Chapter 66: Life 60, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak

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The following year was quite peaceful. Every other month, I advanced my cultivation, and I spent the intervening time studying any small changes to my body. The enhanced technique provided by the Dao was far more powerful than I could have hoped, and as long as I cultivated correctly, there was zero impact on the qi flows in my body at each step of cultivation. Using that as my guide, I was able to correct the thousand tiny errors I made in the process and smoothly advance to Martial Disciple Peak. At the same time, I helped Mei and SuYin cultivate their techniques. The ones they were using were far from the quality of my own, but I was still able to help them improve beyond the limits of what I had originally written down. Because of her age, Mei cultivated at a slightly faster pace to reach Martial Disciple Peak at the age of 20. SuYin was younger, only 19, so she allowed herself to go slower and had only reached Martial Disciple 7. While Mei should advance to Martial Master this year, I wanted her to wait until I had completed my study of the Martial Master dual-element technique. If I could improve it, it would allow me to provide significantly better guidance for Mei during her breakthrough. She had nine months before qi stagnation would set in, so I was a little rushed, but as I told her, qi stagnation isn’t too terrible when you have unlimited access to Perfect pills. On other fronts, I continued my pursuit of Rank 1 and 2 alchemy mastery. After I completed the order for the Su Clan, open discontent had been silenced. I wasn’t sure if it was gone, but my ability to more than fill the role left open by Zhong left others with little room to attack me. According to WuJing, the Pavilion had begun sending most of my pills outside the Wastes since the people here were too poor to afford them. This was the first step to our goal, but I needed to take on the role of a peak Grandmaster Alchemist before we could step outside this small corner of the world. I continued my study of herbalism using the flowerbed in my apartment, but my results were mixed. I didn’t have a teacher, the techniques I was using were substandard, and the location of my plants was less than ideal. Still, I was slowly gaining an understanding of the process. I monitored the medicinal energy in plants from the moment a seed was created to the time they were ready for harvest. The small changes in its structure, and the accumulation of toxic energy, was a complex interplay between the plant and its environment. While I could learn some of this from books, the more I watched, the more I felt I needed someone to guide me. After arranging everything through Mei, I was finally ready to break through to Martial Master once more. After sitting down in my cultivation room, I made my final preparation. “System, move my temporary reset point to this moment.” Confirmed. Cost 19,706 credits. 25,806 credits remaining This wasn’t where I wanted to place it. I wanted it to be nearer to when I was Martial Master Peak. However, I planned to create a new Rank 2 cultivation technique, and I was hoping to trigger a new discount. If I waited until after I did so to create the temporary reset point, I would just be burning that discount for no good reason. That done, I began working on my cultivation technique. Improving the Mid-Profound technique to a basic Peak-Profound technique seemed like an incredibly simple thing to do. The only difference was improving the quality of the meridians to match a Peak-Yellow technique. After studying the manual for a short time, I had quickly realized that the original author had used weaker meridians simply because this technique would be incredibly difficult with Peak level ones. The cultivator needed to create two meridians simultaneously, always keeping the flow of fire and wood qi throughout the body balanced. Creating a single peak meridian had challenged me greatly the first time I did it, and that was after I already had years of practice with weaker ones, so I could imagine that a Peak version of this technique would be nearly impossible for the average cultivator. After constructing several practice meridians, I quickly concluded that it would be no problem for me. My enhanced affinities and experience were enough to easily cultivate this technique at a Peak level, but that wasn’t good enough. That wouldn’t make a ‘novel’ cultivation technique, only a slightly improved one. I needed to go further. There were two key issues I wanted to address. First, the dantian. The Rank 3 technique I used previously had me cut holes in my meridians for qi to flow to and from my dantian. After living with that cultivation for years, the only word I had to describe it was janky. It felt like someone created a meridian system and only later realized they needed to attach a dantian, so they kludged together a way to make it fit. That wasn’t acceptable. I wanted a cultivation system designed to work together properly. The other problem that I was fixated on was the layout of the meridians. Why were so many Martial Masters going crazy? What was wrong with them? I finally had an answer. The flows of energy through the body were what affected the mind. If meridians were placed exactly on top of the existing flows, it would speed them up, making the effect more pressing, but it should be manageable for nearly anyone. If they were misaligned, or completely misplaced, they interrupted the flow of energy through the body leading to mental deviations. The Twin Mountains Sect encouraged disciples to cultivate Rank 1 and 2 techniques with completely different energy flows. If disciples were extremely patient, and allowed the qi flows to completely settle after each breakthrough, it wouldn’t be ideal, but they may be able to cultivate without too many problems. However, the more they cultivated without returning to baseline the worse the mental deviations would get. Worse, even with a perfect ascension, this mix of cultivation wouldn’t lead to a strong cultivator. Enjoying the story? Show your support by reading it on the official site. “Hey Fang, ready?” she grinned. I shook my head. “It feels like you’re showing off...” “Just excited. I only have around half a year left, need to get to it!” “Alright,” I said, “come on in.” We both headed to my cultivation room. It was a bit cramped with the two of us, but the isolation helped with focus. I examined her energy body as I had done several times before. Everything was clean, and she showed no signs of impurities from either poor cultivation or bad pills. The flows within her were vastly different from my own, so her meridians would need to be placed very differently, but the new knowledge I gained made understanding the necessary changes easy. “Have you been practicing?” I asked. Mei held out her hand and began forming a practice meridian. I examined it and frowned. Comparing it to the manual I had given her, she did an excellent job, but... “We need to fix that, it’s not right,” I said, trying to understand my thoughts. “The weave isn’t right.” I held up my hand and created a large example. “Can you do this?” Mei examined my altered meridian for a long time before trying it. Even after several attempts, it wasn’t quite right. There were small, nearly imperceptible burrs in the weave. It would have worked, but it wasn’t perfect. “It will take time,” she finally said, shaking her head. “Let me...” I reached out with my water affinity and tried to manipulate her qi. She had a high enough affinity that it was difficult for me to wrest control of it, even with it far outside her body. “Can you, I don’t know, let me move your qi? I’m not sure if it’s something you can consciously do.” Either she knew what to do, or her blessing kicked in, but suddenly I was able to manipulate her practice meridian like it was my own. “Alright,” I said, a little excited, “I think this will work. Start forming your first meridian but give me partial control. You focus on gathering qi and placing it into a rough weave. I will perfect it and make sure its size placement is correct.” Mei nodded and got to work. Compared to constructing my meridians, the process was a breeze. In less than a day, Mei had a brand-new Peak-Yellow meridian. After two, she stepped into the realm of Martial Master. “Thank you, Fang,” she said. This time, she didn’t cry. She didn’t show much of any emotion. “You’re welcome, Mei.”

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The Undying Immortal System
The Undying Immortal System Author:G Tolley
Chapter 1: Life 1, Age 26 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 3: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 4: Life 4, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 5: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 6: Life 10, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 7: Life 13, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 8: Life 15, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 9: Life 16, Age 16, Martial Disciple 4 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 10: Life 16, Age 92, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 11: Life 17, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 12: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 13: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 14: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 15: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 16: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 17: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 18: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 19: Life 50, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 20: Life 50, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 21: Life 50, Age 23, Martial Disciple Level 8 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 22: Life 50, Age 28, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 23: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 24: Life 50, Age 30, Martial Master Level 2 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 25: Life 51, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 26: Life 51, Age 17, Martial Disciple Level 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 27: Lives 51 to 57 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 28: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 29: Life 58, Age 16, Martial Disciple Level 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 30: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 31: Life 58, Age 17, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 32: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 33: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Disciple Peak Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 34: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 35: Life 58, Age 20, Martial Master 1 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 36: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 37: Life 58, Age 25, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 38: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 39: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 40: Life 58, Age 26, Martial Master 3 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 41: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 42: Life 58, Age 27, Martial Master 4 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 43: Life 58, Age 28, Martial Master 5 Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 44: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 45: Life 58, Age 32, Martial Master Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 46: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 47: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 48: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 49: Life 58, Age 33, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 1st, 2025
(Non-canon) Bonus Chapter – Life 58, Age 36, Marital Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 50: Life 58, Age 39, Martial Grandmaster 2 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 51: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 52: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 53: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 54: Life 58, Age 60, Martial Grandmaster 5 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 55: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 56: Life 58, Age 92, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 1st, 2025
Addendum: Earning and Spending Credits (Contains Some Spoilers) Oct 1st, 2025
Patreon Announcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 57: Life 59, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 58: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 59: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 60: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 61: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 62: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 63: Life 60, Age 16, Martial Disciple 2 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 64: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 65: Life 60, Age 17, Martial Disciple 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 66: Life 60, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 67: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 68: Life 60, Age 20, Martial Master 3 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 69: Life 60, Age 28, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 70: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 71: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 72: Life 60, Age 29, Martial Grandmaster 1 Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 73: Life 60, Age 35, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 74: Life 61, Age 19, Martial Disciple Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 75: Life 61, Age 21, Martial Master Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 76: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 77: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 78: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 79: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 80: Life 61, Age 24, Martial Grandmaster Peak Oct 3rd, 2025
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