girl—being scared like this was only natural. Dawn and Anabel huddled behind Ash, both of them too afraid to look directly at the cave. Piplup, meanwhile, strutted right up to the entrance. "Piplup! Pipipi~!" It puffed up its tiny chest, trying to act brave. See, Dawn? There's nothing to be afraid of. Everything's fine. Leave it to me. "Pikachu! Pika!" But Pikachu frowned. Ash had already shown serious concern about this cave, and Pikachu could feel it too—there was something wrong about this place. Something dark. Something ancient. Piplup didn't sense it. It simply wasn't strong enough. Pikachu rushed forward, trying to pull Piplup back. And that was when it happened. A sudden change! Whoooosh—! Without warning, the previously dormant cave surged with energy—unleashing a pulling force even stronger than before! Colors swirled at the cave's entrance—five, six, maybe more, like the shifting surface of some monstrous, sentient liquid. Then—she appeared again. The pale eerie little girl reemerged—her hands stretched out from the darkness. She grabbed Piplup in an instant—yanking it violently toward the cave! "Pika!!" Pikachu jumped forward, clutching onto Piplup, trying to stop it. But the force was too strong! "Piplup!" Dawn's fear shattered the moment she saw her partner in danger. Forgetting everything else, she sprinted forward, grabbing hold of Piplup's other flipper! But stopping wasn't so easy. In a heartbeat—Piplup was halfway through the entrance. Dawn's hands were already being pulled inside! Anabel, seeing this, didn't hesitate—her bond with Dawn too strong. She ran after her friend and latched on. Swish! Swish! Swish! The vortex raged. And just like that—Piplup, Pikachu, Dawn, and Anabel were all swallowed whole by the cave! "Kukukuku... come and play... kukukuku..." From deep within the darkness, came the sound of bones cracking—grating, grinding, hideous. -------------- T/N: Access Advance Chapters on my P@treon: [email protected]/PokePals

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Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend
Pokémon: Rewriting Ash's Legend Author:PokePals
Chapter 1: I am Ash Ketchum Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2: Sign-In Rewards and System Starter Pack! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3: May, I'll Wait for You! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4: Mewtwo Becomes My Guardian! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5: Pidgeot, I'm Here to Pick You Up! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6: Scott and Granny Agatha! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ash's Elite Battle! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8: Going Home, Signing In Again! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Clash of Jealous Hearts! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10: Team Rocket's Double Trouble! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11: Ash Saves Misty and May! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12: Training Triumphs and a New Journey Begins! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Swarm of Beedrill VS Fusion of Wind, Fire, and Thunder! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14: Moonlight Dance, Signing in at Mount Moon! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15: The Flames of Friendship: Charizard's Return! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16: Charizard VS Articuno! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17: Charizard’s Battle to Become a Legend! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18: Victory! Triple Experience Critical Hit! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19: "The Road to Saffron: Gordon’s Stolen Invention!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20: "Miracle Candy and a Giant Caterpie!" Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21: Ash's Preparation for the Future! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22: Saffron Soak: Rest and Relaxation! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ash’s Insight: Legendary Power! Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24: Harley’s Green Hat! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25: Is Ash Acting Sneaky? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Saffron Con, Dazzling Performances! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27: Red-Bandana May vs Green-Hat Harley! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28: May’s first Kanto Ribbon! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29: Haunter of the Ghost Tower! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30: Catching Haunter, the Deserted Ghost Town! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Two Girls’ Fear! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ponyta's Evolution, Rapidash! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33: Kirlia and Ralts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34: Jame’s Family Villa Castle Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35: Sign-In Battle Arena! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36: Grovyle VS Hariyama! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37: Evolution, Sceptile’s Rise! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38: Snorlax’s War of Attrition! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Symbol of Guts! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Pokémon Breeding Center! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41: Pikachu Learns Volt Tackle! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42: Pokémon Eggs and Training! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Silver Town Contest! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Roaring Youth and the Silver Ribbon! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Lake of Dragonair! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 46: Evolution, Crawdaunt! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 47: Misty and May Join Forces! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 48: Signing in for the Battle Dome! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 49: First Encounter with Elesa! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Battle with Tucker! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 51: Fusion of Fire and Water vs. Earth Storm! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Symbol of Tactics! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 53: Ash’s Electrifying Encounter with Elekid! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 54: Purchasing Items, the Soothe Bell! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 55: Scyther and the Surprise Hatching! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 56: A Call from Ash! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Pokémon Rangers! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 58: Encounter with Celebi! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 59: True Friendship! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 60: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 1! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 61: Time Warp Heals All Wounds, Part 2! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 62: Signing In to Battle Pike! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 63: Battle Pike Showdown! Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 64: Pikachu Enters the Pike! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Gold Symbol of Luck! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 66: A Fond Goodbye to Brock! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Wisteria Pokémon Contest! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 68: Munchlax's Comeback – A One-Hit Victory! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 69: A Gastly Challenge at Maiden’s Peak! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 70: The Duel of Titans! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Awakening of Haunter Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 72: Battle Palace Beckons, Mewtwo's Shadow Looms Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 73: Signing In to Battle Palace! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 74: VS Spenser, Jungle Battle! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 75: Intense Battle! Synced Experience! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gold Symbol of Spirits! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 77: Lapras, Long Time No See! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 78: The Red Lightning of Commerce City! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 79: Destination Gardenia Town! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 80: A Pleasant Surprise – Ralts Evolves! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 81: May vs. Jessie! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 82: The Gardenia Ribbon! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 83: The Arrival of Anabel! Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 84: Team Rocket Strikes Again! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 85: Challenge at the Battle Tower – VS Anabel! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 86: A Fierce Duel! Gengar vs. Metagross! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 87: The Symbol of Ability Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 88: Anabel, Join Me on My Journey! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 89: Primeape, It’s Been a While! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 90: Primeape’s First Battle, Fairy-Type Revealed! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 91: Arrival at Mount Silver – The Poachers' Scheme! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 92: Bug-Type Pokémon and a Ghostly Encounter! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 93: The Dance of Volbeat and Illumise! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 94: Larvitar, Long Time No See! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 95: Training Plans! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 96: Level Grinding – Kirlia Evolves! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 97: Team Transformation – Evolution and Power Surge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 98: The Tyrant of the Sands, Tyranitar! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 99: Misty and May’s Decision! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 100: A Special Night and Arrival at Mulberry City! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 101: A New Alliance – Harley and Team Rocket! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 102: Cursed Doll vs. Blaziken! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 103: May's Fifth Ribbon Badge! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 104: Brock and Lucy at Pewter Gym! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 105: Brandon, The Battle Pyramid Awaits! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 106: Ash vs. Brandon – The Clash Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 107: Charizard Victorious, Snorlax vs. Regirock! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 108: Snorlax Crushes the Rock Titan Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 109: Steel Resolve – The Last Battle Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 110: Conquering the Battle Frontier! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 111: Giovanni's Ambitions Unveiled! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 112: Return to the Indigo Plateau! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 113: The Grand Festival Begins! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 114: The First Round – Performance Review! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 115: Fate’s Design – A Rivalry Reignited! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 116: A Dominating Victory—Advancing in Style! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 117: Ash and Aipom! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 118: The Power of Viridian! May vs. Drew! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 119: Blaziken vs. Flygon! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 120: May’s Journey Continues – A Reunion with Squirtle! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 121: Exploring the Water Capital! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 122: The Legend of Latios and Latias Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 123: A Reunion in the Water Capital – Latias’ Longing! Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 124: Tour de Alto Mare Begins! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 125: Parting Ways for a Greater Reunion! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 126: The Marina Group's Water Shows! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 127: The Ocean Prince's Egg! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 128: The Pirate Phantom & the Birth of Manaphy! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 129: Manaphy Speaks! "Mama… Maybe…?" Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 130: The Sea Temple Begins to Sink! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 131: Ash, the King of the Vast Sea! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 132: May’s Farewell! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 133: Charizard vs. Metagross! A Clash of Champions! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 134: Returning to Pallet Town – Gary's Arrival! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 135: Plans and Preparations! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 136: Latias Masters Its Power! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 137: A New Journey—Destination: Sinnoh! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 138: Dawn and Piplup! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 139: First Encounter with Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 140: Pikachu Crushes Paul! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 141: The Wandering Bard, Nando! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 142: First Encounter with Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 143: Capturing Turtwig! Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 144: The Baby Stantler and the Rampaging Ursaring! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 145: Pikachu's Little Fangirl? Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 146: Dawn and Buneary! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 147: Dawn’s First Pokémon Contest! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 148: Dawn vs. Zoey Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 149: Signing In at the Oreburgh Gym! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 150: Sceptile’s Blade Cuts Down Fossil! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 151: Battle Against Roark! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 152: Turtwig’s First Battle! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 153: The Final One, VS Rampardos! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 154: The Coal Badge, Dawn, and Pachirisu! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 155: First Encounter with Pokémon Hunter J! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 156: Pidgeot vs. Salamence! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 157: The Fragrant Floaroma Town! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 158: Dawn’s Victory and the Legend of Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 159: An Encounter with Suicune! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 160: The Eterna Forest - First Encounter with Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 161: Capturing Buizel! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 162: The Elite Four, Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 163: Ash vs. Lucian! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 164: The Legend of Sinnoh’s Space-Time! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 165: Signing in at Eterna Gym! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 166: Turtwig Evolves, Grotle! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 167: The Forest Badge, Cynthia Appears! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 168: Paul Challenges Cynthia! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 169: The Power of Champion Cynthia! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 170: The Gentle Cynthia! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 171: Chimchar, Come With Me! (Part 1) Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 172: Chimchar, Come With Me! (Part 2) Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 173: I’ve Caught Chimchar! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 174: The Awakening of Blaze! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 175: Shieldon, and the Return of Gary! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 176: J’s Escape Route Cut Off—The Airship Falls! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 177: J’s Reluctant Retreat, Arrival in Hearthome City! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 178: Dawn’s Tears! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 179: The Hearthome City Tag Battle Competition! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 180: Chimchar’s Outburst! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 181: Evolution – Monferno! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 182: Arrival at Alamos Town! Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 183: Showdown at the Space-Time Tower! (Part 1) Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 184: Showdown at the Space-Time Tower! (Part 2) Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 185: Showdown at the Space-Time Tower! (Part 3) Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 186: Three Legends vs. The Time-Space Gods! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 187: Celebi’s Support! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 188: Oración, the Melody That Calms Time and Space! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 189: Darkrai – A New Companion! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 190: Arrival in Solaceon Town, the Solaceon Ruins! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 191: One Hundred Million Poké Coins! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 192: The Final Victory! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 193: The Outdoor Hot Spring and Gligar! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 194: Catching Gligar! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 195: Signing In at the Veilstone Gym! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 196: Maylene and Lucario! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 197: Veilstone Gym, Ash vs. Maylene! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 198: Buizel vs. Lucario! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 199: Aqua Jet Cyclone Mode! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 200: Team Galactic Returns – Long Time No See? Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 201: A Crushing Battle! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 202: Ash is an Honorary Pokémon Ranger?! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 203: Aura's Recognition! Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 204: Pikachu vs. Raichu! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 205: Lake Valor, Wallace Appears! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 206: Dawn Meets May! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 207: Grand Reunion, Tag Battle! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 208: The Wallace Cup Begins! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 209: May vs Dawn! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 210: VS Wallace’s Milotic! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 211: Sign-in at the Pastoria Gym! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 212: Pastoria Gym, Battle with Crasher Wake! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 213: Floatzel, and the Fen Badge! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 214: Dawn Catches a Swinub! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 215: The Ghost Girl and the Legend of the Ghost World! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 216: Sudden Mutation! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 217: The Twin Legends Break Through Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 218: A Perfect Resolution! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 219: They've All Evolved! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 220: The Celestic Contest —Reunion with Cynthia! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 221: Team Galactic Shows Their True Colors! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 222: Cynthia Needs Is Some Assertiveness! Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 223: Signing in at Hearthome Gym, Battle with Fantina! Oct 14th, 2025
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