BECMI Chapter 54 – A Final Pause

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“Well done, everyone,” I added as the Salute to Aru and the Dawn finished. I pushed the door closed, and two elves zipped up to stuff cloth from the closets in around the door and stave off the leaking draft coming through it. “Fifteen clears is our new record. We traveled over seven hundred years backwards. If we can match that pace, our next series might just get us out of here.” There were cheers behind us at the news. I glanced at the officers. “Notice it?” I asked shortly. “The rim was much shorter than before,” Prince Ukker declared instantly, with a dwarf’s eye for stone. “Even with the snow and ice covering everything, it is plain the land has changed.” “We are coming up on the Doom of Darkmoor. The Ruin was devastating. The earthquakes supposedly lasted for centuries.” I looked down at the ground, and smashed butt down on the ice beneath us. It cracked and fractured under the force of the magical Staff, again as I cracked it again. I reached down, and pulled up a block of ice a good six inches thick, about what we expected by the door. I blew on it, and the dirty, frosted ice cleared up like glass under . A couple frozen small fish and what looked like a shrimp and waterbugs were all visible amid the dirt and small stones inside it. “At some point, this place is going to be underwater. This whole area was likely blasted into a crater and then shattered with tectonic movements and earthquakes.” I’d already lost most of them and just continued. “Based on our future, I’m presuming that Immortals intervened and lifted this entire area back above the surface, using the opportunity to create a vast underworld of cave systems in the area at the same time. “If you have not deduced it, this Inn used to be located in Darkmoor, and the Bleaklands were where Darkmoor once rose. A cruel fate, to be marked as a place for savages to dwell.” They hadn’t really thought about it, and there were murmurs of wonder around. “Wait, this Inn is taking us all the way back to legendary Darkmoor?” Bjorn gasped in disbelief. “Yes. This Ice Age about us is the direct result of the Ruin of Darkmoor. It took two thousand years to settle down and start the process of recovery, and that was likely with the Immortals helping the process along a great deal.” As true Ice Ages of this severity tended to last for many thousands of years and affect a whole planet, not just an area. “So… we will be coming in while the Inn is underwater?” Prince Ukker inquired carefully. “Probably. I will have to take steps. If we are lucky, we will not have to do much fighting, as overcoming the water itself is likely the barrier. Something may have taken up residence and will have to be killed, however. We are probably fortunate that the doorway would limit the size of what can enter. Finding a kraken in here would not be fun.” There were grim chuckles from all around. “Giant octopi are still possible,” Hargold spoke up, getting everyone’s attention. “Their bodies are very flexible and can fit in small places. I have seen them when their bodies were brought back after attacking a longship!” “Yes. As well as shark-men, eel-folk, ray-folk, crab-folk, and worse things in the depths. Size is much in the seas, but it is not everything,” I agreed. “Crab-folk?” Prince Ukker asked in disbelief. “Aye, heard of those, along isolated beaches on the ocean,” Bjorn nodded strongly. “But… we are hundreds of miles from the nearest ocean…” I held up the ice block in my hand. “Shrimp don’t dwell in fresh water, Skifnerson. The world was likely a different place back then. For instance, where are most cities of humans built?” They all blinked at me, then looked around. “On the water,” Speaker Eryis spoke up. “Without water, human cities do not survive long.” “There are no rivers or lakes or anything within a hundred miles of this location of note, certainly not enough to support a city that would need an inn of this size and quality. The Ruin of Darkmoor changed the very world. If you go look upstairs at the maps in the books of the owner’s room, you will find that this Inn was once located in the city of Darkmoor, a port city located on a sea and river that is no longer there. “The Immortals made great changes to these lands. We will be entering a land that literally does not exist any more, wiped from all but myth and legend.” Ensure your favorite authors get the support they deserve. Read this novel on the original website. “But… to be under water, you must be under the level of the sea,” Bjorn spoke up, frowning. “We are… far inland, and not even close to sea level!” he pointed out. “And you have noticed that we are in the middle of a crater in the middle of the Bleaklands, the lands having risen up around this Inn. Indeed, from above, this crater is very, very circular, as if something monumentally heavy were weighing upon it and not allowing it to rise… and yet broken on the ground enough that the water simply drains elsewhere, not filling in what should certainly be a lake of some sort.” “Time weighs heavy here,” Cirruluxul said, walking up to join us. “How would the Inn have sunk, if it is frozen in time and too heavy for even the rising earth to move it?” “As time weighs heavy and does permit it to rise, the Inn would drag the earth up to reform its foundation every morning, before likely falling from a height and ending up on the sea floor… until the following morning, when it would disappear and be rebuilt up where it was meant to be, pulling at the earth with the force, dragging the land back up to support it relentlessly, and with it, the surrounding territory. The Immortals likely took advantage of it to do their rebuilding, since it only pulled up the land, and not the sea. “It likely took years, but eventually the Inn reformed the very land it was sitting upon, and the land continued to rise around it even after it did so. Immortals or momentum, who knows. Most of the water that falls upon these lands drains away into the deep tunnels, it does not flow out of the lands. Immortal handiwork, or likely the Bleaklands would be a far more bountiful and wet land than they are.” “Such thoughts are too heavy for me,” Bjorn finally admitted. “I am more concerned why we could not return to our own times.” “As are we all,” Speaker Eryis chimed up, and they all nodded in agreement. “The coins of the till never changed. That means I never gave them to anyone to take with them as a memento when they step out of the Inn, which I fully intend to do. I watched the number of coins very closely.” They all grimaced. “Can you think of a reason why, Lady Edge?” Prince Ukker asked, clearly unhappy with the fact. “A conjecture is that we close the loop when we arrive as far in the past as we can go, and the temporal loop either traps us in the past, or it anchors to the furthest point that it can, the last time an outsider entered the Inn and took the Portal,” I replied quietly. They all winced. “And Mistress comes from further in the future than any of us,” Cirruluxul said firmly. “So, we will be able to exit in the past, or in the future you come from, Mistress?” “One of the two, definitely. Both, maybe. But it is far more dangerous to live in the past than the future. Changing the past is a nasty thing that can easily wipe you out of existence, and should not be done. Going to my future is a guarantee of freedom and no consequences with Time. Staying in the past, well… I am ultimately unsure of how much should be risked, and do not advise it at this point.” “The Rukheim of the future sounded like a great nation,” Prince Ukker remarked quietly. “And the dwarves a plentiful people known in many lands.” “The elves have a nation of their own, by your words. I would live to see it!” Speaker Eryis nodded. “We are already counted as dead by our kin. If a new land and life is something we must forge, at least let it be interesting and worthy to know!” “Well-spoken,” I nodded to her. “I pray that I am wrong, but I must doubt it. If I am… then the past we are returning to is different from our own, and nothing matters what we do, our rivers of time diverge at the end of the loop. What that means for Time itself is something doubtless planned by the Immortals themselves to see what happens…” Something powerful playing with alternate realities at that point. “And that will be true if the coin endures?” Cirruluxul asked, interested in this. The coin that we threw out, always from the future, which the tides of time wore away. “Yes. If the coin is washed away, then our past is absolute, and the future is our only choice. If it endures… then the instant we throw it, we are in a new timestream, and we are changing a past that will have no effect on our future, like stepping to the other side of a flowing river. Our future will be anchored to that past, the time loops will close, and we will be free one way or another.” “Then it is out of our hands, and we can only worry about when we get there,” Hargold threw up his hands in relief. “Let us all survive to then, and we can decide what to do when we reach it!” “Well-said!” I agreed, as heads nodded all around. “I will be making efforts to make sure any underwater arrivals we have go rapidly in our favor. The lunar cycle will be miserable enough, but if things go well, in a month, we will be free.” ------- I made another Sim, of course, just to give me another anchor and historical point of reference in my home time stream. If they survived to the future, they knew of and could join up with my Sims there. If not, they had instructions on where and how to leave things behind for me to pick up in the future. There was a lot of swimming training, and everyone, knowing we were going to be underwater at some point, took it seriously. I had to heat the pool up with braziers, but soon enough the warmth of the waters meant it was a favorite place for everyone to spend time, and since it was such good exercise, everyone undertook it diligently, even the dwarves. If some of the women took the opportunity to dress rather scantily in public, that was on them. I had ‘grown up’ faster than a normal elf, of course, my dhampyr blood having its way, and I filled out more than a normal elf, too, almost reaching human dimensions in the chest area… which was annoying and earned me a whole lot of dropping male eyes right along, but now it was all real and not faked and I had to live with it. Eh, it wasn’t like it was a bad thing, and if it wasn’t my style, I was the granddaughter of a vampire and the daughter of a shadenelf. Everything about me wasn’t Ael’s style, so I’d make do with what I had, and have as much fun with it as I could. The lunar month went by smoothly, and soon enough, at least compared to forty years of waiting, it was time to go once more.

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Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven
Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven Author:RE Druin
BECMI (Biracial Edgelord Can Make Immortal!) : Prologue Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 1 – Babyhood Sucks Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 2 – We’re at Character Creation and trying to Minmax! Sep 12th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 3 – Getting Around Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 4 – Setting Yourself Up for Success Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 5 – Immortal Lies, Mortal Meanings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 6 – Going Hunting above my Weight Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 7 – Material Acquisitions Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 8 – Out in the Darkness Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 9 – Picking up an Animal Friend Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 10 – Butter and Poison Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 11 – Item Creation Guidelines are Important Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 12 – A Stave to Edgelord By Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 13 – With This Staff in Hand... Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 14 – The not-Radiance, it's Gammathauma Radiation, Fools! Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 15 – Explosive News Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 16 – A Study in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 17 – The Elements of Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 18 – Busy as the Bugs Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 19 – What Lies Over There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 20 – Miraculous Possibilities Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 21 – The First Dragon Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 22 – Leveraging Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 23 – Working the Runes Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 24 – Runes and Running About Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 25 – Dwarven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 26 – Elven Hospitality Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 27 – Truth Cuts Deep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 28- A Wrinkle in Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 29 – Time is Cruel Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 30 – New Recruits Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 31 – Out-Voted Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 32 – A Long Trek Backwards Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 33 – Warrior and Human Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 34 – The Alternate Road Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 35 – Past Misgivings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 36 – Another Pause in Proceedings Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 37 – Stragglers Here and There Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 38 – More Stragglers Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 39 - Outlawed Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 40 – Messing with History Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 41 – A Potent Future from the Past Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 42 – One Last Night before we Rest Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 43 – Filling Up the Time Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 44 – A Chill is Setting In Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 45 – A Cataclysm Cometh Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 46 – Some Time Alone Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 47 – A Dragon’s Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 48 – Draconic Discoveries Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 49 – The Long Years Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 50 – An Immortal Visitor Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 51 – Immortal Consequences Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 52 - Dragonsleep Sep 17th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 53 – It’s Time to Go Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 54 – A Final Pause Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 55 – The Last Sunken Hurdles Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 56 – A Scale of Time Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 57 – All the way here to Thisbean Inn Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 58 – Of Ladies and Kings Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 59 – The Guilty Parties Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 60 – Divining the Traitors Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 61 – Of Kings and Things Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 62 – The Ei is Watching Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 63 – A Roadmap to the Future Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 64 – Marked for Greatness Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 65 – About Time and the Land of Darkmoor Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 66 – Trade Matters Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 67 – First Contracts Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 68 – A Working Vacation? Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 69 – Preserved by Amber Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 70 – Getting into Positions Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 71 - Attendance Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 72 – Extending Influence Sep 19th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 73 – Family Problems Counselor Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 74 – Timely Political Contributions Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 75 – Running Simulations Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 76 – Prepping for Adventure Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 77 – Module, er, Quest Accepted! Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 78 – The Batrachian Basilica Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 79 – Scouting Speed Run Complete Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 80 – Special Forces in Special Places Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 81 – A Failure of Technology Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 82 – Taking the Temple Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 83 – Setting the Spoils Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 84 – New Roads Forward Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 85 – Recruitment Drive Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 86 – Crazy Origins Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 87 – Off to the Weirwoods Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 88 – A Walk in the Moonlight Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 89 – Annihilation: Code Black Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 90 – To the Stormspires and Overstern Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 91 – The Man in the Middle Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 92 – The Forgebridge Sep 21st, 2025
BECMI Chapter 93 – The Abbey Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 94 – Murder, She Witnessed Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 95 – The Hunt will begin Soon Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 96 – Recovering a Regent Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 97 – A Blood Price Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 98 – Ill Deeds come home to Roost Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 99 – Freedom Rides on Black Wings Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 100 – Beckoned by Fire Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 101 – Forged in a Lava Pit… Sounds Familiar?… Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 102 – I Wish for a Bad Ending to All This Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 103 – A Massacre for a Massacre Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 104 – The Judgment of Heaven Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 105 – Energy in Hand with Entropy Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 106 – Another Courting Call Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 107 – Ripple Effects Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 108 – Fiends for Demons Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 109 – Immortal Words and Wills Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 110 – The Collapse of the Khirifi Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 111 – Intervention of the Elders Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 112 – The Roads to Immortality Sep 23rd, 2025
BECMI Chapter 113 – A Road to the Eternal Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 114 – The End of the Khirifi Empire Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 115 – More Imperial Ambitions Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 116 – Conjured Doom Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 117 – Deathly Bequests Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 118 – On a Higher Cause Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 119 – An Expansion of Strength Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 120 – Immediate Plans Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 121 – At the Tower of Daffid the Red Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 122 – Fiery Food leads to Fond Farewells Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 123 – Fallen from the Stars Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 124 – Diplomatic Dealings Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 125 – Inside the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 126 – Hearts at Ease Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 127 – Discussions of Consequences Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 128 – Waking from a Bad Dream Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 129 – The Destiny of the Barhund Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 130 – A Call to Battle Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 131 – A Letter of Blood and Souls Sep 25th, 2025
BECMI Chapter 132 – Where We are Going and What We are Doing Sep 25th, 2025
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