Chapter 3 – Lady Luck

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Chapter 4 of "The Greatest Sin [Progression Fantasy][Kingdom Building]" introduces new challenges: Olympiada was the birthplace of the White Pantheon, a mountain claimed for the Gods. Its... Keep following!

Olympiada was the birthplace of the White Pantheon, a mountain claimed for the Gods. Its top was a sprawling temple-complex the size of a small town. The defensive walls around it were long torn down, the white marble refashioned into grand abodes and homes for the immortals living at the peak. Mortals would make a pilgrimage up the steps frequently to beg for assistance so the front always had a large crowd of people. Behind the central temple though were the closed quarters. There only servants were seen, if one was lucky, they could get a peek at the Gods in their day-to-day lives. Leona sat in her library. It was a small thing, although she never liked the grandiosities of her siblings. She sat reading a book, a simple fairy tale about knights and princesses. Those were her favourite. Her pale hair cascaded messily down her face and she wore a simple blue dress. It was something most Goddesses would frown upon, but no one had the gall to say anything negative about Lady Luck to her face. “I’ve tried that recipe you gave me.” Leona’s personal maid, Alice, said as she came in. The girl was an orphan, simply left at the foot of Olympiada one day. Zerus would have probably thrown her away but it was just Alice’s luck that Leona was the one who found her. Leona sniffed the air as she smelled Alice’s cooking, Allasaria had a legion of maids a thousand strong, but to her, Alice was enough. “It smells brilliant.” Leona said. “Did you add lemon?” “Oranges for some tang.” Alice said proudly as she sat down opposite Leona and poured two cups of tea. Another breach of protocol, no servant would so much as dream of sharing tea with their God. “I tested it the first time and I thought it was too sweet.” “It’s a guilty pleasure.” Leona said as she put the book down and picked up a fork. “Wow.” “Do you like it?” “It’s brilliant. The oranges really do make it better.” “Hehe.” Alice’s cheeks went rosy. She was a simple girl, not beautiful by any means, but pretty. With large brown eyes and rosy lips. She cut her own slice. “I have an idea already on how to make it better.” seaʀᴄh thё nôvel_Fire.ηet website on Google to access chapters of novels early and in the highest quality. “What is it?” “It’s a surprise.” Alice said. “Although I’ll give you a hint, it’s mint.” “Mint?” Leona took another bite. “It’s just my own creation so…” Alice’s voice went quiet as she stared at her Goddess. Leona’s golden eyes became unfocused. “Mistress?” The fork slid out of her hand and she started tilting to the side. Alice quickly jumped up and caught Leona before the latter cracked her head on the floor. “Mistress? Mistress? MISTRESS?!!!” “HELP! HELP! HELP!” Whiright, of Planes, refocused his vision at the mad screaming of some woman. It was a girl with brown hair, he was sure he had seen her about here before. She wore a simple dress wholly inadequate to trekking the steps of Olympiada. So a native, or maybe some girl one of his siblings had taken a liking to. He adopted a sour face, she was thoroughly unimpressive. “HELP! HELP!” The girl pushed past the line as Whiright stood up. “Quiet girl, don’t you see there’s a line?” A line of fools who came asking to fix a hole in the roof or begging for spare change to feed their dogs. “NO IT’S-“ The girl grew silent as Whiright stared at her. Her voice cut out and she lifted into the air. Who did she think she was to say no to him? He was a God. “Girl, do not test my patience and return to where you came from if you think your problems are somehow more important than those who climbed up here.” The crowd was much on his side, it took a week for a mortal to reach the heights of Olympiada. The most support she got were a few looks of pity. Whiright waved his finger and the girl slowly moved through the air, past the grand golden doors of the temple. He lifted her another metre into the air and dropped her down. If there wasn’t a crowd here, he would have thrown her off the mountain. “Next.” He said. “NO!” The girl ran in again. “IT’S LE-“ She lifted into the air. “-O-“ Her voice was weak as Whiright constricted the winds around her neck. “-NA.” Whiright blinked. Leona? Oh no. That was all he could think as he felt two awe-inspiring auras suddenly appear behind him. “I didn’t-“ He turned to see a white cloak, the corner of his eye caught a chiselled jawline, greyish stubble on it. Then his vision went dark as lightning struck him from the side. He was launched against the marble wall, blood spilling out of his mouth. “Remember your place, .” Zerus said without even giving him a second look. The Lightning God walked past him, each time his sandal touched the floor, lightning cracked for an instant. The crowd knelt in awed silence. Besides him walked Allasaria, Goddess of Light. Zerus was only known as the leader of the White Pantheon because it was a position too low-brow for Allasaria. She was blinding, with cascading golden hair and dressed in the golden armour she wore in the Great War. Whiright looked away in an attempt to hide his glare. “Alice.” Her voice was like a caress in itself. It was quiet and yet everyone in the room heard it. “What is wrong?” She tried to pull the girl up but Alice had burst out into tears. “It’s Le-Leona!” She cried. “She… She… She’s collapsed!”

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The Greatest Sin [Progression Fantasy][Kingdom Building]
The Greatest Sin [Progression Fantasy][Kingdom Building] Author:Aszcze
Prologue – A Century of War Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 1 – A Millennia of Peace Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 2 – A God Unearthed Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 3 – Lady Luck Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 4 – Unimpressive Welcome Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 5 – Panic In The Pantheon Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 6 – Divinity Watch Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 7 – Hunger Unending Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 8 – Shot In The Dark Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 9 – Light, Order & Peace Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 10 – The Gates Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 11 – False Alarm Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 12 –  Within The Divine Library Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 13 – A Pantheon Cracking Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 14 – The Librarian Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 15 – Fading Light Contingency Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 16 – Under Budget, Ahead of Schedule Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 17 – Deeper Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 18 – Hunting Queen-Beast Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 19 – And In We Go Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 20 – Fading Light, Fading Luck Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 21 – Peace Unto War, War Unto Peace. Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 22 – The Pack Stands Oct 10th, 2025
Chapter 23 – Librarian No More Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 24 – Something On The Range Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 25 – The Pack Fights Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 26 – Within the Fortress Walls, The Huntsmaster Prowls Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 27 – The Greatest Hunt Ends at Last Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 28 – Order & War Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 29 – Godbiter Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 30 – Missing in Action Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 31 – A Return To Arascus Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 32 – A Sword for the Humanitarians Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 33 – Return To Normalcy Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 34 – Order Prepares For War Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 35 – Negotiating with a Hammer Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 36 – To Steal The Sky Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 37 – Seductive, Magnanimous, Vigorous War Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 38 – Operation SkyStealer Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 39 – Accelerate Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 40 – Out of the Frying Pan Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 41 – Into the Fire Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 42 – A Lack of Finesse Oct 12th, 2025
Chapter 43 – All is Fair with Love and War Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 44 – Human Artillery Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 45 – Relics of the Past Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 46 – Within the Fortress Walls, The Spectre Prowls Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 47 – The First Line of Defence Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 48 – Of Death Oct 14th, 2025
Chapter 49 – An Unexpected Guest Oct 14th, 2025
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