Chapter 23: Experience?

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Chapter 23 of "Stolen Identity: Mute Heiress" begins with suspenseful moments: Chapter 23 - Experience? Later that evening, Jamal lay on his bed, one arm behind his... Don’t miss it!

Chapter 23 - Experience? Later that evening, Jamal lay on his bed, one arm behind his head, staring at the ceiling. His room was dimly lit, the only light coming from the lamp on his nightstand. The air smelled faintly of fresh linen and the lingering scent of his cologne. Since it was late in the night, the house was quiet, the kind of silence that made his thoughts louder. And right now, all his thoughts were on Abigail. He wondered how she was doing. If her stepsister was still making her life miserable. If she was adjusting to school. If she thought of him or missed him the way he missed her. It frustrated him not knowing. He hated being this powerless, unable to just show up at her doorstep and take her away from whatever mess she was stuck in. Mari's suggestion from earlier replayed in his head. Getting someone to sketch Abigail and using that to track her down wasn't a bad idea. It wasn't like he was broadcasting her face for dangerous reasons— she wasn't a fugitive, she was just a girl he cared about. And they were going to go about it the smart way by having Mari act like she was the one who knew Abigail. That shouldn't cause any trouble for Abigail. There was nothing wrong with a female friend reaching out to her. Her family certainly wouldn't give her trouble over that. Even so, a part of him wasn't completely convinced but that was the only option left to try. He sat up and reached for his phone. He scrolled through his contacts until he found the name he was looking for. Tariq – Artist. Jamal clicked on the contact and pressed call. It rang twice before a groggy voice answered. "Bro, do you know what time it is?" Tariq mumbled. "Yeah, it's past 10 pm but I know you accept business calls at any time. So, don't act like I disturbed your sleep else I'm taking the job elsewhere." Tariq sighed. "Fair enough. I wasn't sleeping deeply, anyway. What's up?" Jamal smirked. "I need a portrait done. Fast." There was a pause. "Of?" "A girl." A low chuckle. "Figures." Jamal rolled his eyes. "I'll send you the details. Dark brown hair, hazel eyes, heart-shaped face..." He trailed off, picturing Abigail in his mind. Her warm, gentle eyes. The way her lips curved when she smiled. The way the bedside lamp caught the strands of her hair and made them glow as laid in bed chatting. He wanted it all captured perfectly. One thing was for sure— he wanted a portrait of her for himself. He didn't just want to find her. He wanted to keep a piece of her close, even if it was only on paper for now. Tariq hummed. "Got it. You got a picture of her?" Jamal sighed. "No." "Damn. That makes it harder. But if you give me enough details, I can work with it." "How soon can you get it done?" "If you're paying extra?" Tariq yawned. "Three days." "Make it a day. I'll double your rate." Now Tariq was awake. "Triple it and you'd get it by noon tomorrow." "You got it," Jamal said. "Deal, man. Send me everything you remember about her. You can come over to the studio by noon." Jamal hung up and shot him a text with more details, then put his phone down. A slow breath left his lips as he stretched, feeling a bit more hopeful. Maybe this plan would work this time. Just as he was settling into his thoughts again, a knock sounded at his door. "Jamal, I'm coming in. You have a minute to cover yourself if you're naked because I don't wanna see your talala," Mari's voice rang through the door. Jamal let out a low chuckle. "I'm decent. Come in." The door creaked open, and Mari stepped in, pushing her glasses up the bridge of her nose. She wore thick, oversized pajamas that did absolutely nothing for her figure. Her hair was tied into a messy bun, and she looked every bit the geek she denied being. Jamal grinned. "I swear, I'll never understand how you go from looking like a whole baddie outside to looking like...this inside the house." Mari rolled her eyes, plopping onto his bed. "Because inside the house, I don't have to impress anyone. I can be myself." He raised a brow. "Remind me again, what stops you from being yourself outside? Why do you need to impress anyone?" She sighed dramatically. "Jamal, my mom is the sensational Andy. The woman is a walking fashion statement. She oozes sex appeal merely by breathing. Do you know how weird it would be if I didn't at least try to match her vibe a little?" "You don't have to. You put yourself under unnecessary pressure. My stepdad is Matt Swift, an A-list actor. You don't see me..." Mari huffed, pulling a pillow onto her lap. "That's easy for you to say. You weren't the kid who was constantly asked if you were sure your hot mom was actually your mom. Do you know how many people called me an ugly duckling growing up?" Jamal shook his head. "You were never ugly, Mari. And I've always told you—don't let people's words define how you see yourself. It's not the water around a ship that sinks it..." "but the water that gets inside. Blah blah, I know, motivational speaker," Mari smirked and finished for him, "I didn't come here for your pep talk. We've been through this argument countless times and as I've always said, I don't think there's any ground for comparison between us." Jamal leaned back. "Why are you here when you should be in bed, anyway?" She shrugged. "No real reason. Just wanted to hang out. We leave for school in the morning, and I didn't want to waste the night." Jamal chuckled. "And Emily? What is she up to?" "She's studying." "Shouldn't you be studying as well?" Mari scoffed. "I have the whole semester to study. Spending the evening with you isn't going to make my grades drop. Besides, I don't need to study as hard as Emily. I've got real-world experience thanks to my dad. I bet I have what it takes to be a cybersecurity lecturer if I wanted," she said, and he chuckled, though he knew she wasn't merely bragging. She hacked into computers for fun. Jamal eyed her for a moment. "So, why are you really here? You sure you don't want to say something? It feels like you have something on your mind." Mari grinned. "You know me too well." Jamal groaned. "I don't like that gleam in your eyes." She laughed. "Relax. I just have a question." Jamal narrowed his eyes. "If this is about a boy—" "It's not," she cut in quickly. "I just... wanted to ask about your experience." Jamal frowned. "Experience?" Mari gave him a pointed look. "You know what I mean." His eyes widened slightly. "Wait. Are you seriously asking me about sex?" Mari burst out laughing. "Not details! I just want to know if it's really as big a deal as people make it sound." Jamal ran a hand down his face. "How am I supposed to explain that to you? I'm a guy. I don't think sex means the same to both genders." "Yeah, but as a guy, is it really all that?" Jamal sighed. "Mari, why not ask your Mom? Aunt Andy is blunt, so I know she'll give you a really good and detailed response." "Of course she has told me about sex. Since I was twelve. But she didn't exactly tell me how it feels. That's what I want to know. Besides you should know that hearing it from oldies isn't the same as hearing it from someone around your age." Jamal chuckled, "Don't let her hear you refer to her as an oldie." "I wouldn't dare," Mari agreed with a laugh. "But seriously, is sex a big deal? Yes or no?" Jamal shook his head. "I will say it is something you need to experience for yourself. With the right person." Mari rolled her eyes. "Blah blah, 'right person.' How did you know Abigail was the right person? Wasn't she just a stranger to you until you did it? Maybe I should borrow a page from your book and do that, too." Jamal shot her a sharp look. "Don't even think about it." Mari smirked. "Why are men so unnecessarily protective of their sisters and friends? Do I need to remind you that you did it with a girl my age?" "That's different." "In what way?" Jamal hesitated. "It was Abigail's idea." Mari raised a brow. "And it could be my idea too." Jamal groaned. "You have no idea the kind of men you could meet. Abigail was lucky to meet me. What if it was someone dangerous?" Mari rolled her eyes. "Why do men act like only men can be dangerous? For all you know, Abigail could've been the serial killer." Jamal exhaled, shaking his head. "You're giving me a headache. Go away." Mari giggled, "Why? I thought we were having a really nice conversation. I'm enjoying myself." "I'm not," Jamal said, and she grinned. "You're going to miss me when I leave," she said and he nodded. "I'd rather miss you than deal with the headache you're giving me right now." Before Mari could respond, the door swung open again. Jamal groaned when Emily walked in, and Mari giggled. "Why are you here? Shouldn't you be studying or writing a story or whatever?" Jamal asked as Emily jumped on the bed trying to get between him and Mari. "How do you expect me to concentrate on reading when you two are having all the fun? Besides, I'm done with my assignments," she said with a grin and Jamal groaned. Mari cackled. "Looks like you're stuck with us for the night. I'm going to annoy the heck out of you for trying to throw me out." Jamal sighed dramatically. "I can't wait for you both to leave." They just laughed, settling in for a long night of banter.

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Contents
Stolen Identity: Mute Heiress
Stolen Identity: Mute Heiress Author:Miss_Behaviour
Chapter 1: Author’s Welcome Address Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 2: Mute Girl Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 3: Westend/Blue York Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 4: Disguise Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 5: Heartbreak Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 6: Attractive Stranger Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 7: We Are Strangers Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 8: Irresistible Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 9: Firsts Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 10: Shameless Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 11: Morning After Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 12: There You Are Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 13: Old Guy Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 14: No Protection Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 15: Nausea Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 16: Pregnant Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 17: Meant To Be Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 18: Dunce Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 19: Nightmare Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 20: W For Wonderful Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 21: Mari Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 22: I Know You Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 23: Experience? Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 24: Who Is Dawn? Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 25: Charcoal Drawing Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 26: The Truth Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 27: Play Along Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 28: Five Years Later Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 29: J.J Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 30: Changed Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 31: Stay Hopeful Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 32: Callan Quinn Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 33: You Can’t Speak? Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 34: You’re Not Mute? Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 35: Creepy Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 36: Gospel Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 37: If We Meet Again Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 38: Lost Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 39: I Missed You Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 40: Boyfriend Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 41: I Want To Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 42: Live-in Driver Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 43: Embarrassed Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 44: Welcome Home Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 45: A Month Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 46: Staying Hopeful Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 47: Dawn’s Fault Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 48: Same Old Gist Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 49: Love Story Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 50: Careful? Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 51: Fear Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 52: Six Months Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 53: What Guest? Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 54: Two Days? Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 55: Opportunity Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 56: Hungry Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 57: Abigail? Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 58: Little Task Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 59: I Like You Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 60: DNA Sample Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 61: Live Differently Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 62: Shopping Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 63: Shopping (2) Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 64: Who Is Abigail? Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 65: Lucy? Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 66: Building Trust Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 67: Your Memory? Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 68: Impatient Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 69: Who Is Mari? Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 70: It Was Your Birthday Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 71: From The Beginning Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 72: Backstory (1) Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 73: Backstory (2) Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 74: Backstory (3) Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 75: Hm? Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 76: Angry And Bitter Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 77: Your Turn Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 78: Impostor Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 79: His Child Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 80: Role Play Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 81: Be Calm Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 82: He Will Pay Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 83: Honesty Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 84: I Found Dawn Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 85: A Hank And Jonas Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 86: Family Meeting Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 87: No Way! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 88: I Want His Head Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 89: Only One Guess Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 90: Don’t Push It Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 91: Brilliant Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 92: Anything Can Happen Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 93: Who Is Jamal? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 94: Viv Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 95: Embarrassed Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 96: Trust Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 97: Less Awkward Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 98: Bug Sweep Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 99: Clean Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 100: Danger Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 101: Friend? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 102: Upset Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 103: Night Chat Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 104: Jax Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 105: I Have A Wife Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 106: Shut Up Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 107: Everyone Likes Pete Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 108: Loyalty Begets Loyalty Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 109: Threats Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 110: Fight To Win Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 111: Time Would Tell Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 112: Baby Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 113: Genevieve’s Secretary Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 114: Alternative Option Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 115: She Is Not Mute Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 116: Apology Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 117: Let Me Have Him Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 118: I Love My Job Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 119: Twisted Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 120: Somewhere Safe Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 121: Stay On Your Toes Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 122: Dog Allergy Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 123: It Depends Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 124: Do You Trust Me? Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 125: Crossing Lines Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 126: I Can’t Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 127: Blackmail Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 128: Welcome To Husla Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 129: Don’t be Sad Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 130: No Way Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 131: Upset Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 132: I Know You Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 133: Bored Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 134: You’re Weird Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 135: Woman Trouble Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 136: Confused Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 137: Just Five Minutes Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 138: School Day Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 139: Sad And Confused Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 140: I’m Proud Of You Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 141: Happy Birthday, Salvete_Mortem Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 142: I’m A Feminist Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 143: Mommy Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 144: Out Of Character Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 145: Good Work Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 146: I Trust You Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 147: Gentleman Kidnapper Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 148: The Past Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 149: Letters Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 150: Genius Mute Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 151: Middlewoman Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 152: Night Guest Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 153: Don’t You Dare Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 154: The Past Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 155: It’s Over Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 156: Three Is A Crowd Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 157: Actively Move On Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 158: Sympathy Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 159: Easy Peasy Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 160: Angry Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 161: Smart Boy Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 162: Seduce Her Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 163: I Like You Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 164: Energy For Energy Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 165: Forget About It Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 166: Dinner Party Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 167: Heartbreak Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 168: Biggest Sponsor Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 169: Someone Very Dear Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 170: Already? Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 171: I Meant It Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 172: Permission Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 173: Chad Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 174: Crush Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 175: Trust Issues Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 176: Loyalty Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 177: Karen Combs Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 178: Sisters Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 179: Coward Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 180: Happy Birthday Anya_Vale Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 181: Scared Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 182: Gift Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 183: Car Key Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 184: Reactive Attachment Disorder Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 185: Tricked Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 186: Annoyed Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 187: Jealous And Possessive Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 188: Birthday Gift Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 189: Zero Percent Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 190: It’s Okay To Talk Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 191: Boyfriend? Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 192: Updates Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 193: Decision Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 194: Leave Me Alone Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 195: Callan will Be Fine Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 196: Mysterious Girl Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 197: Get Pregnant Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 198: Ten Minutes Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 199: Night Drive Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 200: Cold Breakfast Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 201: Mean Abigail Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 202: Therapy Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 203: Find Her ASAP Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 204: First Kiss Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 205: Nancy Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 206: You’re A Coward Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 207: Who Are You? Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 208: I Loved Nancy Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 209: How It All Began (1) Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 210: How It All Began (2) Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 211: Second Thoughts Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 212: You Look Wrecked Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 213: I Want More Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 214: Surprise Visit Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 215: Family Meeting Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 216: Large Family Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 217: Perfect! Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 218: Summon Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 219: Now? Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 220: See You Soon Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 221: J.J? Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 222: Hints Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 223: Real Face Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 224: Temptations Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 225: Since When? Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 226: Farewell Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 227: Imposter Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 228: Good Narcissist Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 229: Bad Feeling Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 230: Calculated Moves Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 231: Goodbye Oct 9th, 2025
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