Chapter 11 11: friends of the empire

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I would appreciate it if you could post reviews about what you think of the story so far. ------------------------------- In these past months, I've realized something important: I'm much better at swordsmanship than at archery. There's a key skill in sword combat that I've mastered for years—one that most still don't even understand—and that is: not being afraid of your opponent's weapon. And of course, I'm not afraid of bullets. Because closing your eyes does nothing against a bullet. You can't dodge it if it's already coming for you. If it's going to kill you, it will—just like that. So why would I fear a long sharp knife shaped like a sword? Or worse yet, a wooden sword. That difference, that switch in my head that no longer freezes in the face of danger, has given me a massive advantage over the other pages. They're still afraid of getting hit. They don't want a blow to the face, they don't want to be humiliated. I've already been through that. So every time I thrust high, aiming straight for their faces, they flinch. Some step back, others drop their guard, others blink at the worst possible moment. Doesn't matter if my strikes are pathetic, slow, or clumsy. Their fear does the rest. And that, little by little, has allowed me to start dominating. I can now beat half the pages I train with without much difficulty. Between those distracted expecting a kick, those who tremble when I raise the sword near their eyes, and those who can't handle the pressure of someone who doesn't give up or back down—I've been taking them down one by one. I'm far from the best, but I'm no longer the helpless newcomer who didn't even know how to hold a sword. Now they fear me. And for now, that's enough. I had finally adapted to the routine. At least I knew what to expect each day of the week. Once a week: clean the latrine. Three times: the stables. Twice: sweep the fortress halls. Those were the "special" chores. The rest of the time, it was the usual: serving meals or acting as cupbearer for the margrave's family. Being a cupbearer was considered a "privilege," but only on paper. Because every time I had to stand beside the table, Joachim, the eldest son, wouldn't stop glaring at me with hatred. And if he could give me more work, he did it without hesitation. Commanding, loading, repeating tasks—any excuse was good to try to wear me down or humiliate me. Going to the market to buy things was more random, but whenever I got that task, I made the most of it. I already knew most of the trustworthy merchants. I'd learned to haggle, to point out flaws, to watch how the locals got their prices lowered. I picked it up fast. Every coin I managed to save on those errands, I hid. I found a loose brick in one of the market buildings, loosened it more, and started using it as a stash. That's where I hid the extra coins. When the margrave's leftovers were too few—or just trash—I used my secret fund to buy decent food: dried meat, crusty bread, some broth with real flavor. Though of course, you had to know how to choose. One time I got overconfident and spent almost all I had saved on a soup from a fancy stall. It looked luxurious, full of spices, with a rich aroma that made your stomach growl. But something was wrong. Not even two hours had passed before my gut twisted like a wounded snake. I spent the rest of the day locked in the latrines, cursing every damn coin I had dropped on that damn soup. And of course, as if fate were mocking me, I had to clean the latrine afterward. For a moment, sweating from the pain, I considered stealing. Just once. A quick sleight of hand in the chaos of the market—no one would notice. The temptation was strong. But so was the memory of how justice worked in the Empire. Even being a noble, even being the margrave's page... I wasn't stupid. They could break my fingers—or worse—if I got caught. I chose to stay honest. Not out of virtue. Out of common sense. The only days one could truly rest were when the margrave went off to campaign. Sometimes he'd leave because the forests were overflowing with beasts, orcs, or goblins. Other times, because bandits on the road to Bretonnia were disrupting trade. On those days, we only prepared food for those staying behind, and everything was more relaxed. There was also a break when the margrave left for some party in Altdorf and took his family with him. A whole week without having to endure his fat ass or Joachim's whining. We had free time, though there wasn't much we could do with it. We weren't allowed to leave the fortress except for errands, so all that was left was to train, eat, sleep, and repeat. I spent my days bruising my fingers with the wooden sword. Over and over. Nothing else. "Albrecht... Albrecht... wake up," someone said, shaking me by the shoulder. "What...?" I mumbled without opening my eyes. I was sunbathing in a hidden corner of the garden, where warm rays passed through the stone wall. "Margrave Reinhardt is looking for all of us. He wants to go hunting. And this time it's going to be a long one, so he wants all the pages to come along," said one of the pages, from a noble house in Ussingen. I opened my eyes, sighed, and stood up. "But... if the margrave was at a party in Altdorf, shouldn't he be coming back... next week or something?" I asked, mentally going over the calendar we had pinned up next to the kitchen. "For some reason he came back early... and now he wants us to get everything ready for a long hunt. So we better get moving, there's a lot to pack and not much time," said the page, already walking quickly toward the main courtyard. "And what exactly are we supposed to do? Be living decorations, standing beside the tents like human banners?" I said as I stretched, still stiff from the morning's training. "I don't know... they just said be useful or hide well," answered the page, then disappeared around the corridor. "What a load of crap..." I muttered as I stepped outside the fortress, fastening my leather belt. Outside, the activity was frantic. A large entourage was preparing: servants running, soldiers checking weapons, cooks loading provisions, stablehands holding horses. The air was full of dust and shouted orders. A mountain of gear was being piled up: spears, crossbows, bows, nets, cages... I even saw a few bear traps. I immediately began to help, loading cargo onto wagons and securing crates. If anyone saw me idle, I'd be given double the work. I already knew that game. When everything was finally ready, I mounted my horse, who now recognized me well, and joined the retinue heading toward the family's hunting grounds. We formed a long column of squires, guards, pages, hunters, nobles, and loaded carriages. We passed through Osburg without stopping and entered the dense woods. The trees rose like black columns above us. Some guards started talking about how beastmen still roamed these areas, or wolves far too large. Eventually, after several hours, we reached a deep clearing in the forest. Some tents were already set up—I assumed others had arrived earlier to prepare the ground. Without wasting time, I set up the tent I'd be sharing with other pages. It wasn't comfortable, but compared to sleeping in the open, it was a luxury. With the help of two others, we finished quickly. With that done, I took a few moments to look around, curious about the margrave's guests. It was one of the few chances I had to see other nobles and their strange companions. That's when I saw him. It was impossible not to notice him: a man shorter than me, but with a torso like an iron barrel. He had a reddish beard, braided and adorned with copper pieces that gleamed in the evening light. A dwarf, without a doubt. He was arranging weapons on a campaign table. Short pistols, arquebuses, black powder flasks, daggers, hammers. Everything meticulously arranged. The table groaned under the weight. "Albrecht... I assume you've finished your tasks if you're already standing idle," said the margrave, appearing behind me with that voice you could never quite tell if it was a joke or a warning. "Of course, milord. I completed my duties as instructed," I replied instantly. The margrave's attention turned to the table. His firm steps approached the arsenal, and he stopped beside the dwarf, silently inspecting the weapons. "So this is what you brought me this time, dwarf. I suppose it's something much better than last time," said the margrave, his gaze sweeping over the crowded table. "Ah, milord manling, about time you showed up. The best my forge can produce, as always," the dwarf replied, running his thick hands over the weapons like he was blessing his metal children. The margrave turned to me and raised one of the pistols."I assume you've seen something like this before... only these are unmatched in quality. Only dwarfs can produce a piece so exquisite, worthy of my grand hunt," he said, The dwarf crossed his arms and looked up at the margrave with an air of pride. "Certainly," I said, examining the pistol under the light filtering through the branches. "The finish is flawless... I assume it was hand-worked, since there are no casting lines," I added, watching the pistol in the margrave's hands. The margrave raised an eyebrow. "And what do you know about firearms, Albrecht? They're expensive... I doubt your father ever bought one. He's always preferred his faithful greatsword," said the margrave. "I've always wanted one," I replied, still focused on the weapon. "But as they say, they're expensive. And black powder is hard to come by," I said, turning to look at the arquebus. The margrave let out a low chuckle. "Oh, is that so... then tell me what you see," he said, handing me the pistol with a sarcastic gesture. The dwarf frowned immediately. He grunted like someone being asked to hand over their firstborn. I took the pistol carefully, feeling its balanced weight. I turned it respectfully, studying every detail. "Rifled barrel..." I said, gently running a finger inside the muzzle. "The spiral grooves inside... they make the bullet spin when fired, giving it better accuracy, like an arrow. A difficult and time-consuming job if done by hand—everything suggests it was." I looked at the dwarf. He no longer frowned. He was watching me with interest. "The trigger is light, with almost no resistance. That means the internal mechanism is polished and well-assembled. The flintlock reacts nearly instantly, so the internal clockwork must be refined. No loose parts. Every piece forged and fitted by hand. Even the stock... black wood... I don't know what kind, but probably oiled with tallow and beeswax. A weapon made to last generations." The margrave raised both eyebrows. The dwarf let out a soft grunt, like someone trying to hide how much they appreciated a compliment. "Huh... didn't expect that... how come—" murmured the margrave. "Nor did I," added the dwarf, now looking at me with a bit more respect. "Few manlings can recognize a good weapon when they hold one. Fewer still when they're just a human pup." "Albrecht, go... help with the food... you're wasting time here," said the margrave, taking the pistol from my hands. "As you command, milord," I replied, stepping away. ------------------------- If there are spelling mistakes, please let me know. Leave a comment; support is always appreciated. I remind you to leave your ideas or what you would like to see. -------------------------------

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Warhammer Fantasy:Steel and gunpowder
Warhammer Fantasy:Steel and gunpowder Author:Chill_ean_GUY
Chapter 1 1: Rough awakening Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 2 2: a new life Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 3 3: You can't choose your family. Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 4 4: the learning routine Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 5 5: noble horsemanship Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 6 6: law and superstition Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 7 7: Sigmar's Templar Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 8 8: The tax collectors Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 9 9: the noble service Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 10 10: a hazardous child Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 11 11: friends of the empire Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 12 12: hunter by necessity Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 13 13: big game hunting Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 14 14: a vicious ambush Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 15 15: guide for hire Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 16 16: the Bretonian threat Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 17 17: punitive mission Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 18 18: Bretonian counteroffensive Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 19 19: Bretonian counteroffensive II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 20 20: the disastrous return Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 21 21: finally safe at Helmgart Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 22 22: Great......News? Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 23 23: finally free Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 24 24: Reinsfeld State I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 25 25: Reinsfeld State II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 26 26: Reinsfeld State III Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 27 27: business as usual Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 28 28: the ancient foe of the mountains Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 29 29: reaching other markets Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 30 30: settler rush I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 31 31: settler rush II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 32 32: economic burden Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 33 33: Reikland Blue Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 34 34: the story of a merchant Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 35 35: cutting ties Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 36 36: military buildup Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 37 37: recruitment drive Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 38 38: a strange day Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 39 39: magical potential Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 40 40: searching for arcane artifacts Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 41 41: hiding the magic Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 42 42: teacher-student,student-teacher Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 43 43: The Great Cleansing I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 44 44: The Great Cleansing II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 45 45: the blessing of ignorance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 46 46: a productive family meeting Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 47 47: materials of progress Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 48 48: smokeless powder Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 49 49: justice served Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 50 50: production permits Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 51 51: Imperial Engineers School Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 52 52: the riches of the mountains Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 53 53: infested burrows Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 54 54: underground meat grinder I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 55 55: underground meat grinder II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 56 56: underground meat grinder III Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 57 57: visit from Altdorf Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 58 58: harvest time Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 59 59: a strange protest Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 60 60: a long feud Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 61 61: a long-term investment Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 62 62: good results Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 63 63: dawongi Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 64 64: the pact of gunpowder and steel Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 65 65: survey (not a chapter) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 66 66: Dwarf-friend Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 67 67: Witching Night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 68 68: a seductive night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 69 69: litany and blessings Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 70 70: in the witch hunter's eye Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 71 71: the nation calls Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 72 72: weakness of the noble knights Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 73 73: battle of montfort I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 74 74: the protection of sigmar Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 75 75: battle of montfort II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 76 76: battle of montfort III Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 77 77: the riches of Monfort Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 78 78: a bloody night Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 79 79: Bretonian culture Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 80 80: the Bretonians' headache Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 81 81: loot everything of value Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 82 82: the loyal apprentice Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 83 83: the imperial court I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 84 84: the imperial court II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 85 85: the imperial court III Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 86 86: damn bureaucracy Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 87 87: the problems of Merxheim Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 88 88: Justice....... Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 89 89: the beginnings of a monopoly Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 90 90: the great cleansing of the Drakwald Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 91 91: endless tide Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 92 92: future income Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 93 93: scarce mineral Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 94 94: Enemies in the Shadows Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 95 95: Solution to the food logistics Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 96 96: the Bretonnian dreams Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 97 97: The Dawi Fortress Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 98 98: Underground Mass Grave Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 99 99: Rediscovering secrets Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 100 100: The Beautiful Bretonnian Winter Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 101 101: A Successful Hunt Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 102 102: Land Ownership Monopoly Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 103 103: trusted advisors Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 104 104: The Empire's Future Breadbasket Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 105 105: returning the favor Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 106 106: Standoff Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 107 107: The Emperor's plan Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 108 108: Politics Of Altdorf Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 109 109: The Grand Agreement Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 110 110: The Second Great Cleansing Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 111 111: Slayer of Monsters Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 112 112: The breadbasket Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 113 113: Trading Center Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 114 114: Roads of an empire Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 115 115: Question(not a chapter) Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 116 116: Railway work Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 117 117: Economic warfare Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 118 118: weapons for gold Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 119 119: Battle for Marienburg I Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 120 120: Battle for Marienburg II Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 121 121: Controlling The Truth Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 122 122: Summon The Electors Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 123 123: The Return To The Fold Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 124 124: A Newcomer Inside The Circle Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 125 125: New Responsibilities Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 126 126: Rebuilding From The Ashes Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 127 127: The Power Of Influence Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 128 128: The Banquets Of Nuln Sep 21st, 2025
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