Chapter 121: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak

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For the rest of the week, classes were focused on learning acupoint control. This was somewhat challenging for the other students to master, but with Instructor Sun’s guidance, they were able to get it down after only a few days. Once the impulses from their cultivation techniques were no longer a problem, by taking advantage of the Qi Gathering Formation, they were all able to swiftly advance. After Zhuge Yan finally ascended to Martial Disciple Peak, Instructor Sun gathered us together and gave us each a pill bottle and a new technique manual. “Go ahead and take that,” he said, gesturing to the pill bottle. I opened it up and examined what was inside. It was an Energy Expulsion Pill. Far more powerful than a Purifying Pill, this pill would remove all the energy from one’s body. Understanding his purpose, I quickly swallowed the pill. Energy exploded out of me in a quick burst and rapidly dissipated into the air. I had returned to being a Martial Disciple 1 with no cultivation. “Those,” he gestured to the manuals he had just handed out, “are Peak-Yellow cultivation techniques for your highest affinities. I expect all of you to be back to Disciple 2 before the next class.” We had a day off, and I had expected the instructor to insist we use it to go outside and ‘learn more about ourselves.’ Needing to use it to cultivate was a surprise, but to me, it wasn’t entirely unwelcome. However, just as I was planning a weekend alone in my apartment, Zhuge Yan came up to me to ensure I would meet with everyone for meals on our day off. I thought about refusing, but I knew how the instructor would react if I did. Since the meals would interrupt me during the day, I spent the entire night cultivating. With a peak six-star earth affinity, jumping up to Martial Disciple 2 in roughly a day and a half wasn’t much of a problem since Peak-Yellow techniques had significantly fewer requirements than my Earth-Rank technique had. Before I even met the class for lunch, I was already on the cusp of my breakthrough. When I arrived at the dining hall, I was surprised to see a downcast expression on all of my classmates’ faces. I looked at Zhuge Yan for an explanation. “What’s wrong?” “We aren’t going to make it,” he said, shaking his head. “We’re going to have to start sacrificing purity to reach the speed needed.” The shorter girl, Lin LiTing, gave a wry chuckle at that. “Pretty sure that was the intent. He wants us to build up some impurities so we’re still fighting in our technique.” I thought about the situation and knew that there were several ways I could help them. I had to decide if it was something I should do, and if I should, how should I? I could make the decision myself, but looking at the group I thought that maybe they would have better insight into how to proceed. I breathed out and planted my hands on the table. “Do you want me to help?” The other three all looked to Zhuge Yan. “That could interfere with the instructor’s plans... How could you help?” There were a few ways I could let them advance in a short amount of time, but I had to think about the facade I was presenting to others. “A Qi Gathering Formation,” I finally said. “Nothing as powerful as what they have in the classroom. Just one powerful enough to help you gather enough energy to advance tonight.” “That could work.” I saw the wheels turning in Zhuge Yan’s head as he thought through the implications. “We would still be cultivating ourselves, so I don’t see any reason the instructor could have for admonishing us. But if he wants us to pursue a path of wild cultivation to meet his deadline, it would wreck his plans.” “Let’s do it.” Shi YuLong had a wide grin on his face. “If ol’ Sun doesn’t like it. We can just blame Fang here.” I wanted to object, but Chai JiaQi quickly spoke up in support. “I agree. Let’s cheat and let Fang take the fall.” I felt annoyed at this response, but seeing that their expressions were playful instead of malicious, I just looked to Zhuge Yan. He shrugged his shoulders as if to say ‘this is your problem.’ “Alright, where are we going to do this?” We met in Zhuge Yan’s room a little over an hour later. He had procured granite blocks from somewhere and had them waiting for me when we entered. A basic Qi Gathering Formation wasn’t too complicated. Every formation I had practiced had an inscription focused on drawing in qi. The only thing that made it special was that it created a small bubble to contain the qi it gathered. “No? Then what was it?” She looked at him and a calculating expression crossed her face. “You would need to be at least Martial Disciple 7.” “Only 5,” corrected the instructor, “but you were close. 7 would certainly make it easier, but it is doable at 5.” I felt a bit aggrieved that he had asked me to do the impossible, but I knew it was simply my punishment for setting up the formations last night. “Chai JiaQi. Lin LiTing. Step forward and face each other.” They did so. Lin LiTing looked a bit worried, but Chai JiaQi seemed confident. Her blessing would help her in her martial pursuits. “Lin LiTing, punch her shoulder. Not too hard, no need to try and hurt her, just enough so she feels it.” The girl stepped forward and threw out a simple jab. Chai JiaQi had planted herself to absorb the hit, but she still winced when it landed. “Try to examine your energy body. Your qi is floating in its muscles. Push it outward and let it saturate the skin.” I watched in qi vision as Instructor Sun demonstrated. Qi flowed to surround his arm like a sheath. This helped me understand what he wanted us to do, but I doubted any of the others could see it. They wouldn’t have developed their ability to see qi much yet. Chai JiaQi tried to do as instructed, but it was obvious she either didn’t have sufficient qi control or didn’t understand what was needed. I reached into my energy body and began manipulating my own energy, feeling how it was supposed to work. It wasn’t very difficult, just a matter of flexing my qi, but even flexing a muscle is difficult if you can’t feel it and barely know it exists. “Continue trading blows back and forth. Use the pain to guide you. Send your qi where you feel the pain.” He looked at the other two boys. “You two, join them. Practice until you have it under control.” They gave the instructor a short bow and began attacking each other. Instructor Sun waved me over to the side of the practice yard. “You’re a quick learner.” He eyed me up and down, reappraising me. “I’m assuming that if you already knew how to do this, you wouldn’t have been so careless with the pillar earlier. It will take them some time to learn what they need to do, so let’s begin the next lesson with just the two of us.” He took a fighting stance opposite me. “Don’t block, let me hit your shoulder. Use your qi to protect yourself.” I did as commanded and shifted my qi to form a shell around my upper arm. The instructor threw out a punch, and it bounced off my skin. “Normal human strength can’t get through.” He threw out another punch. My qi barrier shattered, and pain lanced through my arm. “Instead of hitting with normal strength, I shifted my qi to certain muscles to amplify their power. However, you have to be careful when doing this. I also had to put qi into every bone in my arm and fortify the flesh of my fist. Otherwise, with such strength, attacking a qi barrier would have crippled my hand.” He waved me to the side where padded targets had been brought out. “Your qi can enhance your flesh, fortify your bones, increase the strength of your attack, or improve your speed. There are other potential benefits as well, but these four will be our focus. While the others learn the basics, your job is to learn to move your qi to do what you need it to do as quickly as possible. If you leave it spread out, it will do everything at once, but it is much better to focus it. Think about what you need it to do and move it to where it needs to be.” With this, he threw out another punch, blasting one of the padded targets apart.

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The Undying Immortal System
The Undying Immortal System Author:G Tolley
Chapter 1: Life 1, Age 26 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 3: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 4: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 5: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 6: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 7: Life 13, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 8: Life 15, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 9: Life 16, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 10: Life 16, Age 92, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 11: Life 17, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 12: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 13: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 14: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 15: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 16: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 17: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 18: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 19: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 20: Life 50, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 21: Life 50, Age 23, Martial Disciple Level 8 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 22: Life 50, Age 28, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 23: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 24: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 25: Life 51, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 26: Life 51, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 27: Lives 51 to 57 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 28: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 29: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 30: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 31: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 32: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 33: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 34: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 35: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 36: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 37: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 38: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 39: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 40: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 41: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 42: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 43: Life 58, Age 28, Martial Master 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 44: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 45: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 46: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 47: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 48: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 49: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
(Non-canon) Bonus Chapter – Life 58, Age 36, Marital Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 50: Life 58, Age 39, Martial Grandmaster 2 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 51: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 52: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 53: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 54: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 55: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 56: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Addendum: Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 1st, 2025
Patreon Announcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 57: Life 59, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 58: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 59: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 60: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 61: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 62: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 63: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 64: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 65: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 66: Life 60, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 67: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 68: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 69: Life 60, Age 28, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 70: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 71: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 72: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 73: Life 60, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 74: Life 61, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 75: Life 61, Age 21, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 76: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 77: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 78: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 79: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 80: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 81: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 82: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 83: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 84: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 85: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 86: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 87: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Addendum: Map of the Eight Flower Kingdom Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 88: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 89: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 90: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 91: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 92: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 93: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 94: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 95: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 96: Life 61, Age 36, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 97: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 2 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 98: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 99: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 100: Life 61, Age 44, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 101: Life 61, Age 45, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 102: Life 61, Age 47, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 103: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 104: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 105: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 106: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 107: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 108: Life 62, Age 79, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 109: Life 62, Age 80, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 110: Life 62, Age 83, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 111: Life 62, Age 92, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 112: Life 62, Age 143, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 113: Life 63, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Addendum: Book 2 Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 7th, 2025
Book 2 Afterword, Shameless Plug, Book 3 Spoiler Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 114: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 115: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 116: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 117: Life 64, Age 20, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 118: Life 64, Age 21, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 119: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 120: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 121: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 122: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 123: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 124: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 125: Life 65, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 126: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 127: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 128: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 129: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 130: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Lord 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 131: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 132: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 133: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 134: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 135: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 136: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 137: Life 66, Age 21, Martial Master 3 Oct 9th, 2025
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