BECMI Chapter 111 – Intervention of the Elders

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“You should stop this unseemly destruction of your inferiors,” a gravely wise voice spoke up from near me, as magic flashed in the sky. I turned in time to see his eyes widen in disbelief when his utterly failed to stop the coming down out of the sky atop the last of the camps of the Khirifi before reaching the western vales and hills of the Mountains of Myth, the first areas conquered by the Khirifi in their crusade to the east. The eight giant black flaming skulls detonated in massive spheres of rose petals and flames that swept across the camp, blowing apart earthen fortifications and buildings, frying Khirifi in screaming blasts, and creating a wondrously beautiful and extremely deadly field of growing flaming rose-vines and thorns as they did so. Any survivors were rapidly covered in fields of rampant and lethal burning flowers, entwined, and burned alive. Their panicking horses could run right through the flames, however, even as their riders were dragged off their backs. I flicked up a coil of black roses around my right hand, tingling alertly in my left as it felt Immortal Power on this flying seemed-to-be-a-Wizard. lengthened, Holy Vivic flames wrapped around them, and down they lashed, threading their way through the camp in darting that seemed to coalesce in extending black vines. The holes they made in running Khirifi erupted with black roses in white flames the plants grew from with breathtaking speed as the corpses toppled and fell down. “Elder is a long way from home,” I noted, turning my attention back down below. “How is Elder known among mortals?” I inquired, my speaking somehow not interfering with the task of launching more and their trails of winding vines and thorns sprouting black and red flowers. That checked him as he watched what I was doing, not interfering again. “I am known as Jillius among mortals, young elfin,” he stated after a moment, watching what I was doing in fascination. “Your hate of the Khirifi must be great, to hound them so, Lady Edge.” “I have no more true hate for them than a farmer does the deer eating his wheat, or the crows raiding his corn. They are a pestilence, and the best way to deal with a pestilence is with blood and fire. As they treated others, so they are being treated in turn. As they are fanatics of Gulguz who all should bow down before or die, the Chosen only He favors, so the scum of Gulguz should bow down before all other gods and die, anathema and chattel spurned by all of them. “As they sowed, they reap, and they have been fantastically poor farmers and are just now understanding what it means to Feed the Land, instead of the Land feeding them. “Now, what business has the Immortal Master of the Waves, Patron of Trade, Merchants, and Seamanship among the Iberon Pantheon, have with me? My business is with the Immortal who bade his servants Summon Soul Eaters and work with the Entropic Lord Thanatos, not with your decadent and crumbling empire, Elder.” He pursed his lips at the show of disrespect, and I could see he was thinking of revealing his Aura and really putting the fear of the gods into me. He would be disappointed when that did not work, either. “It… is more the example you are setting, than anything else,” he eventually stated, grimacing as my slaughter of the Khirifi continued, anywhere from ten to sixty of them dying every time as my ranged out for them. Duum was out in the distance, picking off riders and scouts who thought they were safe, getting rid of them with silent swoops from above. None closer than a mile away, Korshwa riders were waiting grimly for me to leave, and were also rounding up the rest of the Khirifi fleeing in all directions. What slaves they found were to be escorted to and released into the North or back to Iberon, or even accepted into their own tribes, as they preferred. If they did not care to do even that small favor for me and spite the Khirifi, well, I would be coming back this way, too, and I’d treat slave-traders exactly the way they treated their merchandise. So far, they’d been very conscientious about bringing any survivors and sending them in the direction of Darkmoor and Elb, and absolutely killing any Khirifi who survived, except maybe some of the very youngest children. The old wagon wheel rule... “What I choose to do with my time is my own concern, Elder, and I am ready for the consequences, as the Khirifi most certainly are not. Are you going to take direct action?” I kept my voice flat and neutral, mostly unconcerned with him. He raised his hand, then lowered it with a sigh. “Who is your sponsor?” he demanded firmly. “I would have words with them.” “They do not know you, you do not know them, and they are not interested in speaking with you. You would have been far better advised to spend your time speaking with your own mortal servants to save Iberon, but we both know the Empire is largely past that stage now.” “You said that Thanatos is involved. How do you know this?” he asked again, looking rather uncomfortable at my pointing out his failure. Taken from NovelFire, this narrative should be reported if found on Amazon. “He very confidently sent three Screaming Demons to ambush me, who were happy to boast of their status as His minions. They might have been lying, but considering that they thought I was going to die without a chance, I am perfectly certain their boasts were legitimate. Screaming Demons are not subtle thinkers looking to misdirect someone about to die.” His face was a bit grim as he processed that, agreeing with my assessment. “And your patron slew them instead.” “They died in great surprise. It was quite heartwarming,” I said coldly, my bombardment still not ceasing, the living Khirifi still standing out in my , not a single one of them Good. Gulguz was good at his indoctrination methods, perhaps unsurprisingly. “How far do you intend to take this genocide?” the Immortal pressed me. “Exactly as far as the Khirifi were willing to, and they were directed to make it to the Empire of Iberon and bring it down in fire and blood.” I paused momentarily, turning to glance at him. “You are taking action against me, and not them, despite them coming to act against your own worshipers. I take it you have given up on Iberon, and had agreed to let things play out among mortals and the Empire die due to its own infighting?” He sighed for my benefit, but his expression held resignation, not regret. “A thousand years is a long time for a human empire to stand, by any measure. The rot always starts within, and it takes a fire from without to wipe it away… or a civil war that is even more fiery and regretful. There is a chance this full-blown invasion might be enough to unify the nation… or finally finish tearing it apart back into its component elements.” I had to remember that he didn’t know the Cataclysm was coming, and final destruction of Iberon would happen at that point. The fallout from the eruption, the shift in the poles, and the devastating weather would all combine to bury Iberon in history. “I expect there will be changes in Imperial policy coming, stemming from my annihilation of the Khirifi. Someone has already lured one of your High Archmages out to test the waters here. Egranzier the Manifold sent in a Simulacra tricked out with suicide spells to see if it could deal with me. I presume a High Archmage is on your watchlist?” “Egranzier never risks himself personally if he can help it, always sending minions and servants of one form or another, and his price is not cheap. Sacrificing a Simulacra would have cost someone a great deal of gold,” the disguised Immortal noted thoughtfully. “I will also note that he’s a known Conjurer powerful enough to bring in Demons past the Veil, and the other way to motivate a potential Immortal Aspirant is for his Patron to set it as a goal.” He blinked at me, and I could see mental dominoes falling into place. “He Summoned the demons at the behest of Thanatos, who made it seem like the Khirifi brought them in…” “The three great paths of magic that lead to tyranny and corruption are, in order: necromancy, conjuration/summoning, and enchantment/charm. Of those, conjuration occupies the central position, and deals the most with darker powers. Necromancers deal with spirits, but they value their own souls far too much to bargain with most Immortal beings, where Enchanters prefer to be the king or the power behind the throne pulling strings, not the idiot face being used by others. “I know little of the High Archmage save for his being active in the shadows, but I doubt not he’s had a hand in weakening the moral fiber of Iberon, probably by killing anyone trying to save the place or those with noble hearts, and seeing other rivals blamed for it.” He wasn’t admiring me finish up my lethal and swift killing, although he was tracking all the great stands of flowers blooming all over the place now. His expression said he was thinking about a certain powerful mage and what the man was responsible for. “Would you… be willing to strike against this Egranzier, Lady Edge?” he inquired of me with great false smarm. “Are you trying to position me as the Next Great Threat to Iberon, Divine Elder?” I inquired of him icily. He actually smiled in appreciation at the observation. “Perhaps? You make a very good dire threat at this stage…” “Then trick him into attacking me again, and I will retaliate. Or wait for his master to prompt him to do so. Or bribe me, if you want him disposed of with certainty and haste.” He was starting to let some of his Immortal vigor come through, now looking more forty than sixty, and putting on weight and muscle. Probably didn’t even notice it. He was obviously enjoying himself talking to me for some reason. “Bribery, is it? I had no idea you were so mercenary, Lady Edge, given that you seem to be engaged in a rather epic task without any hope of proper remuneration for what you are doing.” I could almost hear him rubbing his hands in expectation of a deal. “Obviously you don’t want to waste your time manipulating a High Archmage who might be in service to Entropy and end up caught at it, you don’t want to be patient if you don’t have to be, and you are a Patron of Merchants. You believe you will be able to get me to work for you for effectively trivial compensation, given that material resources are something you can conjure up with a wave of your hand as needed. “Naturally I care nothing for those material resources.” “You are after information, or a trade of favors, then,” he deduced promptly. “Come, tell me what you seek!” he asked magnanimously. “I have done my research, but I would verify it. Delineate to me the requirements for the Path to Immortality for all five Spheres,” I iterated promptly. He tilted his head slightly at the price, not knowing whether to feign interest or surprise. “Your own Patron would not tell you of these things?” he asked quickly, sensing a weakness in our relationship he might be able to pounce upon. “I am technically not at the proper level of spiritual advancement to make a run at Immortality, and so informing me is something that is properly done at a later date. We are both impatient, and I like to prepare for things before they happen, instead of responding to them they happen in confusion and haste,” I just sniffed. He considered that, and nodded slowly. “Knowing what you must attain does give you more time and direction to focus your attentions in… and you want all the paths, even those of Entropy?” he asked archly. “I want to know what to look for in those seeking Entropic ascension,” I replied coolly. “I’ve a feeling we will be crossing paths frequently.” The Immortal Wavestrider Jillius couldn’t fault that reasoning, either…

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Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven
Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven Author:RE Druin
BECMI (Biracial Edgelord Can Make Immortal!) : Prologue Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 1 – Babyhood Sucks Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 2 – We’re at Character Creation and trying to Minmax! Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 3 – Getting Around Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 4 – Setting Yourself Up for Success Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 5 – Immortal Lies, Mortal Meanings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 6 – Going Hunting above my Weight Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 7 – Material Acquisitions Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 8 – Out in the Darkness Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 9 – Picking up an Animal Friend Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 10 – Butter and Poison Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 11 – Item Creation Guidelines are Important Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 12 – A Stave to Edgelord By Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 13 – With This Staff in Hand... Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 14 – The not-Radiance, it's Gammathauma Radiation, Fools! Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 15 – Explosive News Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 16 – A Study in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 17 – The Elements of Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 18 – Busy as the Bugs Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 19 – What Lies Over There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 20 – Miraculous Possibilities Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 21 – The First Dragon Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 22 – Leveraging Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 23 – Working the Runes Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 24 – Runes and Running About Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 25 – Dwarven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 26 – Elven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 27 – Truth Cuts Deep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 28- A Wrinkle in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 29 – Time is Cruel Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 30 – New Recruits Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 31 – Out-Voted Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 32 – A Long Trek Backwards Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 33 – Warrior and Human Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 34 – The Alternate Road Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 35 – Past Misgivings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 36 – Another Pause in Proceedings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 37 – Stragglers Here and There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 38 – More Stragglers Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 39 - Outlawed Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 40 – Messing with History Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 41 – A Potent Future from the Past Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 42 – One Last Night before we Rest Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 43 – Filling Up the Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 44 – A Chill is Setting In Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 45 – A Cataclysm Cometh Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 46 – Some Time Alone Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 47 – A Dragon’s Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 48 – Draconic Discoveries Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 49 – The Long Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 50 – An Immortal Visitor Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 51 – Immortal Consequences Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 52 - Dragonsleep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 53 – It’s Time to Go Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 54 – A Final Pause Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 55 – The Last Sunken Hurdles Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 56 – A Scale of Time Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 57 – All the way here to Thisbean Inn Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 58 – Of Ladies and Kings Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 59 – The Guilty Parties Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 60 – Divining the Traitors Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 61 – Of Kings and Things Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 62 – The Ei is Watching Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 63 – A Roadmap to the Future Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 64 – Marked for Greatness Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 65 – About Time and the Land of Darkmoor Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 66 – Trade Matters Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 67 – First Contracts Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 68 – A Working Vacation? Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 69 – Preserved by Amber Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 70 – Getting into Positions Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 71 - Attendance Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 72 – Extending Influence Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 73 – Family Problems Counselor Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 74 – Timely Political Contributions Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 75 – Running Simulations Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 76 – Prepping for Adventure Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 77 – Module, er, Quest Accepted! Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 78 – The Batrachian Basilica Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 79 – Scouting Speed Run Complete Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 80 – Special Forces in Special Places Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 81 – A Failure of Technology Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 82 – Taking the Temple Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 83 – Setting the Spoils Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 84 – New Roads Forward Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 85 – Recruitment Drive Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 86 – Crazy Origins Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 87 – Off to the Weirwoods Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 88 – A Walk in the Moonlight Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 89 – Annihilation: Code Black Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 90 – To the Stormspires and Overstern Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 91 – The Man in the Middle Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 92 – The Forgebridge Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 93 – The Abbey Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 94 – Murder, She Witnessed Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 95 – The Hunt will begin Soon Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 96 – Recovering a Regent Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 97 – A Blood Price Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 98 – Ill Deeds come home to Roost Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 99 – Freedom Rides on Black Wings Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 100 – Beckoned by Fire Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 101 – Forged in a Lava Pit… Sounds Familiar?… Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 102 – I Wish for a Bad Ending to All This Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 103 – A Massacre for a Massacre Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 104 – The Judgment of Heaven Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 105 – Energy in Hand with Entropy Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 106 – Another Courting Call Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 107 – Ripple Effects Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 108 – Fiends for Demons Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 109 – Immortal Words and Wills Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 110 – The Collapse of the Khirifi Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 111 – Intervention of the Elders Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 112 – The Roads to Immortality Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 113 – A Road to the Eternal Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 114 – The End of the Khirifi Empire Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 115 – More Imperial Ambitions Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 116 – Conjured Doom Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 117 – Deathly Bequests Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 118 – On a Higher Cause Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 119 – An Expansion of Strength Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 120 – Immediate Plans Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 121 – At the Tower of Daffid the Red Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 122 – Fiery Food leads to Fond Farewells Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 123 – Fallen from the Stars Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 124 – Diplomatic Dealings Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 125 – Inside the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 126 – Hearts at Ease Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 127 – Discussions of Consequences Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 128 – Waking from a Bad Dream Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 129 – The Destiny of the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 130 – A Call to Battle Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 131 – A Letter of Blood and Souls Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 132 – Where We are Going and What We are Doing Sep 25th, 2025
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