Chapter 106: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1

Words : 1849 Updated : Oct 7th, 2025
The next morning, we were woken up early and marched outside. Each of us was given different chores. I was led to a kitchen where I was forced into hard labor scrubbing pots and pans for the entire day. I didn’t get back until late in the evening. When I returned, my three roommates were just sitting around playing cards and having fun. This slightly bothered me because I knew we were supposed to be spending this time cultivating. If we weren’t careful, there might be someone like my old instructor from the Su Clan who came and started killing people to make a point. I entered the room silently to not make a scene, quietly sat on my bed, and picked up the cultivation technique scroll I’d been given. Just as I was about to open it, Ko spoke up to stop me. “Put that down for a while and come join us,” he said. “Don’t worry about that thing.” “Aren’t we supposed to be cultivating?” I asked. “We need to be careful, or the boss might get angry. We need to try and advance to Martial Disciple 4 like he wants, right?” Ko looked at the other two boys and they all simply nodded their heads. They all stood up as one, and Ko looked at me. “Stay here for a moment,” he said to me. Moving furtively, the group snuck out of the dormitory. Less than a minute later Ko carefully opened the door and slid back inside alone. He walked close to me and started talking in a quiet voice. “Listen, you’re new in the city, right? I’ve not seen you on the streets before. You must’ve come in from some farm somewhere. You don’t know how things work around here, so I need to give you a few warnings. Don’t read that technique. Don’t cultivate. No matter what they tell you, don’t do it.” “What do you mean?” His words sounded threatening, so I thought I would need to defend myself, but looking at his expression, I felt he was actually concerned about me. “I know guys who came here before. The treatment is pretty good. Get a free house and food for a year, but you gotta make sure you don’t read that book. Otherwise, they’re going to trap you here.” He seemed to glance around the room at the shadows, worried that someone would overhear him. “This guy, right, well, he’s a couple years older than me. Well, he came here like all of us to get a free place to live and earn a little money. Well, he had this idea. He was gonna cultivate up to level three or whatever. Then, he’d return to the street like a king. With the power he got, he would be able to lord over everyone out there. Thing is, he never came back. The guys who were with him said after he started cultivating, his mind began to change and all he could think about was how to make the boss happy so he could keep advancing that technique of theirs.” “But... aren’t you all here to cultivate? Why did you come here?” Ko shook his head sharply. “No, you see, as long as you work and do the job, you get free food for a year. They pay you even if you don’t cultivate as long as you do the job. You can just walk out after that, and no one will say anything. If you cultivate, though, you’re gonna be trapped here for the rest of your life.” I hadn’t expected the boys who came here to be servants to know so much. If this had been happening for a long time, sure, they would pick up on some things, but to know how dangerous it was to cultivate? I didn’t expect that. Still, I understood what he was saying, but that didn’t change what I needed to do. If I wanted to live long enough, I had to be a Martial Master, so I would cultivate. It just wouldn’t affect me in the way they thought it would. I knew that if I did this, it would change my place in the group. I also had to accept that the plan of simply staying slightly ahead of the other boys was not going to work. I would have to figure out how fast to cultivate on my own. “Sorry, Ko, but this is something I have to do. I understand what you’re saying, and you’re right, but this is something I have to do.” Ko shook his head again quickly. “Look, I understand you’ve had a tough life, but this isn’t the way to do it. Just... think about what I said. Oh, and don’t talk to anybody else about this. If the boss hears we’ve been saying things about cultivation, they might punish or expel us, so just keep it quiet.” After speaking, he went to the door and knocked twice. Then, the two other boys reentered the room. They had been stationed as lookouts during our conversation. As I was about to pick the technique manual back up, one of them spoke up. “Fang, come over here and join us for cards. I need some help to take these bastards down.” I saw a pleading look in his eyes, like he really wanted me to join them. I knew what I would have to do, but I didn’t have to do it that night. I decided to sit down and just play some cards. For the rest of the week, I was assigned various chores involving washing things around the complex. At night, any time I moved to pick up the cultivation technique, one of my roommates would find an excuse to pull me away from it. I took a bite and was amazed at how good it was. Ko saw the look on my face and couldn’t help but comment on it. “I told you. This is the good stuff. Expensive though, so it’s a bit of a treat for our first day off. If you want meat, better to stick with donkey in the future, it’s a lot cheaper.” I was somewhat alarmed at the idea of eating donkey meat. When the flash of fear showed on my face, the other boys couldn’t help but laugh. We walked down the street as we talked, but we were soon stopped by two groups of boys facing off against each other. I wanted to retreat immediately, but Ko calmed me down and pulled me forward to take a look. “Don’t worry,” he said. “Things aren’t gonna get too out of hand here. This is just a small fight for some territory. Both of them are cultivators and one probably advanced recently, so he’s looking to take over a few more streets. They won’t bother us if we don’t get involved.” “You think you can take me now?” The larger boy puffed out his chest and cracked his knuckles. “Sounds like you need to learn a little respect.” His opponent smirked. “You don’t stand a chance. I’m not the same person I was last time. I’ve advanced. I’m now a High Middle Martial Disciple 2 just like you. If you don’t want to get hurt, leave now!” The large boy laughed. “You think just advancing to High Middle Disciple 2 is enough to face me? You’ve only just advanced while I’ve been at this stage for months. I’ve already advanced to Middle High Middle Disciple 2!” His opponent’s eyes widened in shock, but he grit his teeth and kept his feet planted. I looked at Ko confused. “Middle High Middle?” He nodded. “You might not know. Martial Disciple is the first realm of cultivation and it’s divided up into several stages. 1, 2, 3, and so on. Well, each stage is a pretty big gap, so they are divided up into Low, Middle, High, and Peak. Just because two people are at Middle Disciple 2 doesn’t mean they’re equal, though. Those two are both High Middle Disciple 2, so they can defeat most other Middle Disciple 2 cultivators.” I blinked at him wordlessly. “Now, Shin is a Middle High Middle, but Yang should only be Low High Middle since he just advanced. Their power is nearly the same, but even the smallest advantage can mean the difference between life and death as a cultivator.” My mind went blank for a second at the absurdity of it all. Did these boys have any affinities at all? Even with a low nine-star affinity, Martial Disciple 2 shouldn’t be very challenging to skip through. Why did they need so many substages? I watched as the two finally started fighting, but there was little to see. They didn’t use their qi at all, they just started throwing punches and kicks at each other, and they weren’t even good at that. It finally made sense to me why Ko said someone thought he could rule the streets by only advancing to Martial Disciple 3 if this was his competition. Their small gangs started to get involved in the scuffle, but that’s when Ko suggested that we hurry and leave. If the fighting drew attention from actual cultivators, we didn’t want to get caught in the mess. After spending the day in town, the boys all returned back to the dormitory, and I began secretly cultivating. They were living the simple life of mortals, facing mortal issues. Their biggest concerns were where they were staying for the night and where their next meal was going to come from. They didn’t have to deal with Lords and Kings plotting against them. Watching my roommates live their lives, I couldn’t help but think back to Old Pei. He was what these boys would become one day. He had lived a life of sorrow and was never able to climb out of the poorest district in the city. That was the destiny of most mortals in this world. There had to be some that rose above their station. Honest craftsmen could earn more than a street vendor, and there certainly had to be mortal merchants who were able to become quite wealthy, but all of it was balanced on a razor's edge. The moment they made a cultivator upset, their life could end in an instant. I wished I could change it, but even with the immense power the System granted me, I had no idea how to even begin. I could help those I met. I could provide something for the people who were kind to me. But I couldn’t fix the structural problems of this society. I sighed. I didn’t know what I was looking for in this life anymore, but I knew I wouldn’t find it here among Ko and the others. If there were any answers for me in this place, I needed to advance to find them.

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Contents
The Undying Immortal System
The Undying Immortal System Author:G Tolley
Chapter 1: Life 1, Age 26 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 3: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 4: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 5: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 6: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 7: Life 13, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 8: Life 15, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 9: Life 16, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 10: Life 16, Age 92, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 11: Life 17, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 12: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 13: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 14: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 15: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 16: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 17: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 18: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 19: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 20: Life 50, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 21: Life 50, Age 23, Martial Disciple Level 8 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 22: Life 50, Age 28, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 23: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 24: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 25: Life 51, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 26: Life 51, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 27: Lives 51 to 57 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 28: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 29: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 30: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 31: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 32: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 33: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 34: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 35: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 36: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 37: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 38: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 39: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 40: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 41: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 42: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 43: Life 58, Age 28, Martial Master 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 44: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 45: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 46: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 47: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 48: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 49: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
(Non-canon) Bonus Chapter – Life 58, Age 36, Marital Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 50: Life 58, Age 39, Martial Grandmaster 2 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 51: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 52: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 53: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 54: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 55: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 56: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Addendum: Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 1st, 2025
Patreon Announcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 57: Life 59, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 58: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 59: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 60: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 61: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 62: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 63: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 64: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 65: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 66: Life 60, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 67: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 68: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 69: Life 60, Age 28, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 70: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 71: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 72: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 73: Life 60, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 74: Life 61, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 75: Life 61, Age 21, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 76: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 77: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 78: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 79: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 80: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 81: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 82: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 83: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 84: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 85: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 86: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 87: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Addendum: Map of the Eight Flower Kingdom Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 88: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 89: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 90: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 91: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 92: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 93: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 94: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 95: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 96: Life 61, Age 36, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 97: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 2 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 98: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 99: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 100: Life 61, Age 44, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 101: Life 61, Age 45, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 102: Life 61, Age 47, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 103: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 104: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 105: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 106: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 107: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 108: Life 62, Age 79, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 109: Life 62, Age 80, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 110: Life 62, Age 83, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 111: Life 62, Age 92, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 112: Life 62, Age 143, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 113: Life 63, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Addendum: Book 2 Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 7th, 2025
Book 2 Afterword, Shameless Plug, Book 3 Spoiler Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 114: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 115: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 116: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 117: Life 64, Age 20, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 7th, 2025
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