Chapter 16

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Chapter 16 of "Naruto: Strongest Shinobi System With a Glitch" starts revealing surprises: AN : Thanks everyone for supporting this fix and pushing it to Top 10 in... Read on!

AN : Thanks everyone for supporting this fix and pushing it to Top 10 in popularity. Hope you guys enjoy this Chapter! Thank you Jibreel Kamal, balmung1989, random_debuff, George Simon, Anthony Harper for your support on patreon!! ------------------------------------- Forest of Death Two figures blurred and clashed in rapid motion, so fast their silhouettes were barely distinguishable. Kitazawa paused, eyes widening with interest. Originally, he’d left the academy intending to find Might Gai. Bringing Hinata along had simply been an opportunity to start her special training. But now, he stood still, content to watch the intense one-on-one battle unfolding before him—a pure contest between men. He knew both combatants well. Might Gai, in his trademark green jumpsuit and radiant enthusiasm, spun and struck with flamboyant precision. Opposite him was Kakashi Hatake, silver-haired and masked, only his single visible eye betraying a sharp alertness that contrasted his otherwise languid demeanor. Kitazawa focused his attention on Gai’s movements. Moments later, he recognized the technique: the Leaf Great Whirlwind. Though he tried to memorize the strikes and footwork, he knew that Taijutsu wasn’t just about form. The crucial element lay in the method of delivering force. Without someone to teach him proper application—or a Sharingan to analyze it in slow motion—he’d never fully master it on sight alone. With a resounding bang, the two fighters broke apart, leaping back from each other. "That’s enough for today," Kakashi said coolly, sliding his hands into his pockets. "Kitazawa’s here. I’m guessing he didn’t come out this far just for the scenery." "Then we’ll continue our youthful battle next time!" Gai exclaimed, chest heaving, sweat glistening on his brow. Kitazawa stepped forward with a nod. "Gai. Kakashi." Kakashi’s single visible eye flicked to Hinata, who was half-hidden behind Kitazawa like a shy kitten. "What brings you out here at this hour, Kitazawa?" "I finished classes and thought I’d pay a visit," Kitazawa said lightly. "This is one of my students—Hyuga Hinata." Gai’s eyes sparkled. "Hyuga Clan’s Gentle Fist! I’ve always admired their style!" "She’s still just a kid," Kakashi interjected dryly. Gai paused, scratching his cheek with one finger. It was true—the Hyuga Clan, while highly respected, wasn’t easy to approach. Unlike the Uchiha Clan’s icy arrogance, the Hyuga were simply bound by layer upon layer of rigid rules. "Actually, Gai—I’m here because I need a favor," Kitazawa said bluntly. "Oh?" Kakashi said. Then, without waiting for further explanation, he lifted a hand in casual farewell. "Well, I’ll leave you two to it. I’ve got Anbu business to handle." And with a swirl of leaves, Kakashi vanished. Kitazawa’s lips twitched. He strongly suspected Kakashi had bolted to avoid being dragged into another of Gai’s "youthful challenges". In the original timeline, Gai had latched onto Kakashi as his eternal rival, trying to outdo him in everything from sparring to rock-paper-scissors—a persistence that had even the stoic Kakashi on edge. Truly, it was proof that even the strongest men could fear a determined eccentric. "Can you teach me the Leaf Great Whirlwind?" Kitazawa asked without preamble. "Of course!" Gai gave a booming laugh, flashing a thumbs-up so bright it practically sparkled. "The power of fiery youth must be shared! Everyone should train in Taijutsu and sweat together!" In the original timeline, Gai had even taught Kakashi the secrets of the Eight Gates, a forbidden technique. Compared to that, the Leaf Great Whirlwind was practically a beginner’s move. "Thanks," Kitazawa said, grinning. Then a thought struck him. "By the way—do you know Rock Lee?" Gai blinked. "Rock Lee? No, can’t say I do." Kitazawa wasn’t surprised. Rock Lee was only a second-year student right now. In the original future, he and Gai would become inseparable—mentor and student, bound by shared dreams and burning determination. "He’s a student in Second Year, Class A," Kitazawa explained. "You should meet him sometime." Gai tilted his head. "Why?" "Because," Kitazawa said, smiling, "he’s overflowing with youthful spirit—and he’d be perfect for your Taijutsu training." "Really?" Gai’s entire face lit up like the sun. Gai suddenly lit up with enthusiasm. In the ninja world, the bond between teacher and student was both common and deeply significant. Many ninja aspired to find a disciple who could inherit their techniques and spirit. Gai was no exception. But for him, finding a successor had always been especially difficult. After all, the Eight Gates technique was infamously grueling and dangerous to master. "You’ll understand once you meet him," Kitazawa said confidently. "He won’t disappoint you." "That’s... incredible!" Gai froze in place, his body quivering as tears poured down his face. "This... this must be the power of youth!" Four words popped into Kitazawa’s mind: Utterly awe-inspiring. Meanwhile, Hinata was completely bewildered. What... is going on? she thought. These adults are so strange... "Excellent!" Gai wiped away his tears and declared, "Then let’s have a youthful training session right here and now!" "Hinata, since you’re already here, you’re joining too," Kitazawa said, trailing after Gai. "O-okay..." Hinata blinked and nodded, still trying to process everything. "Watch closely!" Gai stopped in front of a large tree and shouted, "Leaf Great Whirlwind!" He lashed out with a powerful low kick, striking the tree trunk. In a fluid motion, he twisted his body, transforming the low kick into a sharp upward strike. Boom! The tree shuddered from the impact. Leaves rained down around them, and a deep dent appeared in the bark. "What insane power," Kitazawa muttered under his breath, clicking his tongue. Then again, it wasn’t surprising. In the original timeline, Gai’s relentless training was practically legendary. Apart from eating and sleeping, the man was a machine of pure effort. "All right—your turn!" Gai stepped aside, giving Kitazawa space. Kitazawa took a deep breath and stepped forward. Mimicking the motions, he executed the Leaf Great Whirlwind with surprising ease. "That’s amazing!" Hinata couldn’t help blurting it out as she watched him land the technique perfectly on his first try. Gai stared at Kitazawa, eyes wide. "Wait... have you trained in this before?" "Nope," Kitazawa replied calmly, shaking his head. While he’d never formally learned the Leaf Great Whirlwind, he had already mastered the basics of the Leaf Whirlwind, which gave him a solid foundation. "Kitazawa!" Gai exclaimed, gripping his shoulders, "Join me in the path of Taijutsu mastery! Let’s train and sweat together in the name of youth!" Kitazawa cleared his throat and gently pried himself free. "I... don’t have that kind of time for constant training. Besides, we were classmates once. If we become teacher and student now, it’ll completely mess up our seniority." The thought of learning the Eight Gates made Kitazawa shiver inwardly. That was a lifetime sentence of grueling pain and effort. He’d finally acquired a system. Wasn’t he allowed to enjoy life a little? By midday, the training session wound down. After just two hours, Kitazawa had fully mastered the Leaf Great Whirlwind. Current Task: Master a C-rank Ninjutsu faster than Uchiha Sasuke. 4 Task Reward: Manipulating Shuriken Technique. Host has completed the task. Reward granted. Manipulating Shuriken Technique... Kitazawa recalled it well. It was both a ninjutsu technique and a skill for throwing shuriken. In essence, it allowed the user to control shuriken mid-flight using nearly invisible threads—turning ordinary throws into lethal surprises. "Gai, thanks for today," Kitazawa said, wiping sweat from his brow. "Let me treat you to a meal. What do you feel like eating?" "Ichiraku Ramen!" Gai exclaimed, striking a thumbs-up pose, his teeth gleaming. Kitazawa chuckled, then glanced at Hinata. "Hinata, how about you?" Hinata was flushed pink from exertion, her fair skin glistening with sweat and her usually tidy hair now a tousled mess. "I... I’m fine," she managed between quick breaths. "Great. Let’s head to Ichiraku Ramen," Kitazawa said, watching her thoughtfully. He was already plotting the second phase of her special training. -------------------------------- AN : To keep the Chapters coming - Support with POWER STONES. For Every 100 power stones - 1 BONUS Chapter. For Every 10 5-star reviews - 2 BONUS Chapters. For getting to Top 10 Popularity/Power - 3 Extra Chapters. 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Contents
Naruto: Strongest Shinobi System With a Glitch
Naruto: Strongest Shinobi System With a Glitch Author:NoviceAuthor
Chapter 1 Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 2 Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 3 Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 4 - 04 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 5 - 05 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 6 - 06 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 7 - 07 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 8 - 08 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 9 - 09 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 10 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 11 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 12 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 13 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 14 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 15 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 16 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 17 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 18 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 19 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 20 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 21 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 22 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 23 Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 24 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 25 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 26 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 27 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 28 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 29 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 30 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 31 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 32 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 33 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 34 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 35 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 36 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 37 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 38 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 39 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 40 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 41 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 42 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 43 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 44 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 45 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 46 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 47 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 48 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 49 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 50 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 51 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 52 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 53 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 54 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 55 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 56 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 57 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 58 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 59 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 60 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 61 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 62 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 63 Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 64 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 65 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 66 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 67 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 68 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 69 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 70 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 71 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 72 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 73 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 74 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 75 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 76 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 77 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 78 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 79 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 80 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 81 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 82 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 83 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 84 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 85 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 86 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 87 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 88 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 89 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 90 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 91 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 92 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 93 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 94 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 95 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 96 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 97 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 98 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 99 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 100 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 101 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 102 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 103 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 104 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 105 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 106 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 107 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 108 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 109 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 110 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 111 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 112 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 113 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 114 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 115 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 116 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 117 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 118 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 119 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 120 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 121 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 122 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 123 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 124 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 125 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 126 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 127 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 128 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 129 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 130 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 131 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 132 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 133 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 134 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 135 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 136 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 137 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 138 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 139 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 140 Oct 6th, 2025
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