Chapter 10 10: a hazardous child

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I would appreciate it if you could post reviews about what you think of the story so far. ------------------------------- My hands were red from the punishment, and I was in a foul mood. Just when I thought this shitty day was finally over, the last surprise appeared: I still had to train. The first steps to becoming a knight, they said.So we headed to the fortress training yard. A bunch of men-at-arms, pages, and squires were already gathered there — all of them sweaty, covered in mud, repeating movements like trained beasts. The master-at-arms was already waiting for us. "Alright, same as always. Everyone, find a partner and start with the basics... ah, yes, the young lord from House Reinsfeld... I assume you've never held a sword. Grab a wooden one from over there and start swinging it through the air — get used to the weight," the instructor said, barely giving me a glance. I picked one of the swords, and it was heavier than I expected. Much heavier.I started mimicking the others, warming up, trying not to make a fool of myself. The instructor came over and began barking corrections — adjusting my stance, how I held it, the angle of the swing. Apparently, all those years watching men-at-arms beat each other in training hadn't been a waste: I remembered the positions, the steps, even common mistakes. I spent nearly an hour without rest, swinging the wooden sword side to side, alternating between one hand, the other, or both. "Reinsfeld, come here," the instructor called suddenly, pointing at me. I stepped forward, breathless. "Young Joachim, take this opportunity to teach the new page the basics of sword technique," said the instructor, looking at one of the Margrave's sons — the eldest.Though he was older, we weren't so different in size. Joachim gave me that barely-suppressed smile. "Nothing personal, but we all have to learn somehow," he said, raising his wooden sword. I just nodded. Took a long breath. As expected, I didn't stand a chance. I could barely block or deflect his blows.His attacks were precise, strong, direct. Every time I managed to parry, I took a hit to the hands, and sometimes one to the face. The sword vibrated like a poorly-handled whip in my aching fingers. The heat of frustration climbed up my neck. Seeing that smug smile in every damn exchange was unbearable. After another hit to my hand, I decided that was enough. The next time he thrust, I blocked it and slapped his sword away with force.Without thinking, I kicked him — a sharp whip-like strike straight to the thigh.He fell like a sack, losing balance. And without hesitation, I spun on the same leg and kicked him again — a spinning heel to the face. The impact was sharp. He hit the ground flat on his back, and the yard went silent. When I saw him start crying, nose bleeding, lip split, I didn't hesitate for a second. I threw myself on top of the bastard, ready to keep hitting him until someone stopped me.I barely had time to raise my fist before I felt hands grabbing my clothes and dragging me back. "What the hell was that!? This is fencing, not a tavern brawl or peasant brawl!" the instructor shouted, eyes wide, gripping me by the collar of my tunic. "What if a sword's no good when we're wearing armor!? Then you use a dagger! You fight on the ground if you have to!" I shouted back, struggling as my blood boiled. The instructor stared at me, lips tight, like he was fighting the urge to scream something worse. He breathed deep, swallowing the rage. "Get out of here, damn it..." he muttered through clenched teeth. And without another word, he struck me three times with his training sword.Once on the ribs, once on the leg, and the last on my back.I doubled over from the pain, nearly falling to my knees, gasping for air. The instructor picked up the Margrave's son from the ground and carried him off without saying another word.Training was over then and there. I wished that had been the end of it. But no. I had to go wash up as best I could, quickly, without time to complain.My hands were swollen, my face ached, one eye was throbbing — but I still had to go back to serving dinner.That was the routine. Set the cutlery.Bring out the trays.Wait for the Margrave's family to sit before the meal began. But this time, it wasn't as quiet as before.You couldn't ignore the large bruise on the face and split lip of the Margrave's eldest son. While we ate, the Margrave finally decided to address the elephant in the room. "Joachim, what happened to your face?" asked the Margrave, locking eyes with his son. "Nothing... I... I fell, Father. That's all," Joachim replied nervously.Lying clearly wasn't one of his talents. "Sigismund, is that true?" the Margrave asked, turning to his younger son. "No..." the boy answered, lowering his head. "Then what happened?" he asked, raising his voice slightly. There was a moment of silence.Then, all eyes fell on Sigismund again. "The... the new page... hit him during training," the younger one finally said, still not looking up. I felt my stomach twist.Only then did the weight of the consequences hit me. 'Shit... they're going to whip me... if I'm lucky,' I thought, closing my eyes. "Albrecht! Here, immediately!" thundered the Margrave's voice, shaking the table. I stood and walked toward him. He looked at me with a deep frown. "Is it true? You did that to my son?" he asked, barely moving his head. "Yes, my lord. It was me, during today's training," I replied, trying to keep my voice steady. "Joachim! How can you be so useless that a seven-year-old leaves you in that state!? By blessed Sigmar! This is what I get for letting you ride horses instead of doing your damned training. Look at you... a child four years younger than you made you look like this..." the Margrave exploded in rage, unleashing his fury on his own son. "But... but Father... he kicked me... it wasn't even..." Joachim tried to defend himself. "But nothing! That makes it worse!" the margrave shouted, then turned to me. "Where did you kick him?" "In the leg. His stance was weak, and I took advantage," I said briefly, hoping his fury wouldn't shift in my direction. "See? That's because you neglect your training. I didn't mind you riding around for fun, but if you're going to embarrass yourself in front of the pages... you're forbidden from leaving the castle. From dawn to dusk, you'll train. I don't want this happening again." Then he looked at me. "And you... well, you didn't come out of it any better," he said, noting my bruised hands and swollen face. "This is training, not a damned death match. Still... I'll admit you exposed how poor my son's form really is. I guess I'll forget about taking him on the next campaign against the orcs..." He motioned for me to leave. "But father, you promised!" Joachim protested as I walked back to my seat. "Yes, I did. But I'm not going to bury you when one of those green-skinned bastards breaks through our lines and skewers you with a spear." I sat down silently and let it all pass. After cleaning up, I finally dragged myself to my room. It had been a shitty day... and worse ones were coming. The next day wasn't any better. Cutting food. Setting the table. This time I was assigned to stand through the whole meal, ready to refill the family's wine cups. I ate in a rush. Then they sent me to empty the fortress's latrines. I nearly vomited from the stench. It was unbearable — a mix of rancid piss, old feces, and something else I couldn't define but was just as revolting. Every shovel load was torture. Sometimes I had to breathe through my mouth and look at the sky just to avoid passing out. But I managed to keep my stomach's contents where they belonged. Barely. At least after that I was allowed a quick wash. Cold water, a bucket, and my own hands. I scrubbed myself hard to get the stench off, but I still felt it clinging to my skin. Still, I got dressed in clean clothes and went back to work. This time, I only had to serve food. Nothing more. I was thankful for that. Sword training was worse than the day before. The instructor never took his eyes off me. His face serious, still, like he measured every move with the precision of an executioner. Every mistake, every misplaced step — he noted them all with his gaze. When they made me practice with other pages, I noticed something odd. None of them wanted to get too close. They all seemed more focused on my feet than the sword I held. Even the experienced ones. They were more worried about getting kicked than landing a clean blow. And that made them drop their guard. I wasn't skilled with the wooden sword, not yet. But I could defend myself. At least they weren't knocking me down like the first day. The truth is... I loved seeing that fear in their eyes. They were all around my age, some four to six years older. All of them had been training longer than me. You could see it in their movements, in their confidence. But it was also clear they were used to having someone weaker around, someone they could hit without consequences. Someone like me. But I wasn't a punching bag. And I wasn't going to become one. Unlike them, I was far more dangerous without a weapon. Not just because of my fists, but my body. Even though I was the youngest, I was average in height. Strong, broad-shouldered, with the hardened muscles earned from stirrupless training and years of physical labor. My father's genes were obvious. He was a massive man. With some luck, I'd reach his size. And with the years of hand-to-hand combat from the foreign legion already under my belt, that made me — whether they wanted to admit it or not — the most dangerous page here. Even so, I ended up wrecked after every training session. My back ached. My arms trembled. My legs barely responded. But I gritted my teeth and endured. I've survived worse for a crust of bread. Now I just have to endure this for another nine or ten years. Then I'll be a knight. I'll return to father's castle, sleep in a decent bed, have servants, hunt whenever I feel like it, and eventually... when he kicks the bucket, I'll be baron. And then, finally, I'll get to live the good life. ------------------------- If there are spelling mistakes, please let me know. Leave a comment; support is always appreciated. I remind you to leave your ideas or what you would like to see. -------------------------------

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Warhammer Fantasy:Steel and gunpowder
Warhammer Fantasy:Steel and gunpowder Author:Chill_ean_GUY
Chapter 1 1: Rough awakening Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 2 2: a new life Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 3 3: You can't choose your family. Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 4 4: the learning routine Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 5 5: noble horsemanship Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 6 6: law and superstition Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 7 7: Sigmar's Templar Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 8 8: The tax collectors Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 9 9: the noble service Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 10 10: a hazardous child Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 11 11: friends of the empire Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 12 12: hunter by necessity Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 13 13: big game hunting Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 14 14: a vicious ambush Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 15 15: guide for hire Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 16 16: the Bretonian threat Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 17 17: punitive mission Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 18 18: Bretonian counteroffensive Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 19 19: Bretonian counteroffensive II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 20 20: the disastrous return Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 21 21: finally safe at Helmgart Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 22 22: Great......News? Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 23 23: finally free Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 24 24: Reinsfeld State I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 25 25: Reinsfeld State II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 26 26: Reinsfeld State III Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 27 27: business as usual Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 28 28: the ancient foe of the mountains Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 29 29: reaching other markets Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 30 30: settler rush I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 31 31: settler rush II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 32 32: economic burden Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 33 33: Reikland Blue Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 34 34: the story of a merchant Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 35 35: cutting ties Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 36 36: military buildup Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 37 37: recruitment drive Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 38 38: a strange day Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 39 39: magical potential Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 40 40: searching for arcane artifacts Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 41 41: hiding the magic Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 42 42: teacher-student,student-teacher Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 43 43: The Great Cleansing I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 44 44: The Great Cleansing II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 45 45: the blessing of ignorance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 46 46: a productive family meeting Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 47 47: materials of progress Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 48 48: smokeless powder Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 49 49: justice served Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 50 50: production permits Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 51 51: Imperial Engineers School Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 52 52: the riches of the mountains Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 53 53: infested burrows Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 54 54: underground meat grinder I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 55 55: underground meat grinder II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 56 56: underground meat grinder III Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 57 57: visit from Altdorf Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 58 58: harvest time Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 59 59: a strange protest Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 60 60: a long feud Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 61 61: a long-term investment Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 62 62: good results Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 63 63: dawongi Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 64 64: the pact of gunpowder and steel Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 65 65: survey (not a chapter) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 66 66: Dwarf-friend Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 67 67: Witching Night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 68 68: a seductive night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 69 69: litany and blessings Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 70 70: in the witch hunter's eye Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 71 71: the nation calls Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 72 72: weakness of the noble knights Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 73 73: battle of montfort I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 74 74: the protection of sigmar Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 75 75: battle of montfort II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 76 76: battle of montfort III Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 77 77: the riches of Monfort Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 78 78: a bloody night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 79 79: Bretonian culture Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 80 80: the Bretonians' headache Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 81 81: loot everything of value Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 82 82: the loyal apprentice Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 83 83: the imperial court I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 84 84: the imperial court II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 85 85: the imperial court III Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 86 86: damn bureaucracy Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 87 87: the problems of Merxheim Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 88 88: Justice....... Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 89 89: the beginnings of a monopoly Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 90 90: the great cleansing of the Drakwald Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 91 91: endless tide Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 92 92: future income Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 93 93: scarce mineral Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 94 94: Enemies in the Shadows Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 95 95: Solution to the food logistics Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 96 96: the Bretonnian dreams Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 97 97: The Dawi Fortress Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 98 98: Underground Mass Grave Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 99 99: Rediscovering secrets Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 100 100: The Beautiful Bretonnian Winter Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 101 101: A Successful Hunt Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 102 102: Land Ownership Monopoly Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 103 103: trusted advisors Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 104 104: The Empire's Future Breadbasket Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 105 105: returning the favor Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 106 106: Standoff Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 107 107: The Emperor's plan Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 108 108: Politics Of Altdorf Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 109 109: The Grand Agreement Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 110 110: The Second Great Cleansing Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 111 111: Slayer of Monsters Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 112 112: The breadbasket Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 113 113: Trading Center Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 114 114: Roads of an empire Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 115 115: Question(not a chapter) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 116 116: Railway work Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 117 117: Economic warfare Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 118 118: weapons for gold Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 119 119: Battle for Marienburg I Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 120 120: Battle for Marienburg II Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 121 121: Controlling The Truth Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 122 122: Summon The Electors Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 123 123: The Return To The Fold Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 124 124: A Newcomer Inside The Circle Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 125 125: New Responsibilities Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 126 126: Rebuilding From The Ashes Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 127 127: The Power Of Influence Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 128 128: The Banquets Of Nuln Sep 21st, 2025
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