Chapter 161: Obstacles to Progress

Words : 1951 Updated : Sep 27th, 2025
Will heard Jason’s footsteps, heartbeat and breathing approach. He was excited about something. He was also carrying something composed of dense miasma in his hand. “Will, check this out!” Jason shouted as he jumped up on top of the rattling wagon “Whatcha got?” Will asked, glancing over. “There’s a Myth on this Floor, and I caught it!” Jason said, brandishing what looked like a tear-shaped opaline gemstone about the size of a coin. Will could easily picture it slotting onto a sword, cuirass, belt, or whatever. it was just small and pretty enough to basically fit anywhere without being too out of place. Will accepted the object and peered at it intently, waiting for The System to provide further detail. “What do you think!?” “It’s awesome. Priceless even. You could probably name your price if you sold it to the Lord of this Floor.” “You’re not gonna…use it?” Jason asked, wilting as though Will had attacked him personally. “I don’t plan on spending a lot of time on this Floor. All the benefits are helpful in one way or another, but I’m reluctant to put that on any of my Set items. I’m not sure how they would react to being modified a second time. Lord Bakton though, he could use something like this to push the Fae Lords off their entrenched positions and open this Floor up for Climber habitation. It could become the new Akul. He would get much better use out of it, simply because he lives here full-time.” Will said, handing it back. “One of our jobs as Climbers is to look at the bigger picture and see if there’s a way to drop a ladder down after us so that other Climbers can follow.” “Hmm…I see.” Jason said, pursing his lips. “Whatcha thinkin?” Will asked. “The Eighth Floor is a death trap. This place couldn’t become the new Akul as long as the 8th Floor acts as a barrier. If I went to Akul and started a rumor about someone who cleared the entire undead Floor, I wonder if I could make a series of Relic Seeds that would either allow people to stay on that floor semi-permanently, or clean it up a bit, make it less dangerous.” “If you could, that would redefine the Tower. Might as well give it a shot when we get to Bakton’s Stronghold.” Will said. “There’s a few thousand people there at any given time. It’s one of the hubs of trade between the extreme floors and the lower floors.” Nobody wanted to travel through the 8th Floor if they didn’t have to, so some ambitious merchants made fortunes buying ultra-rare Relics and Sacrifices at Bakton’s Stronghold from high level Climbers in exchange for food and supplies, then taking on the risk of transporting the goods down to Akul themselves. That meant they might be able to get some good deals on Relics and Sacrifices on their way through Bakton’s Stronghold. The amount of money and manpower it would require to make the passage up to the Ninth Floor safe…Will wasn’t sure it even existed. It was the random Shuffling of Climbers as they took doors from Floor to Floor that made things unpredictable. Unpredictable meant dangerous. If people could freely travel up and down, like they could in the first 5 Floors, humans could actually get a toehold. It seemed like the design of the Tower was to deliberately filter people out, creating unnatural choke-points. If anyone could figure out a way to bypass the Key Sites, why not the civilization that had designed the last two floors? That had corrupted the Miasma of the 8th and 9th Floor? Will tucked the Relic Seed in his Dimensional Storage for safekeeping and let Jason go about his business, seeing him off before climbing down off the wagon and going over to where Reese was. “Hey Reese,” Will said, approaching the emaciated immortal sailor. The man was starting to actually put on some weight eating the daily rations. “Eh?” Reese glanced up from where he was giving a demonstration on how to filter clay from mud. “How come nobody ever made a Relic that can create a Door between Floors and stuck it on top of a Key Site?” “It’s been attempted, but The Tower makes a quest to destroy it.” “Why?” Will asked. “It would allow supplies and Climbers to travel up and down in huge quantities.” “A few reasons.” Reese said, ticking off his fingers. Reading on this site? This novel is published elsewhere. Support the author by seeking out the original. “Reason number one: The Tower is stupid. It’s not capable of a great deal of adaptive thinking, so it can’t reason that allowing Climbers to block Key Site to power a portal would be a benefit on average due to an improvement in infrastructure which would allow humans to clear deeper Key Sites that they currently struggle with. Reason number two: an unregulated, Climber-made Door would probably lack some of the safeguards that the Tower has, which might allow pathogens from Floors like the previous one to spread. Imagine every floor being a barren wasteland filled with undead. “And reason number three: The amount of technological advancement required to create these Doors require a couple days, at least, which makes it very rare that a society ever figures out how to do it in the first place. The people from the last Floor were close, but they self-destructed before they could pull it off.” “Coils, I think you mean.” Will said. “Yeah, that.” Reese said, snapping his fingers. “…Is there a way to poke holes between Floors?” Will asked, thinking back to the merchant route between the 1st and 5th Floors. Giant holes in the sky. “Absolutely not,” Reese said, shaking his head vigorously. “Not only is that impossible, Such a thing would be catastrophic.” “There’s a series of holes between the First and Fifth Floor.” Will said. “Merchant caravans use them.” “Buuuuh….” Reese’s eyes went wide. “That’s…not…good. When did happen!?” “I’unno.” Will shrugged. He didn’t but he suspected it was during the last Coil, while Reese was trapped in his coffin. Which meant the last guy who oversaw the end of the Coil had probably been involved. Will made a mental note to research the man’s lore further. If the suggestion about the infected hand was anything to go on, there might be parallels that William could draw from for inspiration. “The holes in the Floors the only reason that Akul is as big as it is, though, so if we as a species want to push deeper into the Tower, we might have to break some rules,” Will said. “Assuming it doesn’t kill us all,” Reese replied. “Yes, assuming that.” Will nodded before saying his goodbyes and returning to the roof of the wagon, studying the beautiful landscape as it slid by. When he stopped and really looked at it, the traces of design in the all-encompassing forest weren’t hard to spot. There were babbling brooks with gravel banks where a group of people could relax and cool their heels in the stream or fish, the area flanked by bushes just high enough to grant privacy. This arrangement of features wasn’t unusual in an of itself, but the way the stream zigzagged across the land, creating hundreds of identical picturesque locations…that was deeply suspicious. The trees were evenly spaced. None of them were competing with each other for space, as though a gardener had carefully measured out the ideal distance. Every time the caravan broke out of the forest into a meadow, they were struck by the sight of the rolling hills catching the sun’s rays and glittering like jewels, leaves lightly misted by a conveniently placed waterfall. The first time it happened, everyone gasped with awe. And the second. Every time after that, the gasps were less numerous, and less appreciative as – perhaps subconsciously – the caravan began to understand that the beauty they were beholding was manufactured. It was still pretty, and Will could see why people would want to settle down here. Even manufactured beauty is beauty. Some dead things. An impassible briar patch. A fallen tree destroying one of its own children. An inconvenient boulder. Beetle kill. Diseased burls. Mosquitos. None of those things existed to lend a sense of reality and consequence, leading to an eerie, disconnected feeling that seeped in through the corner of your eye. Will thought. Will cocked his head to the side as he followed the train of thought. The other idea that had been rattling around in Will’s head was that the Fae were the descendants of the aristocrats who had been trapped here when the floor below was overwhelmed by undead. Will thought to himself. It was an intriguing question. Were the Fae spawned from the miasma, little garden gnomes that got loose and gained power, or distant cousins of humans? When Will approached Reese about that, the man shrugged, stating that he’d never been allowed on the 9th Floor after it had become a haven for the aristocracy. When he knew it, it had been mountainous and full of natural resources, not worn down to rolling hills, meadows and creeks. By the time he hit the Floor again several coils later, the fae had already established themselves, their origin shrouded in mystery. Likely by choice. The less people knew about their origin, the less leverage they had in negotiations. Will thought. When they stopped for the night, Will decided to do some of Loth’s ‘science’. Loth liked his hypothesis and joined in the experiment. Anna had a blank expression when Will told her about it, but cheerfully provided a rabbit-and-potato stew for them. Through some creative use of Will’s Abilities and Loth’s insects, they messed up the perfection of the surroundings, rearranging a few trees to be too close to each other, messing up the flow of the river, and creating various other eyesores. Once they’d set the bait out, Loth and Will hid and waited. …It didn’t take long. Once the sun went down, thousands of tiny fae with wings crawled out of the earth, swarming around the egregiously shuffled landscape. Bigger ones, like the one in the whisky bottle, acted as foremen, coordinating the teams of insect-like fae the size of Will’s thumb, shouting terse commands to their brethren and bitterly shaking their heads. Will and Loth watched in fascination, nursing their stew from behind the blind as the unsightliness they’d caused was subtly smoothed out, the landscape returning to picturesque perfection. “You realize this doesn’t that they were descended from garden gnomes, only that they are compelled to keep the land.” Loth said as they left. “You’re not wrong, but this is strong evidence that there may be a link between the curated environment itself and the Debt system.” Will replied. “True.” Loth mused. “This requires further testing.” The answer: Not well. When they arrived at Bakton’s Stronghold the next afternoon, Will realized that he could count the number of farms around it on both hands. The farms were stuck tight to the walls of the Stronghold, growing hardy greens and a few fruit trees to stave off scurvy, while a stream of hunters carried prey over their shoulders from the forests beyond. It seemed as though wild game was plentiful on the 9th Floor. More than plentiful, it was a staple. Will thought, leading the caravan towards the Stronghold.

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Contents
The Legend of William Oh
The Legend of William Oh Author:Macronomicon
Chapter 1: He who has no Class Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 2: Life Goals Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 3: Hype Man Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 4: Escape Room Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 5: Resourceful Climber Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 6: Attrition Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 7: Casualties Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 8: Establishing Quest Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 9: Spelunking Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 10: First Impressions Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 11: Fighting Retreat Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 12: Kingly Repose Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 13: Guy’s Shopping Trip Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 14: Promote Synergy! Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 15: Camel Abuse Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 16: Ants on a Log Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 17: Stoking The Fire Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 18: Run boy Run Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 19: 7th Time’s the Charm Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 20: Rent-a-miracle Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 21: No Refunds Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 22: An Expert Opinion Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 23: Ice Cave Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 24: Fancy Meeting You Here Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 25: Off-Build Relics Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 26: Cling-ons Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 27: Fame Attracts Crazy Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 28: Why Baker Girls Specifically Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 29: Boot Swap Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 30: The Dead City Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 31: Score of a Lifetime Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 32: Leadership Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 33: Splitting the Loot Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 34: Thorns Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 35: Don’t Forget The Kobold Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 36: Fancy Inn Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 37: Knowledge is Pain, Power, and Purpose Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 38: The Immediate Plan Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 39: Meet the Family Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 40: Sparring Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 41: Blue-fire Eyes Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 42: Infiltrator and Saboteur go for a Walk Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 43: Build Tweaking Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 44: Floor 4 Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 45: Ambush Ethics Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 46: Three For the Price of One Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 47: Chain of Command Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 48: Grand…ish Strategy Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 49: Herding Cats Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 50: Do Your Thing Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 51: Relic Theft Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 52: build Theorizing Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 53: the Enemy of my Enemy is a Distraction Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 54: Akul, Metropolis of the 5th Floor Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 55: Bureaucratic Bullshit Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 56: Ear Collector Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 57: One Trick Pony Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 58: Cheaper by The Dozen Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 59: Akul has Everything Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 60: Willliam (Not a necromancer) Oh Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 61: New Loadout Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 62: Would the Real Phantom Thief Please Stand Up? Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 63: Patience Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 64: Party Crashers Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 65: Psychic Chain Lightning Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 66: Boar Hunting Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 67: Boar Hunting (pt. 2) Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 68: Advice From The Baron Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 69: A Missed Opportunity Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 70: Round One Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 71: A race is run in an alley before the first step is taken Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 72: Round 2 Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 73: Round Three Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 74: Teaching Caution Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 75: Nothing Personal Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 76: Hypothetical Countermeasures Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 77: New Blood Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 78: ‘Fencing’ Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 79: Prison Blues Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 80: Kicking Things Off Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 81: Dance with the Rotwitch Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 82: Bakers United Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 83: The Tournament’s Real Prize Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 84: Spoils of War Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 85: Spoils of War Pt. 2 Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 86: 6th Floor Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 87: That’s How You Get Crabs Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 88: Selachimorpha Cloud Formation Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 89: Gone Fishing Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 90: Ocean Life Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 92: Cracked Immortal Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 94: Getting Crabs at The Brothel Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 95: Any Boat in a Storm Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 96: Gerrymandering Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 97: Strategy Meeting Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 98: Float On Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 99: Dictum of Sweet Dreams Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 100: Night Moves Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 101: Scripted Defeat Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 102: Interrogation Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 103: Getting the Hang of it Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 104: The Double Fakeout Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 105: Level 30 Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 106: Blitz Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 107: Regroup Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 108: Hunted Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 109: Cat and Mouse Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 110: Blessed Steel Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 111: Love Letter From Holdna Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 112: Seeing a Friend Off Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 113: Re-equipping Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 114: Dangerous as They Say Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 115: Cheese Morale Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 116: Prophet of the End Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 117: Unearned Power Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 118: (Not) A Natural Born Fighter Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 119: Coiled Strike Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 120: Tricked Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 121: A Good Strategy is a Predictable one Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 122: Tricked You Back Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 123: Powerleveling Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 124: Six Piece Set Bonus Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 125: Pioneers Are Stupid Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 126: Getting Our Bearings Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 127: 7th Floor Bestiary Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 128: Wraith Vessel Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 129: Loth’s Build Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 130: Power-leveling Civilians Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 131: Training Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 132: Itty-bitty Little Snake Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 133: Youthful Competition Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 134: Prophesied Doom Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 135: Guy’s Night Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 136: ‘Good’ Luck Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 137: Ancient Temple of Steel Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 138: Silverdeath Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 139: Identity Crisis Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 140: Ethereal Metallic Slime Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 141: Distributing Wealth Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 142: Kill’em With Kindness Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 143: Clinging Falsehoods Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 144: 8th Floor Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 145: The Undead Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 146: Extravagant Mediocrity Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 147: Night Terrors Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 148: Dangerous for Kobolds Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 149: Take one Please Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 150: Thirty Seconds Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 151: Yeast-Master Will Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 152: Glorified Crossing Guard Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 153: Much Ado About Light Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 154: Fear is a Terrain Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 155: Deal with the Devil Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 156: The Welcome Party Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 157: The Hunt Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 158: Spare Heart Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 159: Learning Experience Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 160: Loth is Scary Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 161: Obstacles to Progress Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 162: The City of Honesty Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 163: Fleeced Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 164: Criminal Element Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 165: Settling a Bet Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 166: Saving Face Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 167: Inventory Management Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 168: Defeating Lord Bakton Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 169: The Mislead Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 170: Cold-blooded logic Sep 27th, 2025
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