BECMI Chapter 94 – Murder, She Witnessed

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Contrary to many views of it, Divination Magic was far more dangerous than many realized. That was ignoring the many, many benefits of being able to find out secrets and lore that others desired for their own, or more importantly, wanted to stay buried. Few considered the implications of scrying on creatures that could detect such magicks, and strike directly at the mind and soul of the interloper through them. The focus and willpower required to keep the magic on track and aligned against wills, materials, or forces attempting to lead it astray, or to pierce through obfuscation or outright Wards or illusions raised to defeat them, was also quite intense. If one looked at the wrong thing, made mental contact with the wrong creatures, attracted the wrong kind of attention, or faltered when doing something as dangerous as trying to predict the future, well, the consequences could be mind-blowing in all the worst ways. Your risks when tossing tended to be eminently more predictable. What I was going to do was go looking into the past for my answers. That did NOT mean that those I was going to look at back then couldn’t sense the clairvoyance. Just because it was coming across time instead of space didn’t mean it couldn’t be Warded against and protected from. However, when the spell was coming in at effective IX, Warding against it was more difficult. Unless the perpetrators had a up, or had used -level magic to cover their tracks, I and those with me should be capable of seeing what was going to happen. That didn’t mean the guilty wouldn’t be aware they were being watched, but that was a danger we were going to risk. I was in the nave of the church, Revered Cruxin was overseeing the main sleeping areas, and Prince Ukker had command of those watching the outside, to see who and what approached, and which way they would be fleeing. The wine at the abbey had actually been unaffected by the disappearance of the monks, which ruled out most of the powerful undead. Most of the powerful undead hereabouts spoiled meat and drink close to them, with the exception of liches and vampires. Vampires didn’t travel well, and liches, well, a lich in this world had to be at least Twenty and an Archmage to embrace that fate, according to the texts I’d read on the subject… and given my patrilineal genealogy, I had definitely spent a lot of time finding out a lot of information on that particular subject. Bringing up the spell wasn’t all that difficult given the conduits and foci I’d put in place through the stone. It was a lot of area, but all that meant to me was sacrificing some higher Valences to increase the area and use Cantrips to fill them all with mana. I had the exact night in late winter that the event had happened, and in any case it was a Locus Moment, a point in time where a lot of magic, life, and death had swirled together and formed an event which had rippled out into the world with more effect than just another battle or group of mortals fighting and dying, which happened all the time. Days and nights blurred past us under the welling power of the magic, clouds racing across the windows, light fading to dark and swelling with illumination in a rapid dance of chance as the season unwound about us. Shadows of people darted past us in waves and streaks, here and gone, impossible to tell who was who, decreasing in number the further back we went. A final night went by, and the spell swept to a stop at the moment of dusk, the last of the sun going out, and it was time. I was in the nave, before the altar, watching vespers taking place all around us. I examined everyone present, focusing on those who were not brothers. It looked like a southern merchant had stopped by to spend the night, and had attended with two guards. None of the reports I’d seen mentioned a merchant or wagon in attendance here, so that raised alarm bells. I /asked instantly in Marktell, the eye-views of every one of the dwarves visible before me. Krodduk, one of Ukker’s guards, snapped his head around, all of the dwarves outside looking around for sign of one. -Nothing in the barns or yard!- he /reported instantly, and the other dwarves reported no sign of wagons. “Your Grace, follow those three,” I indicated to the head abbot, who followed my pointing finger, and frowned instantly on seeing the shadowy images of non-monks in the building. “I don’t recall them being written into the register of guests at the abbey…” “They were not.” The abbot hastened after them, his hand falling to the mace hanging at his side instinctively. Revered Cruxin moved to back up the abbot at the guest room, stepping in past the phantasmal door for guests. This tale has been unlawfully obtained from NovelFire. If you discover it on Amazon, kindly report it. -The man’s guards are removing their armor,- the dwarven priest /related calmly, a shout from the abbot mirroring it. Cruxin mirrored my order vocally, two more dwarves hurrying from from other rooms to watch what was going on. -Lady Edge, a band of men just came over the wall of the abbey grounds and are heading up towards the building. They are all flying,- another dwarf, Jorggo, urgently /reported. Arranging that wasn’t cheap, or took a decently powerful Caster. The guests inside, whose forms had also shifted from pale skin to darker copper, stole out of their rooms, separating quickly. One stood guard in the hallway, making sure there were no interruptions, the other two headed to the nave and main doors, respectively. “The leader is a priestess!” the abbot roared out in fury. “She’s waving around the symbol of Gulguz, and I believe she Cast a couple of spells to make sure they were not heard!” “Intruders came in from the east!” Prince Ukker shouted outside the open doors, shadows now drawn across them. “Using flying magic!” We watched as the Wards on the doors were broken by some magical item, flaring and cut off, while the two monks on late-night watch were ambushed and strangled without being able to get off an alarm in the magical . The priestess had gone right to the altar, unloaded some items on it, and begun some magical Ceremony as the first of her helpers threw open the doors and allowed the raiders inside. As two groups, the band of raiders then fell upon each room in turn, while the leader of the second band turned out to be a priestess who joined the first in a dark Ritual around the altar. “The altar is being desecrated to empower a Ritual of dark magic,” I announced to everyone with Magevoice. “I had heard that Gulguz was a deity of fire, but this is not magic of fire at all. They are dealing with demonic forces…” “They are not killing the monks! They are wounding them and rendering them unconscious!” Revered Cruxin called out. “They are hauling them to the nave!” I looked back as the first raiders dragged the first strangled and unconscious monks to the altar, throwing them upon it as the priestesses changed positions. The abbot was there now, looking upon this with seething fury as a wavy Athame was brought out by the priestess, and it plunged down into the heart of its victim. Out of the ruined mess of his chest, darkness and fire billowed forth in a black and burning cloud, forming into a brooding presence whose Aura weighed down on the magic and the room physically, hurting the eyes and the souls to stare at. The abbot staggered away from the manifestation of the thing… and drew its attention! “What is this? You have drawn my attention, little one…” Its voice was sibilant, undulating upon the skin and the soul, clearly conveying that it wasn’t looking at the flesh of those about it. Great scaly arms manifested from inside the cloud, as burning eyes shrouded in smoke and a circular maw both opened into glimpses of oblivion behind them on the surface of the cloud. It started to move after him, through the Illusion, but was distracted by the priestess calling out something we couldn’t hear responding to its words. With a laugh it reached down, picking up the slaughtered monk, and we could see the echo of his spirit writhing within its corpse as the creature opened wide its maw, and then stuffed the entire body of the man down its throat with relish. The corpse burned as it went in, and we could hear the spiritual wail as his soul was consumed. My eyes went very narrow indeed. This explained why no trace of the monks could be found. They had been fed to this Soul Eater! The eyes of the Soul Eater kept shifting between the sacrificed monks and me as I stood there, watching each and every monk, including the previous abbot, be sacrificed one by one and fed to the creature, who devoured them and their souls with glee and gusto, making of each a show and performance for us to behold with horror. This was already done months in the past, but the demon could see us watching, so effectively it was displaying all of this for our benefit! All of my group were gathered by the time the last of the monks died, and the creature laughed uproariously, even the spilled blood flaring and vanishing as it completed its task. Then it turned its eyes on me, although the priestess there probably thought it was looking at her. “I will be waiting for you,” it promised me, and then claws and jaws and smoke spun around, whirling and imploding into itself, and it vanished into nothingness. The tools and implements upon the altar were retrieved, stored away, and then the entire group of raiders left the nave through the open doors, heading out into the night and the silence there, leaving an empty and brooding building behind. With that, I let the Illusion end. The abbot, and what monks had dared to re-enter the building, were all ashen as they stared at the altar there, upon which so many of their brethren had been slaughtered. I extended and laid its head atop the defiled altar, the desecration of it far more symbolic than the unholy magic that had dissipated before it was found. There was not the slightest bit of outcry from the monks as the solid block of wood and cloth shimmered, aged a million years in an instant, and fell to dust upon the ground. “I will find you another altar, and it will be appropriate to what was done here, be sure of it. “Baron Torwell, I believe I can safely assure you that all culpability in this matter will be lifted, and blame assessed where it can be directed. There will be some who claim that no magic and mere illusion is sufficient to claim proof, and they may be right in the courts and laws of mortals. “But this is one church of an Immortal striking against another, and the rules they play by are very different. Your Grace, I believe you have enough here to call for an Edict of Demonic Censure against the Church of Gulguz, naming them Unclean in the eyes of the Church and all dealings with them to be beyond the law, all agreements non-binding, and any servant of that Church an enemy of all mortal souls. “What you saw happening here was the invocation of a Soul Eater, a race of Fiends in service to Entropy. What Gulguz thinks it is doing using them is madness, but it means that it is preying on the very souls of those that oppose it. “Extermination is the only answer to this desecration of the highest order.”

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Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven
Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven Author:RE Druin
BECMI (Biracial Edgelord Can Make Immortal!) : Prologue Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 1 – Babyhood Sucks Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 2 – We’re at Character Creation and trying to Minmax! Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 3 – Getting Around Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 4 – Setting Yourself Up for Success Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 5 – Immortal Lies, Mortal Meanings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 6 – Going Hunting above my Weight Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 7 – Material Acquisitions Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 8 – Out in the Darkness Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 9 – Picking up an Animal Friend Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 10 – Butter and Poison Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 11 – Item Creation Guidelines are Important Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 12 – A Stave to Edgelord By Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 13 – With This Staff in Hand... Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 14 – The not-Radiance, it's Gammathauma Radiation, Fools! Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 15 – Explosive News Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 16 – A Study in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 17 – The Elements of Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 18 – Busy as the Bugs Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 19 – What Lies Over There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 20 – Miraculous Possibilities Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 21 – The First Dragon Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 22 – Leveraging Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 23 – Working the Runes Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 24 – Runes and Running About Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 25 – Dwarven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 26 – Elven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 27 – Truth Cuts Deep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 28- A Wrinkle in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 29 – Time is Cruel Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 30 – New Recruits Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 31 – Out-Voted Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 32 – A Long Trek Backwards Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 33 – Warrior and Human Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 34 – The Alternate Road Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 35 – Past Misgivings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 36 – Another Pause in Proceedings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 37 – Stragglers Here and There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 38 – More Stragglers Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 39 - Outlawed Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 40 – Messing with History Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 41 – A Potent Future from the Past Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 42 – One Last Night before we Rest Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 43 – Filling Up the Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 44 – A Chill is Setting In Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 45 – A Cataclysm Cometh Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 46 – Some Time Alone Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 47 – A Dragon’s Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 48 – Draconic Discoveries Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 49 – The Long Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 50 – An Immortal Visitor Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 51 – Immortal Consequences Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 52 - Dragonsleep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 53 – It’s Time to Go Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 54 – A Final Pause Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 55 – The Last Sunken Hurdles Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 56 – A Scale of Time Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 57 – All the way here to Thisbean Inn Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 58 – Of Ladies and Kings Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 59 – The Guilty Parties Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 60 – Divining the Traitors Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 61 – Of Kings and Things Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 62 – The Ei is Watching Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 63 – A Roadmap to the Future Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 64 – Marked for Greatness Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 65 – About Time and the Land of Darkmoor Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 66 – Trade Matters Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 67 – First Contracts Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 68 – A Working Vacation? Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 69 – Preserved by Amber Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 70 – Getting into Positions Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 71 - Attendance Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 72 – Extending Influence Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 73 – Family Problems Counselor Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 74 – Timely Political Contributions Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 75 – Running Simulations Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 76 – Prepping for Adventure Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 77 – Module, er, Quest Accepted! Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 78 – The Batrachian Basilica Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 79 – Scouting Speed Run Complete Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 80 – Special Forces in Special Places Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 81 – A Failure of Technology Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 82 – Taking the Temple Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 83 – Setting the Spoils Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 84 – New Roads Forward Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 85 – Recruitment Drive Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 86 – Crazy Origins Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 87 – Off to the Weirwoods Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 88 – A Walk in the Moonlight Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 89 – Annihilation: Code Black Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 90 – To the Stormspires and Overstern Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 91 – The Man in the Middle Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 92 – The Forgebridge Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 93 – The Abbey Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 94 – Murder, She Witnessed Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 95 – The Hunt will begin Soon Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 96 – Recovering a Regent Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 97 – A Blood Price Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 98 – Ill Deeds come home to Roost Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 99 – Freedom Rides on Black Wings Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 100 – Beckoned by Fire Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 101 – Forged in a Lava Pit… Sounds Familiar?… Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 102 – I Wish for a Bad Ending to All This Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 103 – A Massacre for a Massacre Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 104 – The Judgment of Heaven Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 105 – Energy in Hand with Entropy Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 106 – Another Courting Call Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 107 – Ripple Effects Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 108 – Fiends for Demons Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 109 – Immortal Words and Wills Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 110 – The Collapse of the Khirifi Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 111 – Intervention of the Elders Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 112 – The Roads to Immortality Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 113 – A Road to the Eternal Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 114 – The End of the Khirifi Empire Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 115 – More Imperial Ambitions Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 116 – Conjured Doom Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 117 – Deathly Bequests Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 118 – On a Higher Cause Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 119 – An Expansion of Strength Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 120 – Immediate Plans Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 121 – At the Tower of Daffid the Red Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 122 – Fiery Food leads to Fond Farewells Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 123 – Fallen from the Stars Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 124 – Diplomatic Dealings Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 125 – Inside the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 126 – Hearts at Ease Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 127 – Discussions of Consequences Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 128 – Waking from a Bad Dream Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 129 – The Destiny of the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 130 – A Call to Battle Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 131 – A Letter of Blood and Souls Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 132 – Where We are Going and What We are Doing Sep 25th, 2025
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