Chapter 28: Forgotten Ruin

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Chapter 28 of "The Golden Fool" introduces: Chapter 28: Forgotten Ruin Apollo pretended not to watch the city outside, but every nerve in... Read on to discover!

Chapter 28: Forgotten Ruin Apollo pretended not to watch the city outside, but every nerve in him twisted at the suggestion of movement. The wind had stopped entirely. The flames from their torch guttered upward without the least disturbance: no draft, no movement of air, just the slow consumption of wax and wick. He waited for the others to doze, then stepped outside. The street was brighter than it should have been, the glow from the central tower, perhaps, or a trick of the stone reflecting starlight. Apollo walked in a slow spiral, testing the distance to the next ring, counting his own footsteps against the perfect echo returning from the stone. At the fourth intersection, he stopped. There, nailed to the door of a squat, windowless building, was a single strip of paper. The language was not the city’s; it was written in a hand he recognized, though it had been years since he’d seen it outside of dreams. It read: "The world is made of walls and luck. You are running out of both." He pulled it free, folded it, and pushed it into the seam of his coat. He thought of Torgo, wondered if the old magician had left a corpse anywhere or if the river had simply devoured him, stone and all. On his way back, Apollo noticed something new. On the far side of the square, a figure moved. Not toward him, not away, but in a careful semicircle, matching his own slow pace. The figure was tall, dressed in mourning black with the hood pulled low. It walked with the certainty of someone who had lived in the city for centuries. He could not see a weapon, but the gait spoke of violence with every stride. Apollo did not challenge or signal; he returned to the house, bolted the door, and tried to forget it. By the middle of the night, the fever had woken Thorin, and the retching was bad enough that Lyra got up to help. The stench was more bile than blood, which Apollo counted as a mercy. He dosed the dwarf with willow salt and a measure of the blue powder, which cooled the shakes but left Thorin rambling in three languages and mumbling about cities made entirely of teeth. Nik drifted to sleep, then woke, then slept again, never more than a quarter inch below the surface of attention. The dog paced the room in slow circles, never once barking, but always listening. At dawn, none of the food was left, and neither was the fire. When they stepped outside, the city’s illusion had changed: now the streets showed evidence of passage, tracks left by shoes that belonged, impossibly, to their own party. The dog whined, sniffed the air, then cowered behind Apollo’s left calf. They followed the avenue toward the tower, knowing that this was the purpose, even if it felt like a trap. The streets became wider as they advanced, the houses grander and more complex the closer they drew to the center. At three points they saw figures in the city, at a window, behind the grillwork of a balcony, hunched on a roofline with their back to the rising sun. None moved. Each watched, and waited. Apollo’s head throbbed with the pressure of it. ’What do you want from me?’ He could hear the answer in the way the wind now whistled through the cracks: nothing. The city wanted nothing, because it already had them. At the base of the tower was a dry fountain filled with perfectly smooth stones. No statue at the center, just a plaque set in the base. The others stood back, waiting, but Apollo knelt to read it. The characters shifted as he stared, the meanings arranging and rearranging until he could almost speak the truth of it aloud. But he did not. He only stood, dusted his hands on his coat, and glared up at the empty windows overhead. Nik said, "You understood that, didn’t you?" but Apollo shook his head, too tired to even invent a new lie. They entered the tower. Inside, the spiral steps went upward forever, but the air did not change, and the walls were lined with a gold veining that seemed to pulse in time with his own blood. At the landing, a great chamber. No furniture, no books, just a single circle drawn on the stone in charcoal and salt. Lyra would not cross it; she stayed at the door, eyes darting, calculating exits. Nik broke the silence. "What now?" he asked. Apollo stepped into the circle. For a moment, he felt nothing. Then he heard the voice, not from across the room, not from the street, but from inside his own teeth, vibrating in the roots and curling down his jaw. The words were nonsense, yet perfectly understood. He fell to one knee, gripping the shard from Torgo, and squeezed until the edges bit through the skin of his palm. The city’s purpose flooded him, a sense of unfinished business, obligation, an echo of every vow he’d ever made and broken. The memory of the old gods’ faces, the field of white flowers, the well of red. A single, impossible command: "Finish." He stood. The others watched with the kind of cautious respect usually reserved for the dying. He looked at them, each in turn, then lied as best he knew how: "It’s just a ruin," he said. "There’s nothing here." And the city, hearing this, let him go. They left by the western road. The market was as it had been, the shoes in their place, the frost heavier now. When they stopped to rest, the dog curled at his side, and for a while, Apollo let himself believe. The world had not run out of walls. Not yet. And luck, well, that was just another way of spelling hunger. He walked east, always east, the taste of the city’s silence still thick on his tongue. And wherever the next morning waited, he would meet it with an empty hand and a heart still stubborn enough to beat.

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Contents
The Golden Fool
The Golden Fool Author:Robin Hobb
Chapter 1: Sentence of the Sun Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 2: Divine Descent Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 3: The Fire Accepts No Gods Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 4: Treating A Fallen God Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 5: Victim Of The Plague Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 6: One Small Sun Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 7: Gods Are Cause And Cure Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 8: A Song For The Dead Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 9: Roads Without Gods Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 10: Marrowgate Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 11: Bread And Blood Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 12: They Come In Quiet Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 13: Bounty Paid In Full Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 14: Safehouse Of Glass Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 15: Buyer At The Door Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 16: Teeth And Silence Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 17: What Bleeds, Runs Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 18: What the Marsh Doesn’t Bury Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 19: Salt, Smoke, and Mage Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 20: The Collector of Broken Things Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 21: The Rite of the Hollow Temple Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 22: Drink the Rite, Bleed the Dawn Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 23: Priest of Lost Light Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 24: The Howl and The Hunger Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 25: The Ember That Remains Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 26: Ash In The Blood Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 27: The City That Forgot Its Name Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 28: Forgotten Ruin Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 29: Fieldcraft Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 30: Ashmead Pass Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Bounty Ledger Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ghost Orchard Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 33: Terms Of Service Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 34: Campfire Etiquette Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 35: Terms of Travel Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 36: Fire and Rain Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 37: Green in the Thorns Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 38: Salt in the Air Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Drowned Mouth Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 40: Low Tide Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 41: The Pull Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 42: The Current Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 43: Against the Tide Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Relic’s Voice Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Wrong Road Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 46: The Crooked Path Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 47: The Straight Road (1) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 48: The Straight Road (2) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 49: Streets of Smoke and Stone Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 50: Procession of Ash Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 51: The Spark and the Core (1) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Spark and the Core (2) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 53: Echoes in the Night Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 54: The Midnight Intruder Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 55: The City on Alert Sep 12th, 2025
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