Chapter 89: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak

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Note: Edit to Chapter 84 that is somewhat important. The lesson Su Fang gets about being a Groom has been updated so that the final piece of advice is now about the proper role of a Flower. This is to give you context to understand what is normal for a Flower to do and what isn't. The relevant section is in the spoiler below. The final part that stood out was when the instructor talked about the proper role of a Flower. “Once a Groom becomes city lord, his Flower steps back from leadership and becomes his strongest pillar of support. She will be your consort and wife, giving you all of her affection and love, but she will also be your Grand Chancellor, ensuring the smooth functioning of your domain by using her knowledge and experience to assist you.” I thought about Mei in this kind of role. Her blessing would certainly be of use in the political sphere. She would be able to easily manipulate her rivals. I snorted internally. I wasn’t sure if relying on her for such a thing was smart, but she was made for those situations. I wasn’t. “She will have eleven years of experience, and you should rely on it to help you, but keep in mind that she is your wife, not your servant. She is there to support you, but you are the one who is in charge of running the city. After a Groom ascends to lordship, the Flower’s primary duty is to nurture her Seeds while you are in charge of governance.” The teacher handed us each a paper that contained a historical account so we could better understand the role of a Flower. In the story, the new Water Groom ascended to his position and began leading the city. He wanted his reign to be marked by significant changes and improvements to the city, so he worked with his ministers to craft a series of proposals for new street layouts, improved roads, and a sewage system. His proposals would have affected nearly every significant interest in the city, and if he had implanted them directly, the major clans would have rioted. This is where his Flower helped. She did not mediate with the clans directly. Instead, in her role as Chancellor, she advised the Groom on how clans would react and gave suggestions that would improve his ideas and make them welcomed by everyone involved. The Groom created the plan. The Groom implemented the plan. But the Flower was in the background, lending her experience and guidance. After everything was settled with Minister Jin, I once more became engrossed in designing an alchemy factory. The idea of making the entire first floor a kind of warehouse had benefits, but it also necessitated changes and extra formations to help move goods from one area to another. I had just been appointed as the new city lord, so maybe I should have been more concerned about my new duties on that front, but that was a job I entrusted to my ministers. They knew the city far better than I ever would, so I did the responsible thing and stayed out of their way. If any issues came up, I was sure Mei could handle them, as she had been running the city for years. One week after our original meeting, Minister Tang sent me a message requesting a meeting. He wanted to discuss the plans for the factory. The ride to the location the minister specified took far longer than I expected, and I was getting impatient by the end. The city streets were crowded with people going about their daily lives, and while they quickly got out of the way for my carriage, it still limited our speed. I was taken to the far southwest corner of the island. The closer we got to our destination, the more the foot traffic thinned out until the streets were nearly empty. The buildings in this part of town were not elegantly designed. Instead, they were simple large stone boxes. As I watched, wagons were constantly entering and exiting them, delivering or retrieving goods. In this area, the edge of the island was a steep cliff with a drop of two or three meters. Minister Tang was waiting for me at a low stone parapet that overlooked the lake below. “Lord Su, you have arrived, excellent,” he said in greeting. “Minister Tang,” I acknowledged, “what did you want to discuss?” The minister gestured with a hand at the lake before him. “I need you to decide if this is a good place for the structure you wish to build, Lord. Considering the requirements you gave me, it appeared to be the best option, but it is good for you to see the area in person in case there were any details we missed.” My mind instantly clicked into gear and began considering the location based on my current designs. “You have decided to go with island expansion instead of tearing down old buildings?” I asked, wanting the reason for the decision. “Yes, Lord. While it is more expensive, as long as funds are no object, it is by far the superior option. It allows for a far more suitable location since it would be difficult to find a sizable enough location otherwise. Forcing the demolition of several buildings for your personal project would be frowned upon by the locals, but building out the island would be praised.” The reasoning seemed sound, and I would accept the minister’s judgment. “I need to expand the area of the structure slightly from what we discussed in the past, so we need to ensure that the expansion is large enough." “This...” the minister twitched uncomfortably. “Lord, this was something I wanted to discuss. You are personally funding this project, so I cannot waste your money, but there is a lot of potential in developing this area.” Minister Tang pointed out the blocky buildings I had passed on my way here. “These are warehouses which supply raw ingredients to various parts of the city. Not only the herbs you need, but also leathers, metals, and woods among other items. Building more workshops directly adjacent to them would be highly beneficial.” I cocked my head to the side. “What are you saying?” “Lord, I wish to expand the scope of the expansion beyond what is strictly necessary for your project. Your building could be constructed by adding a 200 by 200-meter peninsula onto the island. However, I would like to do more. I am considering a one-kilometer extension along three kilometers of coast. It will cost more, but if we already need to hire the earth and metal cultivators to extend the island...” I thought about his proposal. I didn’t care much either way to be honest. I had the money, so why not spend it? There was only one problem. “What about the rule for personally financing projects?” Minister Tang winced slightly. “I’ve talked to the other ministers about this, especially Ministers Jin and Lu. They have accepted that an extension of the island that looked more natural would be better, as a blocky peninsula suitable for only your project would hurt the feng shui of the area, but they warned me that there were limits to such a rationale.” I nodded. “If the ministers approve of your proposal, I have no objections. As long as the project doesn’t require anyone above the Grandmaster level, I will be able to fund it.” “This is a very basic Rank 1 trap formation.” I pointed to two inscriptions on the left side of the plate. “These are qi filters. One for water qi, one for earth qi. These,” I said, moving to the right, “are the vortex inscriptions to pull qi in. The channels that connect them will fill with water and earth qi.” The lines converged on a significantly more complex inscription. “And this uses the water and earth qi to constrict whatever is placed above the plate, locking it in place.” “Hmm, it’s too weak,” criticized NiAn. “It wouldn’t be able to hold anyone in place for even a moment.” I held the plate in my palm and pointed it toward the ground. After I activated it, I took out the herb used to make Rank 0 Nutrition Pills and placed it inside the trap’s range. Then, I began moving the plate around the room and twisting it in various directions to show the herb remained attached. Grandmaster Hu nodded at this display but didn’t comment. I moved in front of another formation plate. “This plate uses fire energy to melt the physical shell of the herb. It only has the filter and gathering inscriptions for fire qi, but there are several more needed to regulate the temperature and direction of the heat it produces. The herb needs to be heated to exactly the right temperature and from all directions equally.” I moved the herb over to hover over this plate, activated the formation, and we watched as the physical body of the herb slowly disappeared. In qi sight, though, I could see that the energy was still locked into the exact same position it had been. Neither of the others were alchemists, and I didn’t think their qi vision was as advanced as mine, but they still had some ability to see what was happening. “At this point, I need to be more careful. The energy is locked into place, but it is more fragile and can easily be destroyed.” I moved the herb to the next set of formation plates. There was one lying flat on the ground and four more surrounding it. Together, they formed an open box. “The plate on the ground senses and detects any energy that isn’t wood-aligned. It’s connected to the four surrounding plates. When the prepared herb is placed inside, the five plates work together to purify the energy.” I inserted the medicinal energy into the group of arrays, and the plate holding it in place acted like the lid of a box. Inside, all the formations activated, and we watched in qi vision as the bottom formation sent signals to the side formations. Then, the side formations sent out needle-thin bolts of qi to strike the impurities in the medicinal energy. After a minute, it was completely cleansed. “This does a lot of damage to the herb,” I admitted. “The targeting method I’m using isn’t great, and it can sometimes cause the wrong side of the formation box to attack certain impurities, burning holes through everything in its path instead of only the minimal amount necessary, but it does perfectly cleanse the herb.” Grandmaster Hu’s eyes widened at the sight of the purified energy. He instantly knew what this would mean. “Finally, this last formation uses wood qi to condense the medicinal energy into a pill,” I said, placing the purified herb over the last plate I had prepared. The final formation activated, and the medicinal energy quickly compressed into a pill. I deactivated the trap formation, releasing the pill, and letting it drop into my palm. “Perfect Rank 0 Nutrition Pill,” I announced. “52% efficacy. It’s so bad that if an alchemist made it, they would be laughed at.” The Grandmaster and Seed both fixed their gazes on the pill, but it was Hu NiAn who spoke first. “An alchemist didn’t make it though, and you can make countless pills with no effort.” “That is the plan,” I confirmed. I walked over to the table and opened up a portfolio I had prepared. “This shows the entire assembly line. I want everything automated. Herbs will be delivered to the ground floor, and lifts will drop them off at the beginning of the assembly line. The trap formation will grab one, and a track system will carry it from one formation to another, finally dropping the finished pill in a jade box at the end. When a hundred pills are in the box, it will be sealed and sent back down via another lift.” I pointed out the various features on the assembly line blueprint. “The lift and track systems should be doable by Formation Disciples. I want them as simple as possible since they are the most likely to break and need repair. A Formation Master should be able to handle the trap, melting, and condensing formations, but it would be good to have a Grandmaster with far more skill than myself to create the purifying formations.” As Grandmaster Hu studied the blueprints, gears turned in his head. “There is a problem of power,” he finally said. “One assembly line will be functional, but if you want to fill your building with these, you’ll drain all the qi in the area.” I nodded. “I’ve considered that. As we are expanding the island, I want to embed a qi gathering formation under the site where the building will be located. The stronger the better. A Rank 3 Qi Gathering Formation should be able to handle it.” Hu NiAn shook his head. “No, it’s a bit weak. You need Rank 4. Rank 5 would be best, but Rank 4 would be sufficient. Anything less and you risk running low occasionally. That normally wouldn’t be a problem, but running low for even a second would mean the formations shut down and they need to be manually restarted. If you fill multiple floors with several assembly lines each, you are talking about hundreds of formations. Needing to constantly restart everything would be too much work.” I frowned. “I concede to your judgment. Affording a Rank 4 formation is difficult, though.” Grandmaster Hu immediately spoke up. “We’ll build it. Don’t worry. You can repay our Formation Lord after you advance to Pill Lord, but the Hu clan has to build this.” I looked at the Grandmaster as he stared at the plans. His eyes shone with avarice, but I wasn’t sure if it was for money, fame, or simply advancing his knowledge of formations. His thoughts didn’t concern me, though. All that mattered were the results. “Happy cooperation,” I smiled.

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The Undying Immortal System
The Undying Immortal System Author:G Tolley
Chapter 1: Life 1, Age 26 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 3: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 4: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 5: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 6: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 7: Life 13, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 8: Life 15, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 9: Life 16, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 10: Life 16, Age 92, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 11: Life 17, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 12: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 13: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 14: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 15: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 16: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 17: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 18: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 19: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 20: Life 50, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 21: Life 50, Age 23, Martial Disciple Level 8 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 22: Life 50, Age 28, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 23: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 24: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 25: Life 51, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 26: Life 51, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 27: Lives 51 to 57 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 28: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 29: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 30: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 31: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 32: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 33: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 34: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 35: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 36: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 37: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 38: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 39: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 40: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 41: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 42: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 43: Life 58, Age 28, Martial Master 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 44: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 45: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 46: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 47: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 48: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 49: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
(Non-canon) Bonus Chapter – Life 58, Age 36, Marital Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 50: Life 58, Age 39, Martial Grandmaster 2 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 51: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 52: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 53: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 54: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 55: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 56: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Addendum: Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 1st, 2025
Patreon Announcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 57: Life 59, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 58: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 59: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 60: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 61: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 62: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 63: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 64: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 65: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 66: Life 60, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 67: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 68: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 69: Life 60, Age 28, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 70: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 71: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 72: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 73: Life 60, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 74: Life 61, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 75: Life 61, Age 21, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 76: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 77: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 78: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 79: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 80: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 81: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 82: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 83: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 84: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 85: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 86: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 87: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Addendum: Map of the Eight Flower Kingdom Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 88: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 89: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 90: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 91: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 92: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 93: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 94: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 95: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 96: Life 61, Age 36, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 97: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 2 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 98: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 99: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
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