Chapter 22: Beneath the Surface

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Chapter 22 - Beneath the Surface Chapter 22: Beneath the Surface Sunday, 7 December The morning after the win against Morecambe felt lighter. Not in the weather as it was still bitter, with a crust of frost on the windshields and breath that turned instantly to mist, but in the air around the club. Something had shifted. At the stadium, the staff showed up earlier than needed, even though it was only a recovery session. The locker room had its buzz back. It was about Max Simons, about the clean sheet, about what this team was becoming. Coffee steamed in styrofoam cups, and someone actually laughed in the physio room. Even the smell of deep Heat didn't seem so miserable. Max arrived last, as usual. Same jacket he'd worn for years, slightly frayed at the collar. He moved like someone with nothing to prove. When he stepped through the door, Reece held it open for him and grinned. "Hero's welcome?" Max shrugged with a tired smirk. "One goal doesn't make a legend... but it's a decent start." They all smiled, even Luka and Dev. In the video room, they slouched in their chairs, legs stretched out, some icing knees, others shoulders. There wasn't much talking. No music either. Just that low drone of the projector kicking in. Niels stood at the front with the clicker in his hand. Same place he always stood. Same stillness. "Watch this." The screen flickered to life. Footage from the 93rd minute. Luka's switch of play to the right. The fullback's delivery, just a shade behind. Max was adjusting by stepping back and swinging. That unmistakable thud of clean contact. The ball tore into the bottom corner. He paused the clip. The ball frozen in the net. The stadium blurred in the background. "That's not luck," Niels said with a half-smile, voice calm. "That's composure. That's belief." He scanned the room. No one moved. Not even Nate, who usually couldn't sit still. "You earned that." He let it hang there for a moment, then clicked the remote again. A new screen popped up. Plain black background and bold white text. FA Cup Round 3 Crawley Town vs Leyton Orient (A) Wednesday, January 7th 2010 A few players shifted in their chairs. Luka leaned forward. Nate tapped his fingers on his knee. Reece just nodded slowly. Leyton Orient. A proper League One side. They are disciplined, compact, ruthless. They didn't give you much, and punished every mistake. But still, beatable as long as we play our cards right. "Big stage," Luka muttered, eyes scanning the empty stands like they were already filled with pressure. Reece didn't flinch. "Good. Big stages are where people notice. Let's give them something to talk about." Nate didn't say anything. Just smiled to himself. Max glanced at the screen and said quietly, "I've played them before. They hate losing at home." He paused. "Let's get them." That afternoon, Crawley Town was all over the place, local sports radio buzzing with their name, highlights running on Sky's League Two wrap, and social media lighting up with clips of their best moments. "Veteran Simons snatches last-minute winner" was the common headline. And the goal was on loop. "Max Simons... oh my word, he's done it! Crawley have stolen it at the death!" In pubs across the town, fans rewatched the clip on phones over pints. Something about that goal felt different. Not just the timing or the finish, but what it represented. Crawley weren't hoping anymore. They were expecting something more. At training on Monday, you could feel it. Reece ran the warm-ups like a drill sergeant. There was no slack, no slouching. Luka and Dev started snapping passes in tight spaces before the first whistle. Nate looked stiff but pushed through, jogging extra laps before the main session. Even the lads who'd barely seen minutes lately, Korey, Ellis, Qazi were sharper. They wanted in. Belief, once just a fragile thread, had now been woven deep into the very fabric of the club. By midweek, Niels was back in his office watching Leyton Orient matches on repeat. Same setup most games: three at the back, wingbacks flying forward, a clever number ten who drifted into spaces, and a target man who didn't need much to punish you. They liked to press for the first fifteen, then drop into their shell. "Score early, then bully you," Niels muttered under his breath. But he also saw gaps. Especially down the flanks in transition. Their midfield didn't recover quickly. Their left-sided centre-back was clumsy under pressure. He jotted down notes. Drew lines on the whiteboard. Then reached for his phone. He hadn't spoken to Milan in weeks. When he finally called, Milan answered on the third ring. "Cup draw," Niels said. "against Orient." A low chuckle on the other end. "I've lost there twice. It's a ugly place when they're winning." "They're good," Niels admitted. "So are you." There was a beat of silence. "I've got a squad," Niels said. "Still need a team." Friday's training was crisp. It was short yet controlled, just enough to keep the engine warm before two days off. But it had an edge. Reece barked louder than usual. Dev and Luka passed between each other like they had invisible strings connecting their boots. Nate beat two players in a tight-sided drill and didn't even look back. No celebration. Just hunger. And Max... did it again. Near the end of the session, with everyone slowing, he peeled off his marker in a small-sided game, waved once, and got the delivery he wanted. One touch. One hit. Bottom corner. It was not dramatic, just clean and inevitable. A couple of the younger lads turned their heads. He didn't say anything. Just dusted his gloves off and said, "Same boots. Just different grass." On Saturday, the local paper ran with: "Orient Awaits: Crawley Town Head Into Cup Round 3 With Wind In Their Sails" The full back page was a photo of Max mid-celebration with arms wide, the ball nestled in the net behind him, floodlights above like theatre lights. At the corner café near Niels' flat, the same barista he passed every morning finally spoke. "You lot made me scream last night," she said as she handed over his coffee. He blinked. "Was it the goal or the whole game?" "Both," she grinned. "But mostly Max." Niels smiled. "Yeah. He's not done yet." Later that night, back at his flat, he opened the same document he'd been writing in since August. What comes after survival? He scrolled past the old entries. Past the one from Wrexham. Past the line after Morecambe. He tapped out a new one: "The climb becomes a run. And the run becomes belief." There was one last thing that happened before the weekend ended. Max came back to the ground. There was no fanfare, no boots. Just a coat, a hoodie, and sore knees. He told the physio he wanted a quick ice wrap before dinner. But he lingered and walked out to the pitch. The floodlights were off now. The seats empty, It was just him and the goal where it had happened. He stood at the edge of the box. He was quiet watching nothing, but thinking something. He could feel that moment again. The silence before the swing. The pause before the roar. He didn't say a word. Just stood for a while. Then turned and walked away. Boots crunching frozen gravel. His face was calm. There was another moment coming. Maybe in East London. Maybe once more, right when it matters. If you enjoyed the Chapter, please consider dropping a Power Stone! Your support means a lot and really motivates me to keep writing. Thank you! ????⚽

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Contents
Touchline Rebirth: From Game To Glory
Touchline Rebirth: From Game To Glory Author:Daoist_Nelen
Chapter 1: Whistle of Rebirth Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 2: The First Step Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 3: Making a Mark Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 4: In the Shadow Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 5: The Cup Clash Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 6: Rising Tensions Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 7: Under Pressure Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 8: Shifting Ground Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 9: The Turning Point Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 10: Behind the Play Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 11: Growing into the Fight Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 12: Between the Lines Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 13: The Quiet Before Goodbye Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 14: Matchday Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 15: The Torch Passes, The Era Ends Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 16: A New Beginning Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 17: Road to Wrexham Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 18: Breaking Wrexham’s Rhythm Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 19: After the Victory Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 20: The Climb Starts Here Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 21: No More Underdogs Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 22: Beneath the Surface Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 23: Solid Ground Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 24: The Quiet Climb Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 25: The Matches You Don’t Remember, But Always Matter Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 26: No Room for Winter Myths Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 27: Edge of Winter Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 28: Between the Years Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 29: The Year’s Last Stand Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 30: A Quiet New Year Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 31: Back to the Grind Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 32: A Game Hard Fought Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 33: Cup Fever Rising Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 34: The Dream Grows Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 35: Hearts on the Line Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 36: Steel in the Frost Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 37: Battle in the North Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 38: Ready for Giants Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Fourth Round Clash (Vs. Barnsley Part-I) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Fourth Round Clash (Vs. Barnsley Part-II) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 41: Echoes of Glory Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 42: Into the Inferno Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 43: Chaos in the Field Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 44: Grudge Match Settled Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 45: Fire on the Horizon Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 46: For Nate, For Glory Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 47: Rise at Broadfield Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 48: Giants on the Horizon Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 49: Blaze of Glory Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Calm Before the Storm Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 51: No Way Through Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 52: Hearts Still Burning Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 53: Resolve against the Giants Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 54: Clash of Titans Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 55: The Final Push at Burnley Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 56: Red Devils Rising Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Red Devils’ Resolve Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 58: The Push Continues Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 59: The Weight of Expectation Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 60: Broadfield’s Blaze Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 61: Marching for Glory Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 62: The Red Devils Roar Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 63: Burton’s Challenge Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 64: Broadfield’s Triumph Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 65: Dreams Under Pressure Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 66: The Final Gamble Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Road to Wembley Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 68: Fire in the Fight Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 69: Clash Before Wembley Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 70: Red Devils Clash at Wembley (Semi-final: Part-I) Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 71: Till the Final Breath (Semi-final: Part-II) Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 72: In the Extra Time (Semi-final: Part-III) Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 73: Battle for the Promotion Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 74: The Roar at Broadfield Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 75: The High Press at Underhill Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gamble at Broadfield Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 77: Tactical Gamble Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 78: Second Half Fire Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 79: Second or Nothing Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 80: Red Devils Unleashed Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 81: Kings Without a Crown Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 82: Sparks of Glory Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 83: Burning for Wembley Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 84: The Final March to Wembley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 85: No Fear at Wembley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 86: FA Cup Final[1] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 87: FA Cup Final [2] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 88: FA Cup Final [3] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 89: FA Cup Final [4] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 90: FA Cup Final [5] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 91: FA Cup Final [6] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 92: The Triumph at Wembley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 93: Heroes Return to Crawley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 94: The Morning After the Glory Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 95: Rumors and Realities Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 96: The Decision Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 97: One More Season Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 98: The Quiet Stands Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 99: A Night of Champions League Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 100: The Game Within the Game Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 101: What We’re Building Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 102: Dutch Days Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 103: A Coach’s Reflection Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 104: Thomas Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 105: Legacy in the Making Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 106: Emma’s Call Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 107: A Quiet Return Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 108: Blueprint for a Legacy Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 109: Building the Belief Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 110: Luka’s Silence Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 111: What Stays, What Goes Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 112: The Talk and the Truth Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 113: The Empty Space Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 114: Chasing the Midfield Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 115: Between Vision and Grit Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 116: Midfield Maestro Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 117: Medicals and Decisions Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 118: Personal Terms Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 119: Fixtures Announced Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 120: Training Intensifies Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 121: Tactical Preparation Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 122: Starting XI Practice Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 123: Pre-Match Focus Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 124: League One Kickoff Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 125: Fault Lines Begin to Show Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 126: Out of Sync Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 127: The Hunger to Prove Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 128: Chasing the Breakthrough Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 129: Momentum in the Making Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 130: Build-Up Without Breakthrough Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 131: From Frustration to Focus Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 132: Pressure and Promise Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 133: Sparks and Struggles at Broadfield Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 134: Lines Between Discipline Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 135: Unfinished Business Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 136: Europa Nights Beckon Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 137: Control and Chaos Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 138: Fighting for Every Inch Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 139: The Journey to the BayArena Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 140: The Roar of the BayArena Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 141: Back to Broadfield Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 142: Battle on Muddy Ground Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 143: After the Final Whistle Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 144: Back to the Fight Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 145: Back to the Grind Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 146: Victory’s Shadow Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 147: The Weight of a Secret Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 148: The Price of a Secret Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 149: The Rebirth Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 150: Beginning of Something New Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 151: Trial of the New Formation Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 152: Holding Midfield Masterclass Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 153: The Boardroom Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 154: The Boardroom Battle Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 155: The Big Decision Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 156: More Than a Game Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 157: The Aftermath Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 158: A Father’s Quiet Pride Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 159: No Time to Celebrate Oct 7th, 2025
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