Chapter 19 19: The flaw in his perfect world

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[3rd POV] The morning sun slid over the Pride Lands like a blade, slicing through the mist and heat with indifferent precision. Scar, the king of the land, stood atop Pride Rock and surveyed all that lay before him. A land that was his. It was one of the rare mornings when he woke up early to patrol his kingdom. The height he was standing on allowed him to see the herds of animals in the distance. The lush green of trees and bushes. The abundant water in the watering hole and all the creatures that thrived around it. Indeed, the king was pleased with what he saw. Scar looked back to glance at his pride of lions that stretched lazily across the sun-baked stone. He saw that they were well-fed, healthy and most of them had become loyal to him due to the ease and pleasure they had under his rule. He then turned towards the hyenas that were staying around Pride Rock. They were chaotic creatures and Scar would be honest when he said he was disgusted by them. But they had their use and they were loyal, so he kept them around. It had taken time, blood and careful calculation. But the reward was worth it. There was a sense of peace and stability. Scar was living his dream. He was in his prime, and his authority was unchallenged in his kingdom. It was almost perfect. Almost. "Where are you, I wonder?" Scar whispered thoughtfully in the wind as he gazed into the horizon. There was one flaw in his near-perfect world. A flaw that was beginning to grow into this huge imperfection that he never expected. He kept an eye on it, but now that it had disappeared for three days, Scar was beginning to grow concerned and cautious. Leo, the crippled one. Born weak in the shadow of a fated prince, nature had not been kind to him. Even before he turned half a year, he was forced to fight for the right to live and barely survived as a cripple. Scar also robbed him of his father's guidance, his brother's company, his mother's affection and his budding pride. At that point, Scar thought the cub was just a pile of scars still living. A pitiful thing really. He'd seen cubs dealt better cards in life and still die. Nature had a rhythm. The weak were swept away so the strong could rise. Except he didn't die. He grew. Slowly. Quietly. Unnoticed at first. But he grew. He learned to fight with his hips low and shoulders heavy. He learned to leap without a tail, adapted like something primal, like a beast meant to survive a world with no rules. Scar was wrong, Leo was strong and so he rose from weakness, even his own. Through everything life threw at him, he seemed to walk out stronger. Now, a year and a half in this world, and he was already the size of an adult lioness when it should have taken him twice that time. Leo was stronger than he had any right to be. And clever, Scar noticed, and this was what scared him the most. Eyes too sharp for a cub. Actions that smelled of a plan, even small ones, movements too deliberate sometimes, etc. And now he was gone. Three days. No word. No scent trail returning. But he would come back. That was the kind of cub he was. Stubborn. Proud. A thorn. And thorns have a way of digging deep when ignored. Scar knew this. He knew this better than anyone, for he was once the same thorn to Mufasa. He was secretly worried. Perhaps it was the wrong decision to spare him. Scar spared him out of petty goodwill and so that Sarabi would not remain too stubborn for him to conquer. He thought Leo was not a threat back then, that was a grave oversight on his part. If Scar allowed him to grow further, Leo could prove to be his worst enemy. Not now though, he was still too green to be considered a real threat now. But in a few more moons, a few more battles, that would change. He already had a following among the younger ones, even if they didn't realise it. The way they mimicked him, the way they looked up to him like he was better than a perfect royal breed like Scar himself. "It's dangerous," Scar said thoughtfully. But for now, Scar watched and waited. He did everything to attain the power he had, and he was willing to do more to keep his power. The sun continued its great climb in the sky, and during his thoughts, it had already climbed halfway. At that moment, Scar caught a distinctive scent in the air. The smell of a lion, a half-grown king, a half-way threat. Leo. "Speak of the devil," Scar said and watched as Leo came closer and closer from the horizon. He saw that Leo was carrying a fresh prey in his jaw and that made his blood boil. He was not hungry but he immediately ran down Pride Rock and headed towards Leo. When he reached him, Scar did not say a greeting. Instead, he attacked Leo immediately. The young adult was caught completely off guard and fought back on instinct, but only for a brief moment. *ROAR!!* A chain of thunderous roars followed powerful movements. The ground came alive in dust and the rest of the pride stood up to watch the scene. It was only a few seconds of intense actions before Leo stopped fighting back and became submissive. Scar bared his teeth and quickly snatched the prey from Leo's grasp. "Know your place, cub!!" Scar roared and stood on the stolen prey. Leo took a step back. His eyes locked on Scar with an eerie glow. Scar was expecting primal anger but what he saw was something unexpected. There was anger and rage in his eyes but what Scar noticed was those emotions being held back by an unnatural clarity. Like Leo was not really taking offence because he knew he would get his revenge in the end. Scar once looked at Mufasa with the same eyes, so they felt vaguely familiar to him. If lions had mirrors, he would undoubtedly try and kill Leo on the spot. Instead, Scar took a bite of the prey in front of Leo. He was not hungry but it was a show of dominance. "You disappear for days without notifying me, and you think you can walk right back to the pride like you own it?" Scar said. "I apologise, Your Majesty," Leo said in a respectful tone. But if eyes could speak he would say the opposite. "You know I never brought home my prey. The one that you are eating, I brought as an apology," Leo said. And now Scar was left dumbfounded. He had already eaten the prey so it was as if he had already accepted the apology when taken into account body language. In the end, what else could he do except say "Never do it again, Leo, always inform your king. You should not make moves without the king's permission." "I'll remember it," Leo said and then walked past him. For some reason, that felt insulting to Scar. That was proof that Leo was everything Scar was thinking him to be. Bold, Stubborn and Clever. .. .. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Stones would be appreciated

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Contents
Leo : The Lion King
Leo : The Lion King Author:Emmanuel_Capricorn
Chapter 1 1: Rebirth Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 2 2: The beginning Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 3 3: Growing up Sep 11th, 2025
Chapter 4 4: A lion's roar Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 5 5: When survival has to be earned Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 6 6: To earn the right to live Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 7 7: The reward is life Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 8 8: Elephant graveyard Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 9 9: No more scraps Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 10 10: First prey Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 11 11: The final peace Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 12 12: Scar's takeover Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 13 13: The beginning of a forged story Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 14 14: Aftermath Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 15 15: Time passing Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 16 16: Timeskip Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 17 17: Waiting for the inevitable Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 18 18: Promise fulfilled Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 19 19: The flaw in his perfect world Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 20 20: Small things Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 21 21: Budding romance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 22 22: An abrupt war Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 23 23: The King's verdict Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 24 24: Scar vs Leo Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 25 25: Scar vs Leo (2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 26 26: Exile and unshaken promise Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 27 27: Journey and discovery Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 28 28: Notice Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 29 29: New home Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 30 30: A new pride Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 31 31: Simple plan Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 32 32: First day Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 33 33: Hunting Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 34 34: Improvise, adapt, overcome Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 35 35: Humans again? Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 36 36: I fear no king Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 37 37: Leo vs Roku (1) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 38 38: Leo vs Roku (2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 39 39: Documentary (1) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 40 40: Notice Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 41 41: Documentary (2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 42 42: Documentary (3) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 43 43: The Siringet Pride Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 44 44: Next morning Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 45 45: Second Interaction Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 46 46: Resolve Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 47 47: What is Pride to a lion? Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 48 48: Timeskip (2) Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 49 49: Path to power Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 50 50: Are you approaching me? Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 51 51: Grudge unfolds Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 52 52: One against All Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 53 53: They came, and they were forced to leave Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 54 54: What is prey? Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 55 55: Documentary episode 2 (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 56 56: Documentary episode 2 (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 57 57: Documentary Episode 2 (3) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 58 58: Documentary Episode 2 (4) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 59 59: Buffallo hunt (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 60 60: Buffalo hunt (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 61 61: Buffalo hunt (3) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 62 62: Reflection and growth with every experience Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 63 63: Joe Rogan Podcast Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 64 64: Joe Rogan Podcast (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 65 65: New lion Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 66 66: First blood Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 67 67: Timeskip (3) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 68 68: Timeskip (4) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 69 69: Kinslayer Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 70 70: Time to conquer Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 71 71: The first spark Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 72 72: Preparation Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 73 73: Thanks for the stone!! Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 74 74: The Battle for Dominance : Leo vs the Mbali Brothers (Start!!) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 75 75: The Battle for Dominance : Leo vs the Mbali Brothers (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 76 76: The Battle for Dominance : Leo vs the Mbali Brothers (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 77 77: The Battle for Dominance : Leo vs the Mbali Brothers (3) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 78 78: The Battle for Dominance : Leo vs the Mbali Brothers (4) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 79 79: The Siringet Pride (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 80 80: Takeover Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 81 81: Takeover (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 82 82: Takeover (3) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 83 83: Next challenge Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 84 84: Pridelands (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 85 85: Pridelands (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 86 86: The Life of a King Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 87 87: Hype Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 88 88: Notice Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 89 89: Internet Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 90 90: Documentary Episode 3 (1) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 91 91: Documentary Episode 3 (2) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 92 92: Documentary Episode 3 (3) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 93 93: Documentary Episode 3 (4) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 94 94: Documentary Episode 3 (5) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 95 95: Documentary Episode 3 (6) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 96 96: Documentary Episode 3 (7) Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 97 97: Leo's Pride Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 98 98: First Challengers Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 99 99: The King of Serengeti Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 100 100: Nala's predicament Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 101 101: Sorry... Sep 17th, 2025
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