Chapter 4: Don't Let Me Shake You Off

Words : 1569 Updated : Sep 17th, 2025
The Bosnian Premier League only started in 1997, so it doesn't have a long history. The Bosnian Second Division began officially operating in 2000, and it's currently only in its second season. The league is still in its exploratory phase, which means the schedule isn't too tight. The season ends early in April, and after that, the players enter their holiday period — or rather, they start their side jobs. There's also a standard winter break, so the pressure of the schedule isn't too high. This is meant to give these low-paid players more rest time and help them balance life with their careers. Currently, 11 rounds have been played, meaning the season is already past the halfway mark. Mostar Wanderers are in 4th place on the table, still far from promotion. Meanwhile,​​ Sarajevo Ranger is in third — a team that Mostar Wanderers must beat to have any hope of promotion. "Mark that short guy, number 9!"Sarajevo's captain, Rok, barked fiercely at a newly joined teammate. Bazel, a 22-year-old German, had moved to Bosnia due to his parents' work and joined this club based on his football background. Bazel had the natural German rigor, but when he looked at that 150 cm (4'11") tiny player, his mind filled with question marks. "Him? A striker? Number 9?" That small, skinny frame and baby-faced look made him seem more like a kid than a footballer. It clashed completely with Bazel's image of a center forward — tall, tough, capable of dominating with both head and foot. "Don't underestimate him. That guy scored eight goals in eleven games!" Captain Rok said with a serious tone. Bazel immediately straightened his expression. The opponent's appearance was misleading, but scoring 8 goals in 11 matches spoke for itself. Once the players completed their warm-ups, they entered the pitch led by three referees. "Let's go, Suke!" "Show them what you've got!" "Bring back news of victory!" "Go, warriors of Mostar!" The crowd, though only around 200 people, was full of energy and passion, creating a lively atmosphere. Suke followed behind his much taller teammates, looking like a gap in the team's height lineup. While high-fiving during the lineup, Bazel watched Suke — who was raising his fist high just to reach face level — still with visible doubt. How the hell did this guy score eight goals?Bazel was baffled. Was the entire Bosnian Second Division just full of weaklings that even a tiny kid could score? Back in their half, Mlinar nudged Suke's head with his shoulder and smiled, "That guy looks really confused." Suke pressed his lips together, "I'm different from traditional forwards." Mlinar laughed. "Don't worry, I'll get the ball to you." Suke nodded softly. "Over here! Pass!" "Give it to me!" "Clear it!!!" The match was fierce — not in pace, but in physicality. The tempo wasn't fast. Ball movement and passing were slow, and transitions from defense to attack were clumsy. But these guys weren't afraid to slide tackle. If they got beaten or felt any danger, they'd go in hard. And many times, they weren't going for the ball — they were going for the man. That's just how the Bosnian league is! If the Premier League is the most physically competitive, then Bosnia's leagues are the most brutal. And the referees? They barely flinch at these tackles. Bang!Mlinar and Rok clashed hard. As captains, neither backed down from the contest for possession, running straight into a tackle. The ball ricocheted from the contact. But they didn't stop. They kept chasing, leading to a second violent collision. Bang!! This time, their boots collided directly. The bone-on-bone impact sound made nearby players wince, feeling the pain just by watching — but both men limped on, refusing to give up. Eventually, the ball landed at the feet of Mostar fullback Kotić, who passed it up the wing. At the same time, Suke moved in that direction. Seeing this, Bazel quickly followed. Suke had his back to the goal, and he could feel Bazel right behind him. Suddenly, Suke burst forward, spinning and sprinting. Bazel instinctively turned to follow — then paused. "Wait, something's off!" He realized Suke was baiting him. Sure enough, Mostar's midfielder launched a surgical through ball down the center. But Bazel hadn't been fooled. He was already positioned in the channel and intercepted it cleanly. "Nice one, Bazel!" His teammates cheered as Bazel calmly passed the ball to a fullback. At that moment, he saw Suk jogging back slowly. They made eye contact. Bazel's eyes were filled with even more confusion — almost saying, Did this guy really score eight goals? "Yes, I did."Suke said. Bazel blinked in surprise. "You can read minds?" Suke drifted left. Bazel quickly followed. They continued talking while running. "I've seen that look plenty of times." Suke said indifferently, "But they all lost to me in the end." Bazel frowned. "That's because you haven't played me yet." Suke just shrugged. Back on the pitch, both teams were still locked in midfield battles, with no real change in tactics. It was like both sides had only one playbook they were running into the ground. That's just how lower-division matches go! The play is rigid, limited by the players' abilities — no complex tactics, just one rigid game plan. Mostar Wanderers used to play a possession style. Their tactics revolved around Mlinar, their best player, moving the ball up and looking for gaps. But that kind of technical play is hard in lower leagues. Too much skill gap among players made possession play fall apart. But Mostar had no choice. Their attack lacked a reliable scorer, their defense was soft, and their goalie was a walking disaster. It was a struggle. They remained a mid-table team in the second division — until Suke joined, and things started to improve. "Suke!" Mlinar suddenly shouted. Suke turned and sprinted again — but instead of passing to him, Mlinar sent a through ball down the wing. "Beautiful!!" The crowd erupted. Mlinar might be aging, but his passing was still sharp. The ball sliced through the defense perfectly. Just when the crowd expected winger Vitoric to get there and score, a figure suddenly darted in from the side — a clean slide tackle sent the ball out of bounds. The stadium went quiet. That perfectly timed defensive play was suffocatingly good. Bazel stood up and roared in excitement. In his mind, it was a brilliant stop. "I get it now!" Bazel shouted to Suk. "You're bait!" Suke looked confused. "You're a decoy," Bazel explained confidently. "You don't join the real attacks. The wings are the actual threat, and your #10 is the playmaker. Maybe you really scored 8 goals, and maybe your shooting is great — but if I cut off your connection with the team, you're no threat." Bazel looked like he'd just uncovered a great truth. In his view, that explained everything. After all, in 20 minutes, Suke hadn't even touched the ball once. The guy was just a distraction while the real danger came from the wings. Suke looked at him and blinked. "You think I'm easy to deal with, don't you?" Bazel shrugged. "In Germany, your height would've ended your career before it began." Suke paused and then warned: "You'd better keep a close eye on me. Don't let me shake you off." Bazel almost retorted with a smug comment, but thought better of it. No point arguing with a guy who was just bluffing. Anyway, he had already "figured out" Mostar's entire attack — now it would be easy to defend. On the sideline, Oripe squinted. "They're starting to ignore Suke." "It's hard not to," said Rosen, Mostar's only backup defender. "He's tiny — you can't even see him when he's next to tall guys." Oripe nodded in agreement. "But he's deadly," Rosen added. Back on the field, Mostar's attack pushed down the left wing, and Sarajevo's defense naturally shifted to that side. Bazel glanced at Suke — no significant movement. "Given up?" he wondered. He focused instead on Mlinar — the real threat. But he didn't notice that Suk, who had been beside him, was now drifting back quietly, creating a 4-meter gap between them. At the same time, Mlinar faked past a defender and suddenly chipped the ball. As the ball flew overhead, Bazel instinctively moved left — to block Suke and signal the keeper. But... he couldn't feel Suke nearby. When he turned, Suke was already behind him — first to the drop zone. "When did he—?!" Bazel was in shock. The crowd erupted in cheers. Suke slowed down, adjusted his steps, and glanced at the keeper's position. As the ball dropped, he didn't trap it. He angled his foot sharply and blasted it straight. The ball zipped toward the near post like a missile, brushing the post as it slammed into the net. After scoring, Suke looked back at the stunned Bazel, as if to say: "I told you — don't let me shake you off!"

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The All-Around Center Forward
The All-Around Center Forward Author:Sovannra_Seang_3636
Chapter 1: Prolouge Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 2: The Fishing Port Boy Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 3: The Wanderers of Mostar Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 4: Don't Let Me Shake You Off Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 5: Inzaghi's Awareness Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 6: Drawing Cards and Geniuses Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 7: Give Me Money! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 8: Diving from the Old Bridge Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Right Path Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 10: A New Attempt Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 11: Play a Match with Us Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 12 - 12 – Suke and Modric Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 13: Luka, You're Here Early! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 14: The Final Battle Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 15: A Beautiful Goal Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 16: Draw Cards! Draw Cards! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 17: Abundant Season Rewards Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 18: World Cup Night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 19: Volunteering Himself Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 20: Bosnia and Herzegovina Cup! A Brand-New Stage! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 21: Just You Wait, We’ll Show You! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 22: Get Him! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 23: Can't Run Anymore, Can You? Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 24: Force It In! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 25: See You in a Few Days Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 26: HŠK Zrinjski Mostar Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 27: The Newcomer Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 28: Can You Patch These Holes? Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 29: The Modrić Who Wants to Change Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 30: Selected for the Squad Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 31: No One Came to Support Luka Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 32: The Young Cheetah Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 33: Move It! Shake It! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 34: The Center-Forward Who Sprints Back to Defend! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 35: Eat First! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 36: New Boots Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 37: Just a Little Training Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 38: Discovery and Problem Solving Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 39: An Unexpected Starter Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 40: Fighting on Two Fronts Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 41: Two Stubborn Mules Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 42: Zakavic Lost It Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Other Suker Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 44: Youth! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 45: Three Consecutive Wins Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 46: FK Sloboda Tuzla Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 47: Winger? Wide Midfielder! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 48: The Curved Pass! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 49: Bosčenović’s Interception Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 50: Arrival in Sarajevo Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 51: Stirring Up Trouble Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 52: High Press! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 53: Trivela Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 54: Suffocating Pressure! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 55: The Mostar Twin Stars Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 56: Sarajevo's Nightlife Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 57: Want to Make Money? Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 58: Oliveira's Disaster Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 59: The Decoy Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 60: The Collapse Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 61: Unrealistic Goals Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 62: Goals! Dreams! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 63: The Lying Boame Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 64: A Snowy Match Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Orphanage in Zagreb Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 66: Dinamo Zagreb Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 67: Bešić's Family Dinner Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 68 - 68 – This Guy! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 69: The Challengers Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 70: A Lone Ride of a Thousand Miles! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Other One Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 72: The Revenge Battle of Sarajevo! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 73: The Temu Version of Messi's Dribbling Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 74: The Twin Stars Connection Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 75: Red Card! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 76 - 76 – Šuker! Come Back! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 77: An Offer from Zagreb Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 78: Tuzla Sloboda and the Bus Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 79: Welcome to Dinamo Zagreb Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 80: The Championship Belongs to Mostar Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 81: The Championship Showdown Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 82 - 82 – Curled Shot Goal Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 83: Champions! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 84: Next Stop Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 85: My Name is Mario Mandžukić Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 86: Vampeta’s Dribbling Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 87: Davor Šuker Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 88: The Rondo Game Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 89: He Trapped the Ball Like That Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 90: Three Warm-up Matches Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 91: The Breakout! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 92: First Appearance Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 93: Enthusiastic and Friendly Fans Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 94: Start the Game with a Penalty! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 95: The Radiant Boys Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 96: Get Past Him! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 97: Small Clique Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 98: Passion Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 99: What the Hell Is This? Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 100: Growing in the Wildest Way Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 101: He Can Use His Left Foot Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 102: Blue Waves Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 103: I’ll Give You the No.10! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 104: The Zagreb Derby Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 105: What Are You Looking At Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 106: Lesson Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 107: The Best! Suker! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 108: Help Me Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 109: A Fool's Method Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 110: Mario! Jump! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 111: You Never Know Until You Try! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 112: Suker Asked Me to Do It Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 113 - 113 New Page Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 114: The Comeback Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 115: I Want Your Agent Contract Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 116: The Persistent Zorančić Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 117: What Do They Want Most? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 118: Just Go All Out! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 119: Radical Style Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 120: Holiday Training Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 121: Have You Ever Seen a Curving Pass? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 122: I Should Beat You Up! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 123: A Good Deed Done Stupidly Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 124: Massacre! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 125: 9! Suker! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 126: The Undefeated Season Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 127: Champions! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 128: We Are Different Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 129: The New Season’s Substitutes Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 130: Give Me Suker! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 131: First Match of the New Season Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 132: First Round of UEFA Champions League Qualifiers Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 133: FC Pyunik Sep 25th, 2025
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