Chapter 58: Return

Words : 1581 Updated : Sep 12th, 2025
It took a forced march for most of a day to reach the nearest camp. It was slower moving with the group, but safer and despite the fact that they were all clearly tired, they seemed to have gained a second wind with the promise of rest. The 'camp' was more of a miniature fort that reminded Michael of Roman encampment descriptions he’d read in books and seen on the history channel. There was a dug up trench all around it, a barricade made from felled trees behind that, guards patrolling the perimeter and even what looked to be a simple wooden watchtower near the center of everything. The relief on everyone’s faces as they were welcomed back into camp was clear, all of them except for Lance, whose eyes were down and his expression somber. Michael wanted to try and talk to him, but Lance, the scouts, and their prisoner were immediately taken back to meet with the Knight Commander in charge of the camp. He and the other Penitents were escorted by soldier guards to the center of the camp, where they had a number of Penitents of their own. There were around twenty of them, a few of them shooting dice, some wrestling, and the rest betting on who’d win the match. None were Taker penitents like they were. Michael and the others all sat toward the edge, avoiding them. “The dynamics here are fstrange,” said Davi as he sat on one of the few dry patches of dirt catching his breath from the long march. “The regular Penitents seem to be treated worse than us even though they think of us as the lowest of the low.” Pyotr shook his head. “We’re valuable. We may be scum, but we’re useful scum.” “But only because they trained us to be. Couldn’t they just give the rest of their people more training?” asked Ollie. “It’s not just that,” said Michael. “We tend to be more effective from the start. We have titles when we arrive here. We’re worth the investment. Besides that, the convicts already have basic training from earlier in their lives as Stent citizens. They probably just put them through a refresher and send them straight to the front to find use for them.” Michael paused for a few moments. “Did some of those fights we had seem easier than you expected?” he asked. Marcus nodded, a smile on his face. “Easy for me. I didn’t even have to leave the bushes.” “No, I know what he means,” said Pyotr. “We are fighting grown men mostly and we’re managing to hold our own and more, and that’s while being stuck in the bodies of teenagers. The training and the titles gave us more of an edge than expected.” Michael nodded. “I think some of the injections we had made a difference too. I’m stronger at sixteenish than a lot of adult athletes back on Earth.” Ollie nodded. “I’ve also notice I have a real advantage too,” he looked both ways conspiratorially, “I can shoot fucking fire from my hands.” Michael laughed. “I know, I know. Everything is different here. I just thought it was interesting that we seem to have a leg up over even the people from here. It makes me wonder what Takers did with whole childhoods before they were figured out. How strong they could’ve gotten with that extra knowledge and time.” “You think about things a little too much, my friend,” said Pyotr. “There are more important concerns right now.” “Like?” “Like if we are going to be able to sleep here, or if they are going to make us march all the fucking way back to the fort first.” ... They were, in fact, forced to go back to the fort before they would be able to rest. Luckily, they were able to hitch a ride on an empty wounded wagon. It would’ve been full, but thanks to Michael spending some time in the medic tent, no one needed transport any longer, and because that saved the medic who drove the wagon a lot of time and effort, even though they were Penitents, he offered them a ride. He had a control brand anyway, as did all medics, so it worked out well for the camp as a whole. The medic was less thrilled about being given the responsibility of all the gold and silver they were carrying, but it wouldn't have made sense to leave it in the camp with a wagon on its way out anyway, so the camp quartermaster insisted on it. The narrative has been illicitly obtained; should you discover it on Amazon, report the violation. Michael didn’t get another chance to talk to Lance, nor did he learn if the prisoner they’d taken had any more information. That wasn’t something for him or any Penitent to know. The wagon reached the fort in the late evening, and Marcus and Michael roused everyone else that had fallen asleep, including the one remaining non-taker Penitent that had managed to survive. “You’re sure you don’t mind that I took your boy’s dice?” asked Marcus as they reached the fort’s front gates. “He wasn’t my boy. He was an arsehole that stole my food whenever he got the chance. I just stole some bread, that bastard raped a young farmgirl and bragged about it. Fuck him.” “Is your name Jean Valjean?” asked Pyotr. “Nah. Names Crick. Jean Valjean sounds like a fucking Swandian name or somethin. Who told you that was my name?” “Sorry friend. Old joke from our world.” “Whatever. I’m just glad I’m not dead.” The Medic escorted them to their tower as ordered by the gate guard. He saluted Bayle who dismissed him, and looked over all of them. “The scouts aren’t with you?” “We were sent back, along with this,” said Davi holding a letter. Bayle nodded, and took it, reading through it quickly and nodding. Michael caught a glance at it and noticed it was in code. “Good, a successful mission then. That coin is going to go very far.” He moved over to his large map and started making several notes in ink on different parts of it, subtly casting ink transfer spells to duplicate marks in some areas and move them to others. Michael couldn’t fully tell exactly why certain markings were being placed, they seemed very far from where he gauged them on the map. “You did well. I won’t have any work for you until I receive more information, so I’m going to loan you out to a different group. Tomorrow you can rest, after that you’ll be taken there by a branded escort.” They all managed a tired salute. Bayle returned it sharply. “Dismissed.” They made their way up the stairs of the tower, noticing some fresh faces on the floor below theirs. No taker Penitents, but another handful of press-ganged Stent criminals from what they could tell. They ignored them, and they made their way up to their beds. Michael was surprised to see that their beds and goods they’d left behind hadn’t been ransacked. “Weird. All my shit’s still here,” said Crick as he got to his bed. “New guys must be fucking stupid.” Michael loosened and removed his armor before pouring some of his canteen water into a nearby basin so he could wash his hand and splash a bit on his face. He was hungry, so he forced down a bit of hard tack and some salted meat he’d saved from the journey before brushing his teeth with charcoal and passing out on his uncomfortable pallet. He found it was much easier to fall asleep when you weren’t worried that half the room wanted to rob or kill you. The next day they all took their rest very seriously. Only Michael didn’t sleep in, instead waking at his usual time very early in the morning. “You’d think the new body would keep you from waking up at the ass-crack of dawn like an old man,” said Ollie sleepily. “Well, you know how it is, need to get up early enough to keep the kids off my lawn.” Ollie chuckled a bit, and rolled over to go back to sleep. Michael found that Bayle was awake again, or had never slept, and was still making marks, reading letters, and generally moving about. Michael saluted and waited to be addressed. Bayle didn’t even look up from his desk. “Now that the fort knows you, you can roam without an escort. Leave, and I’ll activate your mark until it scalds a hole through to the base of your skull.” Michael nodded. “I do insist you head to the infirmary first though.” “That’s where I was headed anyway, sir.” Bayle looked up for just a second. His eyes had no dark shadows under them, and his movements were full of vitality. Michael wondered for a moment if he had a recovery ability like him. He started to try and divine him, when Bayle interrupted his focus. “Hmmm, strange that I actually believe you. Either way, get on with it. Holt’s been saw happy lately, and I find soldiers tend to be quite a bit more effective if they have all of their limbs.”

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Contents
Penitent
Penitent Author:Seersucker
Chapter 1: Old is New Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 2: Drafted Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 3: Guessing, Growing, Learning Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 4: New Skies Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 5: Warm Welcome Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 6: Dawn Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 7: Magic Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 8: Q&A Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 9: Routine Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 10: Collateral Duties Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 11: Reasonable Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 12: Brand Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 13: New Flows Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 14: Hand Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 15: Divine Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 16: Old Dog, New Tricks Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 17: Incentive Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 18: Grit Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 19: Sparring Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 20: Ranking and Rest Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 21: Pubescence Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 22: Punishment Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 23: Exercise Exercise Exercise Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 24: Cause Chaos Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 25: Every Man’s Fantasy Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 26: Murder Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 27: Entombed Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 28: General Favors Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 29: Dig Two Graves, Maybe Three Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 30: Guilty Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 31: Reconciliation Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 32: Festival of Blades Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 33: Team Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 34: Melee Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 35: Riot Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 36: First Victory Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 37: Run Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 38: Team Player Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 39: Outclassed Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Edge Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 41: Masks Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 42: Deals Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 43: Pain Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 44: Armor Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 45: A Gift Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 46: Soldier Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 47: Start Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 48: Rundling Sep 10th, 2025
Downtown Druid Book 1 is Out! Plus bonus Chapter! Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 49: Hunt Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 50: Celebration Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 51: Catching Up Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Fort Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 53: Limit Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 54: Blessings Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 55: Marks on a Doorframe Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 56: Delivery Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 57: Hardened Lance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 58: Return Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 59: Aelven Echoes Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 60: Rein and Tain Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 61: Ambush Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 62: Idiot Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 63: Shrine Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 64: Morning Prayer Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 65: Aelven Ambush Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 66: Strength Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 67: Measuring Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 68: Wake Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 69: Carrion King Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 70: Lucky Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 71: Cowardice Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 72: Foetid Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 73: Skullduggery Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 74: The Taken Wall Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 75: The Last Tower Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 76: Questioning Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 77: Attempts at Martyrdom Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 78: Wrong Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 79: Praise the Divine Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 80: Faces Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 81: Recuperation Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 82: Keeping Busy Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 83: Lance’s Lot Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 84: Plans and Plans Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 85: Auspicious Beginnings Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 86: Reunions Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 87: Standing and Falling Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 88: Last Rites Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 89: Context Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 90: Into the Mountain Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 91: The Monster and The Goddess Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 92: The Wrong Martyr Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 93: Sound and Fury Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 94: Pilgrim Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 1: Heir Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 2: Growing Boys Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 3: Shots Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 4: Shepherd Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 5: Trolling Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 6: Unseasonable Cold Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 7: Cold Bounty Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 8: Biting and Clawing Snow Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 9: Cantankerous Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 10: Not Yet-i Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 11: Red Snow Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 12: Warm Breeze Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 13: Loose Ends Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 14: Horns and Forks Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 15: Civilization Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 16: Swandia Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 17: Three and Three Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 18: Cliches Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 19: Happy Endings/New Beginnings Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 20: Company Contracts Sep 17th, 2025
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