Chapter 125: Fault Lines Begin to Show

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Chapter 125: Fault Lines Begin to Show Chapter 125: Fault Lines Begin to Show Monday, August 9 2010 A day had passed since the hard-fought draw at Charlton, and there was a tense energy around Broadfield Stadium. The training pitches baked under the harsh August sun, and the heavy, humid air made everything feel just a bit harder. Niels pulled into the training ground at dawn, his old pickup rumbling to a stop near the chain-link fence. The smell of burnt grass and distant coffee hung in the warm morning air. He felt a knot of determination in his chest, the upcoming match against Sheffield United could either pull the team together or show just how shaky they really were. The headlines that week pulled no punches. Monday’s papers were brutal. One read, "FA Cup Heroics Won’t Save Crawley, They Look Ordinary Now." Another read, "Is Niels’ Project Already Falling Apart?" The words hit hard, stirring doubt after the Charlton draw. Niels could feel it in the squad, the sting had sunk in, and their confidence was starting to wobble. Niels held his worn-out clipboard, its edges frayed and packed with notes on Sheffield’s physical style and on how much they’d need from Pogba and Freeman to hold the midfield together. He glanced out at the training ground, watching the first few players arrive. Each one carried something different, Max Simons’s relentless drive, Thiago’s raw pace, Dev Patel’s creativity in tight spaces. They weren’t perfect, but they had fight. And that, Niels told himself, was something he could still build on. Niels stepped into the analysis room a cramped, familiar corner above the main stand where he did his best thinking. The hum of the old monitor filled the silence as he queued up the Charlton match again. He watched with purpose, scanning for patterns. The midfield wasn’t connecting. Pogba was slow to react on second balls. Nate Sutton wasn’t adjusting his positioning. Freeman wasn’t offering options in tight spaces. Niels paused the video, reached for a marker, and wrote on the whiteboard in firm, deliberate strokes: ’Midfield verticality is missing’. They weren’t moving forward together, and against Sheffield’s pressure, that would be a problem. He paused the footage on a key moment, Pogba trailing as a Charlton runner slipped through, with Freeman too slow to close the gap. Niels muttered, frustration tightening his voice. The talent was there, but the rhythm was off. And with Sheffield’s physical style on the horizon, the margin for error was shrinking. He leaned back, rubbed his temples, and stared at the screen. Fixing this wasn’t optional, it was urgent. Saturday was coming fast, and every second felt like part of the challenge. By Tuesday, the training ground felt like a pressure cooker. The squad was quiet, still weighed down by the Charlton draw. Drills were sloppy passes sailed off target, calls went unanswered, and an unspoken tension hung in the air. Thiago tried to lift spirits, juggling the ball with a grin. "Let’s light it up, yeah?" But even his energy seemed forced, like trying to start a fire in wet wood. After a sloppy passing drill, Niels pulled Pogba aside, his voice calm but firm. "You’re the anchor, Paul. Move off the ball, make yourself available, set the tempo. We need you to lead." Pogba nodded, eyes down, his reply quiet. "Yeah, Coach. I’m on it." But his silence spoke volumes. The team missed meeting on Monday after oversleeping from a late night still hung over him, along with the media’s criticism and his own doubts. Kieron Marsh, still on the bench, threw himself into drills with a fierce, almost reckless energy. During a loose ball challenge, he slammed into Nate Sutton, his shoulder hitting Nate’s chest and knocking him down. The whole squad froze, the air thick with tension. Thomas, the fitness coach, walked over, his Dutch accent sharp. "Easy, Kieron. It’s training, not a fight." Kieron clenched his jaw, voice low but intense. "Then give me minutes in the real game." Thomas met his gaze and nodded slightly. "You’re close. Just don’t force it." Kieron stepped back, but his eyes burned with hunger. Max stood on the sidelines, clapping his hands, trying to get the team focused. "Come on, lads, heads in the game!" But the rhythm was off, like a band out of sync. Dev moved quickly through a drill, showing his skill, but a misread pass from Freeman broke the flow. Thiago’s runs lost their spark when Pogba’s pass arrived too late. The cracks were small but they were there, and Niels couldn’t ignore them. He scribbled down a simple reminder to himself: ’Communication. Timing. Trust’. By Wednesday, Niels gathered the team in the small, bare meeting room at the training complex. Faded posters clung to the walls, and a single window let in dull, gray light. The players Max, Pogba, Freeman, Thiago, Dev, Nate, and the rest slouched in mismatched chairs, their faces showing a mix of frustration, focus, and uncertainty. The projector hummed softly as clips of Charlton’s goal and Crawley’s missed chances played on the cracked screen. Niels stood at the front, his voice steady but sharp. "This isn’t just about working hard. It’s about focus. Control. Reaction. We’re giving away space and losing battles we should win." He paused the clip, pointing to a moment where Pogba and Freeman let a runner slip through, leaving Nate out on his own. "Midfield, you’re not acting as one. You have to trust each other, talk more, and read the game together." Dev raised his hand, speaking calmly but with purpose. "We’re leaving gaps when we push forward, Coach. It feels like the midfield doesn’t trust each other." The room fell silent, the words hanging in the air like a spark over dry grass. Pogba’s shoulders tightened, his eyes narrowing, but he said nothing. Nate stared at his boots, jaw clenched. Freeman’s usual calm flickered, his eyes shifting between the two. Niels nodded, his voice calm but firm. "That’s exactly what we need to fix. Communication. Timing. You’re not just individuals, you’re a team. Sheffield will break us apart if we don’t come together." Max leaned in, his voice quiet but strong. "Let’s get this right, lads. We’re better than what we’ve shown." The squad nodded, but the tension stayed like a quiet crack running through the room, subtle but real. Thiago broke the silence with a grin that didn’t quite reach his eyes. "Oi, Nate, you gonna start shouting or what? My nan’s louder than you." A few laughs bubbled up, easing some of the tension in the room. But Pogba stayed quiet, and Freeman’s tight expression said plenty on its own. Niels wrapped up the meeting with one last clip, a missed chance where Max’s run went unnoticed. "See that? It’s about intent. We need it. Every single second." Emma noticed Niels’s growing distance, his late nights in the analysis room, his pacing a constant rhythm. On Thursday, she found him in his office, the desk buried under notes, coffee cups, and a laptop glowing with Charlton footage. His eyes were tired, his jaw set, a man wrestling with the weight of the season. She set a steaming mug of tea beside him, her voice soft but steady. "Don’t let fear of losing control make you grip the wheel too tight. They’re with you, Niels. Let them breathe." Niels looked up, a faint smile breaking through the strain. "Thanks, Emma. Just... can’t let them down." She nodded, her presence a quiet anchor. "You won’t. They’re tougher than you think." She left him to his thoughts, the tea’s steam curling in the dim light, a small gesture against the storm. Emma made her way to the training ground, keeping an eye on the squad. She spotted Pogba stretching, his ankle still taped, and tossed him a water bottle. "Stay hydrated, Paul. And try to talk more out there, alright?" He gave a small nod, a flicker of thanks in his eyes. Then she caught Kieron, still simmering after the drills, and said softly, "Use that fire, Kieron. It’ll take you far." Her words were a steadying presence, quietly holding the team together. Friday’s press conference felt like a battle. The cramped media room was full of reporters, their questions sharp and direct. "Niels, your tactics, using young midfielders like Pogba and Freeman in key roles, are they too inexperienced for League One?" one asked. Another pushed harder, "Is it time to bring in some seasoned players? The Charlton draw didn’t exactly inspire confidence." Niels leaned into the mic, his voice calm but edged with defiance. "We didn’t get here by playing safe. We grow by facing the storm. Pogba and Freeman are the future, and they’ll prove it on the pitch." His eyes held the reporters’, unyielding, a line drawn in the sand. Some scribbled furiously, others raised skeptical brows, but Niels’s words were a vow to his squad, to Crawley, to himself. Friday’s last training session ended with a heavy silence. The team’s rhythm was still off, and their voices were quiet as they left the pitch. Niels walked away, clutching his clipboard, his mind racing over Sheffield’s tough style and how to fix the midfield’s weak spots. Above, dark clouds rolled in, the coming rain matching the mood hanging over the squad. Kieron stayed behind, alone on the pitch, sending ball after ball into the empty net. Sweat dripped down his face, his lips pressed tight with determination. Every shot was a promise, proof of the fire burning inside him as the dusk settled in. The rain started to fall, soft against the floodlights, echoing Crawley’s restless heartbeat.

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Contents
Touchline Rebirth: From Game To Glory
Touchline Rebirth: From Game To Glory Author:Daoist_Nelen
Chapter 1: Whistle of Rebirth Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 2: The First Step Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 3: Making a Mark Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 4: In the Shadow Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 5: The Cup Clash Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 6: Rising Tensions Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 7: Under Pressure Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 8: Shifting Ground Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 9: The Turning Point Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 10: Behind the Play Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 11: Growing into the Fight Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 12: Between the Lines Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 13: The Quiet Before Goodbye Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 14: Matchday Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 15: The Torch Passes, The Era Ends Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 16: A New Beginning Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 17: Road to Wrexham Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 18: Breaking Wrexham’s Rhythm Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 19: After the Victory Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 20: The Climb Starts Here Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 21: No More Underdogs Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 22: Beneath the Surface Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 23: Solid Ground Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 24: The Quiet Climb Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 25: The Matches You Don’t Remember, But Always Matter Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 26: No Room for Winter Myths Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 27: Edge of Winter Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 28: Between the Years Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 29: The Year’s Last Stand Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 30: A Quiet New Year Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 31: Back to the Grind Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 32: A Game Hard Fought Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 33: Cup Fever Rising Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 34: The Dream Grows Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 35: Hearts on the Line Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 36: Steel in the Frost Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 37: Battle in the North Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 38: Ready for Giants Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Fourth Round Clash (Vs. Barnsley Part-I) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Fourth Round Clash (Vs. Barnsley Part-II) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 41: Echoes of Glory Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 42: Into the Inferno Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 43: Chaos in the Field Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 44: Grudge Match Settled Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 45: Fire on the Horizon Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 46: For Nate, For Glory Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 47: Rise at Broadfield Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 48: Giants on the Horizon Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 49: Blaze of Glory Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Calm Before the Storm Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 51: No Way Through Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 52: Hearts Still Burning Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 53: Resolve against the Giants Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 54: Clash of Titans Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 55: The Final Push at Burnley Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 56: Red Devils Rising Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Red Devils’ Resolve Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 58: The Push Continues Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 59: The Weight of Expectation Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 60: Broadfield’s Blaze Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 61: Marching for Glory Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 62: The Red Devils Roar Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 63: Burton’s Challenge Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 64: Broadfield’s Triumph Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 65: Dreams Under Pressure Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 66: The Final Gamble Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 67: The Road to Wembley Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 68: Fire in the Fight Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 69: Clash Before Wembley Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 70: Red Devils Clash at Wembley (Semi-final: Part-I) Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 71: Till the Final Breath (Semi-final: Part-II) Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 72: In the Extra Time (Semi-final: Part-III) Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 73: Battle for the Promotion Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 74: The Roar at Broadfield Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 75: The High Press at Underhill Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 76: The Gamble at Broadfield Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 77: Tactical Gamble Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 78: Second Half Fire Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 79: Second or Nothing Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 80: Red Devils Unleashed Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 81: Kings Without a Crown Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 82: Sparks of Glory Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 83: Burning for Wembley Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 84: The Final March to Wembley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 85: No Fear at Wembley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 86: FA Cup Final[1] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 87: FA Cup Final [2] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 88: FA Cup Final [3] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 89: FA Cup Final [4] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 90: FA Cup Final [5] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 91: FA Cup Final [6] Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 92: The Triumph at Wembley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 93: Heroes Return to Crawley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 94: The Morning After the Glory Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 95: Rumors and Realities Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 96: The Decision Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 97: One More Season Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 98: The Quiet Stands Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 99: A Night of Champions League Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 100: The Game Within the Game Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 101: What We’re Building Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 102: Dutch Days Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 103: A Coach’s Reflection Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 104: Thomas Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 105: Legacy in the Making Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 106: Emma’s Call Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 107: A Quiet Return Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 108: Blueprint for a Legacy Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 109: Building the Belief Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 110: Luka’s Silence Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 111: What Stays, What Goes Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 112: The Talk and the Truth Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 113: The Empty Space Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 114: Chasing the Midfield Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 115: Between Vision and Grit Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 116: Midfield Maestro Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 117: Medicals and Decisions Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 118: Personal Terms Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 119: Fixtures Announced Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 120: Training Intensifies Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 121: Tactical Preparation Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 122: Starting XI Practice Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 123: Pre-Match Focus Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 124: League One Kickoff Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 125: Fault Lines Begin to Show Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 126: Out of Sync Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 127: The Hunger to Prove Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 128: Chasing the Breakthrough Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 129: Momentum in the Making Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 130: Build-Up Without Breakthrough Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 131: From Frustration to Focus Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 132: Pressure and Promise Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 133: Sparks and Struggles at Broadfield Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 134: Lines Between Discipline Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 135: Unfinished Business Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 136: Europa Nights Beckon Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 137: Control and Chaos Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 138: Fighting for Every Inch Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 139: The Journey to the BayArena Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 140: The Roar of the BayArena Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 141: Back to Broadfield Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 142: Battle on Muddy Ground Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 143: After the Final Whistle Oct 5th, 2025
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