BECMI Chapter 104 – The Judgment of Heaven

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They were cowering before me, for good reason. It was late in the evening, and this was the third and last of the forts that the Khirifi had put up here in the northern Elb lands. The soldiers were all dead, burning away to crimson dust and white smears from screaming Skulls them out wherever they were. A number of homes were on fire, their windows shattered, and the slaves left here to serve the Khirifi were clutching fallen weapons and glaring with hate at those who were still alive. Those were the civilian families of the soldiers here, spouses (mostly women), children, and some elderly who’d come along, mostly as instructors for the young. All of them were in the center of the fort, ringed by grimly expectant Elbers as Duum glided down near-vertically, a level of maneuverability not natural to even magical beasts, and alighted weightlessly on the stones. While some of the children were crying in fear, most were ashen-faced and silent. They had dominated the Elbers for most of a decade now, treated them like dogs to be whipped and beaten and killed for the slightest defiance. They had not imagined the tables could be turned so suddenly. Whatever the gray-haired matron in charge of them was about to say faded awkwardly when she saw my eyes and the Skulls hovering around me. The last thing that came to mind when looking at me was mercy and clemency, especially when the Skulls were obviously those of the spirits of those you were responsible for murdering! Edgelord has to edge, after all. Just a wee bit of illusion on the magic... I stated in their own language, the work of but an hour with a native back in Darkmoor City during my weapons training. My inflection was exquisite, contemptuous, scornful, and quite cruel. Roses blossomed around me, swelling in height, black edged in crimson, their Thorns ablaze with potent magical energies whose Holiness made it difficult for these uncaring souls to look upon. I announced, with a great deal of expectant schadenfreude, given the amount of Red and Purple I was seeing among the adults… and not a few of the children. The went out, and now the screams arose as a score and more of screaming Skulls exploded through the mass of them. Bodies blew apart into crimson and black ash, unwhite flames reached up to drag down the writhing spirits left behind, and sepulchral cries and wails faded away into the ether. When it faded, I was utterly unsurprised that there was not a single pureblood Khirifi left alive, only a handful of mixed-bloods shaking in the middle of the ground stained white. Their Elber mothers were clutching them in terror as they stared at the results of the executions and me. I addressed the mothers, before turning eyes on children who’d likely been abused on both sides of the spectrum, one as traitors, the other as inferiors. I will show you all the mercy that you showed your own.” The rage and glee apparent on the faces of the former Elb slaves faded away at my icy words. I wasn’t going to allow them to kill these few women and their children, and they were looking right at the price they were going to pay if they proved to be like the Khirifi. Unauthorized use: this story is on Amazon without permission from the author. Report any sightings. And I was working with him, which I knew was going to be an absolutely huge factor in his favor. Duum beat his wings once and blew for the sky with impossible agility, shocking them even more than his vertical descent had. His wings furled and wrapped as he twisted and realigned himself, and was suddenly shooting off southeast, close enough to survey the road with , not to be spotted by anyone not so gifted with magic. The Great Warding Swamp had been a natural defense against invasion from the west, but it hadn’t done the Elbers much good when they lost their unity and the Khirifi picked them apart and turned them against one another, seizing the only good road across the swamp. Now, it was one of their key supply points, sending goods both east and west across the swamp to their outposts as they were needed, harvested from the swamp and the farms along its edges, and what little trade they got at the ports. They wouldn’t be sending on any real supplies soon enough. ------- I felt them coming from a great distance away. is really good at seeing Evil, being at IX+1 as it was when I made it . Soul Eaters being Evil incarnate, depraved even by the standards of Fiends, made seeing them like seeing the only black blots on the whiteness of the world as to how seriously they drew the attention of the spell. Minor spells couldn’t affect them, so they likely thought they couldn’t be sensed like that, and they were for now. Recundrik was partially on fire below me from where I’d had to reduce a couple fortifications to dig out the defenders within. No pureblood Khirifi remained alive within its walls now. A twice had swallowed the entire town and wiped them all in a ball of fire likely seen for miles around in the night. Any survivors I had d down with extreme prejudice, watching their hopes shrivel and die in the night as they realized what had become of their friends and family as the Silver flames took them… and didn’t harm a single one of the native Elbers, nor hurt nary a dog or horse. Ash and white dust, warring in the streets and homes, brought ruin to yet one more of the Khirifi garrisons in the north, leaving only three remaining. Two, actually. King Antius had taken advantage of my rampage across the west and led an army into Isoford, armed with some of the new weapons from the Batrachian Basilica and a from Brittabelle ( into Darkmoor City and then back to the Weirwood Court for this) leaping his army across hundreds of miles to right inside their own walls. Yeah, Valence IX’s had never been used in combat in the North before, and they turned the tactical and strategic situation on its head. It was also why the and defenses I’d sold to the interested loyal spellcasters of the North were snatched up so swiftly. The broad defenses against magical attack were not perfect, but they closed a LOT of vulnerabilities off. The Khirifi didn’t have anything resembling a respectable magical Tradition, since the matriarchal priesthood kept an iron grip on power, and obedience was valued far, far over innovation. What innovation they gained they stole from those they conquered… but you couldn’t steal magical ability like that, you had to nurture it or pay for it. No mage in their right mind was going to take service with a bunch of barbarian fanatics like them, and they certainly had crap for skilled mages, with the one I’d killed in the volcano pit room the strongest I’d seen. I’d not seen any who could Summon multiple Soul Eaters like this, especially of such power, but it didn’t matter much to me. Duum could outfly them, they didn’t present a serious threat to me regardless of their size and improved defenses… and I wasn’t going to spare them, either. Duum leisurely turned around and stopped on a dime, wings poised high, holding in place like magical winged monsters aren’t supposed to be able to do, facing the five Soul Eaters streaking in on the winds right toward me. I’d felt the pressure of something trying to search and find me, not knowing what it was looking for and unable to grab on to me. Indeed, there were no Khirifi survivors of that debacle who were available to question, and even the efreet had been extinguished. Vivus and the Land weren’t kind to things that devoured souls or aided in the same. The stuff they’d been doing had been shaking time and magic, and the rebound when I gave the Land the chance to administer justice was pretty horrible. Invisible I inquired of the Soul Eaters as they closed within three hundred paces of me, bringing all of them up short. A giant Rose with no visible source spiraled into existence around me, black and crimson and dripping Wrathfire with all the nasty Primal-Divine-Arcane Kickers for their viewing enjoyment. Thorns blazed on ebony stalks and Burned as the vines twisted and turned to track each of the Soul Eaters perfectly. The demons grimaced to see them, as well they should. Soul Eaters qualified as the worst of both Fiends and Undead to the right magicks, and they had no idea how hard I could hit them with what was going to be coming at them. Immune to I-IV Valences? That was why I could spells and Upcast them! was quietly seething along the waiting -not -nopers, hidden within the Force structure of the spell while the distracting Kickers with all their many energies types distracted and demanded attention, especially +5d6 of Holy Kickers swirling around the many Skulls leering at the incoming Fiends hungrily. Wasn’t supposed to be any Holy stuff around this world. They were going to learn some hard lessons about moral choices. came the bellow across the distance, carried on charnel winds that echoed with the lamentations of damned souls, wailing and trying to wind their way into my thoughts. My own Skulls jeered at them. the seeming leader of the other four demanded of me, all of them spreading out and approaching carefully… which did require that they get closer to one another as they neared me. I returned icily in the most cutting, arrogant, and unafraid terms I could.

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Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven
Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven Author:RE Druin
BECMI (Biracial Edgelord Can Make Immortal!) : Prologue Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 1 – Babyhood Sucks Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 2 – We’re at Character Creation and trying to Minmax! Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 3 – Getting Around Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 4 – Setting Yourself Up for Success Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 5 – Immortal Lies, Mortal Meanings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 6 – Going Hunting above my Weight Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 7 – Material Acquisitions Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 8 – Out in the Darkness Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 9 – Picking up an Animal Friend Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 10 – Butter and Poison Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 11 – Item Creation Guidelines are Important Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 12 – A Stave to Edgelord By Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 13 – With This Staff in Hand... Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 14 – The not-Radiance, it's Gammathauma Radiation, Fools! Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 15 – Explosive News Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 16 – A Study in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 17 – The Elements of Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 18 – Busy as the Bugs Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 19 – What Lies Over There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 20 – Miraculous Possibilities Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 21 – The First Dragon Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 22 – Leveraging Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 23 – Working the Runes Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 24 – Runes and Running About Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 25 – Dwarven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 26 – Elven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 27 – Truth Cuts Deep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 28- A Wrinkle in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 29 – Time is Cruel Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 30 – New Recruits Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 31 – Out-Voted Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 32 – A Long Trek Backwards Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 33 – Warrior and Human Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 34 – The Alternate Road Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 35 – Past Misgivings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 36 – Another Pause in Proceedings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 37 – Stragglers Here and There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 38 – More Stragglers Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 39 - Outlawed Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 40 – Messing with History Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 41 – A Potent Future from the Past Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 42 – One Last Night before we Rest Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 43 – Filling Up the Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 44 – A Chill is Setting In Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 45 – A Cataclysm Cometh Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 46 – Some Time Alone Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 47 – A Dragon’s Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 48 – Draconic Discoveries Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 49 – The Long Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 50 – An Immortal Visitor Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 51 – Immortal Consequences Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 52 - Dragonsleep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 53 – It’s Time to Go Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 54 – A Final Pause Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 55 – The Last Sunken Hurdles Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 56 – A Scale of Time Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 57 – All the way here to Thisbean Inn Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 58 – Of Ladies and Kings Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 59 – The Guilty Parties Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 60 – Divining the Traitors Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 61 – Of Kings and Things Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 62 – The Ei is Watching Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 63 – A Roadmap to the Future Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 64 – Marked for Greatness Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 65 – About Time and the Land of Darkmoor Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 66 – Trade Matters Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 67 – First Contracts Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 68 – A Working Vacation? Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 69 – Preserved by Amber Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 70 – Getting into Positions Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 71 - Attendance Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 72 – Extending Influence Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 73 – Family Problems Counselor Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 74 – Timely Political Contributions Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 75 – Running Simulations Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 76 – Prepping for Adventure Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 77 – Module, er, Quest Accepted! Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 78 – The Batrachian Basilica Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 79 – Scouting Speed Run Complete Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 80 – Special Forces in Special Places Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 81 – A Failure of Technology Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 82 – Taking the Temple Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 83 – Setting the Spoils Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 84 – New Roads Forward Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 85 – Recruitment Drive Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 86 – Crazy Origins Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 87 – Off to the Weirwoods Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 88 – A Walk in the Moonlight Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 89 – Annihilation: Code Black Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 90 – To the Stormspires and Overstern Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 91 – The Man in the Middle Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 92 – The Forgebridge Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 93 – The Abbey Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 94 – Murder, She Witnessed Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 95 – The Hunt will begin Soon Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 96 – Recovering a Regent Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 97 – A Blood Price Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 98 – Ill Deeds come home to Roost Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 99 – Freedom Rides on Black Wings Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 100 – Beckoned by Fire Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 101 – Forged in a Lava Pit… Sounds Familiar?… Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 102 – I Wish for a Bad Ending to All This Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 103 – A Massacre for a Massacre Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 104 – The Judgment of Heaven Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 105 – Energy in Hand with Entropy Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 106 – Another Courting Call Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 107 – Ripple Effects Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 108 – Fiends for Demons Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 109 – Immortal Words and Wills Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 110 – The Collapse of the Khirifi Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 111 – Intervention of the Elders Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 112 – The Roads to Immortality Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 113 – A Road to the Eternal Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 114 – The End of the Khirifi Empire Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 115 – More Imperial Ambitions Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 116 – Conjured Doom Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 117 – Deathly Bequests Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 118 – On a Higher Cause Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 119 – An Expansion of Strength Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 120 – Immediate Plans Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 121 – At the Tower of Daffid the Red Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 122 – Fiery Food leads to Fond Farewells Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 123 – Fallen from the Stars Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 124 – Diplomatic Dealings Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 125 – Inside the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 126 – Hearts at Ease Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 127 – Discussions of Consequences Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 128 – Waking from a Bad Dream Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 129 – The Destiny of the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 130 – A Call to Battle Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 131 – A Letter of Blood and Souls Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 132 – Where We are Going and What We are Doing Sep 25th, 2025
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