Chapter 5: Predator’s scent

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Chapter 5 - Predator's scentThe earth had grown silent. Not the peaceful silence of sunlit stillness, but the kind that comes before something dies. I felt it in my roots first. A faint quiver, like breathless tension pulled taut beneath the soil. The rodent's blood still clung to my thorns, sticky and hot, the scent mingling with the sour decay of the forest floor. That scent, I realized, was a signal. Not just to scavengers, but to something higher on the food chain. A predator. ~----~ [Unknown Entity Detected!] [Proximity: Medium] [Scanning...] ~----~ The system's text flickered in my vision, sharper than usual, tinged with red at the edges. I froze; or, well, stayed rooted. My thorns retracted slightly, tension pulsing through my being as my root sensors extended further to feel through the dirt. What was it? I didn't have eyes, but I could hear now. I'd gained that sense just before the rodent attack. And at the edge of that hearing, I caught it, something dragging against stone. Not walking, sliding. A wet, slithering scrape. Then a pause. Silence. And suddenly... A sniff. Loud. Close, too close. Something sniffed the air near me. I didn't move a cell, I dared not. I didn't even think. If I had a heart, it would be beating rapidly like drums of war. The system lit up again, startling the living soul out of me. 'Rot me sideways!' I cursed. ~----~ [Entity Partially Scanned] [Classification: Rival Flora. Hostile. Evolutionary strain unknown.] ~----~ Flora? I was surprised. I expected another beast. Not a plant. And then I felt it. A root. Thin, wiry, and cold; it slithered over mine like a snake licking its prey. It wasn't just near me, it was touching me. I shuddered. 'Creepy bastard!' I nearly triggered a spike right there, but instinct told me that would be a mistake. Unlike all the other plantoid beings I've met in this world, this thing was different. It wasn't dumb. It was scouting. Another message appeared. ~----~ [New System Thread Unlocked: Territorial Instinct] ~----~ A submenu opened briefly. Three icons: Warn, Lure, and Engage. I didn't know what they meant yet, but I had a feeling I would soon. And then, after what felt like an eternity of waiting, hoping for the best while expecting the worst, surprisingly, the root withdrew. No sound. Just that brief slither, and it was gone. And yet... not. Because even after it left, the air didn't go back to normal. The soil around me felt marked. I had been touched. Not a kill. Not a warning. A claim. ~----~ [WARNING: Area flagged by Rival Predator!] [This territory is now contested.] ~----~ Seeing this new notification, I wanted to laugh. 'Great! Just great, what else did I expect?' I don't know how long I stood there; paralyzed, not from fear but from calculation. The system was adapting fast, giving me new instincts, new urges. And now it was telling me I wasn't alone. Another like me had evolved. Another plant, following a different path. ... The next morning... Time here is strange so I count days by relying more on feeling than anything scientific. It was unreliable, but to me, it was important. It made me feel human. I don't know why it was important. Who knows? Maybe I'll stay a plant forever. But for some reason, I wanted to retain a few things human in me no matter how small and trivial they seemed. Sunlight returned. I felt its warmth, though it no longer satisfied me the way it once did. Not completely. I had changed. Predator, yes, but not dominant. I needed strength. Biomass. I needed a kill, I needed to claim. So I set to work. Slowly, carefully, my spikes extended, this time wider and lower. I rearranged my roots to form a funnel, a natural trap. If something came from that direction again, it would find nothing, until it was too late. As I waited while carefully exploring my surrounding with my roots, I could not help but notice something. I already noticed it earlier, but I didn't pay much attention to it at first. A strange scent of decay... not animal. Ashy. A foreign root system that's already blackened, burned, and dead. Earlier, nothing happened, but this time there was the briefest system ping. ~----~ [User #009 Terminated. Trial Slot Vacated] ~----~ 'Huh?' 'User #009? What's that?' 'And what does it mean by terminated?' I didn't pay too much attention to it. After all, this is just one of many things that are weird about this world and the system. And then... I learned to bait. seaʀᴄh thё nôᴠel Fire.nёt website on Google to access chapters of novels early and in the highest quality. A small part of the rodent's blood still clung to my thorn. While I waited in silent and tense boredom, my brain kept on calculating, thinking, and out of the blue, I felt the urge to do it. I excreted the rodent's blood that still clung to my thorn on a small leaf pore, letting the scent seep into the soil. A chemical signal. A message. 'Come find me'. Something answered. But not the rival plant. Not yet. A beetle. No, a corpse beetle; armored, hissing, and fast. Drawn by my scent. I didn't hesitate this time. Spike. Pierced. Dragged. Crushed. It happened in an instant. Its shell cracked like dry wood. Its legs twitched once, then went still. I absorbed it. ~----~ [Biomass absorbed: 17%] [Flesh-Touched milestone reached.] [Skill Unlocked: Digestive Root (Basic).] [Territorial Instinct: Lure level increased.] ~----~ Then... The ground shook again. Just slightly. Just enough. The Rival Plant had noticed. A new message appeared. ~----~ [Contested Entity Response: ACTIVE] [Prepare for confrontation!] ... And below that. [Evolution Threshold: Approaching] ~----~ I had no lips, but I imagined myself smiling darkly. 'Took you long enough bastard'. 'Want to starve me, you Photosynth-freakin'-sis?! Unfortunately for you, you'll have to kill me first!' 'Fertilize that, bastard!' I didn't know when it would come. But I was prepared, and I knew this. I wouldn't be prey. Not again. I was ready to fight dirty.

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Echoterra: Rise of the Verdant King
Echoterra: Rise of the Verdant King Author:Lord_Profane
Chapter 1: Awakening in the soil Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 2: The hunger beneath Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 3: Verdant hunger Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 4: Beneath the predator’s skin Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 5: Predator’s scent Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 6: Territorial battle [1] Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 7: Territorial battle [2] Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 8: Ashes of a rival Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 9: Revelations Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 10: Fragmented memories Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 11: The root stirs Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 12: Thorns and strategy Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 13: The tremor beneath Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 14: The thorn that bites back Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 15: Thorns across time Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 16: A kin [1] Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 17: A kin [2] Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 18: Ash in the air Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 19: Battle against the Cinderrend Jackal Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 20: Roots beneath the mountain Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 21: Battle against Thryss, the Root Reclaimer [1] Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 22: Battle against Thryss, the Root Reclaimer [2] Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 23: King of the green hell Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 24: Guardian of the green code Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 25: What a mad world we live in Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 26: The crown of roots Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 27: Diplomacy veiled in danger, power cloaked in pollen Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 28: Among the choir of spores Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 29: Roots of resistance Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 30: The night before the rot Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 31: The choir that hungered Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 32: The whisperroot envoy Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 33: The thorn’s envoy Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 34: Verdant vengeance Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 35: The verdant cradle Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 36: Ashes of the old world Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 37: The seed and the soul Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 38: The roots remember Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 39: {Bonus - } Hunter in the ruined city [1] Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 40: Hunter in the ruined city [2] Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 41: {Bonus - } Iron and Ash Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 42: Thorns in the shadows Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 43: Thorns cut deeper Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 44: Brink of the Verdant Abyss Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Lord of Ruin Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 46: Ashes and roots Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 47: Pulse of the Earth Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 48: Roots of vulnerability Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 49: Defiance in the maw Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 50: War in the cradle Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 51: King of the abyss Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 52: Fortress of thorns Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 53: Thorns in silence Sep 16th, 2025
Chapter 54: Lure of the beast Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 55: Will of the King Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 56: Outlier’s gamble Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 57: Crown of blood Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 58: Null and fury Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 59: Ashes of defiance Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 60: Fall of the king Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 61: Ruins of wrath Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 62: Resurrection of thorns Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 63: Nightmare’s conqueror Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 64: Shadows of divinity Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 65: The hunter’s gamble [1] Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 66: The hunter’s gamble [2] Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 67: The hunter’s gamble [3] Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 68: Ironhold’s last stand [1] Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 69: Ironhold’s last stand [2] Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 70: Greed’s gambit Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 71: The last man standing wins Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 72: Fangs of the pacifist Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 73: Outlier’s infiltration Sep 18th, 2025
Chapter 74: Echoes of a feral Earth Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 75: A trial Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 77: Treacherous journey [1] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 78: Treacherous journey [2] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 79: Treacherous journey [3] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 80: Treacherous journey [4] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 81: Treacherous journey [5] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 82: Treacherous journey [6] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 83: Treacherous journey [7] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 84: Treacherous journey [8] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 85: Treacherous journey [9] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 86: Treacherous journey [10] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 87: Treacherous journey [11] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 88: Treacherous journey [12] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 89: Treacherous journey [13] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 90: Treacherous journey [14] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 91: Treacherous journey [15] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 92: Treacherous journey [16] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 93: Treacherous journey [17] Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 94: Day 60 Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 95: Echoes of ash Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 96: Answers [1] Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 97: Answers [2] Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 98: Answers [3] Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 99: Veil of centuries Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 100: Purge of the forgotten Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 101: Trust Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 102: A Verdant City Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 103: Roar of the return Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 104: Roots of resolve Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 105: Ashes of Atlanta Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 106: Battle for Atlanta [1] Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 107: Battle for Atlanta [2] Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 108: Battle for Atlanta [3] Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 109: Throne of the Mechanosite Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 110: Roots of dominion Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 111: Echoes by the fire Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 112: A quiet dawn Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 113: Roots of a domain Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 114: Verdant hunt Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 115: Into the nexus vault Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 116: Roots and vows Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 117: Seeds of war Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 118: The Apostate’s gambit Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 119: Apostate Raid Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 120: The Verdant Pact Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 121: Sporelinked Kin Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 122: War council of the Verdant Pact Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 123: Veins of the enemy Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 124: Retaliation protocol Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 125: Into the machine’s shadow Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 126: Pressure points Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 127: Server squads Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 128: Boiling the sea Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 129: Striking back Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 130: The last turning Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 131: Breach Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 132: Blood in the streets Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 133: The three Generals Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 134: Into the heart Sep 24th, 2025
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