Chapter 122: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2

Words : 1889 Updated : Oct 9th, 2025
After class, our group headed to the dining hall as usual. Everyone was in low spirits from their lack of progress. While I had made significant strides in shifting my qi on command, they were all still struggling to form a basic defense. To me, the problem was clear. The method Instructor Sun was using to guide them to using their qi internally was far from optimal. I had to assume that it would work, but I felt like spending more time explaining qi control and finding a way to show them what they needed to do would help them learn more quickly. Using earth qi to demonstrate what they should be doing would be difficult, but my fire affinity was high enough that I could potentially manipulate environmental fire qi to give them a quick demonstration. If I showed them what they were doing wrong and how to fix it, I was sure that at least a couple of them would be able to learn in only a few hours. Once we were seated around the dining table, I made my proposal. “Do you want me to try and teach you how to control qi like he wants us to?” My question caused everyone to fall silent, and they all looked at Zhuge Yan. He rolled his fingers on the table in thought. “How?” “I can manipulate fire qi. I can use it to show you what you should be doing. I think one of the problems you’re having is that you can’t see your energy body very clearly. Using this method, I could show you what you are doing and what you should be doing in more detail. That would give you a better understanding of how to control your qi.” Zhuge Yan sat in silence as he thought, and no one interrupted his process. It took him several minutes to reach a decision. “No.” His demeanor was firm and unyielding. “We already undercut Instructor Sun today. It wouldn’t be good to do so again so soon. Your process might be faster, but it isn’t necessary. If Grandmaster Ning trusts that the current method will work, we can rely on it.” I nearly started to argue back, to make the case for learning more quickly, but I could see that I had already lost. The faith the others had in Yan’s decision was nearly absolute. It seemed strange to me that they would trust someone they’d only known a little over a month so much. For the rest of the meal, the others talked about their experiences in the combat class. I was a little disappointed that my input wasn’t welcome, but I understood. They wanted to learn through Instructor Sun’s process. Instead of contributing, I simply sat and listened to their descriptions of what it felt like when they were trying to fortify their skin. Their thoughts seemed to run counter to my own experiences. --------------------------------------------------- The next day, our class returned to the training yard. I went to my corner to practice while the others started punching each other again. When the sparring started, I carefully observed the instructor's expression. He showed a look of surprise and then grinned in delight when everyone was as poor at defending themselves as they were the day before. We spent all day on basic fighting drills, and at the end of it, I felt I was reaching the limit of what I could learn from this type of practice. As we were gathering to leave, the instructor called me over. “Follow me.” He turned and exited the courtyard in the opposite direction from the other students. We didn’t walk far before I found myself once more in Grandmaster Ning’s office, but this time, Instructor Sun stood by the Grandmaster’s side. “You offered to teach them, didn’t you?” He looked at me from across his desk with steepled fingers. “Yes.” There was no reason for me to hide it. “Show us how you intended to do so.” I looked at him in confusion for a moment, but quickly turned away to look around the room. “I need a fire.” The Grandmaster obliged and pulled a small cauldron from his storage space. I lit the burner and started to channel the energy it let off. It wasn’t qi, just natural fire, but for my fire affinity, it was close enough. I shaped the fire into an arm and made the area where my qi would be burn more brightly. Shifting the qi in my body to form a shield, I simultaneously moved the brightly burning area to envelop the flaming arm. “Their problem is that they can’t see their own qi. By using this method, I hoped to let them visualize it more easily.” The Grandmaster looked at my demonstration with interest, but didn’t comment on it. He only turned to Instructor Sun. “What do you think?” “It could be useful, but right now it would ruin them. If he had shown this to the others, it might’ve delayed us by several weeks.” --------------------------------------------------- With my new comprehension boost in place, it only took a few days for me to become proficient in the basics of instinctive qi control. Shi YuLong and Chai JiaQi had extended their lead over me, but I was happy with the steady progress I was making. At the end of the week, Instructor Sun made a new announcement. “From now on, you are to advance one stage every week. No more, no less. You will advance on time.” He turned to me and glared. “You are not allowed to accept any help from others during your cultivation.” “Yes, Instructor Sun,” we all acknowledged. “Your combat training will continue unabated, but you will need to begin learning a profession. If you have not yet chosen one, take this weekend to decide. However, I will warn you right now, it is against school rules to ask anyone about the details of their choice. If you wish to share, you may do so, but you must never ask someone what they are learning.” I cocked my head to the side at this rule. Why? Was a person’s profession such a well guarded secret? I had met countless alchemists, formation specialists, and herbalists, and none of them had shown any reservations at all when talking about their professions. How were you supposed to sell herbs or pills if no one knew you had them? I didn’t think Instructor Sun would appreciate my question, but when I looked at Zhuge Yan, I saw a solemn look on his face. He knew the reason. That night at dinner, once we were settled down, I broached the topic. “Why aren’t we supposed to ask people about their professions?” The rest of the table quieted down, and I could feel them become nervous. Zhuge Yan looked at me. “There are two reasons. For combat professionals,” he gestured to Shi YuLong and Chai JiaQi, “they generally like to keep their profession a secret as much as possible because it can surprise an enemy. If someone is a water cultivator but suddenly starts throwing out countless talismans, it can serve as an excellent surprise. Of course, anyone can use talismans, but if you are a known talisman artist, people will be far more prepared for it.” “That makes sense, I guess, but such a rule seems like a bit much if it’s only that.” “The other reason,” he said, his gaze fixed on me, focused on not letting his eyes roam around, “is that depending on your profession, you can be in serious danger if people know about it.” “You mean, like how someone might want to kidnap an alchemist and force them to make pills?” I asked, trying to put his words into a context I had considered before. “That is a possibility, but for refiners, it’s much worse.” His face became stony. “Do you know that with a quality Rank 1 refined weapon, a Martial Disciple is capable of fighting an unarmed Martial Master? From what I’ve heard, with even just a Rank 5 refined weapon, a mediocre Martial Emperor might be able to defeat anyone on the continent other than the Saint and his Sovereigns.” “Alright... but that’s not too different from the benefits a pill can give you. An alchemist can create pills that could allow a Disciple to fight against a Master.” Zhuge Yan steepled his fingers, trying to think how best to explain. “A Pill Emperor can make pills that would greatly strengthen a Martial Emperor, yes. So, if the Martial Emperor is strong enough, they might kidnap the Pill Emperor to have a constant supply of pills, right?” I nodded, accepting that reality. “This would still require a constant flow of high level herbs, so they would also need to enslave a powerful herbalist. They would then need to protect their fields from being raided, so they would also need the services of martial cultivators. The scope and scale necessary for constant production of such pills expands rapidly, and there are many ways for that Emperor’s adversaries to interrupt the supply chain other than striking at the alchemist.” “Is a refiner so different?” “An Artifact Emperor can make a weapon that would make a Martial Emperor undefeatable. Once it is made, it’s made. No need for a supply chain. No need for more weapons. After the Emperor has that weapon, what do you think they will do?” “Kid—” I began, but cut myself off. Why would they kidnap the refiner? They already had the weapon. They wouldn’t necessarily need more than one. They would just want to make sure no one else had access to its equal. As a look of realization crossed my face, Zhuge Yan nodded. “Refiners are the top targets for assassination within every empire on the continent. The empires who have already managed to obtain Rank 5 and 6 artifacts will do anything they can to keep their edge. If a new empire or kingdom wants to train up a refiner to make them a new weapon, they must do it in absolute secrecy.” Yan looked at me seriously to make sure I fully understood his message. “If someone is even suspected of being a high level refiner, they will be targeted. Both this school and the Nine Rivers Sect have protections in place to help refiners live long enough to be trained and grow up, but that doesn’t mean they are safe. Even within the school’s walls, there are people who would go to any length to prevent a rival faction from gaining a refiner.” “Can’t the Sovereigns, or at least the Saint, do anything about this?” He shook his head. “Possibly, but if they can, they don’t want to. They’ve arguably made the situation worse over the years.” “But—” Zhuge Yan cut me off. “We are broaching topics best left alone. Let’s talk about happier things.” I nodded and allowed the conversation to change topics. I noticed that when we did, Lin LiTing, who had been extremely nervous as Zhuge Yan talked, finally relaxed.

Comments (0)

4.1 /5.0
comment Write Comment
VIEW ALL COMMENTS
50/500
Post Comments
Write Comment
Please enter valid text
Exceeded word limit
contents
Contents
The Undying Immortal System
The Undying Immortal System Author:G Tolley
Chapter 1: Life 1, Age 26 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 3: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 4: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 5: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 6: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 7: Life 13, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 8: Life 15, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 9: Life 16, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 10: Life 16, Age 92, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 11: Life 17, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 12: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 13: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 14: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 15: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 16: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 17: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 18: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 19: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 20: Life 50, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 21: Life 50, Age 23, Martial Disciple Level 8 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 22: Life 50, Age 28, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 23: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 24: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 25: Life 51, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 26: Life 51, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 27: Lives 51 to 57 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 28: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 29: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 30: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 31: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 32: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 33: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 34: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 35: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 36: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 37: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 38: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 39: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 40: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 41: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 42: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 43: Life 58, Age 28, Martial Master 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 44: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 45: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 46: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 47: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 48: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 49: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
(Non-canon) Bonus Chapter – Life 58, Age 36, Marital Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 50: Life 58, Age 39, Martial Grandmaster 2 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 51: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 52: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 53: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 54: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 55: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 56: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Addendum: Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 1st, 2025
Patreon Announcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 57: Life 59, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 58: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 59: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 60: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 61: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 62: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 63: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 64: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 65: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 66: Life 60, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 67: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 68: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 69: Life 60, Age 28, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 70: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 71: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 72: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 73: Life 60, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 74: Life 61, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 75: Life 61, Age 21, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 76: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 77: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 78: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 79: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 80: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 81: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 82: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 83: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 84: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 85: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 86: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 87: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Addendum: Map of the Eight Flower Kingdom Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 88: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 89: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 90: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 91: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 92: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 93: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 94: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 95: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 96: Life 61, Age 36, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 97: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 2 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 98: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 99: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 100: Life 61, Age 44, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 101: Life 61, Age 45, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 102: Life 61, Age 47, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 103: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 104: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 105: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 106: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 107: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 108: Life 62, Age 79, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 109: Life 62, Age 80, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 110: Life 62, Age 83, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 111: Life 62, Age 92, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 112: Life 62, Age 143, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 113: Life 63, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Addendum: Book 2 Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 7th, 2025
Book 2 Afterword, Shameless Plug, Book 3 Spoiler Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 114: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 115: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 116: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 117: Life 64, Age 20, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 118: Life 64, Age 21, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 119: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 120: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 121: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 122: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 123: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 124: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 125: Life 65, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 126: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 127: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 128: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 129: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 130: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Lord 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 131: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 132: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 133: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 134: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 135: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 136: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 137: Life 66, Age 21, Martial Master 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Setting
Setting
Background
A A A
Font Size
A - 16 A +
Add
In