Chapter 8 8: The tax collectors

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I would appreciate it if you could post reviews about what you think of the story so far. ------------------------------- Normality returned quickly once the witch hunter left. Thankfully. Father remained in a foul mood, and I didn't want to become the target of his outbursts. That's what Heinrich was for... or any servant unfortunate enough to forget an order or break something they shouldn't have. As for me, I returned to my usual routine: training with my mare. Day after day. Getting her used to noise, blood, the screams of other horses during mock combat. It was all part of the preparation to make her a future war mount—or at least valuable enough to fetch a good price if I didn't keep her. As for the bow... well, I could say there was progress, although I still had a long way to go. I could only hit the target if it was within thirty meters. That wasn't good enough. A peasant with a crossbow could kill me without breaking a sweat. He only needed to load the bolt, aim, and pull a damn metal trigger. And let's not even talk about firearms. Like those pistols the witch hunter carried—elegant and deadly, if you managed to hit anything. But that was rare unless the weapon was of exceptional craftsmanship. They were simply designed to hurl a massive chunk of metal. And above all: expensive. Very expensive. Getting a decent one that wouldn't explode in your face was nearly impossible. Father had never cared to update the guards' weapons—arming them with pistols would be outrageously costly. And gunpowder? Scarce, controlled, as expensive as fine jewelry. Besides, the Empire bought all the good stuff for its armies. The rest was junk, made by half-trained gunsmiths, with a higher chance of killing the user than the target. Still, the bow remained a noble art. Hunting with a bow was expected of us, the sons of nobility. If I ever joined other lords for a hunt, I had to at least know how to hold a bow without looking like an idiot. The same applied to falconry... though in this region, no one sold hunting birds. At least, none worth the coin. There was always the spear option, but... I might be many things, but stupid isn't one of them. Throwing yourself head-on at a boar or a stag, hoping to pierce it before it gores you or tramples you, was a very refined way of dying young. So, in the last few months I had at home, I poured everything into getting better with the bow. I couldn't afford to fail. Once I was sent off as a page, my free time would vanish. I'd spend my days serving a higher-ranking noble, following orders, watching, learning. And so, once again, the months slipped by in the haze of training—even when my muscles screamed for rest, even when the string cut into my skin if I slipped even slightly in posture. Until, on one of those days that felt like all the rest, father appeared. I recognized him by the sound of his heavy steps. He stopped by one of the stable posts just as I released an arrow. Luckily, it was a good shot. The projectile flew and landed near the center of the target, almost fifty meters away. "Not bad... you already handle a bow better than your idiot brother," father said, crossing his arms and leaning back casually. I turned toward him. "Thank you, father," I replied, unsure if he was serious or just mocking Heinrich again. "I need you to do something for me. I must travel to Helmgart. There's a meeting with Margrave Mackensen. Apparently, he's agreed to take you on as a page and squire... if you prove you're worth anything. Your progress has caught his attention, but the details of your duties still need to be negotiated. And that, my son, I have to handle in person." I said nothing. I looked at him directly. Something in his tone made me think that wasn't all. "Yes, it also means you'll be staying at his house... as a sort of political hostage," he added at last, meeting my gaze to see if I understood what that meant. I just stared. I didn't reply. "The Margrave has always wanted control over the Grey Mountains. He spends his time sabotaging anyone who might aspire to the title he claims for himself—that of Lord Protector. When I obtained the mining rights, I received several letters from him... all with the same tone: warnings. Threats dressed in courtesy. We have no way to counter him, not with favors, not with alliances... so this is the best we can do. Keep you there. In his house. Close. So you become friends with his sons. And likely end up married off to one of his cousins, aunts, or daughters. Which isn't too bad... as long as I keep my head down and don't do anything he might see as a provocation." The way he said it was different. He wasn't angry, exactly—just tired. "No problem, father. I'll saddle my mare and join the tax collector's escort," I answered at once, doing my best to make it clear he could count on me. Father nodded with a faint grimace of approval. It was clear his mind was on other matters, but he paused just a second longer to add something. "Thank you. You might learn a thing or two from the collector. That old bastard... even I don't know how he manages to determine how much to tax each person. You know how deceitful peasants can be... always crying poverty, yet none of them stop brewing beer or raising pigs." Father crossed his arms. "That man smells lies like a bloodhound. He always finds a way to know who's hiding coin under their mattress and who truly doesn't have enough for a crust of bread. Watch how he asks, how he listens, how he responds. You could learn a lot from his methods..." I nodded and did as I was told. I prepared my mare with the proper saddle, dressed in finer clothes to make my status clear within the group, and left with the small escort that accompanied the collector. Behind us, several carts followed. The road was calm, familiar, until we reached the outskirts of the village. There, on a low hill overlooking the fields, stood my family's mill. The collector wasted no time: he dismounted, entered, and immediately asked for the record books. I approached silently, and when he saw me craning my neck to peek at what he was reading, he spoke without lifting his eyes from the pages. "Look, young Lord... this is one of the most useful tricks to understand the economy of your lands," he said, flipping the pages with practiced rhythm. "No peasant waits to mill their grain. As soon as they harvest, they bring it here. So if you compare these records to last year's, you get a pretty accurate idea of how much was actually harvested." He stopped, pointing to a column. "This year was a good one. Nearly everyone milled more grain than the year before. That means more bread, more barley for beer, more straw for the stables... and, of course, more taxes to collect." I leaned in a bit closer, studying the numbers and names. There was something fascinating in how those dry figures revealed so much about village life. "And what if they lie? What if they hide part of the grain?" I asked, genuinely curious. The collector let out a short nasal laugh. It was the first time I saw him smile. "Of course they do. They always do. But you never rely on just one piece of data. Look at the mill... then you check the livestock, the tools, the barrels, the salt sacks. Peasants are clumsy when hiding their fortunes. If things go well for them, they brag without realizing it," the collector said. He slammed the book shut, turned, and pointed toward the village square, where carts were starting to line up. "Come. What really teaches you isn't in the paper. It's in their faces, in their voices... and in where the sweat starts when you ask the right questions," he said, pointing toward the horses. We finally returned to the village, and the collector wasted no time. He dismounted, checked a small leather notebook filled with notes, and headed straight to the first house. He knocked hard until a peasant, covered in dust and with calloused hands, stepped into the doorway. "Blessings of Sigmar... taxes, by order of Baron von Reinsfeld. This year, one-tenth is due," the collector announced firmly, without raising his voice in the slightest. The peasant didn't protest. He just nodded with resignation and disappeared into the house. Soon after, he began bringing out sacks of grain, which the guards carried over to a wooden scale set up near the village center. It had been installed specifically for this time of year. Calibrated weights were placed on one side, and the sacks were loaded on the other, one by one. "Everything checks out," murmured the collector, making a quick mark in his notebook before moving to the next house. From my mare's back, I watched as the process repeated itself. Door after door, the village began to wake up with a mix of routine and tension. Peasants came out with sacks of grain, cured hides, aged cheeses, even wood carvings or forged tools—each paying with what they produced. "All good?" I asked the collector, keeping my eyes on the stream of deliveries. "A hundred kilos of grain, twenty of flour. A noticeable increase from last year. No need to squeeze further," he replied, without looking away from his next target. And so we went, house by house, collecting several tons of grain from the recent harvests. Until we reached one house that turned out to be a bit trickier, as the peasant there gave much less than the average. The collector simply stared at him. "Do you take me for a fool?" the collector asked. "No..." was the only reply the peasant managed. "This isn't even half of what you gave last year..." said the collector, looking at the two sacks of grain that must've weighed barely forty kilos. "I was quite lenient when you tried to dodge the census tax by passing your sons off as daughters... I didn't report you to the baron then. I suggest you pay what you owe... don't make me go in and check everything." The peasant grew nervous and gestured for him to enter. The collector entered with two guards and began searching, quickly finding the rest of the harvest. He looked under the only bed in the house and walked around looking for a hidden cellar, but found nothing... until he grabbed one of the soldiers' spears and jabbed it into the ceiling. Immediately, grain began to fall. "Idiot... you think I don't know that old trick? Take him to the dungeon," said the collector. The guards rushed the peasant while his wife and children watched in silence. The collector had them bring down the hidden sacks and took what was owed: the tenth part. That was enough for everyone else to reconsider their excuses. There were a few attempts to question why the tax was higher than last year, but the collector only needed to say something like: "Maybe a few lashes will help you reflect on it better." And any resistance vanished. To my surprise, the collector completely ignored the artisans in their workshops. He went straight to the village mayor, who was the one responsible for safeguarding the artisans' contributions. Many of them paid their taxes in advance, and it was the collector who determined whether that amount was fair. If it wasn't, he would charge again, using the previous year's payment as a reference. The one he visited today was the cloth merchant. After about twenty minutes of conversation with the collector, he finally gave in and handed over a hefty sum of silver shillings without another word. By the end of the day, a long caravan of carts loaded to the brim with sacks of grain, flour, and additional goods set off on the return journey. Several heads of livestock were also requisitioned: cows and pigs taken to graze on my family's pastures. It was expected that the rest of the taxes from the other villages under our control would start arriving soon. And they did. Weeks later, more came in, along with news that the witch hunter had burned several people in one village. Their taxes had been reduced after he discovered that the mayor had fathered a deformed child and forced everyone to keep it a secret. The witch hunter burned everyone involved. What belonged to the Emperor was carefully set aside, loaded into another cart, and sent under direct escort to Altdorf—since our house paid tribute directly to the Grand Prince of Altdorf. ------------------------- If there are spelling mistakes, please let me know. Leave a comment; support is always appreciated. 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Warhammer Fantasy:Steel and gunpowder
Warhammer Fantasy:Steel and gunpowder Author:Chill_ean_GUY
Chapter 1 1: Rough awakening Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 2 2: a new life Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 3 3: You can't choose your family. Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 4 4: the learning routine Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 5 5: noble horsemanship Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 6 6: law and superstition Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 7 7: Sigmar's Templar Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 8 8: The tax collectors Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 9 9: the noble service Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 10 10: a hazardous child Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 11 11: friends of the empire Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 12 12: hunter by necessity Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 13 13: big game hunting Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 14 14: a vicious ambush Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 15 15: guide for hire Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 16 16: the Bretonian threat Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 17 17: punitive mission Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 18 18: Bretonian counteroffensive Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 19 19: Bretonian counteroffensive II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 20 20: the disastrous return Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 21 21: finally safe at Helmgart Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 22 22: Great......News? Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 23 23: finally free Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 24 24: Reinsfeld State I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 25 25: Reinsfeld State II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 26 26: Reinsfeld State III Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 27 27: business as usual Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 28 28: the ancient foe of the mountains Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 29 29: reaching other markets Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 30 30: settler rush I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 31 31: settler rush II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 32 32: economic burden Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 33 33: Reikland Blue Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 34 34: the story of a merchant Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 35 35: cutting ties Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 36 36: military buildup Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 37 37: recruitment drive Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 38 38: a strange day Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 39 39: magical potential Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 40 40: searching for arcane artifacts Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 41 41: hiding the magic Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 42 42: teacher-student,student-teacher Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 43 43: The Great Cleansing I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 44 44: The Great Cleansing II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 45 45: the blessing of ignorance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 46 46: a productive family meeting Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 47 47: materials of progress Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 48 48: smokeless powder Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 49 49: justice served Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 50 50: production permits Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 51 51: Imperial Engineers School Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 52 52: the riches of the mountains Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 53 53: infested burrows Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 54 54: underground meat grinder I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 55 55: underground meat grinder II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 56 56: underground meat grinder III Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 57 57: visit from Altdorf Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 58 58: harvest time Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 59 59: a strange protest Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 60 60: a long feud Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 61 61: a long-term investment Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 62 62: good results Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 63 63: dawongi Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 64 64: the pact of gunpowder and steel Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 65 65: survey (not a chapter) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 66 66: Dwarf-friend Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 67 67: Witching Night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 68 68: a seductive night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 69 69: litany and blessings Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 70 70: in the witch hunter's eye Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 71 71: the nation calls Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 72 72: weakness of the noble knights Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 73 73: battle of montfort I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 74 74: the protection of sigmar Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 75 75: battle of montfort II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 76 76: battle of montfort III Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 77 77: the riches of Monfort Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 78 78: a bloody night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 79 79: Bretonian culture Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 80 80: the Bretonians' headache Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 81 81: loot everything of value Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 82 82: the loyal apprentice Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 83 83: the imperial court I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 84 84: the imperial court II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 85 85: the imperial court III Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 86 86: damn bureaucracy Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 87 87: the problems of Merxheim Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 88 88: Justice....... Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 89 89: the beginnings of a monopoly Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 90 90: the great cleansing of the Drakwald Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 91 91: endless tide Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 92 92: future income Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 93 93: scarce mineral Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 94 94: Enemies in the Shadows Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 95 95: Solution to the food logistics Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 96 96: the Bretonnian dreams Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 97 97: The Dawi Fortress Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 98 98: Underground Mass Grave Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 99 99: Rediscovering secrets Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 100 100: The Beautiful Bretonnian Winter Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 101 101: A Successful Hunt Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 102 102: Land Ownership Monopoly Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 103 103: trusted advisors Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 104 104: The Empire's Future Breadbasket Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 105 105: returning the favor Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 106 106: Standoff Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 107 107: The Emperor's plan Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 108 108: Politics Of Altdorf Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 109 109: The Grand Agreement Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 110 110: The Second Great Cleansing Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 111 111: Slayer of Monsters Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 112 112: The breadbasket Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 113 113: Trading Center Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 114 114: Roads of an empire Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 115 115: Question(not a chapter) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 116 116: Railway work Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 117 117: Economic warfare Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 118 118: weapons for gold Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 119 119: Battle for Marienburg I Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 120 120: Battle for Marienburg II Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 121 121: Controlling The Truth Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 122 122: Summon The Electors Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 123 123: The Return To The Fold Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 124 124: A Newcomer Inside The Circle Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 125 125: New Responsibilities Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 126 126: Rebuilding From The Ashes Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 127 127: The Power Of Influence Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 128 128: The Banquets Of Nuln Sep 21st, 2025
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