Chapter 157: Life 68, Age 26, Martial Master 5

Words : 1894 Updated : Oct 11th, 2025
The day before I was to begin teaching my class of Disciples, I went to Instructor Yuan’s office to get a list of the students who would be in my class. Typically, I would’ve had such a list several days earlier to assist me in making preparations, but because I was not the one in charge of selecting my students, it was delayed. The instructor’s room was laid out exactly how Grandmaster Ning’s had been, and Instructor Yuan sat behind a wooden desk with two chairs in front of it. After I sat down in one of them, she took out a piece of paper and slid it to me. “These will be your students. I’ve specially chosen them for you, and I’ll be interested to see what you’re able to do with them.” Looking at the list, I saw that all of them had well-rounded affinities, but they were all low. No one had any affinity above mid six-star. The only saving grace was that none of their basic affinities were below peak seven-star. In a way, this wasn’t too different from the affinities I had come in with. The biggest difference was their lack of secondary affinities. Only one boy had meaningful secondary affinities, low six-star for wind and lightning. Overall, this was a bit below what I expected from students in the elite classes. Typically, elite Disciples would have at least one affinity at mid five-star or above. This meant that my students would be at a severe disadvantage in both qi control and cultivation speed. This could be addressed during their first term as Martial Masters, but they would have to make it that far first. When I looked at their blessings, the students seemed equally mediocre. All their blessings were designed for scholars. One boy had a blessing that improved his calligraphy while one of the girls had one to help her with mathematics. None of them had a blessing that would directly help them with cultivation or any of the cultivation-related professions. I looked at Instructor Yuan. I was confused by her selection. She might have done this just to spite me, but if I performed poorly, it would reflect poorly on her as well. “These are the Disciples you chose for me? Can you tell me why?” I could sense annoyance and a bit of exasperation coming from her. “I made this selection in coordination with Lord Ning. He believes this is the best group of Disciples to give you. While they all qualified for the elite courses, no Master would normally choose them, so they would be forced into the regular courses.” She sighed as she looked at me. “Neither Lord Ning nor I believe that you will follow the normal routine while teaching. This could be good or bad. We don’t know. However, Lord Ning wishes to see what you can accomplish if given free rein, and you will have far more freedom than normal while teaching this group of students. If you fail, the Academy won’t be happy, but you won’t have ruined anyone important. However, if you succeed with these students, it will be seen as a major victory. Either way, if you want unfettered freedom to teach as you wish, these are the perfect students for you.” Understanding her reasons, I gave the instructor a deep bow. “Thank you for your consideration.” After accepting my bow, she placed a white jade token on the desk. “This will allow you access to all the Rank 1 library rooms. You may use it to select techniques to use in class or to study the techniques your students are using, but you will only be allowed copies of the texts you plan to use in class.” She looked at me seriously. “Be careful with how you use this. The primary reason the Academy limits a student’s access to techniques is so that they choose the ones they practice carefully and are not overwhelmed by trying to master too many skills at once. I recommend against directly providing them with a core fighting technique or a permanent cultivation technique. They should earn these as your class did. However, as I said before, you are free to do as you wish with this class.” Before heading to the library, I needed to make a plan for how I would teach my students. Freedom to access and copy any Rank 1 technique I wanted was a massive boon, and I would definitely abuse it, but how could I use this access to best help my students? The beginnings of a plan came to mind, and I spent several hours fleshing it out. When I arrived at the library, it was already late in the day. I went to every room possible and copied all the manuals into my mental library, including the Academy’s Rank 1 techniques for things such as talismans and illusions. These profession-related techniques wouldn’t have too much value without the appropriate training or qi, but I wouldn’t hesitate to take them when they were offered to me like this. It took them a significant amount of time, but one by one they were able to form the basic shapes needed. Once they all had a rough copy of their filters floating above their palm, I used my spirit fire to create examples of the proper filters and overlaid them onto the students’ creations. I wanted to give clear indications of where their filters were correct and where they had problems. I couldn’t easily change the color of my fire, so I had the areas where the student’s filters were correct glow brighter. Once the entire filter was correct, my spirit fire overlay would glow brightly in recognition. Where Instructor Yuan would have shown dominance by placing the students in a position to fail, I would do so by demonstrating my own depth of knowledge and understanding. It took them several more minutes to slowly adjust their filters to perfectly align them with the fiery example I provided. They were all inexperienced and had very poor control of their qi, but their affinities were all at least peak seven-star. Even without any prior practice, it was only a matter of an hour before everyone had a correct filter floating in front of them. As they worked, I didn’t notice any of the brashness that Instructor Yuan had warned us about. Likely, this was because they had already been humbled by their relatively poor affinities and mediocre blessings. For many, including my past self, a peak seven-star affinity would have seemed like an unattainable dream, but these kids were judging themselves against peers with five-star affinities. Their ‘lacking abilities’ meant they nearly weren’t allowed to enroll in this course, and that humbled them more than I ever could. I took five stacks of techniques out of my storage bag and put them where everyone could see them. “You have all perfected the filter in the Low-Yellow technique. Now, we will see how far you can push yourselves.” I pointed to the top techniques on each of the stacks. “These techniques are Mid-Yellow.” I pointed to the second book on each stack. “These are High-Yellow. As you go down each stack, they continue getting progressively more difficult. At the very bottom is a Peak-Earth technique. Find the stack for the affinity you have been cultivating. Go down it one book at a time and create a perfect copy of the qi filter for each technique. The first person to successfully form the Peak-Earth filter will be granted a token to select a Rank 1 technique from the library.” This exercise was less about them being about to form a proper qi filter and more about them learning better qi control. Moving their energy into the right place and keeping it there while working on the rest of the filter was a difficult skill to master. Profound and Earth techniques didn’t necessarily have more complicated filters than Yellow techniques did, but I had specifically chosen these techniques in order to create a noticeable, steady difficulty curve. The filters for the Peak-Earth techniques all looked like nothing more than a bundle of knotted and tangled yarn. As the students practiced and made their ways ever further down their stacks of books, the time they spent on each technique increased. Whenever one of them picked up a new book, I would provide them with a fiery example of what they were supposed to accomplish. All they had to do was match their qi to the sample filter I provided. Still, none of them got very far on that first day. It wasn’t until the end of the first week that Jin ZiHan was able to create the first Peak-Earth filter and claim the library token for herself. With this initial goal accomplished, I instructed her to choose a new element to begin working on. For this second element, I did not provide a fiery guide for her. I only gave her a signal after the entire filter was correct to indicate that she was allowed to continue on to the next technique. In the first exercise, she had demonstrated sufficient qi control to create an Earth-Rank filter, this one would teach her to translate a drawing from a book into a correct three-dimensional filter. These exercises were far from how Instructor Yuan had taught us to approach teaching our students to create perfect qi filters. However, to me, this felt right, and it seemed like it was effective. Her method was more about breaking the students down before building them back up. These students didn’t need to be broken down. Instead, by using this process, I let them see what they could do and how I could help them. It also allowed me to better understand their current capabilities and where each of them would need my help. Once each student was comfortable with making all of the filters for their first element, I switched them to a different one as I had with Jin ZiHan. I wanted everyone to have a broad understanding of forming different qi filters. If they were destined to be scholars in the future, this knowledge would be beneficial. While Jin ZiHan was the quickest, the slowest to progress through the lessons was Leng JunWei. His approach was slow and methodical. He started with the lightning techniques, and when he moved on to the wind techniques, he carefully recorded differences between them and the previous lightning techniques into a notebook. Close to a month into the class, I repeated the same lesson that Instructor Sun had given my class for managing acupoints and cultivation madness. Using a Rank 3 Qi Gathering Formation, I had them cultivate to Peak Disciple under conditions that guaranteed that they would absorb a significant number of impurities. From there, we continued with various lessons on cultivation, professions, and martial combat. None of my students had any real gifts to help them succeed in any of these fields, but they all responded well to my lessons and were willing to give it their all. At the end of the first year, they had their first martial competition, and I could only hope that the dedication they had shown would be enough.

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Contents
The Undying Immortal System
The Undying Immortal System Author:G Tolley
Chapter 1: Life 1, Age 26 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 3: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 4: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 5: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 6: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 7: Life 13, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 8: Life 15, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 9: Life 16, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 10: Life 16, Age 92, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 11: Life 17, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 12: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 13: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 14: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 15: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 16: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 17: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 18: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 19: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 20: Life 50, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 21: Life 50, Age 23, Martial Disciple Level 8 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 22: Life 50, Age 28, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 23: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 24: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 25: Life 51, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 26: Life 51, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 27: Lives 51 to 57 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 28: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 29: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 30: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 31: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 32: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 33: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 34: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 35: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 36: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 37: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 38: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 39: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 40: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 41: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 42: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 43: Life 58, Age 28, Martial Master 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 44: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 45: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 46: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 47: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 48: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 49: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
(Non-canon) Bonus Chapter – Life 58, Age 36, Marital Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 50: Life 58, Age 39, Martial Grandmaster 2 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 51: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 52: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 53: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 54: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 55: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 56: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Addendum: Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 1st, 2025
Patreon Announcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 57: Life 59, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 58: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 59: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 60: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 61: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 62: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 63: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 64: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 65: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 66: Life 60, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 67: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 68: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 69: Life 60, Age 28, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 70: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 71: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 72: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 73: Life 60, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 74: Life 61, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 75: Life 61, Age 21, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 76: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 77: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 78: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 79: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 80: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 81: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 82: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 83: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 84: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 85: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 86: Life 61, Age 27, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 87: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Addendum: Map of the Eight Flower Kingdom Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 88: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 89: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 90: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 91: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 92: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 93: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 94: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 95: Life 61, Age 35, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 96: Life 61, Age 36, Martial Lord 1 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 97: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 2 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 98: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 99: Life 61, Age 37, Martial Lord 3 Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 100: Life 61, Age 44, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 101: Life 61, Age 45, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 102: Life 61, Age 47, Martial Lord Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 103: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 104: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 105: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 106: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 107: Life 62, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 108: Life 62, Age 79, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 109: Life 62, Age 80, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 110: Life 62, Age 83, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 111: Life 62, Age 92, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 112: Life 62, Age 143, Martial Master 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 113: Life 63, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Addendum: Book 2 Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 7th, 2025
Book 2 Afterword, Shameless Plug, Book 3 Spoiler Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 114: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 115: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 116: Life 64, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 117: Life 64, Age 20, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 118: Life 64, Age 21, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 119: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 120: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 121: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 122: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 123: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 124: Life 65, Age 16, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 125: Life 65, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 126: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 127: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 128: Life 65, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 129: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 130: Life 65, Age 24, Martial Lord 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 131: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 132: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 133: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 134: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 135: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 136: Life 66, Age 20, Martial Master 2 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 137: Life 66, Age 21, Martial Master 3 Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 138: Life 66, Age 21, Martial Master 3 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 139: Life 66, Age 22, Martial Master 5 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 140: Life 66, Age 25, Martial Master Peak Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 141: Life 66, Age 25, Martial Master Peak Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 142: Life 66, Age 28, Martial Grandmaster 3 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 143: Life 66, Age 28, Martial Grandmaster 3 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 144: Life 66, Age 28, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 145: Life 66, Age 30, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 146: Life 66, Age 30, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 147: Life 66, Age 30, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 148: Life 66, Age 30, Martial Lord 1 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 149: Life 66, Age 30, Martial Lord 1 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 150: Life 66, Age 30, Martial Lord 1 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 151: Life 66, Age 36, Martial King 1 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 152: Life 66, Age 47, Martial King Peak Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 153: Life 67, Age 25, Martial Master Peak Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 154: Life 68, Age 25, Martial Master Peak Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 155: Life 68, Age 25, Martial Master 1 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 156: Life 68, Age 25, Martial Master 1 Oct 11th, 2025
Chapter 157: Life 68, Age 26, Martial Master 5 Oct 11th, 2025
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