Chapter 22: Punishment

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After a few more weeks, Michael was looking at himself in the mirror. He took a moment to divine himself, and when he saw no changes and was unable to reveal anything new, he cleared it and instead looked at his face. His blonde hair was long, nearing shoulder length, and fell in waves on either side of his head. His eyes were piercing blue, and he had a strong jaw and fine features. He was as tall at that moment as he’d ever been in his old body, which meant he was hovering just a little over six foot, and would likely grow even more. He had a swimmers build, with wide shoulders and a large chest, and under his uniform he knew there was a lot of lean and powerful muscle. He sighed, he looked like a stereotypical version of prince charming. He hadn’t been ugly in his old body, but compared to the one he had now he had been a troglodyte. He’d noticed a few stares of female mage students, though they quickly corrected them when they remembered what he was, and even the medics, lunch ladies, and archery teacher had all started treating him subtly more kindly in all respects. Some men too, but he felt it was more likely because of a general subconscious aesthetic appreciation rather than any attraction for him. He’d deprived the soul that should exist in that body instead of himself a life of ease, at least when it came to women. There were some benefits to being plain, or even ugly though. Would he have developed a good sense of humor in his old body had he been so handsome? Would he have worked as hard, or been as determined? Would he have passed over his wife for a more beautiful woman? Probably not that last one, she’d be too smart to have been involved with that shallow version of him. He flexed his hand, briefly feeling the warmth of her touch. “I know what you’re thinking,” said Ollie, appearing at his side. “Hitler’s wet dream.” “What?” asked Michael with a chuckle. “I mean, look at you man. You could be on a German propaganda poster.” “And you could be in an advertisement for dog food. I guess we’re both missing out on our calling.” They went from the barracks to their inoculation. They were getting smaller doses, he noticed, with less of the well water mixed into them and more of the ‘strength draught’ that Meera had mentioned. It apparently helped aid the recovery and growth of muscles as well as the density of their bones. It was actually given as a drink to the regular recruits as well, but it was more effective intravenously. There were still variations in everyone’s shots though, with Marcus’s in particular almost always having a subtly different color to it. He’d been able to pick up a lot of new information between her and his visits to the infirmary every morning. He guessed that the well water had ceased because they were already physically where they needed to be to fight, at least if the ages and look of the regular recruits was any indication. After that they were escorted to breakfast, but instead of going from there to the diviner, Michael and everyone else were shuffled to a large auditorium. It was filled with several hundred recruits, all of them sitting on hard benches. Michael found himself next to Marcus, and soon after several of the instructors began showing up, as well as Crim the alchemist, and Meera. Crim gave a wave to Marcus and stood only a few yards from them against the back wall. Shortly after everyone was seated, a number of Knight Lieutenants like Kline appeared on the stage at the far end, with one of them standing in front of all of them. Michael couldn’t tell his rank from where he sat, but he’d guess he was the general in charge of the Academy. He had white hair brushed back and a cleanly cut goatee, but Michael couldn’t make out any more details from where he sat. He heard a giggle from behind him and turned briefly to see Crim talking to a tall recruit with blonde hair similar to his own. He recognized flirting when he saw it. He turned back around when the general started to speak. “We are now nearing the time when your training is nearing its end. Starting next week, for two weeks we’ll be engaging in a series of exercises. You will all be divided into teams, with each team being given separate and conflicting objectives. Each team will be made up of fifty recruits, with a Commander selected from the eldest recruits that have remained for officer training. You will be wielding blunted swords, staffs, your hands, and your wits. We expect broken bones, and a healer from the capital has been sent to help to keep you all on your feet, but I advise caution, it’s all too easy to end a life if one is not careful. There will be additional information provided by your instructors, you are diss-” Stolen content warning: this tale belongs on Royal Road. Report any occurrences elsewhere. Michael didn’t hear the end of what the general was saying as Marcus launched himself toward the man who’d been flirting with Crim and tackled him into the wall. Before the man could recover Marcus began raining down blows on him, undisciplined, violent haymakers and strikes very different from what he’d been being taught. Michael leapt toward him and grabbed one of his arms, the archery instructor, Anna, grabbed the other and they yanked him backward, though he kept struggling toward the older recruit who spat out a bit of blood as he pushed himself to his feet. He took a few steps toward Marcus as if he was going to attack him back, but Michael fixed him with a stare that told him he’d let Marcus go if he attempted it. Kline appeared, having walked swiftly up to that part of the auditorium. He was wearing no smile, and his face was red with rage. He grabbed Marcus by the collar and gave him a firm open-palmed slap to the face. “Calm. Down.” Marcus pulled against Michael and Anna’s grip again, and Kline revealed the brand on his arm. He clenched his fist, and Marcus doubled over in pain, forcing Michael to hold him up or he’d have fallen over. “Calm. Down,” repeated Kline, keeping his brand exposed. Marcus looked as if his rage would continue for a moment, but he very slowly pulled himself together. He almost seemed as if he was waking from a daze. Kline looked at Michael. “Let him go, and heal Clemson over there immediately.” Michael let go, and moved to Clemson, the recruit stepped back. “Don’t worry, he’s a healer, a diviner,” said Crim. He nodded, and Michael placed a hand on him, fixing a number of bruises and what he suspected was a crack in the portion of his skull near his eye. He was escorted out of the auditorium along with the rest of the irregulars, and taken to where they’d watched their former fellows hang only a few months prior. They’d all grown a lot more familiar with all of it. Having watched one more hanging, twice weekly canings, and a few of them even being put in the underground stone cells called Tombs. They were all made to stand in neat rows and watch as Marcus had his shirt and jacket stripped off, and was then manacled to the post. Kline watched as it happened, and rolled up his sleeves with a grim look on his face. A guard appeared and handed him a long, thin, and wicked looking piece of wood. It had a leather-bound handle and was thick on the handle end, growing thinner and thinner further down. “I know there have been some fights with regulars. I’ve seen black eyes, and hidden scars, but most of you all did well to keep them concealed and small, as did the regulars. Thanks to that I’ve kept the discipline at a minimum.” He gave the cane a few test swings. “This is a lesson in prudence. For attacking a fellow recruit, five strikes.” he took a few steps toward Marcus, who was staying stock still, but his hands strained against the chains. “For interrupting general Achen in the middle of instruction. Ten.” He raised the cane high, and brought it across Marcus’s back with perfect form. The sound made Michael jump, but Marcus didn’t so much as whimper. He stayed silent for the second, and the third, and even the fourth strike. On the fifth he let out a slight groan, and from there it was over. He wailed as the next ten strikes landed, his body jerking violently with each strike. Michael looked away, and caught a glance of Crim standing off to the side, watching. Her face was contorted into an expression of worry, but whenever a strike landed Michael noticed something. The hit of a smile curling at the edge of her mouth, a little bit of light in her eyes. She was excited. She’d wanted this to happen. Had that been why the dose for Marcus was different. Michael tried to think back to the ones he’d noticed were different and who’d been given them. Had they all had fights after? Or been more aggressive? He honestly wasn’t sure, but he was certain of the joy on her face. Kline finished and held out the cane for the guard that had brought it. He rolled his sleeves down and pointed at two other guards. “Take him to the infirmary.” They nodded at him and moved to remove Marcus from the post. His back was bloody and covered in deep cuts from the cane. Michael couldn’t imagine the pain. Kline moved to the rest of the group. “Many of you are older than I am, but that doesn’t mean you’re wise. It doesn’t mean you're intelligent or capable. It just means that you’ve managed to live in a world where it seems living is a much easier thing to do than it is here.” He finished buttoning his sleeve. “All of you can still act like fools, as Marcus has shown, be wary of the fool within you.” He turned to look directly at Michael. “If I see that you healed him, I will add five more strikes to his punishment, and give you five as well. You may heal him the day before the exercises begin so that he may participate. Understood.” Michael nodded as he looked at Crim with gritted teeth. “Understood.”

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Contents
Penitent
Penitent Author:Seersucker
Chapter 1: Old is New Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 2: Drafted Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 3: Guessing, Growing, Learning Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 4: New Skies Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 5: Warm Welcome Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 6: Dawn Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 7: Magic Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 8: Q&A Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 9: Routine Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 10: Collateral Duties Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 11: Reasonable Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 12: Brand Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 13: New Flows Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 14: Hand Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 15: Divine Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 16: Old Dog, New Tricks Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 17: Incentive Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 18: Grit Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 19: Sparring Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 20: Ranking and Rest Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 21: Pubescence Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 22: Punishment Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 23: Exercise Exercise Exercise Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 24: Cause Chaos Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 25: Every Man’s Fantasy Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 26: Murder Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 27: Entombed Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 28: General Favors Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 29: Dig Two Graves, Maybe Three Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 30: Guilty Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 31: Reconciliation Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 32: Festival of Blades Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 33: Team Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 34: Melee Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 35: Riot Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 36: First Victory Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 37: Run Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 38: Team Player Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 39: Outclassed Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Edge Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 41: Masks Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 42: Deals Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 43: Pain Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 44: Armor Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 45: A Gift Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 46: Soldier Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 47: Start Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 48: Rundling Sep 10th, 2025
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Chapter 49: Hunt Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 50: Celebration Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 51: Catching Up Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Fort Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 53: Limit Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 54: Blessings Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 55: Marks on a Doorframe Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 56: Delivery Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 57: Hardened Lance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 58: Return Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 59: Aelven Echoes Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 60: Rein and Tain Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 61: Ambush Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 62: Idiot Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 63: Shrine Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 64: Morning Prayer Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 65: Aelven Ambush Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 66: Strength Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 67: Measuring Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 68: Wake Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 69: Carrion King Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 70: Lucky Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 71: Cowardice Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 72: Foetid Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 73: Skullduggery Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 74: The Taken Wall Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 75: The Last Tower Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 76: Questioning Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 77: Attempts at Martyrdom Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 78: Wrong Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 79: Praise the Divine Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 80: Faces Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 81: Recuperation Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 82: Keeping Busy Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 83: Lance’s Lot Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 84: Plans and Plans Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 85: Auspicious Beginnings Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 86: Reunions Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 87: Standing and Falling Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 88: Last Rites Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 89: Context Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 90: Into the Mountain Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 91: The Monster and The Goddess Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 92: The Wrong Martyr Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 93: Sound and Fury Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 94: Pilgrim Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 1: Heir Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 2: Growing Boys Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 3: Shots Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 4: Shepherd Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 5: Trolling Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 6: Unseasonable Cold Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 7: Cold Bounty Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 8: Biting and Clawing Snow Sep 12th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 9: Cantankerous Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 10: Not Yet-i Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 11: Red Snow Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 12: Warm Breeze Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 13: Loose Ends Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 14: Horns and Forks Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 15: Civilization Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 16: Swandia Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 17: Three and Three Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 18: Cliches Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 19: Happy Endings/New Beginnings Sep 17th, 2025
Book 2 Chapter 20: Company Contracts Sep 17th, 2025
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