Chapter 13: Luka, You're Here Early!

Words : 1393 Updated : Sep 17th, 2025
"That guy must be a professional footballer, and a high-level one at that." Mlinar leaned in, watching Modrić's departing figure. Suke turned his head with a smile. "How can you tell?" "Completely couldn't keep up!" Mlinar shook his head. "His passing is so precise and clear—that's the kind of awareness you only get from years of playing professionally. And when he has the ball, he barely looks down. He's constantly scanning the field." "I counted—he looked up eight times between receiving and passing the ball." Suke looked surprised. "You had time to notice that?" "Had to!" Mlinar shrugged. "My brain couldn't keep up with the pace, so I stopped using it. Just passed to whoever I saw—it worked." Suke laughed and gave a thumbs up. "Solid method." Mlinar nodded toward the entrance of the pitch. "Do you know who that guy is?" Suke smiled. "Should be easy to guess." "You actually know?" Suke shook his head. "You're so slow. This is Mostar—there aren't that many young people here. Out of all of them, only two could play like that." "Which two?" Mlinar played along. Suke counted on his fingers. "One is currently playing for Zrinjski Mostar—a Croatian prodigy." "Modrić? Luka Modrić? I've seen his matches. He's got enviable talent. Who's the other one?" Suke pointed at himself. Mlinar tilted his head. "What do you mean?" "Me! The other one's me!" Suke said indignantly. Mlinar blinked. Suke rolled his eyes—only for Mlinar to blurt out: "You're saying that guy was Modrić?" Suke's eyes widened—Wasn't that obvious?Shouldn't you be complimenting me instead? Mlinar, meanwhile, rubbed his chin in thought. "Makes sense now. His skills are way above our level. If he went all out, we'd be toast." "Hey!" Suke waved. "I played pretty well too, you know!" Mlinar ignored him, still thinking aloud. "Playing with him was so smooth. Like I didn't even need to think." Suke was speechless and simply turned and walked away. Elsewhere, Modrić had already returned to his club dormitory. He pulled off his hooded tracksuit. His hair clung to his scalp, damp with sweat. Despite the stickiness, he felt mostly exhilarated. Yes—He had just played a truly satisfying match of football. Though it was six-a-side, the coordination and rhythm were the kind he hadn't felt in ages. Something he could never quite recreate at the club. He tried, of course. But somehow, it never clicked. Now, that experience had him questioning everything. Maybe... he really needed to make a change. He sat down at his desk and grabbed pen and paper, scribbling furiously—his hand almost dancing on the page from his excitement. "Dear teacher,In my last letter, I spoke of the difficulties in the team—I couldn't understand why no one seemed to grasp my intent or read my plays. It made everything frustrating. The matches I once looked forward to had become tedious. I blamed my teammates, even questioned the coach. But today... maybe it's not like that after all." Modrić adjusted his posture, replaying the game in his mind as he continued. "It was a magical experience. I was with strangers—we had never trained together. Yet we connected. Our passes clicked. The ball flowed across the pitch, slicing through defenses as if guided by instinct. That's the football I love: team effort, strategic passing, coordination. There, I met someone interesting..." At this point, Modrić's lips curled into a faint smile. One week later, Zagreb, capital of Croatia. In a two-story house surrounded by plants, a middle-aged man of about 40 reclined in a lounge chair, reading a letter. From time to time, he smiled. "We first met at the Old Bridge in Mostar. He was banging two iron pots to get attention—planning to collect money by doing a diving stunt.Honestly, it wasn't the right season for diving. I thought he was a scammer. But to my surprise, he actually jumped. That kind of courage impressed me." "Later, I ran into him again during a training run. Turns out, he's also a pro—plays in the Bosnian second division.He's only 150 cm tall, which looks tiny, but he's the league's top scorer. Fascinating, isn't it?" At that, the man let out a surprised "Oh?" Clearly, it was unexpected. Curiosity piqued, he kept reading. "He said he's a forward—likes to make deep runs.I'm not sure how true that is, but his passing, vision, and game sense? Outstanding. Pretty much like mine!" Now the man sat up straighter, clearly interested. As Modrić's childhood coach, he knew Luka's greatest strengths—vision and awareness, both elite-tier. That Modrić would describe someone else like this? A 150 cm forward with elite playmaking instincts? The coach grinned. What kind of monster is this kid? Modrić even included a hand-drawn diagram to explain their passing sequences in detail. Despite the childish sketches, the coach could visualize the whole match from it. And Modrić was right. The boy's movement was flawless—never excessive, never lacking. Always perfectly positioned for the next play. With speed and dribbling, he'd make a fantastic attacking midfielder. But... 150 cm. The coach frowned. That was a serious handicap. Even if midfielders weren't judged too harshly by height, 150 cm was tiny. "Maybe he's still growing," the man muttered, and kept reading. The letter went on for pages, then ended with a heartfelt resolution. "Teacher, I miss home very much, but I don't want to return like this.I want to come back as a winner—to prove everything to them.And to prove that you were right all along.I promise.Love, Luka." The man sighed and put down the letter. "Luka's letter?" A woman emerged from the house with two cups of coffee. She handed him one and sat across from him with a sigh."He's only 16... the Mostecic brothers really went too far." The man—former Dinamo Zagreb head coach Bessic—sneered. "They're trying to erase my influence at Dinamo." "They're even smearing you in the press. Aren't you going to fight back?" "No need. Results will speak for me." Bessic sounded confident. "They're doing my dirty work—cleaning house. Let them play the villain." "But they want to take over the club completely." "Not that easy. They're a couple of stubborn fools who know nothing about football. Good at speeches, maybe—but not coaching.When they drive the club into the ground, that's when I'll return and rebuild." "How long do you think that'll take?" "One season, probably." His tone was uncertain. The woman sighed again. "Poor Luka. All alone in Bosnia for a year. He's not good at socializing. What if he gets bullied?" "He's doing well," Bessic smiled, holding up the letter. "Sounds like he even made a friend." "Really? That's wonderful!" "Alright, we should head to the evening banquet. You may not be the coach anymore, but we still need to maintain our contacts. Mr. Mostec is still backing you—we should thank him." Bessic sighed. "Banquets... not my thing." "Stop whining. Time to try on your suit." She dragged him inside. Outside, the letter lay under the coffee cup, fluttering gently in the breeze. Tuesday, a pasture in Mostar. "Luka, you're here early!" Modrić turned to see Suke, surprised. Suke sat down next to him and began lacing his cleats. Modrić hesitated. "How do you know who I am?" "Easy guess!" Suke pointed around. "Everyone here knows." "!!!" Mlinar waved. "Good afternoon, Modrić!" "Hey Luka!" "Your passing's incredible!" "Saw your match last week." "Bit of a shame—you could've won!" "Sarajevo's strong too. Torist was a beast." "Good luck! Beat them next time! Mostar's warriors—hoorah!" Modrić was overwhelmed. Suke stood up, tugging on his hoodie. "Take that off, it's hot." Modrić stayed quiet. "Why do you always wear that thing?" Suke asked. "Sentimental value?" Long silence. Then, softly, "It makes me feel safe..." "Huh?" "I just like it," Modrić quickly corrected. "Okay." Suke nodded, respecting it. Everyone had their quirks. "Get ready," Suke said, holding out a hand. "Party's about to start." Modrić's eyes lit up. He raised his hand. Clap!

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Contents
The All-Around Center Forward
The All-Around Center Forward Author:Sovannra_Seang_3636
Chapter 1: Prolouge Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 2: The Fishing Port Boy Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 3: The Wanderers of Mostar Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 4: Don't Let Me Shake You Off Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 5: Inzaghi's Awareness Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 6: Drawing Cards and Geniuses Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 7: Give Me Money! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 8: Diving from the Old Bridge Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Right Path Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 10: A New Attempt Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 11: Play a Match with Us Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 12 - 12 – Suke and Modric Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 13: Luka, You're Here Early! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 14: The Final Battle Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 15: A Beautiful Goal Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 16: Draw Cards! Draw Cards! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 17: Abundant Season Rewards Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 18: World Cup Night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 19: Volunteering Himself Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 20: Bosnia and Herzegovina Cup! A Brand-New Stage! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 21: Just You Wait, We’ll Show You! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 22: Get Him! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 23: Can't Run Anymore, Can You? Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 24: Force It In! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 25: See You in a Few Days Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 26: HŠK Zrinjski Mostar Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 27: The Newcomer Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 28: Can You Patch These Holes? Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 29: The Modrić Who Wants to Change Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 30: Selected for the Squad Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 31: No One Came to Support Luka Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 32: The Young Cheetah Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 33: Move It! Shake It! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 34: The Center-Forward Who Sprints Back to Defend! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 35: Eat First! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 36: New Boots Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 37: Just a Little Training Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 38: Discovery and Problem Solving Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 39: An Unexpected Starter Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 40: Fighting on Two Fronts Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 41: Two Stubborn Mules Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 42: Zakavic Lost It Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Other Suker Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 44: Youth! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 45: Three Consecutive Wins Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 46: FK Sloboda Tuzla Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 47: Winger? Wide Midfielder! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 48: The Curved Pass! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 49: Bosčenović’s Interception Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 50: Arrival in Sarajevo Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 51: Stirring Up Trouble Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 52: High Press! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 53: Trivela Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 54: Suffocating Pressure! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 55: The Mostar Twin Stars Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 56: Sarajevo's Nightlife Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 57: Want to Make Money? Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 58: Oliveira's Disaster Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 59: The Decoy Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 60: The Collapse Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 61: Unrealistic Goals Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 62: Goals! Dreams! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 63: The Lying Boame Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 64: A Snowy Match Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 65: The Orphanage in Zagreb Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 66: Dinamo Zagreb Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 67: Bešić's Family Dinner Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 68 - 68 – This Guy! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 69: The Challengers Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 70: A Lone Ride of a Thousand Miles! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 71: The Other One Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 72: The Revenge Battle of Sarajevo! Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 73: The Temu Version of Messi's Dribbling Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 74: The Twin Stars Connection Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 75: Red Card! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 76 - 76 – Šuker! Come Back! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 77: An Offer from Zagreb Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 78: Tuzla Sloboda and the Bus Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 79: Welcome to Dinamo Zagreb Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 80: The Championship Belongs to Mostar Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 81: The Championship Showdown Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 82 - 82 – Curled Shot Goal Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 83: Champions! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 84: Next Stop Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 85: My Name is Mario Mandžukić Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 86: Vampeta’s Dribbling Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 87: Davor Šuker Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 88: The Rondo Game Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 89: He Trapped the Ball Like That Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 90: Three Warm-up Matches Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 91: The Breakout! Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 92: First Appearance Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 93: Enthusiastic and Friendly Fans Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 94: Start the Game with a Penalty! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 95: The Radiant Boys Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 96: Get Past Him! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 97: Small Clique Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 98: Passion Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 99: What the Hell Is This? Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 100: Growing in the Wildest Way Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 101: He Can Use His Left Foot Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 102: Blue Waves Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 103: I’ll Give You the No.10! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 104: The Zagreb Derby Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 105: What Are You Looking At Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 106: Lesson Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 107: The Best! Suker! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 108: Help Me Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 109: A Fool's Method Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 110: Mario! Jump! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 111: You Never Know Until You Try! Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 112: Suker Asked Me to Do It Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 113 - 113 New Page Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 114: The Comeback Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 115: I Want Your Agent Contract Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 116: The Persistent Zorančić Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 117: What Do They Want Most? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 118: Just Go All Out! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 119: Radical Style Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 120: Holiday Training Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 121: Have You Ever Seen a Curving Pass? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 122: I Should Beat You Up! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 123: A Good Deed Done Stupidly Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 124: Massacre! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 125: 9! Suker! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 126: The Undefeated Season Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 127: Champions! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 128: We Are Different Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 129: The New Season’s Substitutes Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 130: Give Me Suker! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 131: First Match of the New Season Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 132: First Round of UEFA Champions League Qualifiers Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 133: FC Pyunik Sep 25th, 2025
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