Chapter 2: Drafted

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Michael was left in a small crib with only the blanket he’d been swaddled in before he’d been taken on his first night. He couldn’t see anything in the room, having only the vaguest idea of the shapes that surrounded him, or when something was light or dark. He couldn’t turn his head, nor could he move his limbs beyond weak flailing that pushed lamely against the blanket that covered him. He screamed and cried until he eventually fell asleep from overwhelming exhaustion. He awoke to the feeling of warmth from a small sliver of sunlight falling across his cheek. He thought for some time that he was back in his hospital bed, but his inability to see and the lack of his family’s voices quickly dissuaded him of that. He had died, gone to something between life and death, and been reborn somehow. He could see that now that he’d calmed down. He had been taken from the people that he guessed were the parents of the body he was in. He heard their cries again. He managed to keep himself from screaming as he remembered everything that had happened, but his instincts were telling him that was what he needed to be doing, and his resistance eventually crumbled. Shortly after he began crying, a door nearby opened and he heard the sound of footsteps approaching, but he couldn’t properly move his neck to look in their direction, nor could he see much beyond the edge of the crib. A light was turned on, or perhaps lit? It seemed slower than a light switch. The outlines of two people reached the edge of the crib, and he could hear some quiet conversation. The voices weren’t muffled this time and now he was certain that they were speaking in a language he didn’t recognize. He’d lived in a lot of places in the US, and had heard plenty of Spanish, Mandarin, Creole, Farsi, and even some Japanese from the shows his kids had watched, but it didn’t sound like any of those. One of the outlines leaned close enough that he could make out some of their features. It was a man in his mid-thirties or perhaps early forties, with a serious expression on his face. He held a finger to his lips and made a soft shushing sound. Michael tried to stop crying, and eventually forced himself into a quiet sob instead, though it was difficult. The man gestured to the shape next to him, and that person placed a cross shaped object on Michael’s skin. It was cold, metallic, he’d guess. The shape placed a finger on the cross and said a phrase and the cross seemed to become a touch colder. The middle-aged man leaned forward again. “You should now be able to understand me. Blink twice if that is the case.” Michael felt immense relief at hearing something he could understand and struggled to make himself blink twice, barely managing it. “Good. Your control is higher than the last one. Though it’s been quite a few years. Do not attempt to communicate back to me. You will find it far too much of a struggle and it will be a waste of both of our time.” Michael remained silent aside from his muffled sobs. The man nodded. “My name is Vance. You are likely confused as to what has happened. I will explain everything to you once. When I am done, the translation focus on your chest will be removed and it will not be used again.” Michael didn’t like the sound of that, but didn’t really have any way to respond to it. “You have been found out. A diviner has recognized you as a Lifetaker. A man from a foreign world that has taken a life that was due to one of the citizens of Stent. This makes you a murderer.” Michael barely held himself together at that, hearing the wailing of his body's parents build up in his ears again. Enjoying the story? Show your support by reading it on the official site. “What you have done is not uncommon in this world. We know that you may have had no intention to do what you have done, and because of this we shall not hang you as is normally done to those who murder children. Instead, you are to be drafted into our military. You will serve a ten year contract with the term starting after the end of your training.” Michael managed to tear himself away from the vortex of guilt he was feeling long enough to attempt to raise an eyebrow and find himself incapable of doing so. “You will not be training as an infant. You will be fed an alchemical mixture that will age your body rapidly. Your training will begin in around a month when you are able to begin walking and talking on your own. In roughly a year, you will physically be around sixteen years of age and ready to serve. If you attempt to desert, or escape, you will be hanged.” The man coughed a bit and stepped away to drink some water before returning. “You’re lucky, the diviner who examined you noted that you had high potential and the family of the person whose life you took are veterans. You will be sent to the Stent Military Academy rather than simple infantry training like the common criminals. You’ll still be an irregular, but you’ll be an irregular with better training.” The man mumbling the spell yawned for a moment and shook his head to wake himself up. “There’s a transport heading away from here at the end of the month, carrying some other recruits and some supplies. I’ll be having an alchemist provide you with your first few infusions later today, and your eyes and ears should be strong enough by tomorrow to begin language training.” The muttering man reached for the translation focus, but the other man stopped him, holding up a finger. “Because you made an effort to be quiet, I’m going to warn you of something. You will be hated for what you are here in Stent, but you should consider yourself fortunate. Other places would have simply left you to the elements or bashed your head upon a rock. Do not take our grace for granted.” He nodded at the other man and the focus was removed again. He heard them speak briefly to one another, no longer in English, as they walked away. He was alone, with fuzzy vision and an inability to keep himself from crying any longer. He’d taken a life. Taken all the potential of a child in a world he had no claim to. He didn’t know, hadn’t been aware of what he was doing, but that didn’t change the result. He was no better than the drunk driver that had killed his son. Shortly after he’d cried himself out, a woman came into the room holding a flask with a leather nipple. She smelled of herbs and blood and said a few things in a language he didn’t understand before shoving the nipple into his mouth. He figured that she must’ve been the alchemist he’d been warned of, and drank. He expected it to taste foul, but it tasted strange rather than bad, kind of like thick warm Gatorade with a grassy undertaste. He realized that there was milk mixed into it as well, likely to keep him sustained. After he finished it, the alchemist picked him up roughly and patted his back from bottom to top until he belched. She then left and another woman entered. He was then changed, cleaned, and left alone again. This was repeated every few hours until night had fallen and he was left alone. He wasn’t a real infant to be coddled through sleepless nights, no one would be sacrificing their own rest for him. In between the alchemist and nurse’s visits Michael considered his options. Stent’s system seemed relatively fair in a lot of ways. Making ‘lifetakers’ as they’d called him, serve their time doing labor for a decade seemed reasonable. He didn’t like the idea of being a soldier though. He’d been a desk jockey his whole life back on Earth. He’d never even been in a fight. The closest thing he’d done was wrestling with his kids. He could run, or kill himself, but the idea of wasting the life he’d stolen seemed worse to him than stealing it in the first place. No, he would serve. If he did, he may be able to help some people. He would live the life he’d taken to its fullest, because doing anything else was disgusting to him. In the middle of the night while he was dozing, his body started to feel tremendous pain. It was like there were little fires spreading in his limbs. He screamed as it flared up, but very slowly the pain abated to an ache rather than a sharp pain. It was an ache he recognized from a long time ago. The summer he’d turned fourteen and shot up seven inches he’d had very similar pains, though much less intense. He should’ve guessed there would be a high cost for the kind of rapid growth he was expected to go through. It was painful, but he’d been through worse during his cancer treatment. He’d felt what it was like for your blood to be on fire, to have his skin tear like paper. Still, his body was driven more by instinct than his own will at this point, and it reacted the way it had since he’d arrived in this new world. He cried.

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Contents
Penitent
Penitent Author:Seersucker
Chapter 1: Old is New Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 2: Drafted Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 3: Guessing, Growing, Learning Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 4: New Skies Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 5: Warm Welcome Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 6: Dawn Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 7: Magic Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 8: Q&A Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 9: Routine Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 10: Collateral Duties Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 11: Reasonable Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 12: Brand Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 13: New Flows Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 14: Hand Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 15: Divine Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 16: Old Dog, New Tricks Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 17: Incentive Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 18: Grit Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 19: Sparring Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 20: Ranking and Rest Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 21: Pubescence Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 22: Punishment Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 23: Exercise Exercise Exercise Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 24: Cause Chaos Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 25: Every Man’s Fantasy Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 26: Murder Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 27: Entombed Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 28: General Favors Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 29: Dig Two Graves, Maybe Three Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 30: Guilty Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 31: Reconciliation Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 32: Festival of Blades Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 33: Team Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 34: Melee Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 35: Riot Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 36: First Victory Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 37: Run Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 38: Team Player Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 39: Outclassed Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Edge Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 41: Masks Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 42: Deals Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 43: Pain Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 44: Armor Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 45: A Gift Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 46: Soldier Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 47: Start Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 48: Rundling Sep 10th, 2025
Downtown Druid Book 1 is Out! Plus bonus Chapter! Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 49: Hunt Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 50: Celebration Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 51: Catching Up Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Fort Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 53: Limit Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 54: Blessings Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 55: Marks on a Doorframe Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 56: Delivery Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 57: Hardened Lance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 58: Return Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 59: Aelven Echoes Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 60: Rein and Tain Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 61: Ambush Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 62: Idiot Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 63: Shrine Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 64: Morning Prayer Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 65: Aelven Ambush Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 66: Strength Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 67: Measuring Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 68: Wake Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 69: Carrion King Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 70: Lucky Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 71: Cowardice Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 72: Foetid Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 73: Skullduggery Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 74: The Taken Wall Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 75: The Last Tower Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 76: Questioning Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 77: Attempts at Martyrdom Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 78: Wrong Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 79: Praise the Divine Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 80: Faces Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 81: Recuperation Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 82: Keeping Busy Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 83: Lance’s Lot Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 84: Plans and Plans Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 85: Auspicious Beginnings Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 86: Reunions Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 87: Standing and Falling Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 88: Last Rites Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 89: Context Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 90: Into the Mountain Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 91: The Monster and The Goddess Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 92: The Wrong Martyr Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 93: Sound and Fury Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 94: Pilgrim Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 1: Heir Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 2: Growing Boys Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 3: Shots Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 4: Shepherd Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 5: Trolling Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 6: Unseasonable Cold Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 7: Cold Bounty Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 8: Biting and Clawing Snow Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 9: Cantankerous Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 10: Not Yet-i Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 11: Red Snow Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 12: Warm Breeze Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 13: Loose Ends Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 14: Horns and Forks Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 15: Civilization Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 16: Swandia Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 17: Three and Three Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 18: Cliches Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 19: Happy Endings/New Beginnings Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 20: Company Contracts Sep 17th, 2025
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