Chapter 178: Thorne Visits Again

Words : 1895 Updated : Oct 12th, 2025
The second "Golden Fry" day landed on a bright, breezy morning that smelled like rain long before any cloud bothered to show. Mcronald’s had its shutters up early, flour bowls set, oil gently warming, buns stacked in tidy pyramids, and the chalkboard outside redone in Lyra’s neat hand: TODAY ONLY — GOLDEN FRY SPECIAL Crispy. Juicy. Gone when it’s gone. Riko rehearsed his greeting behind the counter like a swordsman running forms. "Welcome to Mcronald’s! Burgers? Fries? Or the special?" Maddy rolled her eyes fondly and checked the chicken sacks a third time, tapping them like a drummer to feel the cold through the paper. Inigo adjusted the fryer flame and watched for that shimmer he’d learned to trust more than any thermometer in this world. Lyra leaned her elbows on the pass, chin in one hand, watching foot traffic gather on the plaza. "We’ll sell out in an hour," she said. "That’s the point," Inigo answered without looking, and smiled when she sighed in that way that meant she secretly enjoyed being right about the chaos to come. The door latch thunked, and the first rush washed in—early workers with dust on their sleeves, two academy students arguing about enchantment theory, a guardsman who’d "just stop in for tea" and immediately betrayed himself to a double burger. Orders flew; the fryer sang. Inigo fell into rhythm—coat, dip, coat again, lower; lift the basket when the sound went from frantic fizz to a confident crackle. Maddy plated, Riko called numbers, Lyra moved where the line needed strength—one moment coating chicken, the next salting fries with that magician’s flourish of hers that made kids stare. The bell over the door chimed again. Conversation softened by a degree, like a room inhaling. Lyra didn’t even glance up; she knew that particular hush. Inigo felt it too—a shift in attention, the way crowds unconsciously accorded space to the weight of certain people. Guildmaster Thorne stepped inside. He wore no insignia today, but authority clung to him like a second cloak. He took in the space—chalkboard, busy hands, the small miracles of organized heat and hunger—and then found Inigo behind the pass. There was the smallest curl to the Guildmaster’s mouth; for Thorne, that was practically a grin. "Inigo," he rumbled. "Guildmaster." Inigo tipped his spatula like a salute. "Pulling double duty again? Lunch and business?" "In that order." Thorne’s eyes slid to the chalkboard. "And it appears I chose the right day." "Luck favors the hungry," Lyra said, then raised her voice without turning around. "Riko—Guildmaster Thorne’s order goes through as listed and paid. No ’house’ nonsense." Riko jolted. "Y-yes, Commander!" He recovered with a smile to Thorne. "What’ll it be, sir?" Thorne considered. "Golden Fry. And a burger. And... tea." "Adventurer’s Feast with an upgrade," Riko said, quill scratching. "Name?" Thorne paused, amused. "Thorne will do." Maddy snorted behind the pass, then turned it into a cough. Inigo pretended not to hear and slid into motion—two drumsticks into the oil, a burger down on the flat iron, buns to the little oven slot for a kiss of warmth. Lyra salted a fresh harvest of fries, shook them twice, and tapped the tray twice on the counter in that odd little ritual she’d invented. "For consistency," she’d said. No one questioned it anymore. Ten minutes later, Thorne’s tray landed on a corner table near the window—two golden drumsticks still murmuring heat, a neat hill of fries, a Classic Burger wrapped and steaming, and a stone cup of sweet tea. He took a bite of chicken first. The Guildmaster didn’t do theatrics, not even for food, but he had tells. He ate, set the drumstick down, sat back as if to weigh it, and then went for a second bite with the steady inevitability of a man who had already decided. He didn’t speak until one drumstick remained. Then, with the gravity of a verdict: "You’re going to make enemies with this." "Only the hungry kind," Inigo said from the pass, plating the next order. Thorne glanced around the room, gaze catching on the packed bench by the window, the kids sharing a plate in the corner, the academy mages arguing quietly over whether crispness was a function of oil temperature or flour ratio. (Inigo fought a smile; the answer was "both.") He ate the burger, too, slower—appreciating the construction, the balance of salt and fat and the brightness of the sliced pickled greens Maddy had insisted they add. When he finished, he folded the wrapper cleanly and dabbed the corner of his mouth with a napkin he produced from nowhere, as if he carried the guild’s order with him even into lunch. "You’ve done well," he said simply. "Elandra needed this." "You mean a place to eat that isn’t a tavern brawl waiting to happen?" Lyra said. "That," Thorne allowed, "and something people can be happy about that has nothing to do with a monster dying." He rose then, not quite done with the tray; there were still a handful of fries left, and he took them with him like talismans as he drifted to the counter where Riko was ringing up a trio of students. The Guildmaster waited until Riko finished, then set his tea down and indicated, with the slightest angle of his head, that it was time for a quieter word. Inigo caught the look. "Maddy, you’ve got fry duty for three minutes. Lyra—" "I’ll run the pass," she said, already stepping in. They moved to the little prep alcove behind the register—a sliver of space no bigger than a closet, walled by shelves of paper, a spare keg of sweet tea, and a little window that breathed the plaza’s cool air. Thorne didn’t sit. Neither did Inigo. "First," Thorne said, the vestige of lunch in his voice softening the edges, "the food is excellent." A breath. "Second—I wouldn’t be here in person if this were not important." Inigo wiped flour from his palms onto his apron. "I figured." "I’ll not spill details in your shop. You’ve earned your peace where you can find it." Thorne’s gaze flicked to the line, to Lyra’s hands moving with swift economy, to Maddy looking almost joyful amid the steam. "And you’ve built something that holds the city together in small ways. That matters." Inigo waited. Thorne continued, voice lower. "Come by my office at first bell tomorrow. I’ll brief you both then. It isn’t the Lord of Destruction... but it isn’t nothing. It will require speed, discretion, and the kind of thinking you don’t find on a contract board." Inigo exhaled through his nose. "We just finished turning chicken into gold, Thorne." "You can have the rest of today," the Guildmaster said, not unkindly. He set a small sealed envelope on the shelf between sacks of paper. The seal bore the guild sigil, wax pressed deep. "This contains your formal summons and a travel chit—covers supplies you might need before departure. Don’t open it here." "Because you know Lyra would read it aloud to the entire room if she smelled trouble." Thorne’s mouth twitched. "Because I know you would make a face I would rather the staff not see." He tipped his cup to Inigo, polished off the last of his fries, and stepped out of the alcove like the tide receding. Back at the pass, Lyra met Inigo’s eyes between orders. He gave her the smallest nod. She didn’t ask; she didn’t need to. Her mouth tightened, and then she turned and salted another batch like nothing had shifted. The lunch rush thinned to a simmer. A trio of guild pages came in on break and split a single order of fries three ways, arguing about who’d carry messages to the north road. A street bard set up outside and played a jaunty tune that had nothing to do with Mcronald’s and yet somehow sold three extra sodas. Around midafternoon, a pair of city guards stopped by to "check on permits" and walked out with burgers in hand, satisfaction and grease equally evident. By three, the special was long gone, and Riko hung the little sign: SOLD OUT — GOLDEN FRY RETURNS SOON. A cheer rose from outside anyway, like people applauding a performance after the curtain had already fallen. They cleaned. Oil drained, pans scrubbed, spent flour taken out to the alley for the stray chickens that sometimes roamed there. Maddy hummed under her breath—some traveling song from the docks—and Riko counted the till with a reverence that made Inigo absurdly proud. Only when the last table was wiped and the lamps turned low did Lyra slide onto the front bench and pat the space beside her. Inigo sat, the day finally settling into his bones. "Thorne?" she asked. "Tomorrow. First bell." He tapped the shelf behind the counter with his knuckles; they both knew the envelope was tucked there, pretending to be just another supply order. Lyra rested her forearms on her knees. "You want to open it tonight." "I do." "But you won’t." "I won’t." They let the quiet gather, the din of the plaza fading as merchants packed their carts and families headed home. Somewhere down the lane, a kettle drum thudded once, twice, calling the shift change at the city watch. The scent of fried chicken still lingered—woven into the rafters now, a promise and a memory. Maddy and Riko finished up in the back and drifted forward. "Do we... meet early tomorrow?" Riko asked, trying for casual and landing at hopeful. "For the morning rush?" "Not too early," Inigo said. "We’ll prep as usual. Then Lyra and I have to step out. You two can handle the lunch shift without us." "Without—" Riko’s eyes went wide, then narrowed with determination. "We can do it." Maddy nodded, jaw set. "We’ve got this place. Go do... whatever it is you two do." Lyra’s smile was wry. "Kill spiders. Stop cults. Start rumors." She stood, clapped Maddy’s shoulder, and flicked a crumb off Riko’s sleeve. "We’ll be back before the fryer cools." They locked the door. Outside, the plaza glowed in the last peach light, and the Mcronald’s sign creaked softly in the breeze: red letters, bright promise. As they walked home, Inigo’s hand brushed the outline of the envelope in his apron pocket. He didn’t need to open it to know the shape of what was inside—coordinates or directions, a time, a note of urgency phrased like a request and felt like an order. The world had a way of finding them, even when they hid in flour and fire and the small goodness of feeding people. "Another mission," Lyra said, not quite a question. "Seems so." "Think it will wait until after breakfast?" "It will wait until after breakfast," he said, with the stubbornness of a man who had decided some rituals were worth guarding like treasure. "Silog. Then Thorne." Lyra’s shoulder bumped his. "Deal." They turned the corner toward home, the city breathing easy around them, the taste of salt and spice and a day well won still in their mouths. Inside the quiet kitchen, Inigo set the envelope on the counter and left it there, untouched. He washed his hands, set rice to soak for morning, and looked at Lyra over the rim of a chipped cup. "Tomorrow," he said. She lifted her cup in a small toast. "Tomorrow."

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Contents
I Have a Military Shop Tab in Fantasy World
I Have a Military Shop Tab in Fantasy World Author:Hayme01
Chapter 1: Prologue: Gaming is Life Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 2: Shop of Freedom? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 3: First Encounter with a Mob Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 4: Looking for Signs of Civilization Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 5: People Found! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 6: Quest Complete Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 7: Recuperating Isn’t Easy Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 8: Sudden Attack Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Key to the City Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 10: Changing Loadout Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 11: Departure Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 12: Onwards to the Capital Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 13: Bandits! Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 14: Paying Respects and the Prelude to the Royal Capital Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 15: Capital City Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 16: Exploring & Adventurer’s Guild Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 17: Curiousity Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 18: Testing to See If I Have Magic Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 19: The First Quest Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 20: Into the Cave Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 21: Quest Complete Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 22: A Date, But Basically Just Learning About the World Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 23: Thank you for the Info Dump Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 24: Medieval Modern Standards? Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 25: Okay, I’ll Look for Party Members Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 26: Taking the Quest Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 27: Curiosity of the Elf Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 28: The Kobold Extermination Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 29: Cashing In Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 30: A Night’s Respite Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 31: You Are Promoted Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 32: Shopping and Realization Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 33: Wyvern Quest Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 34: New Weapon Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 35: Killing Wyverns Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 36: An Encounter with a Monster Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 37: Can We Make A Lot of Money Out of This Monster? Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 38: Selling the Parts Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 39: Exchange Tab Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 40: A Weird Request Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 41: A What Appeared? Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 42: So That’s a Rift Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 43: Got the Certificate That Easy Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 44: Trying Out Magic Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 45: Prelude to the Rift Mission Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 46: The Team Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 47: Onwards to the Rift Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 48: Rift Part 1 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 49: Rift Part 2 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 50: Time to Introduce Freedom Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 51: That was an Easy Rift Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 52: Promotion Again Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 53: Seperation Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 54: House Hunting Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 55: Fast Food? Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 56: Mcronald? Who is that? Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 57: Getting to Work Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 58: Soft Opening Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 59: Someone Causing Trouble Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 60: The Duel Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 61: Invitation Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 62: The Magic Academy Adventures Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 63: The Proving Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 64: First Day of School Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 65: Back to Adventuring Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 66: LF>>>>Party 2/4 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 67: To the Dungeon! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 68: Magic of Freedom Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 69: It’s Not That Easy Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 70: Into the Depth Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 71: The Beast Beneath Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 72: Standing Out Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 73: Defeating the Monster Again Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 74: Treasures! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 75: The Booty! Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 76: Romantic Dinner Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 77: The Day After Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 78: The Demon King & Lords & Lady Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 79: Trying Out Some Moves Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 80: Mock Duel Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 81: After the Duel Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 82: A New Feature Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 83: The Battle Outside Part 1 Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 84: The Battle Outside Part 2 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 85: The Battle Outside Part 3 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 86: Successfully Defended Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 87: Seeing the Royal Family Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 88: Job Offer? Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 89: We are Taking the Journey With Style Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 90: The Next Day Trip, Already Encountered Trouble Part 1 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 91: The Next Day Trip, Already Encountered Trouble Part 2 Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 92: We Have to Return Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 93: They Are Making Rifts? Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 94: New Frontier Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 95: The Possible Reason Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 96: Arriving at Hollowmere Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 97: So They Can Summon Using That Huh? Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 98: It Wasn’t Done? Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 99: We are going to Destroy this Town Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 100: The Settled Side Quest Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 101: Celebration before Departure Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 102: A Date Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 103: A Close Rift Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 104: This Time The Rift Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 105: Inside the Tower Part 1 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 106: Inside the Tower Part 2 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 107: Inside the Tower Part 3 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 108: Inside the Tower Part 4 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 109: Inside the Tower Part 5 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 110: Inside the Tower Part 6 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 111: Inside the Tower Part 7 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 112: Inside the Tower Part 8 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 113: The Final Blow Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 114: She Wants to What? Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 115: Not Interested Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 116: A Respite Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 117: Return to the Town Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 118: The Demon’s Response Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 119: Infiltration Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 120: Sudden Fight and Some Pondering Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 121: I Need Men Part 1 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 122: I Need Men Part 2 Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 123: Great Results Oct 6th, 2025
Chapter 124: Learning How to Drive Part 1 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 125: Learning How to Drive Part 2 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 126: Fire on Wheels Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 127: No Room for Hesitations Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 128: Moment to Breathe Part 1 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 129: Moment to Breathe Part 2 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 130: SAW Part 1 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 131: SAW Part 2 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 132: Graduation Part 1 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 133: Graduation Part 2 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 134: Presenting the New Team Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 135: The New Quest Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 136: The Quest Part 1 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 137: The Quest Part 2 Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 138: Not Finished Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 139: Return to the Guild Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 140: Bar Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 141: New Quest Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 142: Dealing with the Quest Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 143: The Battle Oct 8th, 2025
Chapter 144: Completed Quest Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 145: Farewell Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 146: Plea from Another Country Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 147: Arriving at the City Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 148: Scouting the Lair Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 149: The Red Dragon Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 150: Apache Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 151: Fire Above Part 1 Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 152: Fire Above Part 2 Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 153: After Test Drive Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 154: The Hunt Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 155: Dogfight Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 156: Aftermath Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 157: The Reward for Killing the Dragon Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 158: Feast Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 159: So That’s How It’s Fueled Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 160: Just Passing Through Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 161: A Request from the Villagers Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 162: Request Fulfilled Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 163: Trip to Home Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 164: Finally Home Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 165: A Dish From Home Part 1 Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 166: A Dish From Home Part 2 Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 167: The Business Reminisce Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 168: The Reopening Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 169: Another Mission Huh? Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 170: The Mission Details Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 171: Onwards to the Cave Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 172: Inside the Cave Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 173: The Boss Fight Part 1 Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 174: The Boss Fight Part 2 Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 175: Aftermath Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 176: Fried Chicken Experiment Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 177: The Debut Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 178: Thorne Visits Again Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 179: Heading to New Mission Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 180: Arrived at Cindralock Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 181: Fragile Cargo Part 1 Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 182: Fragile Cargo Part 2 Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 183: Fragile Cargo Part 3 Oct 12th, 2025
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