Chapter 141: Invitation

Words : 1872 Updated : Sep 27th, 2025
"If you'll continue like that, you will consume it with your eyes" Neytiri turned her head and saw her teacher Mo'at enter the door. She jumped to her feet: as an apprentice she should have welcomed her teacher with honor. "Forgive me, master, I was..." "... lost in your thoughts, I know. You are lost in your thoughts every day now". Mo'at smiled. "Far from me to criticize your devotion, but you shouldn't let you get distracted by material things. Honoring the entities that rule this world is important, but so are your obligations. You are my apprentice and as such you have homework. You can't stay all the day staring at that tapestry" Neytiri could not help but bow her head blushing like a child scolded by her mother. She glanced out of the corner of her eye at what Mo'at was pointing to: it was a canvas featuring the image of a giant reptile with a sail. After returning from her journey out of the city with the khel'valarts, Neytiri devoted her body and soul to completing the tapestry depicting the Great King of the Forest. During the mid-autumn festival the work had been shown to all the people and had been hung in the main hall of the palace where it still stands today. However, in the following months Sisna had embroidered a second, much smaller image that she kept in her room. Coming face to face with a god was not an easy experience to forget or bear. Although technically Sobek wasn't a true god to Neytiri it was as if he were. Looking him in the eyes had marked her deeply: she had looked death in the face and then she had been pardoned. As a result, Neytiri had now become obsessed with the Great King of the Forest, like a religious fanatic. None of the Manas had tried to dissuade her: after all, such behavior was a must for a future matriarch. Being also priestesses, the Manas needed to establish deep contact and reverence with the deities. The problem was that Neytiri was exaggerating: she often ended up staring at the small tapestry that she kept in her quarters for hours. This was inadmissible: the Manas also had other duties besides the religious functions, consequently Neytiri as the future matriarch was obliged to participate in those duties. Neytiri knew she was wrong, but for some reason she couldn't stop acting that way. Seeing her guilty expression, the teacher Mo'at sighed. "Neytiri, soon you will take my place among the Manas, do you know?" Neytiri opened her eyes: "Master..." "Don't make that face. I'm seventy years old. Look, I can hardly stand up. Very soon will come the time when my life force will leave this body and my soul will rise to the stars. The gods have blessed me with a long life, but like all things in this world it will have to come to an end one day". It was already difficult for the modern man to reach seventy years with his clarity and body intact. For Neanderthals who had no medical care or retirement, such a milestone was literally a blessing. "When I die, you will have to take your place. Which means you will have huge responsibilities on your shoulders. If you keep getting distracted, it will affect many people" The unwritten law of politics of all ages was that if just one powerful person made a mistake then countless individuals paid the price. Neytiri knew this well. "I know, master. I'm sorry, I shouldn't be acting like this" "I see you understand" Mo'at said, and then she took her hand. "Neytiri, you have a bright future ahead of you. When I chose you as an apprentice it was the last day of winter, and this is a good omen, because after winter comes spring. You never let me down. You are smart, shrewd, crafty, respectful and humble. You learn fast and you think even faster. No one is better at weaving or arithmetic than you. I couldn't find a better person to succeed me, I want you to understand this well" Neytiri felt flattered at that cascade of compliments. Despite the earlier reproach he could not suppress a smile. But Mo'at wasn't done yet. "You are the only person in the last two hundred years that has seen the Great King of the Forest. You admired him in all his magnificence and even talked to him, and he chose for you to live. This is a great sign, Neytiri". The old woman sighed. "I think... no, sorry, I expressed myself badly. I KNOW that you will be a Mana a thousand times better than me, and you will reach heights that neither I nor my current sisters could ever dream of" "You flatters me" Neytiri murmured. "No, I don't think so" Mo'at replied. She nodded her head to indicate the door: "So, do you want to get out of here? You have a lot of things left unfinished" The speech had been convincing. Neytiri nodded vigorously and followed her teacher out of her room. But as soon as they were in the corridor a guard rushed to them. "My ladies!" he yelled. "You must come immediately to the door of the palace!" ***************** The guards were patrolling the Manas' palace as usual when the huge shadow had fallen over them. The shadow then quickly condensed into a giant figure that landed in front of the palace door. There had obviously been a lot of panic. Even though they had a positive role in their culture, giant flying reptiles were still very dangerous: they could easily tear a man to pieces. What landed was a hatzegopteryx, one of the most bigger flying creatures that ever exist, but obviously the Neanderthals didn't call it by that name. Giant pterosaurs were called kaiakas, without any distinction of species. They literally meant 'guardians of the sky'. Contrary to everyone's expectations, however, hatzegopteryx hadn't attacked anyone. It just sat down in front of the building and remained motionless, as if waiting for something. Even when the guards had approached with their spears and bows, it hadn't made any movement. It hadn't even deigned to look at them: its eyes were fixed on the door of the palace. The guards could have taken advantage of his stillness to attack him, but it would have been a huge risk. Even if they would have probably managed to kill him eventually, many people would have died. The hatzegopteryx was however a reptile taller than a giraffe and had a sharp beak that could easily chew a human. Even if he wasn't flying he was a terrifying enemy. So the guards had chosen to accept the stalemate and had sent a messenger to inform the Manas of the situation. They would know what to do. When Neytiri reached the door and saw the huge creature waiting for her, she felt a chill on her spine. The sight of hatzegopteryx alone was enough to frighten anyone. On the contrary, however, his teacher continued without batting an eyelid, bravely going to meet the animal. The other Manas also showed no hesitation. Neytiri took a deep breath and scolded herself. As future Mana it was her duty to not be afraid. Or at least it was her duty to not show it. Although the hatzegopteryx was dangerous, she could not afford to be intimidated: it would make her teacher look bad. She was tempted to slap herself and she didn't do it just because she was in public. "Come on, girl! You have admired the magnificence of the Great King of the Forest, how can you be intimidated by a common kaiakas?" she thought trying to calm down. When the Manas were all out of the palace, the pterosaur finally moved. It walked confidently towards the matriarchs, paying no attention to the spears that were continually pointed at its body. Then, when it was about five meters from them, it lowered its head as if it were bowing, and spoke: "Forgive my intrusion, but I could not act otherwise. I bring a message on behalf of the Lord of Lightning" There was obviously dismay among the Neanderthals, but much less than someone might have imagined. In fact, apart from the initial surprise, no one was particularly frightened. This is because Neanderthals, like all ancient peoples, were superstitious and easily believed in the supernatural, and since kaiakas were often messengers in their myths, no one doubted that what was happening was normal. In the mythological imagination of the Neanderthals, the Lord of Lightning was a spirit who unleashed storms by moving his immense wings; for obvious reasons, it was represented as a giant pterosaur. His powers could be equivalent to Thor's in Norse mythology. However, the Lord of Lightning did not only have this role: he was also the messenger of all the other deities, a bit like Hermes in Greek mythology or Mercury in Roman one. This is because the wings were the fastest way to move, so it was normal that this role belonged to him. And the Lord of Lightning didn't operate alone: Neanderthal legends described the kaiakas (like quetzalcoatlus, arambourgiania, etc.) as the messengers of the god, who carried his commands to the mortal plane. A bit like Zeus's eagle or Odin's ravens, in short. The only difference was that the kaiakas were described as very easy to anger to justify the fact that they occasionally swooped down from the sky and killed people. Therefore, the fact that a hatzegopteryx showed up in the city and spoke up claiming to be a messenger of the Lightning Lord was quite normal in the Neanderthal mentality. This was the beauty of the ancient peoples: knowing nothing of science they believed in anything. The Manas weren't even surprised. Being practically priestesses, and therefore having to deal with myths all day, they had already imagined after being informed that this would have been the situation. Mo'at was the first to come forward. "You are welcome, noble knight of the clouds. What message do you bring?" The hatzegopteryx raised its head. "The Lord of Lightning has sent me to inform you that a great battle is about to take place. Not here, but to the west, beyond the lake and hills. The Great King of the Forest is bringing together all the creatures of heaven and earth and those of rivers and lakes will soon join him as well. He now wants to confer with one of you, so he asked the Lightning Lord to warn you. I don't know what his thought is and I don't even dare to try to question myself about it, but he said this exact words: 'The one who has already seen and spoken to me is the one that must come'. That's all what I have to say" A murmur of dismay spread among all present. Then all eyes were on Neytiri.

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I'm a spinosaurus with a System to raise a dinosaur army
I'm a spinosaurus with a System to raise a dinosaur army Author:Fabershare
Chapter 1: Prologue - Part 1 Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 2: Prologue (part 2) Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 3: Rebirth as a spinosaurus Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 4: First hunt Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 5: First skill point Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 6: First level up Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 7: Prepare a trap Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 8: Improve the trap Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 9: Entering the forest Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 10: First time fishing Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 11: Stethacanthus Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 12: A new territory Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 13: Baryonyx Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 14: Time to go Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 15: New home Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 16: Giants among giants Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 17: Ichthyovenator Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 18: Oxalaia Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 19: Poachers Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 20: Divide et impera Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 21: Decimate poachers Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 22: Hunter vs hunter Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 23: Eden's history Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 24: On the road again Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 25: Towards the human territory Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 26: University trip Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 27: The largest spinosaurus ever found Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 28: Starting the evolution Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 29: Completing the first evolution Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 30: New hunt, new problems Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 31: Battle with carnivores Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 32: Mammals Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 33: Superpredator Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 34: Scavengers Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 35: Allosaurus Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 36: Carcharodontosaurus Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 37: Something is wrong Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 38: Kidnapping Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 39: Rescue Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 40: Trust issues Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 41: Jocelyne Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 42: Human city found! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 43: Complications Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 44: Fight among rivals Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 45: Return and healing Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 46: The rival's fall Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 47: Teaching and learning Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 48: A father cannot surrender Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 49: Doubts Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 50: Torvosaurus Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 51: Hunted Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 52: Finally a good news! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 53: The family is reunited Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 54: On the verge of downfall Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 55: Final goodbye Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 56: The mystery of the bonus money Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Permian area Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 58: Press conference Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 59: Shocking the scientific community! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 60: The strongest of the river Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 61: Distant cousin Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 62: Found it! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 63: Screw you! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 64: The most intelligent Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 65: Starting the second evolution Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 66: Movie directors and preparing expeditions Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 67: Mother-daughter chat Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 68: Ultimate skill Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 69: Ankylosaurus Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 70: Pachyrhinosaurus Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 71: Gorgosaurus Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 72: The lake Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 73: When two people fight... Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 74: ... the third one wins! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 75: Hurricane Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 76: Surprise! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 77: Neanderthals Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 78: Neanderthals' city Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 79: The Great King of the Forest Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 80: Find the family again Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 81: The strongest creature that ever existed! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 82: Documentary (part 1) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 83: Documentary (part 2) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 84: Documentary (part 3) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 85: Linguistics Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 86: Tyrannosaurus rex Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 87: The first subordinate Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 88: What justice is this? Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 89: Hunting together Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 90: It sounds bigger Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 91: A footprint and a mystery Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 92: Great confusion and then a plan Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 93: Contact with the local tribe Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 94: Prepare to go out Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 95: The true essence of hunting Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 96: The huge beast Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 97: Look Death in the face Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 98: Alan Grant Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 99: Dream... or nightmare Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 100: Captured... or maybe not Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 101: Indestructible scale Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 102: A unique living being Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 103: Challenge accepted Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 104: Using molecular physics to harden the skin Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 105: Talking about escape Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 106: Organizing an uprising Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 107: Meeting with old friends Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 108: No bad dreams in my presence Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 109: Stop hiding Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 110: The new king of the dinosaurs Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 111: Escape Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 112: Deceive the humans Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 113: The prize is coming Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 114: Sobek's cunning vs the invincible human technology Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 115: Time to finish the escape Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 116: Freedom! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 117: Caught a ship Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 118: Hunt in the sea Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 119: Destroying ships Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 120: Recruiting an army of birds Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 121: The [Personal weapon] Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 122: Tracking the spinosaurus Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 123: Goodbye birds! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 124: Can dinosaurs become intelligent? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 125: Arrive to the continent Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 126: Return to the lake Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 127: Meeting with the scientists Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 128: The Mother Cell Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 129: Ending the third evolution Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 130: Increasing the size of the herd Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 131: Return to the family Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 132: Battle among tyrannosaurs Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 133: Time to establish a defensive line Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 134: Humans are no longer invincible! Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 135: More and more mysteries Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 136: True loyalty Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 137: The tyrannosaurs arrive Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 138: Extinction Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 139: Preparations for the war Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 140: Armor Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 141: Invitation Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 142: Flying in the sky Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 143: A task from a god Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 144: Fruits and fishes Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 145: Change in birds' behavior Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 146: The choice is made Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 147: Eliminate any witnesses Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 148: Continue is a duty now Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 149: Establish a citadel Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 150: Build fortifications Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 151: You learn by making mistakes Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 152: Time for the truth Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 153: This is our land! Sep 27th, 2025
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