Chapter 125: Life 65, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak

Words : 1591 Updated : Oct 9th, 2025
We gathered in our classroom the day after the competition, and Instructor Sun greeted us with a stony expression. “You won, but don’t let it go to your head. That was one of the weakest classes. None of them had combat blessings, and a couple of you still only barely managed to win. In the future, don’t expect things to be so easy.” He reached into a storage bag and threw a pill and token to each of us. “Take the pill and clean up your cultivation. Tonight, you need to start working on building your true foundation. If you don’t have a decent cultivation technique, go to the library and find one. If you do, get a martial technique. I expect you all to be back here at the beginning of next week prepared for class. You need to be Martial Disciple 2. No more, no less.” Taking this as a dismissal, we all bowed and turned to leave, but the instructor spoke up once more, halting us in our tracks. “And just so we’re clear, if you get a martial technique, make sure it can be used with the part of your body you fortify. Don’t cultivate your arms after buying a leg technique.” This time he didn’t wait for us and instead turned and left the room before we could respond. The academy library was a place I had been interested in visiting ever since Instructor Sun gave me my first token for a free technique. However, going there without knowing what to expect might have resulted in the loss of my only opportunity to plunder every technique possible, so I had delayed my visit. I wanted to understand what would happen when I went before I did so. Barring that, I wanted to at least learn how to gain extra tokens first. With the reward from the martial arts competition in hand, I had more freedom to act. My classmates and I arrived at the library as a group and entered to see a large reception area with an elderly man standing behind a counter. “Yes?” Zhuge Yan took the lead in responding. “We’re here to select techniques.” The librarian gestured to the counter without speaking further. I wasn’t sure exactly what he wanted, but the others weren’t so clueless. They each stepped up and placed their token on the counter. I followed suit just a beat behind. The librarian nodded. “What kind of techniques do you want?” Shi YuLong was the first to speak. “A martial technique for earth qi, as strong as I can get.” The librarian acknowledged his choice and turned to the others. Chai JiaQi wanted a leg-based water martial art, and Lin LiTing wanted a metal qi cultivation technique. Zhuge Yan had been struggling with his choice, but when he finally decided, his voice was firm. “I want a cultivation technique for dark qi.” I sensed that the librarian was surprised for the first time, but he didn’t show any outward signs of disagreement. He just turned to me. “Can these tokens be exchanged for higher-level techniques?” “No, these are Rank 1 tokens.” That helped me make my decision. I already had a good earth cultivation technique, so I wasn’t hurting for another one. I was presenting myself as an earth cultivator in this life, and I wanted to continue down that path for now. In any case, I didn’t worry too much about making the ‘correct’ decision because it didn’t seem like it would be very difficult to access the library again in the future. If I couldn’t get another token in this life, I would just wait for the next. “An earth-based martial art.” The librarian nodded once more. “Follow.” He took us down a long corridor with several doors on either side. We walked until reaching the third door on the left. “Martial water techniques,” the librarian said, gesturing to the door. “You have ten minutes to make your selection.” The librarian narrowed his eyes slightly but took the token and gestured to the door closest to the reception area. “You have ten minutes.” I hurried inside. This room only held a little over a dozen books instead of the hundreds of scrolls that were in the martial vault. I acted the same as I had before, brushing my hand across everything while choosing scrolls to read at random. Of all the scrolls here, the most versatile were the five Peak-Earth triple-element techniques for each of the constructive combinations in the five-element cycle, such as wood to fire to earth or earth to metal to water. For the secondary elements, there were only dual-element techniques available for the opposing elements, dark with light and lightning with wind. After searching with the altered qi vision—energy vision?—I didn’t find anything special. Nearly every technique here was Peak-Earth, and choosing a technique was simply a matter of which combination one wanted to use. Walking this path could be interesting in the future, but it wasn’t my plan for this life, so I left the room without taking a scroll, showing that I had decided not to cultivate any of them. This made the librarian scowl. “You won’t be getting your token back.” I dipped my head in acknowledgment. The librarian took us to another room where a large formation was set up next to several blank sheets of paper. One by one, we handed him our chosen scrolls, and the information was copied from the bamboo slips onto the paper. “These copies will only last for one month. You are not allowed to duplicate them or transmit the knowledge to anyone else in any way. If the Academy learns you have done so, you will be punished severely.” He looked at Zhuge Yan. “Not even your family will be able to reduce the punishment for such an act. Is that understood?” The librarian looked at each of us, getting our agreement. I spent the rest of the week slowly cultivating my Peak-Earth earth qi technique. While the multi-element techniques were interesting, mastery of a single element was what I was looking for in this life. It didn’t take me long to push it to Disciple 2, so I spent the rest of my time before the next class practicing the Mountain Crushing Fist. The technique as a whole was interesting. It used earth qi to bind my feet to the ground, allowing me to exert significant force without needing to worry about recoil pushing me away. This could be dangerous though. If I were to hit an unbreakable object, my fist might shatter instead of bouncing off. The risks of using a powerful technique were real, but as long as I was careful, it would allow me to attack with devastating strength. I also began to consider if I could use the same principles defensively. Why not bind myself to the ground to help absorb attacks? I quickly flipped through my mental library, looking at the techniques I had just copied, and I found a Profound-Rank technique called the Mountain’s Repose which did exactly what I was thinking about. I didn’t want to use any of the stolen techniques openly, but using the Mountain Crushing Fist in inventive ways should be expected, right? I began consulting my library to help me think of other ways to use ‘the Mountain Crushing Fist’ to my advantage in the future. The next week, our classes resumed with lessons on integrating our techniques into our fighting. Instead of using the ones we had just gotten from the library, Instructor Sun had us start by using one of two basic Yellow-Ranked techniques called Punch and Kick. Punch was a technique for taking qi from the arm and applying it to a punch. The way we were fighting before, qi was only being used to strengthen our bodies. Through this technique, the qi in a punch would cause damage separate from the physical blow. Even a soft punch could carry enough qi to cripple a mortal. The two techniques were extremely simple, but learning to properly integrate the qi movements instinctively was still a challenge. Master Tan forced me to concentrate on learning to use Punch properly and wouldn’t allow me to even practice the Mountain Crushing Fist until several weeks later. Our schedule of training resumed its normal rhythm of combat in the morning, professions in the afternoon, and cultivation in the evening. Every few months, we would be matched against another class for a martial arts competition. We won most, but when classes were focused around martial blessings, usually only YuLong and JiaQi were able to secure a victory. Whenever we succeeded in these competitions, we received another library token. I plundered the earth qi cultivation and formation specialist rooms, but I wasn’t willing to show my hand by going into rooms for the other elements. Instead, I used the extra tokens to build out the martial techniques I could openly display. However, I did hold a couple of tokens back in reserve, just in case. I added a movement technique that would help me travel faster and stealthier on bare earth as well as leg attacks and defensive arts. In this manner, three more years passed. At twenty years old, we were all Peak Disciples. Our classes would soon come to an end, and we would have to figure out what we would do next.

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Contents
The Undying Immortal System
The Undying Immortal System Author:G Tolley
Chapter 1: Life 1, Age 26 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 3: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 4: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 5: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 6: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 7: Life 13, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 8: Life 15, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 9: Life 16, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 10: Life 16, Age 92, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 11: Life 17, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 12: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 13: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 14: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 15: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 16: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 17: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 18: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 19: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 20: Life 50, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 21: Life 50, Age 23, Martial Disciple Level 8 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 22: Life 50, Age 28, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 23: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 24: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 25: Life 51, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 26: Life 51, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 27: Lives 51 to 57 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 28: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 29: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 30: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 31: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 32: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 33: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 34: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 35: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 36: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 37: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 38: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 39: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 40: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 41: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 42: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 43: Life 58, Age 28, Martial Master 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 44: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 45: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 46: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 47: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 48: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 49: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
(Non-canon) Bonus Chapter – Life 58, Age 36, Marital Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 50: Life 58, Age 39, Martial Grandmaster 2 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 51: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 52: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 53: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 54: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 55: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 56: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Addendum: Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 1st, 2025
Patreon Announcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 57: Life 59, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 58: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 59: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 60: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 61: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 62: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 63: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 64: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 65: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 66: Life 60, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 67: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 68: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 69: Life 60, Age 28, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 70: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 71: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 72: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 73: Life 60, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 74: Life 61, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 75: Life 61, Age 21, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 76: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 77: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 78: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 79: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 80: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 81: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 82: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 83: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 84: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 85: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 86: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 87: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Addendum: Map of the Eight Flower Kingdom Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 88: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 89: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 90: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 91: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 92: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 93: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 94: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 95: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 96: Life 61, Age 36, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 97: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 2 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 98: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 99: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 100: Life 61, Age 44, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 101: Life 61, Age 45, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 102: Life 61, Age 47, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 103: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 104: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 105: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 106: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 107: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 108: Life 62, Age 79, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 109: Life 62, Age 80, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 110: Life 62, Age 83, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 111: Life 62, Age 92, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 112: Life 62, Age 143, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 113: Life 63, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Addendum: Book 2 Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 7th, 2025
Book 2 Afterword, Shameless Plug, Book 3 Spoiler Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 114: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 115: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 116: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 117: Life 64, Age 20, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 118: Life 64, Age 21, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 119: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 120: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 121: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 122: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 123: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 124: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 125: Life 65, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 126: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 127: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 128: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 129: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 130: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Lord 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 131: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 132: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 133: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 134: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 135: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 136: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 137: Life 66, Age 21, Martial Master 3 Oct 9th, 2025
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