BECMI Chapter 50 – An Immortal Visitor

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I swapped out our light exercise clothing for my Robes and Cirru’s armor, cleaning up the sweat at the same time as I recalled to my hand. Cirru’s real talent in combat was in open-hand fighting, what they called a Mystic Tradition on this world. Attempting to replicate her natural weaponry and fighting techniques with humanoid limbs was startlingly effective and instinctive to her, and she gobbled up unarmed combat techniques with speed and zeal. With enough years, she’d actually eclipsed me in some aspects of unarmed combat, since I tended to focus on Sun and Moon, and she enthusiastically borrowed from anywhere and anything she could. The south wall of the taproom was open and exposed to the, and would likely pique the interest of whatever had intruded. We just stepped to the corner and waited. Cirru was a LOT tougher than anyone would have any right to expect normally… but this person had seen right through the Illusions concealing the Inn, which likely meant some form of True Sight, and would thus likely see Cirru and know what she was. I had a up still, and even if it had been fifteen years inside here, I still wasn’t a physical adult by any stretch. I’d need probably thirty years to actually ‘grow into’ my true appearance, so I had a on specifically to defeat and other such revealing spells for just that purpose. Someone stepped out from inside the taproom, looking around with great confidence. Sharp blue eyes settled on the two of us. He looked mostly human, with frazzled hair gone gray, lines on his face, and an expression that hinted at intelligence and a roguish set of mind. His clothing style was in none of the styles of any of the current cultures that I knew of… and looked remarkably like a natty cheap British suit from the twentieth century of Earth. “Well, what do we have here?” he exclaimed in a tone friendly and absolutely sure of himself. “An elf and a dragon, trapped inside a time loop? Not something you see every day, is it?” he remarked. Cirru looked at me, already uneasy as I studied the fellow. Anti-magic around him, and some Divination Wards. Not much there to read at all. “Every single day, as a matter of fact,” I replied shortly to his remark, earning an instant toothy smile from him. “Oh, that must be so true, so true!” he agreed with an easy nod of his head, strolling towards us with his hands in his jacket pockets, clearly not afraid of us in the slightest. “I am The Doctor. Might I inquire as to your names?” he asked pleasantly. That was NOT a British accent. A good attempt at one, maybe. Truth made me very aware of verbal untruths, and that most definitely was NOT his Name or title. “I am the Lady Edge. This is Cirruluxul,” I replied without batting an eye, my attention more on his hands than his face, looking at the magic around him. “What do you want here, Doctor?” I asked calmly. He studied me and my completely unimpressed expression with clear interest. “Well, I’ve something of an interest in Time, and this place has been on my list of places to clean up for some time, Lady Edge. I thought I’d pop in and see what was going on here, and perhaps take care of the problem.” I tilted my head slightly, considering his words. Some sort of temporal adjudicator? “I have already killed Benjamin Horst.” His expression immediately hardened. “The temporal vortex is in flux and not manifesting, and likely can’t for another decade or two. I am in the process of closing the temporal loop, but I’ve another thousand years into the past to go at the very least, and can’t do so until the Portal manifests again. As the Inn exists over a thousand years more into the past, and over twenty-five hundred years into the future, you cannot wipe it out without causing a temporal paradox and broken timeline, which is likely considerably worse than anything the Inn is generating in its current condition. “There’s nothing for you to do here, Doctor. If I fail, you’ll have to wait three thousand years to greet the far side of the loop and ride it back to close it. You’re far too early… so if you are planning to do anything to the Loop, it must be to break it and cause chaos.” His bright blue eyes remained focused on me, and his smile grew wider. “Oh, a clever one, and a time traveler, no doubt, constrained to live within these very walls unless time should wipe you away?” He laughed slightly, clear cunning malice starting to percolate around him. “I hadn’t expected a mortal to be so well-versed in temporal mechanics, Lady Edge.” “I hadn’t expected an Entropic Immortal of your lack of power to get himself involved in temporal matters.” His toothy smile slowly went away as he stared at me unblinkingly, his care-free countenance slipping. “You aren’t going to be allowed to threaten the timeline, and the Inn clearly stands for another three thousand years. You either don’t have the power to destroy it, or there’s Immortals backing it which are beyond your power to affect… or your courage to provoke! “Your potential recruit is long annihilated. You can do nothing else, and messing with mortals on the Prime is against Immortal law, as I understand it. You are wasting your time here, even if time means nothing to you.” I looked him up and down, visually dismissive of him. “You’re also a fifth-dimensional being. A Time Portal that has trouble conveying us mortals around is going to be absolutely unusable by you.” Unauthorized tale usage: if you spot this story on Amazon, report the violation. “Well, well, well. A little mortal who thinks she knows some things.” There were shadows growing on and about him, starting with his eyes, which began to blacken. All friendliness was gone, and had turned into mounting malevolence. “You are absolutely right, of course. Immortal law forbids direct intervention on the mortal plane. However, that is only if we are caught!” Contrary to the threat in his voice, the way his Aura was starting to rise, and how Cirruluxul’s knees were shaking in mounting horror, I looked up and around in interest. “Oh, that is very, very good to know,” I said into the darkness that was gathering around him. “Do you mind if I use that?” He was a bit deep into his acting persona, and couldn’t help himself. “Mind if you use what?” he asked, rather nastily, his fingernails starting to slowly blacken, as did his teeth. “The fact Immortals can’t see what is going on inside here.” He blinked. lit up on , and the black pits of his eyes grew very wide, his anti-magic swarming out… went off on , and Roses and Skulls erupted and went for him. Supposedly Immortals were immune to all mortal magic, but immediately bypassed that. His Anti-Magic Aura had an excellent chance of stopping my magic, too, except sheathed my in power and cut through his Anti-Magic like it was butter, completely ignoring it and punching into his mortal form. With vivus, Banefire, and a LOT of Holy Force damage, along with the I’d ladled into while standing there. He exploded in mid-scream. Holy Force energies ravaged his body and soul with powers he’d never had to face in all his existence, pure anathema to everything that he was and represented. His mortal facade was torn apart, and the spirit within was blown completely apart as Immortal energies were sliced through and completely disrupted by the and . The whole world went white, and swallowed us up. --- I blinked, and opened my eyes. I was laying in a pit, washed white, square-shaped, exactly as deep as the basement of the Thisbean Inn. There was no Inn around us, completely wiped away and destroyed by the release of energy when I’d dusted that avatar of whoever, whatever. The walls were just hollowed-out stone in the ground, and nothing remained of the Inn itself… except the impassable wall of Time that had contained everything. That hadn’t been a simple destruction of an avatar, either. That thing had lost whatever amount of energy had been parceled out to its form, suffering complete annihilation and release. He wouldn’t even know what had happened, only that he’d suffered a crippling loss and not how or why it had occurred. However, a permanent loss meant he’d run into something far more powerful than he was, something capable of stripping that power from him, which meant he definitely did NOT want to come back here and stir that force up again, whatever it was. At least, that was my reasoning as I laid there, staring up at the sky. I looked over at a wheezing, and saw Cirruluxul in her dragon form, still out cold. She was several feet longer now than she’d been when I first met her, clearly aging towards her deep dragonsleep, ready to shed her scales and grow to the next size. She was also a lot more muscular than she’d been back then, basically having worked and invested herself into acquiring the equivalent of an Advanced Template, with +4 to all base Stats. Truly an exceptional dragon, if completely crushed by the power of an Immortal. I guessed that the lich was finally registered as missing, and his Patron had come looking for him. He still wasn’t going to know what had happened, but now he wouldn’t want to investigate, and would be thinking something out there was aware of him and his schemes, and had punished him severely for them. Healthy paranoia would be crippling him badly. Still, I had marked his Aura. The sky was moody and cloudy, but that was fine. I could feel the moon going down, the sky was lightening to grays and reds in the east, and dawn was coming. Time rolled, and magic set to work. Scattered dust dispersed through time wound back and began to gather. Carved blocks grew back into place on the stone all around us, and also under us, reforming something that had been completely annihilated. In less than a minute, the stones of the Thisbean Inn’s foundation were all in place, and the wood began to materialize and gather. Planks and arches, studs and boards materialized out of nowhere and fell into place in a kind of reverse explosion. Nails and screws zipped into place, splinters and flinders flashed back to restore broken boards, and the walls went up, then the roof, and the floors above us slammed down into place as the view of the sky above was cut away. I sat up slowly, and Cirru. She was at precisely 1 Health, hammered to within an inch of death, but not going over. Because of me, of course. I tapped her, and let the go off. Her eyes popped open as Sacred Healing energies poured through her, revitalizing and restoring the massive trauma and shock to her system. She went from hovering on the edge of death to back to full strength and vitality in but seconds, surging to her feet and looking around wildly for signs of the intruder. What she saw was the basement reforming around us, braces and struts moving into place. Now the racks of barrels and the doors and stairs were being rebuilt, wine bottles reforming, and spirits surging out of nowhere into reconstituting barrels and casks as everything was returned and restored to what it had been. We’d seen the restoration before, but nothing quite as dramatic as this. Cirru said nothing for the long minute it took for everything to snap back to place and form, and then a cycling as the dawn flitted across everything above us, visible through a side window. The Thisbean Inn had returned from being literally atomized. More stones swirled around us, and from nothing, the statues that were my Company, long-since acknowledged by the Inn as ‘parts of it’ by carefully tugging the magic to cover them, rebuilt themselves quickly and precisely into the dreaming forms of those waiting to get out of here, surrounding us once more in their careful rows of ready petrified bodies.

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Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven
Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven Author:RE Druin
BECMI (Biracial Edgelord Can Make Immortal!) : Prologue Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 1 – Babyhood Sucks Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 2 – We’re at Character Creation and trying to Minmax! Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 3 – Getting Around Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 4 – Setting Yourself Up for Success Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 5 – Immortal Lies, Mortal Meanings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 6 – Going Hunting above my Weight Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 7 – Material Acquisitions Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 8 – Out in the Darkness Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 9 – Picking up an Animal Friend Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 10 – Butter and Poison Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 11 – Item Creation Guidelines are Important Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 12 – A Stave to Edgelord By Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 13 – With This Staff in Hand... Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 14 – The not-Radiance, it's Gammathauma Radiation, Fools! Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 15 – Explosive News Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 16 – A Study in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 17 – The Elements of Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 18 – Busy as the Bugs Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 19 – What Lies Over There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 20 – Miraculous Possibilities Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 21 – The First Dragon Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 22 – Leveraging Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 23 – Working the Runes Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 24 – Runes and Running About Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 25 – Dwarven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 26 – Elven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 27 – Truth Cuts Deep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 28- A Wrinkle in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 29 – Time is Cruel Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 30 – New Recruits Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 31 – Out-Voted Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 32 – A Long Trek Backwards Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 33 – Warrior and Human Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 34 – The Alternate Road Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 35 – Past Misgivings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 36 – Another Pause in Proceedings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 37 – Stragglers Here and There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 38 – More Stragglers Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 39 - Outlawed Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 40 – Messing with History Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 41 – A Potent Future from the Past Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 42 – One Last Night before we Rest Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 43 – Filling Up the Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 44 – A Chill is Setting In Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 45 – A Cataclysm Cometh Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 46 – Some Time Alone Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 47 – A Dragon’s Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 48 – Draconic Discoveries Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 49 – The Long Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 50 – An Immortal Visitor Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 51 – Immortal Consequences Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 52 - Dragonsleep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 53 – It’s Time to Go Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 54 – A Final Pause Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 55 – The Last Sunken Hurdles Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 56 – A Scale of Time Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 57 – All the way here to Thisbean Inn Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 58 – Of Ladies and Kings Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 59 – The Guilty Parties Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 60 – Divining the Traitors Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 61 – Of Kings and Things Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 62 – The Ei is Watching Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 63 – A Roadmap to the Future Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 64 – Marked for Greatness Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 65 – About Time and the Land of Darkmoor Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 66 – Trade Matters Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 67 – First Contracts Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 68 – A Working Vacation? Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 69 – Preserved by Amber Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 70 – Getting into Positions Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 71 - Attendance Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 72 – Extending Influence Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 73 – Family Problems Counselor Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 74 – Timely Political Contributions Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 75 – Running Simulations Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 76 – Prepping for Adventure Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 77 – Module, er, Quest Accepted! Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 78 – The Batrachian Basilica Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 79 – Scouting Speed Run Complete Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 80 – Special Forces in Special Places Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 81 – A Failure of Technology Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 82 – Taking the Temple Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 83 – Setting the Spoils Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 84 – New Roads Forward Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 85 – Recruitment Drive Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 86 – Crazy Origins Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 87 – Off to the Weirwoods Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 88 – A Walk in the Moonlight Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 89 – Annihilation: Code Black Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 90 – To the Stormspires and Overstern Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 91 – The Man in the Middle Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 92 – The Forgebridge Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 93 – The Abbey Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 94 – Murder, She Witnessed Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 95 – The Hunt will begin Soon Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 96 – Recovering a Regent Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 97 – A Blood Price Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 98 – Ill Deeds come home to Roost Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 99 – Freedom Rides on Black Wings Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 100 – Beckoned by Fire Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 101 – Forged in a Lava Pit… Sounds Familiar?… Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 102 – I Wish for a Bad Ending to All This Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 103 – A Massacre for a Massacre Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 104 – The Judgment of Heaven Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 105 – Energy in Hand with Entropy Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 106 – Another Courting Call Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 107 – Ripple Effects Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 108 – Fiends for Demons Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 109 – Immortal Words and Wills Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 110 – The Collapse of the Khirifi Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 111 – Intervention of the Elders Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 112 – The Roads to Immortality Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 113 – A Road to the Eternal Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 114 – The End of the Khirifi Empire Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 115 – More Imperial Ambitions Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 116 – Conjured Doom Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 117 – Deathly Bequests Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 118 – On a Higher Cause Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 119 – An Expansion of Strength Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 120 – Immediate Plans Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 121 – At the Tower of Daffid the Red Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 122 – Fiery Food leads to Fond Farewells Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 123 – Fallen from the Stars Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 124 – Diplomatic Dealings Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 125 – Inside the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 126 – Hearts at Ease Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 127 – Discussions of Consequences Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 128 – Waking from a Bad Dream Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 129 – The Destiny of the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 130 – A Call to Battle Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 131 – A Letter of Blood and Souls Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 132 – Where We are Going and What We are Doing Sep 25th, 2025
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