Chapter 38: fire, fury and girlfriend issues

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Chapter 38: fire, fury and girlfriend issues Alden von Crestvale's POV ------ Alden landed lightly on the cracked, dusty soil of the Deserted Isle, his boots raising a puff of red sand as he surveyed the barren landscape. The sun blazed overhead, unfiltered and ruthless, yet he looked unfazed. Stretching his arms with a yawn, he muttered, "Alright. Let's see what this stupid 'Entrance Exam' has in store." Just as he finished that smug thought, a low growl echoed behind him. Alden didn't even turn. He thrust his sword backward with effortless precision, impaling a Barkwolf that had pounced from the shadows. It let out a whimper before disintegrating into light particles. +10 points. "Still no challenge," Alden sighed. He'd already carved a trail through the local fauna. A herd of novice-rank Flame Lizards? Gone in under two minutes. A pair of intermediate-rank Razorback Boars? Barely managed to scuff his uniform. Every now and then, a human candidate or a group would cross his path—some trying to talk, others attempting ambushes. He brought up his EVOband with a flick of his wrist, the screen hovering midair in front of him. Ranking: 245/1,000,000 Points: 2780 He grumbled, "Tch. I was hoping to be in the top 100 by now. All these weaklings are slowing me down." "yeah. Too easy," he muttered, brushing dirt off his shoulder. "I swear, if I don't run into at least one advanced-rank monster or a decent opponent soon, I'm going to die of boredom." As if the universe heard his complaint, he suddenly froze. Multiple presences. His senses flared, detecting faint rustling in the trees, shallow breaths, the scrape of boots against gravel. Then they stepped out. One by one. From behind trees, out of tall brush, even from beneath hidden traps. Alden's smirk widened as he counted. Forty. Forty candidates surrounding him. "Well, well, well," Alden muttered with an unhinged grin forming. "Looks like someone heard my prayer. Finally." He let out a laugh—no, a full-blown maniacal cackle that echoed through the twisted forest. "Man, this was getting really boring! Now I can finally have some fun!" A figure stepped forward from the encircling group. Tall, lean, black hair swept back with precision, wearing the noble crest of House Simon. "Long time no see, Alden," the man said coolly. Alden tilted his head. "...Who are you?" The reaction was instantaneous. The man visibly twitched and nearly tripped over a root. "It's me! Jordan van Simon!" he snapped. "We fought in the Westwind championship one year ago! I made it to the semi-finals!" Alden blinked. "...Never heard of it." Jordan's eye twitched so hard it looked like it was about to fall out. Several of his subordinates chuckled quietly. Truth be told, Alden remembered him perfectly. Jordan had a decent sword style and was even invited to a few noble banquets. But Alden made it a point never to remember mediocre people—at least not out loud. "So..." Alden grinned wider, "You're saying you weren't man enough to face me alone and had to bring forty guys just to feel brave?" Jordan clenched his fists, face red with fury, but forced himself to speak. "If I can eliminate you before you enter the top 2000, then it's worth it. I can forget my pride for that much." Alden clicked his tongue in mock disappointment. "So this isn't about the tournament then? How sad." He leaned his weight casually on one leg and said with a glint in his eyes, "Tell me the real reason. Before I turn you into fertilizer, I want to know what I'm dying for." Jordan grounded his teeth so hard Alden half-expected sparks. But then he spoke. "...It was after the tournament. My girlfriend—Serena Durell—she... she dumped me." Alden raised an eyebrow." So what do I do find another girlfriend for you. Sorry dude I don't run Lover.com for pitiful guys who get dumped by their girlfriends." At that even the candidates surrounding him was trying to hold back themselves from not to laughing but some stll slipped. Jordan seethed at that but he still continued, voice rising, "I saw her talking to you at the celebration banquet. Laughing, smiling—flirting. And then... she kissed Alden blinked. Then laughed. Loudly. Like the kind of laughter that made trees shake and birds flee." Dude I don't even remember that chick." "And what you're telling me..." he gasped through tears, "is that I NTR'd you without even knowing?! HAHAHAHA!" Some of the 40 surrounding candidates were clearly trying not to laugh. A few failed. One even choked on his own spit. Jordan's face turned a dangerous shade of purple. "You think this is funny!?" he roared. "Yes." "You ruined my relationship!" "You ruined it by being forgettable." "You—!" Jordan raised a hand and screamed, "ATTACK!" Alden's expression shifted. From playful... to cold. All 40 surged at once. But Alden had already moved. A step to the left. A backflip. A twist. Swords missed him by inches. He ducked a spear, kicked a hammer-user into a tree, then parried three attacks at once with a single flick of his wrist. "Thanks for the entertainment!" he shouted mid-combat. "I was really getting bored." Then, without warning, his sword ignited in brilliant orange flames. The fire danced like it had a soul of its own, wrapping around the blade like a living entity. A few candidates froze. "Is that—?" "Fire resonance?" "No way, that sword looks enchanted—!" "Retreat! We're not equipped for—" "TOO LATE!" Alden roared. He slashed the sword in a wide arc. A crescent of fire surged forward, knocking back five candidates in a burst of flame and smoke. "You guys came all this way..." he grinned, eyes blazing like his sword, "you might as well enjoy the full course." Jordan, still fuming, charged with a battle cry, aiming straight for Alden's head. Their blades clashed—steel on steel. But the moment their weapons met, Jordan's sword melted slightly at the edge. "What the—?!" Alden smiled. "Sorry, forgot to mention. My sword eats cheap metal." "You cocky—!" "Accurate!" Jordan tried to cast a barrier spell, but Alden's free hand lashed out, fire coiling from his palm and exploding in a burst that knocked the noble heir several feet back. The other candidates surged forward again, now attacking with ranged spells and support skills. "Ah, good," Alden muttered. "Now you're really trying." He moved like a blur, his sword a flaming comet. Fireballs collided with ice spears. Smoke and sparks danced through the clearing. A whip-wielder tried to bind him—he severed the whip mid-air and kicked the wielder unconscious. A healer tried to protect their group. Alden spun mid-air and knocked them out cold with a blunt hilt strike before severing their heads from their shoulder. "You brought healers too? Wow, someone really planned this like a field trip!" As the chaos escalated, Alden seemed to enjoy himself more with each second. He wasn't just fighting. He was playing. At one point, he even looked at his EVOband again mid-battle. "Let's see... Points now at 2930. Not bad." Another candidate screamed and launched a wind blade. Alden ducked, letting it slice past him and hit someone else by accident. "Wow," Alden laughed, "Friendly fire much?" The forest now resembled a war zone. Smoke filled the air. Burnt trees. Craters. Moaning, fallen candidates. And Alden, at the center of it all, with a flaming sword, surrounded by sparks and chaos. He pointed the sword at Jordan, who was barely standing, breathing heavily. "I'm not done with you yet," Alden said with a devilish smirk. "Let's finish our little reunion properly. There are still atleast 30 of you left for me to play with." Jordan's hand trembled. He raised his blade. And Alden surged forward. And with that, the forest was engulfed in fire and fury as chaos erupted the next second.

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Contents
The Extra Who Shouldn't Exist
The Extra Who Shouldn't Exist Author:survivalArtist001
Chapter 1: Game Over , Start Again Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 2: A light within the darkness Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 3: Path to strength Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 4 : Battle Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 5: The First Skill Core Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 6: Damn Ancients and the first trial Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 7: Second trial - Trial of Endurance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 8: Breakthrough Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 9: The trial of will and agility Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 10: End of the third trial Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 11: Preparation for the Final trial Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 12: Trial of Control and Intelligence Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 13: The final gambit Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 14: Gains Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 15: Baptism of Elements Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 16: The parting legacy and the sword art Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 17: Way back home(1) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 18: Way Back home(2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 19: Arriving in the Capital Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 20: Visit to the hospital Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 21: Reunion With Lily Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 22: The Night it Happened Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 23: Breaking the record and a strange encounter Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 24: Rivalry Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 25: Duel of the Record Breaker’s Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 26: Ready to play Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 27: Money and Shocked Smith Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 28: Investment and Shocked smith Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 29: Life of the protagonist ethan willams Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 30: Arrival in the zenith academy Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Gathering of Legends with an extra Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 32: The Test Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 33: The hero , The heir and The extra Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 34: The watchful eyes Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 35: EVOlink Ascension - The Test Begins Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 36: Blood on the Island Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 37: Thunderclash and a Musclehead Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 38: fire, fury and girlfriend issues Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 39: The guy named Alden von crestvale vs 41 Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Cliffs, the chaos, and the Princess Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 41: Broadcast and Battle Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 42: The Lightning vs the shadow Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 43 : A favour Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 44 : Lilith Noctis Bloodrose Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 45 : Standoff of ladies Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 46: Shadows Beneath the Moonlight Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 47: Blood vs Gravity and Ice Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 48: The Gamble Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 49: End of the Enterance exam (1) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 50 : End of the Entrance exam (2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 51: End of the Entrance exam (3) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 52: End of the entrance exam (4) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 53 – End of the Entrance exam(5) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 54: End of the Entrance exam (6) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 55 : End of the Entrance exam (7) final Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 56 : Acknowledgement Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 57 : Self interest’s Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 58 : Another encounter and a goddess Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 59 – The Orientation Begins Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 60 : The apex Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 61 : A near death experience Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 62 : The first speech from a future legend Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 63 : The Legend and the peasants (bonus Chapter) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 64 : Zara , Lily and the cringelord Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 65 : A visit to the apex Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 66 : The first day at the academy. Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 67 : Apex Privileges, Dwarven Threats, and a Sticky Situation Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 68 : The Heart That Refused to Break Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 69 : A cringy realization Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 70: Crash Landing On You , Seriously Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 71 : Chaos in the cafeteria (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 72: Chaos in the cafeteria (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 73 : Chaos in the cafeteria (3) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 74 : Another accident Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 75 : Never piss off seraphina starlight Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gathering of the first year and second year elites Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 77 : The first years vs the second year prodigies (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 78 : The first years vs the second year prodigies(2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 79 : Arrogance and brilliance Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 80 : The fairy twins. Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 81: Wings of Light vs Stormfire Elegance Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 82 : Awakening Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 83 : The Primordial goddess Avatar Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 84 : Alex vs Alicia(1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 85: Alex vs Alicia (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 86 : Getting scolded by someone hot Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 87: A Comforting chaos Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 88: Assigned Missions Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 89 : Curiosity Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 90 : System Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 91 : A picture of misunderstanding (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 92: A picture of misunderstanding (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 93 : Pairing up for the ball (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 94 : Pairing up for the ball (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 95 : Potential Evaluation Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 96 : A untrustable snake Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 97 : A genius and a crazy professor Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 98 : A Gorgeous encounter Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 99 : An Anomaly Named Evelyn williams Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 100 : Evelyn williams (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 101 : Scamming or getting Scammed Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 102 : A mother’s worry and Alicia’s choice Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 103 : Crown of oblivion Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 104 : A visit from sister Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 105 : Settling on a wedding date Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 106 : A Plan Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 107 : Hostage Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 108 : Two godly beauty’s Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 109 : Start of the Freshman Ball Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 110 : Date’s (1) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 111 : Dates(2) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 112 : Pitifully seniors Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 113 : Grand enterance (1) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 114 : Grand entrance (2) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 115 : Grand entrance (3) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 116 : Dance (1) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 117 : A deal Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 118 : A Much Needed Realization Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 119 : Charlotte Evans Avaloria Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 120 : The awakening nectar Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 121 : Finally getting some screentime Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 122 : Dance with the student council president. Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 123: A Challenge Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 124 : Goddess taking control (1) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 125 : Goddess taking control ( 2) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 126 : The Age of God’s Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 127 : Getting sullied by a goddess and Ethans Awakening Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 128 : Awakening of the chosen one Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 129 : Preparation (1) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 130: Preparation (2) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 131 : Training and breakthrough Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 132 : Resolve Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 133 : An obvious and easy question Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 134 : The Luminarch Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 135 : Awakening of the Extra who shouldn’t exist Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 136 : The birth of a Genesis Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 137 : The turmoil across the divine realms Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 138 : Scared of someone too Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 139 : Lily’s brithday and the system’s gift too her (1) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 140 : Lily’s brithday and the systems gift to her (2) Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 141 : Anything for family Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 142 : An Attack Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 143 : The might of a Dragon Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 144 : A confession Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 145 : Shattered hope Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 146 : The Avatar’s of an outer god. Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 147 : Avatars of an outer god (2) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 148 : The most famous hunter Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 149 : Ouroburos - The serpent that devours the horizon Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 150 : Who kicked me in the face while I was sleeping Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 151 : Misery and Carnage Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 152 : Dance of the deadly darkness (1) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 153 : Dance of the deadly darkness(2) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 154 : Dance of the deadly darkness (3) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 155 : Dance of the deadly darkness (4) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 156 : Homosexual Pervert Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 157 : In the need of a divine weapon (1) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 158 : In need of a divine weapon (2) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 159 : The celestial Sunblade (1) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 160 : The celestial sunblade(2) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 161 : Getting Good news from getting beaten up Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 162 : The turmoil in the outside world Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 163 : Ethan’s plan the last hope(1) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 164: Ethan’ Plan the last hope (2) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 165 : Ethan’s plan the last hope(3) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 166 : The betrayal no one expected (1) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 167 : Coming to the Rescue (1) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 168 : Coming to the rescue (2) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 169 : Coming to the rescue (3) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 170 : Coming to the rescue (4) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 171 : Coming to the rescue ( Final ) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 172 : An anticipated obsession Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 173 : Broken Trust and Relation’s Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 174 : A crestvale always pays his debts Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 175 : Who’s the guy Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 176 : Waking up for a second time for some reason Sep 25th, 2025
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