Chapter 16 - 16: Operation Ugly Duckling

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Gladion sat in the back of his Pokémon biology class, his mind wandering as the teacher droned on about the various evolution methods of water-type Pokémon. Suddenly, a phrase caught his attention. "...and while we know many Pokémon evolve through leveling up or exposure to certain stones, there are still many mysteries in the world of Pokémon evolution," the teacher said. Gladion's ears perked up. He raised his hand, unable to contain his curiosity. "What do you mean, mysteries?" The teacher smiled, pleased by the interest. "Well, Gladion, despite all our research, there are still Pokémon whose evolution methods remain unknown. Some species might even have evolutions we haven't discovered yet!" As the teacher continued, Gladion's mind raced. Thanks to his knowledge from his past life, he knew about evolutions or the method to evolve certain Pokemon that wouldn't be discovered for years. A plan began to form in his mind, a mischievous grin spreading across his face. After class, Gladion rushed to the school library, gathering every book he could find on water-type Pokémon. He flipped through pages frantically, confirming his suspicions. There was barely any information on Feebas, and absolutely nothing about its evolution into Milotic. The only thing known about Feebas was that they were pretty rare. But to his luck, he found out that there were found in the sea bordering Moonwood Town. "This is perfect," he shouted in joy, earning a stern "Shh!" from the librarian. That evening, Gladion snuck out to the nearby coast, armed with a fishing rod and a bucket. His Machop and his mom's Houndoom were besides him for his safety and to escort him back home before dinner. Gladion swore that his parents were too protective of him. He could deal with any threats by himself. He was a psychic afterall. That confidence was shattered when the tentacles of a tentacool were just centimetres away from his face. Houndoom had to save him from the cruel fate of being poisoned by the tentacle Pokemon. Hours passed as Gladion used his Psychic sensing powers to find a Feebas in the sea. He continued to move along the coast growing increasingly frustrated. His range was just 500 metres but it was better than just sitting with a fishing rod. "Come on, you ugly little fish," he grumbled. "Where are you hiding?" He had only sensed magikarps near the shore but he was pretty sure Feebas was also present somewhere near the shore. They can't go too deep or away from the coast as there would be stronger Pokemon out there who would not hesitate to eat a Feebas as a snack. Just then, he felt something in his Psychic sphere that matched a small fish. Excitement coursed through him as he decided to just use his psychic powers to catch the Feebas instead of using the fishing rod. He concentrated on the Feebas who was trying to swim away as if it has somehow sensed danger to his freedom ahead. But before it could get away, it flew upwards from the sea to the bucket in Gladion's hands which was filled with water. The Feebas flopped about, its googly eyes seeming to ask, "Why me?" "Sorry, little guy," Gladion whispered. "But you and I are going to make history... and a lot of money." Sneaking the Feebas into his room proved to be a comedy of errors. First, he nearly dropped the bucket when he stubbed his toe on the doorstep, biting his lip to keep from yelping. Then, he had to dodge his sister Gwen, who was prowling the hallway like a curious Meowth. Finally safe in his room, Gladion released the Feebas into a hastily prepared aquarium in his closet. The fish sank to the bottom, looking thoroughly unimpressed with its new home. "Okay, listen up," Gladion said, feeling slightly ridiculous talking to a fish. "You and I are going to be business partners. But first, we need to work on your self-esteem." The Feebas blinked its misaligned eyes, one slightly after the other. Gladion sighed. "This might be harder than I thought." Over the next few weeks, Gladion devoted every spare moment to Operation Ugly Duckling, as he had dubbed it. He decorated the aquarium with a sign reading "World's Most Beautiful Fish" and spent hours complimenting the Feebas on its... unique attributes. "Your scales have such an, um, interesting pattern," he'd say, struggling to find positive things to say. "And your eyes... they're so, uh, expressive! You're practically the supermodel of the fish world!" The Feebas would respond by slowly sinking to the bottom of the tank, looking thoroughly unconvinced. One day, while Gladion was in the middle of his daily pep talk, there was a knock at his door. He quickly shut the closet and called out, "Come in!" His mother, Erza, entered the room, her eyebrows raised. "Gladion, honey, who were you talking to?" "Oh, uh, no one!" Gladion said, his voice an octave higher than usual. "Just... practicing a speech for school. About self-esteem. For fish." Erza blinked. "Self-esteem... for fish?" "It's a very specific topic, Mom," Gladion said, trying to sound confident. Erza shook her head, a bemused smile on her face. "Alright, well, dinner's ready when you're done boosting the confidence of imaginary aquatic life." As soon as she left, Gladion slumped against the closet door, his heart racing. "That was close," he muttered to the hidden Feebas. "You'd better appreciate all this when you evolve." The next challenge was acquiring a Prism Scale. Gladion knew they were rare and expensive, but he was determined. He started doing every odd job he could find – mowing lawns, washing cars, even helping his mom and dad in their respective works. Finally, after months of saving, Gladion had enough money to buy a Prism Scale. He approached a local jewellery shop, trying to act casual. "Excuse me," he said to the shopkeeper, attempting to deepen his voice. "I'm looking for a Prism Scale." The shopkeeper raised an eyebrow. "A Prism Scale? That's a pretty rare item, kid. What do you need it for?" Gladion panicked for a moment before blurting out, "It's for a... school project! About rare Pokémon items. Very educational." The shopkeeper looked skeptical but shrugged. "Alright, but it'll cost you. These things don't grow on trees, you know." 'Maybe this boy has got a crush on a young lady and wants to impress her. Oh youth!!' The shopkeeper inwardly thought As Gladion handed over his hard-earned money, he couldn't help but think, "If only you knew what I'm going to do with this..." Back in his room, Gladion proudly presented the Prism Scale to the Feebas. "Look what I got for you!" he exclaimed. "Now we just need to work on your confidence, and you'll evolve into a beautiful Milotic!" The Feebas stared blankly, then proceeded to hide behind a plastic plant. Gladion's enthusiasm deflated slightly. "Okay, so we still have some work to do." As the weeks passed, Gladion's dreams grew grander. He imagined a future where he had a whole pool of Milotic, harvesting their scales and becoming the Prism Scale tycoon of the Pokémon world. He even started sketching out plans for "Gladion's Marvelous Milotic Emporium" in his school notebook. Meanwhile, the Feebas remained stubbornly un-evolved and unconfident. Gladion had tried everything – motivational speeches, underwater mirrors, even playing recorded applause every time the Feebas swam a lap around its tank. One night, frustrated and out of ideas, Gladion flopped onto his bed with a groan. "What am I doing wrong?" he muttered to himself. "Why won't you just believe you're beautiful?" As if in response, there was a small splash from the aquarium. Gladion sat up, his eyes wide. The Feebas was looking at him with an expression that almost seemed... sympathetic? Gladion walked over to the tank and knelt down, eye-level with the Feebas. "You know," he said softly, "maybe I've been going about this all wrong. It's not about me convincing you that you're beautiful. It's about you learning to love yourself, flaws and all." The Feebas tilted its head slightly, as if considering his words. "I mean, look at me," Gladion continued, gesturing to himself. "I'm not perfect. I've got my own insecurities and doubts. But that doesn't make me any less valuable or worthy. The same goes for you, Feebas. You don't need to be a Milotic to be amazing. You're already amazing just the way you are." As Gladion spoke, he noticed a subtle change in the Feebas's demeanor. Its eyes seemed to focus a bit more, and its fins moved with slightly more grace. It wasn't a dramatic transformation, but it was... something. Encouraged, Gladion continued, "We're going to work on this together, okay? No rush, no pressure. We'll take it one day at a time, and someday, you'll see yourself the way I see you – as a Pokémon with incredible potential." The Feebas swam a small circle in the tank, almost as if nodding in agreement. Just then, Gladion heard footsteps approaching his room. Quickly, he covered the tank and stepped away from the closet. The door opened, revealing his sister Gwen. "Hey, weirdo," she said, eyeing him suspiciously. "Mom wants us downstairs for dinner. And seriously, what are you always doing in here?" Gladion shrugged, trying to look nonchalant. "Just... studying. You know, typical school stuff." Gwen rolled her eyes. "Right. Well, come on then, study bug. Food's getting cold." As Gladion followed his sister out of the room, he cast one last glance at the covered aquarium. He may not have achieved his goal of evolving Feebas yet, but he felt like they had made a breakthrough today. It wasn't about quick transformations or get-rich-quick schemes. It was about patience, understanding, and genuine care. "I'll be back later," he whispered to the hidden Feebas. "We're in this for the long haul, buddy." As he headed downstairs, Gladion couldn't help but smile. He may have started this project with dreams of Prism Scales and profit, but he was beginning to realize that the real treasure was the bond he was forming with this unlikely Pokémon. -----------Author Notes------- Bonus chapter for today since I was free from work. Enjoy! Y'all can now read 12 extra chapters on my pat*reon. https://pat reon.com/mrmime24 [No Space]

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Pokemon: A Gym Leader's Rise(SI)
Pokemon: A Gym Leader's Rise(SI) Author:MrMime24
Chapter 1: Reincarnation Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 1 - 1: Reincarnation Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life as a baby Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 2 - 2: Life as a baby Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 3: The Tiny Terrors Grow Up Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 3 - 3: The Tiny Terrors Grow Up Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 4 - 4: Watching the Gym Battle Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 5 - 5: History of the World Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 6 - 6: Trials of the Parents Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 7 - 7: Meeting Grandpa's Pokemon Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 8 - 8: Meeting Erza's Pokemon Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 9 - 9: A Passionate Encounter Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 10 - 10: Awakening Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 11 - 11: Grandpa Maren Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 12 - 12: Grandpa Maren's Farewell Gifts Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 13 - 13: Farewell to a Legend Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 14 - 14: YOUTH Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 15 - 15: School?! Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 16 - 16: Operation Ugly Duckling Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 17 - 17: Unexpected Evolution Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 18 - 18: The Secret Showdown Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 19 - 19: The Power Of Youth Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 20 - 20: Gravity of the Situation Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 21 - 21: Regional Starter?! Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 22 - 22: Eighth Birthday Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 23 - 23: Bad News Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 24 - 24: A Humbling Experience Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 25 - 25: Reality Check and Determination Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 26 - 26: Current Gym Leaders Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 27 - 27: An Expanding World Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 28 - 28: Larvitar to Pupitar Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 29 - 29: Ghostly Evolution Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 30 - 30: Learning Ice Punch Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 31 - 31: A name worth fighting for Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 32 - 32: Poké-Confessions Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 33 - 33: Mind Over Matter Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 34 - 34: And the Race begins Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 35 - 35: Introducing Squirtle and New Rivalry Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 36 - 36: The Prism Scale Business Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 37 - 37: Generalist Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 38 - 38: Unreal Psychic Powers Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 39 - 39: Rematch(1) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 40 - 40: Rematch (2) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 41 - 41: The Journey Begins Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 42 - 42: Cinnabar Island Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 43 - 43: Elekid Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 44 - 44: Six Pokemon Rule and Evolution Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 45 - 45: Arsenal and Zeus Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 46 - 46: Forging One's Own Path Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 47 - 47: Cruel Reality of the world Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 48 - 48: Difficult Choice Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 49 - 49: Pewter City and the Gym Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 50 - 50: First Gym (1) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 51 - 51 : First Gym (2) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 52 - 52: Time to introduce Social Media to this world Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 53 - 53: Ice Cream Day Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 54 - 54: Second Gym Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 55 - 55: Buying TMs Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 56 - 56: Guy- The Wrestling Sensation Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 57 - 57: Arsenal meets Erza and her team Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 58 - 58: Taming the Mankey Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 59 - 59: Team Rocket is on move Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 60 - 60: Meeting Lt. Surge Again Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 61 - 61: Third Gym (1) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 62 - 62: Third Gym (2) and Guy's True Strength Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 63 - 63: Third Gym (3) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 64 - 64: Guy's New Strength Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 65 - 65: Gladion's Ambitions Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 66 - 66: Bargaining with a legendary Pokemon Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 67 - 67: Bargaining with a Legendary (2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 68 - 68: Not a Cute Baby Zapdos but a Monster Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 69 - 69: What to do with the Stones? Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 70 - 70: Two months later Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 71 - 71: Psychic license Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 72 - 72: War of Words between Psychics Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 73 - 73: Gladion Vs Sabrina (1) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 74 - 74: Gladion Vs Sabrina (2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 75 - 75: A new travelling Partner? Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 76 - 76: The Annoying Tagalong Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 77 - 77: Ninja and Old Hag Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 78 - 78: Final Gym Battle (1) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 79 - 79: Final Gym Battle (2) and Collosus's Debut Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 80 - 80: Agatha and Koga's Discussion Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 81 - 81: The changing landscape of Pokenet Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 82 - 82: The Disciple Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 83 - 83: Trainer Missions Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 84 - 84: Fight for a Parasect Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 85 - 85: Unexpected Additions to the team Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 86 - 86: Let the preliminaries begin! Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 87 - 87: Green Guy Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 88 - 88: The VIP talk Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 89 - 89: The Unholy Alliance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 90 - 90: Top 64 Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 91 - 91: The Rivals Meet Again Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 92 - 92: Helping the Opponent Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 93 - 93: Easy-Peasy Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 94 - 94: Oof.... Girls Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 95 - 95: Clash of Minds (1) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 96 - 96: Clash of Minds (2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 97 - 97: Clash Of Minds (3) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 98 - 98: Clash Of Minds (4) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 99 - 99: Clash Of Minds (5) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 100 - 100: Clash Of Minds (End) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 101 - 101: Prelude to the finals Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 102 - 102: Brother Vs Sister (1) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 103 - 103: Brother Vs Sister (2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 104 - 104: Brother Vs Sister (3) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 105 - 105: Brother Vs Sister (4) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 106 - 106: Brother Vs Sister (5) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 107 - 107: Brother Vs Sister (6) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 108 - 108: Brother Vs Sister (7) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 109 - 109: Brother Vs Sister (End) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 110 - 110: The Celebration Begins! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 111 - 111: Interlude: Press Conference Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 112 - 112: Five Years Forward! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 113 - 113: The Lost Evolution Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 114 - 114: You don't get close to Zeus! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 115 - 115: Collosus's Debut Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 116 - 116: The Titan's Domination Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 117 - 117: Pryce's Arrogance Shattered Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 118 - 118: Just One Step Away Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 119 - 119: Gwen Vs Blaine (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 120 - 120: Gwen Vs Blaine (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 121 - 121: Gladion's Announcement Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 122 - 122: The New Pair of Twins Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 123 - 123: The League's Verdict Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 124 - 124: Time to achieve his own dream Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 125 - 125: Celebration (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 126 - 126: Celebration (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 127 - 127: The Two Assistants Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 128 - 128: New Business Ventures Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 129 - 129: Patrolling (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 130 - 130: Patrolling (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 131 - 131: A literal Goldmine (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 132 - 132: A literal Goldmine (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 133 - 133: Securing the mine Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 134 - 134: Plot to take the mine Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 135 - 135: Oof, Plots everywhere Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 136 - 136: Ace Challenge (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 137 - 137: Ace Challenge (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 138 - 138: Ace Challenge (3) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 139 - 139: Ace Challenge (4) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 140 - 140: Ace Challenge (5) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 141 - 141: Match End Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 142 - 142: Young Aspirations Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 143 - 143: The Mysterious Protector Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 144 - 144: Start of the League Season Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 145 - 145: First Challenger Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 146 - 146: Troublesome Kids Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 147 - 147: Team Rocket Divided into Two Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 148 - 148: Next Big Venture Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 149 - 149: Morning in Moonwood Town's Gym Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 150 - 150: Team Aqua Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 151 - 151: Asking for help Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 152 - 152: Disguised Gladion Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 153 - 153: Team Rocket's Betrayal Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 154 - 154: Team Rocket gets the news Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 155 - 155: Poketwitter Reacts Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 156 - 156: Oof....Little Siblings Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 157 - 157: An Interesting Challenger (1) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 158 - 158: New Novel! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 159 - 158: An Interesting Challenger (2) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 160 - 159: Like Father Like Son Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 161 - 160: Robbing Oak blind (1) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 162 - 161: Robbing Oak blind (2) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 163 - 162: City Wide Alarm Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 164 - 163: Angry Gyarados Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 165 - 164: Moonwood's Defense (1) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 166 - 165: Moonwood's Defense (2) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 167 - 166: New trouble brewing Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 168 - 167: Dream Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 169 - 168: The Eon Pokemon Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 170 - 169: Hit on Gladion's reputation Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 171 - 170: Gladion's Retaliation (1) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 172 - 171: Gladion's Retaliation (2) Sep 21st, 2025
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