Chapter 21: The Rite of the Hollow Temple

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Explore the latest events in "The Golden Fool" Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Rite of the Hollow Temple The temple had been built by men who...

Chapter 21: The Rite of the Hollow Temple The temple had been built by men who believed that stone could outlast the memory of famine, of flood, of the old gods’ indifference. Its spires showed first, punching through last year’s fire-killed scrub like the bones of a forgotten beast. Even from half a mile away, with the sun behind them and the wind at their backs, Apollo could feel the place’s hunger. He did not slow. If anything, he kept a dogged, childlike pace, willing the others onward with the stubbornness of a man who knew there was nothing behind them but bad weather and recent ghosts. Nik noticed it first. He pointed with his chin, the rest of him too busy shifting most of Thorin’s half-dead weight up the slope. "Is that a watch post, or am I seeing things?" "Temple," Lyra said, not even pretending to guess. She’d walked this part of the world before; her body settled into a wary, animal readiness as they drew near. "Old one, maybe from the time before the empire. Doubt there’s anyone left inside." But she did not speak as if she believed it. Thorin, awake for the first time since the marsh, squinted against the wind. "Used to be a shrine at the crossroads. That one’s bigger. Wrong shape for a church, though." His voice was hollowed out, but steady. Apollo watched the silhouette of the building resolve itself: walls blackened by rain, roof patched with something that might have been hides or slate. A set of flags hung listless along the parapet, color bled out by decades of sun. The closer they came, the more the air changed, denser, tainted by a sweetness he could not name. The dog went tense at his ankle, hackles up, but did not whine. He tried not to read symbolism into the place. Tried not to see in its sullen arches the memory of a different temple, one built by his own hands, ruined by his own stupidity. He failed. Every step toward it was a step toward the past. They passed the outer wall, crumbled, more suggestion than barrier, and found the courtyard littered with the leavings of travelers less desperate than themselves: bundles of sticks, half-burnt candles, a wax doll impaled on a nail. "Offerings," Lyra said. "Or warnings." Nik set the barrow down and stretched his back until it cracked. "If there’s shelter, I’ll risk the gods’ disapproval," he said, not bothering with the usual sarcasm. The air was too thick for it. They approached the main door, battered wood rimmed in rust and old blood. It stood open, not wide, but enough for a body to slip through if it wanted. The inside was dark, riven by shafts of colorless light. Apollo scanned the entryway, saw the shadow-shapes huddled along the pews, and felt the pressure in his teeth, familiar, but wrong. It was the same sensation he’d had in Marrowgate, that night with Cassian and the Blackhearts: a slow, deliberate squeezing of the world’s edges, a charge that made his bones go hollow and his vision sharpen to a knife point. But this was older, more practiced. It reached across the distance and pressed on him, waiting to be recognized. Lyra stopped just inside, voice low. "There’s people," she said. "A lot of them." She pointed to the altar, where a cluster of figures knelt, heads bowed, hands raw from prayer or penance. The scent of old incense was drowned by the sharper tang of sweat and unwashed skin. Nik grunted. "Devotees?" Lyra shook her head. "They’re not praying. They’re just...waiting." Apollo saw it, too: the slackness in the limbs, the glazed, hungry way the nearest face watched the dust motes swirl in the light. Not sick, exactly, not the fever that had eaten through Marrowgate, but something deeper, a rot that was more of the soul than the flesh. He stepped past Lyra, ignoring her hiss of warning, and walked down the center aisle. The echoes of his boots came back strange, elongated. The nearest of the faithful turned to look at him, and the movement was so slow it barely qualified as alive. Their eyes were wrong. The irises had leeched to a muddy gray, the pupils shot through with filaments of white. When one blinked, the lid closed the wrong direction, bottom to top, like a curtain. He swallowed, counted the faces. Twelve at the altar. Four more scattered through the nave. All were dressed in the same dirty white, the hems of their robes caked with mud and, in places, something darker. A priest stood at the altar, back to the room, hands clasped in front. His cowl hid most of his head, but the skin at the nape was smooth and unmarked by age. He spoke, voice clear as glass. "Are you here for redemption, or for a place to hide?" Apollo stopped at the first row of pews. The others filed in behind him, Lyra now openly gripping her knife, Nik with one hand on the barrow and the other holding Thorin upright. The dwarf’s face had gone sallow and cold, but his eyes were awake, even lucid. "I’m told you offer sanctuary," Apollo said, the formal words feeling strange in his mouth. The priest turned, revealed a face so ordinary that Apollo flinched; there was something about the mouth, the way it pinched at the corners, that made the whole head seem unfinished. The eyes were pale blue, rimmed in red, no sign of the earlier mutation—but the gaze was as empty as the echo of a hollow bell. "We offer absolution," the priest said, stepping down from the altar. His robe was immaculate from the knees up, but the hem trailed behind him, stained in a way that suggested years of crawling or worse. "If you seek safety, you must first be cleansed. The world outside is sick, here, we are made new each day." Lyra snorted, but the sound died in the hush. "We just need a roof for a night," she said. "All who enter are welcome," the priest replied, "but to stay, you must join us in the rite. It is our one rule."

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The Golden Fool
The Golden Fool Author:Robin Hobb
Chapter 1: Sentence of the Sun Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 2: Divine Descent Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 3: The Fire Accepts No Gods Sep 9th, 2025
Chapter 4: Treating A Fallen God Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 5: Victim Of The Plague Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 6: One Small Sun Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 7: Gods Are Cause And Cure Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 8: A Song For The Dead Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 9: Roads Without Gods Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 10: Marrowgate Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 11: Bread And Blood Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 12: They Come In Quiet Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 13: Bounty Paid In Full Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 14: Safehouse Of Glass Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 15: Buyer At The Door Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 16: Teeth And Silence Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 17: What Bleeds, Runs Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 18: What the Marsh Doesn’t Bury Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 19: Salt, Smoke, and Mage Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 20: The Collector of Broken Things Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 21: The Rite of the Hollow Temple Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 22: Drink the Rite, Bleed the Dawn Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 23: Priest of Lost Light Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 24: The Howl and The Hunger Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 25: The Ember That Remains Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 26: Ash In The Blood Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 27: The City That Forgot Its Name Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 28: Forgotten Ruin Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 29: Fieldcraft Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 30: Ashmead Pass Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Bounty Ledger Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 32: Ghost Orchard Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 33: Terms Of Service Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 34: Campfire Etiquette Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 35: Terms of Travel Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 36: Fire and Rain Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 37: Green in the Thorns Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 38: Salt in the Air Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Drowned Mouth Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 40: Low Tide Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 41: The Pull Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 42: The Current Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 43: Against the Tide Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 44: The Relic’s Voice Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Wrong Road Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 46: The Crooked Path Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 47: The Straight Road (1) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 48: The Straight Road (2) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 49: Streets of Smoke and Stone Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 50: Procession of Ash Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 51: The Spark and the Core (1) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Spark and the Core (2) Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 53: Echoes in the Night Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 54: The Midnight Intruder Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 55: The City on Alert Sep 12th, 2025
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