Chapter 128: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak

Words : 1492 Updated : Oct 9th, 2025
With my deal in place with Grandmaster Ning, I said a quick goodbye to my classmates, returned the scrolls to the library, and skipped out on my last two weeks of classes. This behavior might have raised some red flags for someone in the Academy, but when I returned, I was going to have to live these two weeks over again, and I didn’t want this life to taint what would happen next time. After I left, my first objective was to reach Peak Grandmaster as quickly as possible. Instead of booking a room at an inn, I used some of my cash reserves to purchase an apartment near the Blue Wind Pavilion. Inside, I set up a small alchemy workshop and a cultivation room with the best Qi Gathering Formation I was capable of creating. In this manner, I spent the next four years in quiet cultivation. As I did, I was constantly asking myself if this was the balance I had been looking for. Several years of slow cultivation with classmates followed by long years of isolation. For some reason, it was more difficult to concentrate on pure cultivation than it had been in the past. To simplify things, I didn’t use my Earth-Rank technique. Instead, I went with a Peak-Yellow one. It wasn’t nearly as powerful, but it let me cultivate quickly. For the Master realm, I only needed to create twelve basic meridians, which was far faster than the complex network the Peak-Earth technique required. As for the Grandmaster realm, while I wanted to use a Peak-Yellow technique here also, I knew I needed to do better. Peak-Yellow dantians had problems that might come back to haunt me later. Instead, I took a hybrid approach, using the dantian construction from my Rank 3 Peak-Earth technique but connecting it to my meridians using the Peak-Yellow technique’s method out of necessity. None of my classmates or teachers would have been at all pleased with my final result, but it was quick. Since I didn’t have any capillary meridians, I didn’t have to worry about them getting clogged as I cultivated at the Grandmaster level. Because of this, while the techniques I used were at a lower level than my last life, I felt more powerful since my qi moved freely. Now, all I needed was for Grandmaster Ning to fulfill his side of our bargain. Not knowing how to contact the Grandmaster, I sent a message via the Blue Wind Pavilion. I gave them the details of how he was my teacher at the Academy and that he may still be there or he may have returned to the sect. With the information network of the Pavilion, and the fact that Ning was a prominent family, this was all they needed to deliver my message. The next day, a servant arrived at my door with an invitation to join the Grandmaster at his estate in the city. As I found out, it was a stretch to say that this particular estate was ‘in the city.’ The carriage that was sent to take me there rolled out of the city gates opposite the direction of the Yellow Orchid Academy. While the western hills held the Academy, the hills east of the city held several sprawling mansions. The one I was delivered to was a three-story courtyard-style complex surrounded by a large stone wall. Every inch of the wall had been carved with delicate reliefs in a grand display of the owner’s wealth and opulence. The sitting room I was brought to looked simple by comparison. It contained only basic wooden furniture and a small stone tea set sitting on one of the tables. When I looked at the room in energy vision though, I saw that everything was brimming with power. The grain of the wood the chairs were made from looked like it might obliterate me if I touched it. Only at the servant’s gentle urging was I willing to tentatively take a seat. After sitting for 15 minutes, I was wondering how long it would take for Grandmaster Ning to arrive. After the wait stretched to 30 minutes, I began to get slightly annoyed. At the one-hour mark, I knew that the delay had to be deliberate, but the splendor of this mansion told me that it wasn’t my place to question my host. Instead of worrying further, I needed to do something to keep my mind occupied. After a quick look around the room, my gaze landed on the stone tea set. The wood was interesting, but I didn’t know anything about plants. Stone, however, was something that I had been studying under Master Tan. Looking at the small teacup, I couldn’t help but be enamored by the energy it contained. I instinctively reached out with my hand to pick it up but quickly caught myself. I turned to the servant who had been waiting patiently near the door. “May I?” After a brief pause, he nodded without saying anything. I picked up the cup and began examining it closely. The energy inside of it was strange. It wasn’t qi, it wasn’t medicinal energy, and it wasn’t demonic energy. I wasn’t sure what it was, but I felt like I had seen something like it before. It felt familiar. I had the urge to pull the energy from the cup and try to absorb it, but even if that didn’t get me killed, I was certain it would ruin this potential business relationship. Instead of absorbing the energy, I simply studied this stone. I had spent years learning to analyze simple rocks made from granite and sandstone, but this one truly baffled me. I had no idea what type of stone it was. Stolen novel; please report. It was pale gray with a tinge of green hue. No striations or lines marred its surface. At this point, my ability to analyze a stone’s crystalline structure was only rudimentary, but I could find no flaws in it. If I carved a formation into this cup, I felt that I wouldn’t need to worry at all about the stone’s integrity. I don’t know how long I spent fixated on that small teacup, but my inspection was eventually interrupted by the opening of the sitting room’s door. Grandmaster Ning walked in and took the only remaining chair. A maid followed shortly behind him to make tea. The karmic energy I had been provided with was far more difficult to shape than the Lord-level energy I had used before. I still maintained my belief that since it was unlikely many people had karmic affinities, cultivation techniques reflected this reality and were usable without it. However, this belief was being challenged by the reality in front of me. I knew what I needed to try, but first I had to make sure I could handle the obligations I had already agreed to. “System, raise my water, fire, and metal affinities to peak six-star.” Purchase confirmed. Cost 48 million credits. 34,467,645 credits remaining. Now to see what was possible. “How much to raise my affinity for karmic energy to low nine-star?” Cost 100,000 credits. A thousand times more than the basic affinities. If it helped, it might be worth the price, but how much of an advantage would a low-level affinity give me? I sighed. At this point, I didn’t have any choice other than to try it out. “System, permanently raise my affinity for karmic energy to peak eight-star.” Purchase confirmed. Cost 17.6 million credits. 16,867,645 credits remaining. I hadn’t felt much when I raised my basic affinities to peak six-star. I had become used to the sensations of boosting affinities, but raising this affinity to only peak eight-star gave me a tingly... ineffable feeling. Refocusing, I decided that while I was boosting affinities, I might as well take care of another one that I should have looked into earlier. “System, how much for a permanent low nine-star space affinity?” Cost 10 million credits. I felt my mind go blank for a second. One hundred thousand times the cost of a basic element. A low nine-star affinity required all the credits I would get from dying as a Martial Lord 1. If the pricing was consistent with others, gaining enough credits to boost a spatial affinity beyond six- or seven-star might be completely impossible. Having a new thought, I asked another question. “System, how much for a permanent low nine-star time affinity?” Cost 10 million credits. The same, as I expected. I grimaced. It might be a waste... But I did have the credits to get one of them... “System, permanently upgrade my space affinity to low nine-star.” Purchase confirmed. Cost 10 million credits. 6,867,645 credits remaining. I felt my insides twist. I felt a sharp pain in my soul. I fell to the ground unconscious.

Comments (0)

4.1 /5.0
comment Write Comment
VIEW ALL COMMENTS
50/500
Post Comments
Write Comment
Please enter valid text
Exceeded word limit
contents
Contents
The Undying Immortal System
The Undying Immortal System Author:G Tolley
Chapter 1: Life 1, Age 26 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 3: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 4: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 5: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 6: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 7: Life 13, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 8: Life 15, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 9: Life 16, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 10: Life 16, Age 92, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 11: Life 17, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 12: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 13: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 14: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 15: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 16: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 17: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 18: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 19: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 20: Life 50, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 21: Life 50, Age 23, Martial Disciple Level 8 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 22: Life 50, Age 28, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 23: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 24: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 25: Life 51, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 26: Life 51, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 27: Lives 51 to 57 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 28: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 29: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 30: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 31: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 32: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 33: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 34: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 35: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 36: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 37: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 38: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 39: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 40: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 41: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 42: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 43: Life 58, Age 28, Martial Master 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 44: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 45: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 46: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 47: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 48: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 49: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
(Non-canon) Bonus Chapter – Life 58, Age 36, Marital Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 50: Life 58, Age 39, Martial Grandmaster 2 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 51: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 52: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 53: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 54: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 55: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 56: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Addendum: Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 1st, 2025
Patreon Announcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 57: Life 59, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 58: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 59: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 60: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 61: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 62: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 63: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 64: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 65: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 66: Life 60, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 67: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 68: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 69: Life 60, Age 28, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 70: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 71: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 72: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 73: Life 60, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 74: Life 61, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 75: Life 61, Age 21, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 76: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 77: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 78: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 79: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 80: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 81: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 82: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 83: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 84: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 85: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 86: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 87: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Addendum: Map of the Eight Flower Kingdom Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 88: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 89: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 90: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 91: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 92: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 93: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 94: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 95: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 96: Life 61, Age 36, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 97: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 2 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 98: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 99: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 100: Life 61, Age 44, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 101: Life 61, Age 45, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 102: Life 61, Age 47, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 103: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 104: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 105: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 106: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 107: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 108: Life 62, Age 79, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 109: Life 62, Age 80, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 110: Life 62, Age 83, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 111: Life 62, Age 92, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 112: Life 62, Age 143, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 113: Life 63, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Addendum: Book 2 Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 7th, 2025
Book 2 Afterword, Shameless Plug, Book 3 Spoiler Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 114: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 115: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 116: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 117: Life 64, Age 20, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 118: Life 64, Age 21, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 119: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 120: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 121: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 122: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 123: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 124: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 125: Life 65, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 126: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 127: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 128: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 129: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 130: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Lord 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 131: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 132: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 133: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 134: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 135: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 136: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 137: Life 66, Age 21, Martial Master 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Setting
Setting
Background
A A A
Font Size
A - 16 A +
Add
In