Chapter 23: Detention

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Starting Chapter 23 of "Hogwarts: Knight Wizard": The issue of age is, at its core, really a matter of physical condition. To put... See what happens next!

The issue of age is, at its core, really a matter of physical condition. To put it simply, Edward is only 11 years old. Even though his physical fitness is already exceptional among his peers, it still doesn't meet the advanced requirements of the Knight's Breathing Technique. This actually aligns with the underlying logic of the wizarding world. Looking at Hogwarts' curriculum, young wizards don't start by learning complex and difficult spells. Instead, they begin with the basics. For one, simpler spells and theories are easier for these young wizards to grasp. After all, they're only 11, at a fifth-grade elementary level. Even with wizarding blood, they haven't even touched linear equations yet. How could anyone expect them to have a deep understanding of magic? On the other hand, as they grow older and their bodies develop, their magical power also increases, giving them the foundation and ability to learn more advanced spells. In short, age, physical condition, and magical power are all interconnected. Some things, unless you're exceptionally gifted, you simply won't grasp until you reach a certain age, no matter how hard you try. The Knight's Breathing Technique has even stricter physical requirements than some advanced magic. After all, this technique was tailored to the physiques of legendary Round Table Knights. Unfortunately, while Edward has already awakened three blessings, none of them relate to physical strength. To make further progress, he either needs to continue practicing virtues to awaken more blessings or find ways to enhance his physical condition. Of course, he could also just wait to grow up naturally. But that's not Edward's style. The heavens reward hard work, and he can't afford to slack off just because he has some talent. Activating new virtue blessings in the short term isn't very realistic, and the remaining virtues might not even relate to physical strength. Waiting around isn't an option either, so improving his physical condition is the only path forward. Potions or alchemy seem like a good choice. Since Snape has assigned him detention to organize teaching materials for next week's class, Edward might as well try to glean some useful information from him. Snape, as a teacher, gives Edward a very complicated impressionම System: impression. Edward's parents had described Snape with some hesitation. "He was a few years younger than us, with greasy hair that looked like it was never washed, always brooding like some big bat. But when it came to potion-making talent, hardly anyone at Hogwarts could match him—except, of course, your mother," William had said. "Don't listen to your father's nonsense; his survival instinct is a bit too strong," Anri had added. "I was talented, sure, but in potions, I was still a step behind Snape. Still, your father's mostly right. We were two years above him, didn't interact much. Gloomy, greasy, intense, always hanging around Lucius and that crowd. Oh, and he had bad blood with a few Gryffindors—like fire crabs in the same nest. Your dad, always meddling, would sometimes step in to stop their fights, though by the time he got there, Snape was usually the one with a bruised face." Their descriptions painted Snape as a bit of a pitiable figure, a classic target of schoolyard bullying. Whether that experience pushed him toward dark magic and Voldemort, Edward couldn't say. But what earned him Dumbledore's trust to return and teach? Edward sensed there was more to the story, but he lacked the pieces to put it together. What puzzled him even more was Snape's intense emotional reaction when Edward mentioned Harry's parents. If Snape had been a Death Eater, shouldn't he relish terms like "Mudblood"? Why, then, did he deduct 25 points from Malfoy on the first day of class, despite seeming to get along with him in Potions? Snape's character felt like a contradiction, not as unapproachable as he seemed. At seven o'clock that evening, it was time for Edward's detention. He pushed open the heavy wooden door of the dungeon classroom, the faint candlelight flickering in the draft. Snape's robed figure was hunched over a desk, scribbling furiously. "Good evening, sir," Edward said. Without looking up, Snape pointed to a nearby table piled with two large baskets of materials: mistletoe berries, valerian root, unicorn tail hair, moonstone, and sopophorous beans. "Sort these into individual portions. No wands, unless you'd like to personally pluck unicorn tail hairs in the Forbidden Forest," Snape said, still not lifting his head. Edward was confident he wouldn't ruin the materials, but he nodded, walked to the table, rolled up his sleeves, put on gloves, and prepared to start sorting. "Wait!" Snape suddenly barked. "Are you so foolish that you'd begin sorting without even asking what potion these are for?" Edward turned, puzzled, and looked at Snape. "Professor, I figured these are for the Forgetfulness Potion. Not much else they could be used for, right? But if there's another use, please enlighten me." His tone was earnest. A flicker of surprise passed through Snape's eyes before his usual cold demeanor returned. "Your memory's better than those incompetent fools, at least. Since you know these are for the Forgetfulness Potion, what are you waiting for? Get to it." He buried his head in his work again, writing who-knows-what. Edward began sorting: five mistletoe berries, about three inches of valerian root, one unicorn tail hair, moonstone to be ground into powder (likely during class), and one sopophorous bean. As he worked, he could feel Snape's gaze occasionally flicking toward him. The faster Edward sorted, the more frequent those glances became. Eventually, Snape set down his quill, stood, and silently watched Edward's increasingly practiced movements from behind. Snape drifted into a memory. On a distant afternoon, in this very room, he and Lily had been kept after class by Professor Slughorn to prepare these same Forgetfulness Potion ingredients for first-years. Lily's hand had brushed his, and his cheeks had flushed like a ripe apple, making her giggle. Edward's figure began to blur with Snape's own in that memory, but the image of the red-haired girl faded, gone forever. "Professor, what are you thinking about?" Edward's voice snapped Snape back to reality. read more inpatreon ilham20

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Hogwarts: Knight Wizard
Hogwarts: Knight Wizard Author:readinilham20
Chapter 1: Edward Morgan Bedivere Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 2: Malfoy in the Wand Shop Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 3: I Don’t Even Need a Wand to Deal with You Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 4: The Handbook of the Magic Knight Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 5: Practicing the Breathing Technique Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 6: Daphne Greengrass** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 7: Malfoy on the Train Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 8: You Didn’t Listen to a Word, Did You? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 9: You’ve Finally Taken Your First Step Toward Humility** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 10: Where Would I Make the Most Difference? (Modified Sorting Order Edition)** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 11: The Hall in Uproar (Modified Sorting Order Edition) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 12: Snape’s Reminder** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 13: Early to Rise, Full of Vigor; Late to Rise, Full of Panic** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 14: Before Transfiguration Class Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 15: Where’s Your Matchstick? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 16: Edward, the Helper Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 17: The Blessing of Sincerity, Upgraded Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 18: The Incident in Herbology Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 19: Slicing Through Devil’s Snare** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 20: Acing Potions Class Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 21: Snape's Helplessness Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 22: The Bottleneck of Breathing Techniques** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 23: Detention Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 24: Methods to Enhance Physical Condition Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 25: The Library Pass Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 26: This Is How You Use the Doubling Charm** Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 27: Professor Dumbledore Wants to See Me? Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 28: The Headmaster’s Suspicions Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 29: Flying Lessons Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 30: Racing a Flying Broom Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 31: My Second is Edward Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 32: A Real Duel? I Was Just Messing with Them! Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 33: One Against Five in a Duel Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 34: This Is What a Duel Looks Like Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 35: The Blessing of Glory and the Midnight Escape Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 36: Charms Class Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 37: The Halloween Feast Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 38: When You’re Sleepy, a Troll Shows Up Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Magical-Physical Stunning Spell Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 40: You Six Must Be Insane! Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 41: The Troll Strength Potion, Success** Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 42: Breaking Through the Bottleneck ** Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Quidditch Match I Couldn’t Bear to Watch Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Mad Flying Broom and Bludgers Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Staff Stand Goes Up in Flames ** Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 46: You Call This a Match? Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 47: Not Snape? Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 48: A Face-to-Face Confrontation Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 49: The Torn Potions Professor Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Faulty Mirror of Erised Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 51: Glastonbury Abbey Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 52: I’m Done With You Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 53: Great, It’s Dumbledore—We’re Doomed Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 54: Misunderstanding Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 55: Escape Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 56: rambling Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Dangerous Creation of Merlin Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 58: The Charm of Spirituality? Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 59: list novel inpatreon Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 60 - 59: Practicing the Shield Charm Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 61 - 60: Learning Achieved Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 62 - 61: He Finally Got His Moment to Shine Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 63 - 62: Family Feud on the Platform Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 64 - 63: A Stammering Malfoy Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 65 - 64: The Wild Hunt Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 66 - 65: Christmas Gifts Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 67 - 66: Florean Fortescue Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 68 - 67: The Attack at the Abbey Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 69 - 68: The Department of Magical Law Enforcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 70 - 69: Death Eaters, Pure-Blood Supremacists, Ashwinder Party, or Poachers? Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 71 - 70: The Black Knights Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 72 - 71: Do You Know Nicolas Flamel? Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 73 - 72: The Awkward Compartment Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 74 - 73: My Advice Is, Just Let It Go Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 75 - 74: The Invisible Horses Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 76 - 75: Death, Homework, and Secret Lessons Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 77 - 76: Disarming Charm Lesson Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 78 - 77: Can I Join You? Oct 1st, 2025
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