Chapter 16: Edward, the Helper

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Chapter 16 of "Hogwarts: Knight Wizard" begins revealing: "Slytherin, ten points!" Professor McGonagall's loud announcement drew every eye in the room to Edward, followed... Continue the adventure!

"Slytherin, ten points!" Professor McGonagall's loud announcement drew every eye in the room to Edward, followed by a collective "Wow!" from the students. Not everyone was thrilled, though. Hermione, for instance, was visibly miffed at having her thunder stolen. She was pouring all her effort into making her matchstick transform further. Behind Edward, Malfoy let out a dismissive "Hmph," but his focus on his own matchstick noticeably sharpened. It wasn't just him. After Hermione and Edward earned points, every student's concentration on their matchsticks visibly intensified. We're all first-years—why should they succeed when I can't? Daphne, in particular, narrowed her eyes in silence, mentally cataloging every detail of Edward's technique—his wrist movements, the volume of his incantation, even the rhythm of his breathing. A rare smile crept onto Professor McGonagall's face. As a teacher, she was delighted to see her students so driven. But ambition and competition weren't enough. Going down the wrong path could backfire. Her eyes had already zeroed in on Seamus Finnigan, a Gryffindor boy with light brown hair like Edward's, who seemed to have a peculiar knack for explosive or fire-related magic. If she didn't step in soon, his matchstick might turn into something like a Wizarding Wheezes firecracker, likely leaving both him and Dean Thomas beside him with sooty faces. "Let's pause for a moment, everyone. Mr. Bedivere, perhaps you'd like to share some of your insights with the class?" McGonagall said, gesturing for Edward to step forward. "Of course, Professor McGonagall," Edward replied promptly. He stood up so quickly that Daphne didn't even have a chance to grab his sleeve. She shook her head helplessly as she watched him head to the front. Some of the other Slytherins shot Edward mocking glances, a few even chuckling softly. They might envy or resent his talent, but most thought he lacked the cunning befitting a Slytherin. Share your tips in class? Yeah, right. Edward felt the undercurrent of malice in their stares but brushed it off. You can only expect sincerity from others if you offer it first. He was happy to take that first step. With a casual wave of his wand, the matchstick on the teacher's desk transformed into a gleaming short sword, earning another round of "Oohs" and "Aahs" from the class. "Let's start with this: when I turned the matchstick into a sword just now, did anyone notice my wrist movement?" Edward asked, scanning the room. "Uh..." Most students exchanged blank looks. Who'd remember that? Everyone was staring at the matchstick, not your wrist! "A circle, then a flick?" Daphne ventured hesitantly. She'd observed him closely several times and was confident she'd nailed it. "Nice one! And now?" Edward grinned, waving his wand again to turn the sword back into a matchstick. "Wait, that was totally different from before!" "Yeah, this time it was a flat sweep, then a jab forward." "And the tone of the incantation was different too!" The first-years were thoroughly confused. "Exactly! You've all just pinpointed the key to Transfiguration!" Edward said, tapping his temple. "From my perspective, Transfiguration is a complex subject, but its essence isn't about the motions—it's about what's up here." "You might think you failed because your incantation wasn't clear enough or your wand movement wasn't sharp enough, so you keep tweaking the form." "But in reality, to succeed at Transfiguration, you need two things: a crystal-clear mental image of the object you're transforming and an unshakable belief that you will succeed. Both are essential." "Don't hesitate, don't doubt, don't fear the challenge. Picture a needle clearly in your mind and believe with absolute certainty that you'll turn that matchstick into a needle. That's all the advice I can give." Edward finished with a slight bow. The classroom's silence broke with a burst of applause, led by Professor McGonagall. "Excellent! Truly excellent! In all my years, I've never heard a first-year explain the essence of Transfiguration so clearly! Five more points to Slytherin!" "Now, carry on, everyone." "Mr. Bedivere, if you're willing, perhaps you could offer some guidance to your classmates." Hermione's eyes lit up. She'd been half a step from success but couldn't figure out what was holding her back. Edward's words made it click: she'd had a fleeting moment of self-doubt. That tiny hesitation had left her silver needle slightly imperfect. Now, a flawless silver needle lay before her. Hermione let out a relieved sigh, looked up, and saw Edward giving her a thumbs-up. She returned a shy, friendly smile. Maybe Slytherins aren't all bad. Daphne was the third to succeed. In terms of intellect, she was second to none in the room. Edward's advice had lifted the final veil of confusion for her. Still, she wasn't entirely satisfied with her performance. Edward was one thing, but how had Hermione Granger beaten her to it? Was all her parents' training over the years really outdone by a Muggle-born who'd only known the wizarding world for a month? As for the others, while Edward's advice had sparked some progress, their results varied. "Mate, you're a Transfiguration genius!" Ron said, gaping at his matchstick, which now had only a wooden stub left. "Just a bit of thinking," Edward said with a smile. "Focus a little more and picture the needle's shape in full detail." Harry stared at his matchstick, which was only pointed at one end, then glanced at his excited friend, feeling a bit discouraged. "Harry, you've got to believe in yourself more. Compared to defeating You-Know-Who, a needle's a piece of cake, right?" Edward said gently. "Huh? Oh! Right!" Harry took a deep breath, feeling a warm surge in his chest. The matchstick in front of him finally started to thin out. "Ron! I did it!" Beyond Harry and Ron, most of the Gryffindors had managed to make at least some change to their matchsticks. But on the Slytherin side, some were less than pleased. "Slytherin's traitor!" Malfoy muttered coldly. "Sharing tips with those Gryffindor idiots?" At that moment, he thought Edward was even worse than Potter. "I don't entirely agree with Edward sharing his tips either, but aren't you getting a bit ahead of yourself, Draco?" Daphne said, glancing at the completely unchanged matchstick on Malfoy's desk. "That's not very fitting for your status, is it?" she added, raising an eyebrow and nodding toward Crabbe and Goyle, whose matchsticks had at least shown some progress. Malfoy went silent for a moment. He knew Crabbe and Goyle were ahead of him. "Daphne, this is nothing for me. Just watch!" A flash of white light later—nothing happened. Malfoy's already pale cheeks flushed red with frustration. Pansy and Zabini were already exclaiming over their successes, yet he couldn't even focus. As he prepared to try again, a voice interrupted. "Focus, Malfoy. I know what's on your mind. Let go of those distractions. With your talent, you can do this." Edward had quietly walked over to his desk.

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Hogwarts: Knight Wizard
Hogwarts: Knight Wizard Author:readinilham20
Chapter 1: Edward Morgan Bedivere Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 2: Malfoy in the Wand Shop Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 3: I Don’t Even Need a Wand to Deal with You Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 4: The Handbook of the Magic Knight Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 5: Practicing the Breathing Technique Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 6: Daphne Greengrass** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 7: Malfoy on the Train Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 8: You Didn’t Listen to a Word, Did You? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 9: You’ve Finally Taken Your First Step Toward Humility** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 10: Where Would I Make the Most Difference? (Modified Sorting Order Edition)** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 11: The Hall in Uproar (Modified Sorting Order Edition) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 12: Snape’s Reminder** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 13: Early to Rise, Full of Vigor; Late to Rise, Full of Panic** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 14: Before Transfiguration Class Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 15: Where’s Your Matchstick? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 16: Edward, the Helper Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 17: The Blessing of Sincerity, Upgraded Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 18: The Incident in Herbology Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 19: Slicing Through Devil’s Snare** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 20: Acing Potions Class Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 21: Snape's Helplessness Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 22: The Bottleneck of Breathing Techniques** Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 23: Detention Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 24: Methods to Enhance Physical Condition Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 25: The Library Pass Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 26: This Is How You Use the Doubling Charm** Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 27: Professor Dumbledore Wants to See Me? Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 28: The Headmaster’s Suspicions Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 29: Flying Lessons Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 30: Racing a Flying Broom Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 31: My Second is Edward Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 32: A Real Duel? I Was Just Messing with Them! Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 33: One Against Five in a Duel Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 34: This Is What a Duel Looks Like Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 35: The Blessing of Glory and the Midnight Escape Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 36: Charms Class Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 37: The Halloween Feast Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 38: When You’re Sleepy, a Troll Shows Up Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Magical-Physical Stunning Spell Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 40: You Six Must Be Insane! Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 41: The Troll Strength Potion, Success** Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 42: Breaking Through the Bottleneck ** Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 43: The Quidditch Match I Couldn’t Bear to Watch Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Mad Flying Broom and Bludgers Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Staff Stand Goes Up in Flames ** Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 46: You Call This a Match? Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 47: Not Snape? Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 48: A Face-to-Face Confrontation Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 49: The Torn Potions Professor Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 50: The Faulty Mirror of Erised Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 51: Glastonbury Abbey Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 52: I’m Done With You Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 53: Great, It’s Dumbledore—We’re Doomed Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 54: Misunderstanding Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 55: Escape Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 56: rambling Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Dangerous Creation of Merlin Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 58: The Charm of Spirituality? Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 59: list novel inpatreon Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 60 - 59: Practicing the Shield Charm Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 61 - 60: Learning Achieved Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 62 - 61: He Finally Got His Moment to Shine Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 63 - 62: Family Feud on the Platform Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 64 - 63: A Stammering Malfoy Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 65 - 64: The Wild Hunt Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 66 - 65: Christmas Gifts Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 67 - 66: Florean Fortescue Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 68 - 67: The Attack at the Abbey Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 69 - 68: The Department of Magical Law Enforcement Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 70 - 69: Death Eaters, Pure-Blood Supremacists, Ashwinder Party, or Poachers? Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 71 - 70: The Black Knights Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 72 - 71: Do You Know Nicolas Flamel? Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 73 - 72: The Awkward Compartment Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 74 - 73: My Advice Is, Just Let It Go Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 75 - 74: The Invisible Horses Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 76 - 75: Death, Homework, and Secret Lessons Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 77 - 76: Disarming Charm Lesson Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 78 - 77: Can I Join You? Oct 1st, 2025
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