Chapter 9: L brothers

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Chapter 9 of "My Devourer System: Rise of the Bastard Son" kicks off revealing secrets: Chapter 9: L brothers Once he was done with the golden cage, Lucen did not return... Keep reading!

Chapter 9: L brothers Once he was done with the golden cage, Lucen did not return to his room as usual. Koril left him to return on his own, so he decided to explore the castle. From the walkways and high terraces, he traced the path down to the bottom floor, and with each floor he descended, a growing buzz reached his ears. Voices travelled up the stone, and the bustling sounds of life filled his ears. Finally, he reached the ground floor. The stone chamber had high banners and colossal armour sets looming over the crowd of people at the bottom of the stairs. Lucen peeped down the stairs, not a single soul out of the hundreds was taking it. If he came down the stairs, he’d be identified as a Lightcloak, and word would reach Duran in seconds. He returned upstairs, finding one of the smaller, metallic service doors. They were built for humans, and would explain how such a large servant caste could move soundlessly through the castle. He couldn’t figure out how to open the door, however, it had no handles and was just a smooth, tall metal door. After trying a few methods, he stumbled onto the right way. By pushing the door till you heard a clicking sound, then moving aside as it popped open. "Smart, I think?" he muttered. The tunnels beyond were lit by glowing stones. It was a tight metallic tube that ran for miles. The thrum of the crowd vibrated through the walls into his bones. The metallic steps spiralled downward, and Lucen suddenly felt like the dark metal walls were closing in. It grew more overwhelming with each step, but he found the exit soon. He pulled the handle backwards till it clicked and stumbled out of the tunnel into a crowded hallway. And before anyone could take more than one look at him, he was sucked into the crowd’s flow. For a second, the noise crushed down on him. After eight years of space and silence, he was washed away by the swarm of people. The hot smells of bread, stews and flowers pushed and pressed on him. He managed to get to the wall and followed the crowd to the colossal wooden doors of the Keep. Lucen had been asleep when he entered the castle as a baby. The very sight of the door had weight, like he was stepping into a legend, something that couldn’t be moved by man. He was outside. The air was cold and sharp, the wind and its dust rolling over him. The ground, the walls of the keep, the cloth of the people passing through the gates, were all a dense, black grey. Lucen walked carefully to the little shop closing down, where a young boy was pulling down rafters. "Hello," said Lucen timidly The boy, a bit younger than him, turned, brows furrowed. "Lightcloak? Down here... are you Halfblood?" Lucen nodded, no point in denying it. "Been cooped up in a room all year... where’s everyone going?" Lucen cringed internally. Why was his voice so weak and squeaky? "The town in the valley—Most of us live down there," he said, fastening a lock to the bolt. "I’m Liam. What’re you looking for?" "I wanted to know if there were any Lurker Hounds in the area," Lucen answered, glancing back at the high windows of the Grey keep. Liam took off his hat and went behind the shop stall to change. "Well—they roam the plains. The Lightcloaks think they’re too weak to hunt, but they probably don’t like how smart they are." Liam’s voice paused as he pulled his dirty shirt over his head. "Simple magic’s easy for them to dodge, and bigger ones are a waste of mana—at least that’s what the Commander says. So we deal with them ourselves." "Are you looking to kill some?" Liam asked excitedly Lucen didn’t answer, waiting as the boy came back around the stall, his dirty brown hair and easy blue eyes were charming. He spoke very well for a child and was quick to answer. "Thank you. I’ll see you around." He left, thoroughly disappointed in his inability to sound human. "Wait! You never told me your name," Liam reminded him. "Don’t worry about it, call me anything you like." "Goldie?" Lucen paused, about to turn back and snarl at the boy, but let it go. Back inside the castle, he followed many doors and passed between the lower sections of the towering building. He found the kitchens easily, enjoying some of their more strange foods and their wary company. "Oh, it’s not that dàngerous in the valley," one of the chefs explained, "The Hounds ain’t hard to scare away." "There are the Crunchers, though," a boy said, while kneading dough. The chef gave him a harsh look that intrigued Lucen. "What are those?" "Old legend, don’t worry about it," the chef said, but sighed, seeing Lucen’s insistent stare. "Crunchers are monsters under your bed, stories yer mum tells you to keep you from roaming at night. They eat the bones of the men they kill and wear their skins. It’s why they call ’em crunchers—the sound." "Don’t worry about it, though," the baker boy exclaimed, "Lord Chester, when he returns, will kill them all." Lucen narrowed his eyes. Chester? It wasn’t the first time he had heard that name, but now it warranted some investigation. At the end of the day, when the sky darkened over the grey castle, Lucen walked up to the gates of the Grey Keep. He swallowed hard, glancing behind repeatedly and tried to step through the gate. His body froze, limbs no longer his and a frustrated cry escaped his throat. He stepped back slowly, face dark and murderous. It seemed like he was not allowed to even leave the keep. One of them would have to break first, though—the world or his will. ■——■ Six years later, Lucen had become a regular customer at Liam’s shop and brought his mother too. The Lightcloaks didn’t feed or acknowledge their existence, so usually Selene had to go down to the kitchens and cook for them herself. Lucen rubbed his sandals against the coarse earth. He was covered in sweat and dirt from Warren’s combat classes. He was at a table with Liam, playing a casual game of Highcraft—a chess-like strategy game that was popular among nobles. "Hehe, why are you playing so slow?" Liam snickered, "Take your loss gracefully, Goldie." "My name is fucking Lucen," he replied, "and are you so proud to finally beat me, after i’ve been training all day." "Ahhh, sorry, I forgot. We’re L brothers!" Liam exclaimed, "Don’t worry, brother. Unlike you, I won’t rub losses in your face." He considered picking up the wooden staff at his side and smacking Liam across the head. But simply grumbled and played his next move. "This is why I hate kids. And do not call us L brothers" "You’re a kid too." Liam grumbled. "Are some Knights stronger than others? Like Chester. I heard he’s the one the Lightcloak Patriarch trusted to protect the Keep." Koril was still here while Chester was in the void. But now he was back, sent back to the Keep by Alger. Even though the Patriarch himself hadn’t returned to the Keep in fifteen years. "Obviously there are ranks for Knights based on their strength," Lucen said lazily. "The weakest are us, Squires. We can only learn weaker spells and our souls haven’t coalesced. That simply means it needs to harden and become one unified form." Liam beamed. "Then there are the formal Knights? My dad was a Knight, but a weaker one." "Yes. They have hardened their souls and use High-rank spells. They are also far stronger and faster than us." "Then Chester is a Knight?" "Grand Knight, the strongest knights out there. I don’t know what differentiates them from normal Knights, though," Lucen murmured. "But they are strong, stronger than any Knight by far. All of the Patriarch’s sons, Sandor, Koril, Chester, are Grand Knights." "You’ll be one too someday," Liam sighed, "I hear they live forever." Lucen glanced at the castle. Tomorrow, they will decide what channelling technique he got. That would decide whether he became a Grand Knight or not. And whether he’d ascend beyond that.

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Contents
My Devourer System: Rise of the Bastard Son
My Devourer System: Rise of the Bastard Son Author:IKMT
Chapter 1: Death Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 2: The Devourer System Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 3: Sensing mana Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 4: Runes Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 5: Alger Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 6: The Golden Cage Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 7: First Lesson Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 8: The Will of the world Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 9: L brothers Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 10: Knighthood Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 11: Heroic-rank channelling technique Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 12: Castaway Valley Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 13: Lost Wind Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 14: The Hunt Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 15: Escalation Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 16: The Duel Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 17: Victory for the love of it Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 18: High-rank spell Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 19: The wolves are coming Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 20: Riptide Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 21: The Shapeless Wolf Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 22: One good hit Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 23: Jon Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 24: Long search Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 25: The Hole Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 26: We are you Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 27: Starlight Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 28: Aya Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 29: Faithlock Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 30: The Love of all that victory entails Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 31: Conspiracy Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 32: Guardian Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 33: To Death Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 34: Seeker Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 35: Wraith Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 36: Father of Despair Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 37: Wrath Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 38: Sealing magic Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 39: Spirit Light Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 40: Consequences Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 41: Lies Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 42: Secrets Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 43: The Rain Duel Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 44: Ymir Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 45: Hiru Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 46: Shanakal Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 47: For Myself Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 48: Bravery Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 49: Directions Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 50: Mid-tier Knight Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 51: Serpent Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 52: Pride Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 53: Heroic Spell Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 54—Black field Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 55—Blind Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 56—Courage Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 57—Sweetness Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 58—At the top Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 59—Fiend Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 60—Savage Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 61—Unreal Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 62—One life Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 63—Pack Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 64—Bad blood Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 65—The girl and the dragon Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 66—What do you want? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 67—What do i deserve? Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 68—Serpent II Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 69—What i can do Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 70—Warzone Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 71—Destiny Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 72—Serpent’s Call, Heroic spell. Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 73—Omens Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 74—Voice of the Veiled King Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 75—Tripartite and Traits Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 76—Changing sky Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 77—A Dream about Fire Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 78—Hegemon-rank Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 79—Young Duran Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 80—Obstacles Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 81—Side effects Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 82—Expectations Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 83—Jumper Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 84—Dead Demigods Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 85—Dark whispers Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 86—Formalities Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 87—The Father Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 88—Possibilities Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 89—Disquiet gods Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 90—Plans Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 91—The pull between them Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 92—Complications Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 93—Twilight star Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 94—Himmel Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 95—Working with ego Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 96— First Love, First Sight Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 97—How to see the unseen Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 98—Friends suffer together Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 99—Seeker Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 100—Of the Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 101—Sea Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 102—First battle Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 103 103: 103—A Challenge Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 104—Red Snapper Fiend Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 105—To Kill a Fiend Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 106—The closer you get to Death, the you are to Victory Sep 30th, 2025
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