Chapter 11 : The price of Rage(1)

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Chapter 11 of "Once upon a time in God's playground" starts unveiling mysteries: The creature—no, the abomination—lowered its grotesque head into the remains of Sang-Woo. Wet, meaty crunches filled... Keep reading!

The creature—no, the abomination—lowered its grotesque head into the remains of Sang-Woo. Wet, meaty crunches filled the alleyway. Its metallic jaw clamped, ground, and chewed, spraying red across the cracked pavement like a butcher’s gutter. One of its mouths—splitting like a five-petaled flower—twitched with delight, each tooth a chainsaw working in tandem. Seo-Yeon dropped to her knees. No scream. No sobbing. Just silence. Tears streamed quietly down her blank face, cutting trails through the dust on her cheeks. Her arms hung limply at her sides, her fingers twitching as if they were trying to hold on to something—*someone*—already gone. Then, violently, she vomited. "Se...Seo-Yeon!" In-Ji was shouting, gripping her shoulders. "Snap out of it! Look at me!" But her eyes stared past him. Wide. Glassy. Empty. Like she was watching a memory on repeat—and couldn’t stop it. Ye-Rin clutched her mouth. Pale. Frozen. Her coat slid off one shoulder, but she didn’t move to catch it. Her eyes were locked on the monster, the thing that had just eaten someone who was alive a moment ago. And the beast... didn’t even notice us. It just kept eating. Grinding flesh. Sucking marrow. Its many tails—hundreds of wire-like appendages—slithered across the alley floor, twitching as if they had minds of their own. It didn’t see us as threats. That is the most horrifying feeling I have ever had in my life. I looked down. The tiny spider monkey clung to my hand—barely the size of a melon, trembling. Its black eyes locked onto mine like it *knew* what was coming. A faint notification hovered just behind my vision: [Do you accept this as your pet?] [Yes] / [No] I didn’t hesitate. [Yes] [Do you want to start Beastification?] [Yes] / [No] Bang. Bang. Bang-bang-bang-bang-bang! Gunfire shattered the stillness. Seven shots rang through the alley, echoing like thunder. In-Ji stood in the middle of the road, arms extended, eyes blazing. The bullets sparked off the creature’s metallic joints—some pierced the flesh between its plated armor. The beast screeched, a horrible blend of a horse’s cry and a machine’s wail. It stopped eating. And turned. Blue light flashed in my vision: Name:[None] Race:Chalybotaur Age:3 Days Nature: Gluttony Title: (Candidate for Boss) Level:12 Strength: 320 HP: 280 Agility:280 Stamina:180 Mana:50 Nature : Gluttony Can steal the ability of prey. Usable once. Its head twisted in sharp mechanical ticks. Steam hissed from vents behind its ears. Its wire tails rose—like spears ready to strike. I didn’t wait. My bones cracked. My vision doubled. My body shrank, warped, split—and reformed. Fur erupted across my skin. My spine stretched. My arms doubled. My tail swelled until it trailed behind me like a whip. [Beastification: Spider Monkey Variant – Activated] "Let’s go," I hissed through gritted teeth. A sticky strand launched from my tail gland, catching a rooftop. I swung hard, fast, slamming a kick into the Chalybotaur’s jaw. Its heads barely budged. It turned toward me, mouth opening— "Curse of Slowness!" Mi-Sun’s voice echoed. A faint blue shimmer wrapped around the monster. Its movements faltered.The air around the beast shimmered like heatwaves. Its movements became sluggish, as if the world were pushing against it. I jabbed my staff between its jaws—SNAP!—wedged it open. And finally, Ye-Rin blinked. She stood up, trembling. Her hand reached out and, without knowing why,With a scream, she flew through the air, crashing her knee into the beast’s gut. The impact sent it skidding backward, slamming into the wall. I webbed its limbs and torso down in a flurry of thwips. "Pin it!" I shouted. In-Ji reloaded. Fired again. Seven more shots slammed into its chest and shoulder. Nothing. It tore the webbing free like paper. It crushed my staff between its teeth—splinters of obsidian scattered across the ground. I fired webs again, pinning its legs to the walls, swung under its chest, slashing with claws, ducked a tail swipe, and climbed up its side like a feral cat. Then the horse roared, its tails snapping all at once. Before I could retreat, its tails lashed. CRACK! One caught my leg midair. It whipped me like a toy. I was thrown into the wall. Cracked concrete.. Something popped in my side. ~Warning: HP below 20% ~Your tamed pet is attempting to take over control. Pain blinded me. Blood ran from my mouth. But I felt something warm—a pulse. [Shin Mi-Sun is using: False Healing] ~ HP Restored: +50% I gasped. Then screamed."WATCH OUT!". A tail slammed into Mother’s chest and sent her flying through a storefront window. "Mom!" Ye-Rin shouted.running toward her. But more tails came.She dashed forward—only for more tails to whip through the air. In-Ji pushed forward,in rage. Shot. Reload. Shot again. The last bullet scraped the Chalybotaur’s eye. It shrieked. A tail lashed out-faster than thought-and coiled around In-Ji’s ankle. One tug. CRASH! His body slammed against the concrete like a doll. He didn’t scream. Just groaned. Bleeding. Ye-Rin tried to leap onto its back—only to get kicked by its hind legs. Her body slammed into a tower frame across the street. Blood trailed down her head. I rose. Shaky. My webs fired fast—looping around the beast’s neck, trying to choke it out. I swung in hard with a flying punch. It didn’t even flinch. It grabbed me again. Threw me like trash. I hit the ground and skidded. ~ Warning: HP below 10% ~ Beastification is being forcefully removed. The baby monkey stumbled next to me. Bleeding. Breathing heavy. My arms were broken. Ribs shattered. Muscles torn. The Chalybotaur looked down at me. It laughed. Then—it turned. Toward Seo-Yeon. She hadn’t moved since Sang-Woo died. But now... her eyes were glowing. A faint red circle expanded under her feet. The wind went still. The concrete beneath her cracked. I stared. "What..." [New System Function Unlocked: Hidden Nature Awakening] [Seo-Yeon – Nature: Telekinetic Berserker (LOCKED)] [Trigger Condition: Psychological Overload – Severe Emotional Trauma] [Temporary Access Granted] She stepped forward. The air around her warped. Streetlamps shattered. The beast froze. For the first time—it backed away. Her voice was a whisper. "I told him I’d stay close... I told him I’d make it..." Then— She screamed. BOOM. The world broke. The ground heaved. Street tiles shattered like glass, cars flipped into the air like leaves in a storm. A wave of invisible pressure burst outward, folding metal and cracking bone. The Chalybotaur was lifted off its hooves, slammed into a building so hard the wall caved in. Metal cracked. Bone shattered. The beast screeched. And Seo-Yeon—collapsed. Unconscious. But before silence returned, a final system message flickered in purple: ~ Nature: Gluttony ~ [STALKER] has been used

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Once upon a time in God's playground
Once upon a time in God's playground Author:MaxMillion
Chapter 1 : Chosen Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 2: Golden Hell (1) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 3: Golden Hell (2) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 4 : Golden Misfortune Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 5 - 6: The wraiths Beneath Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 6 - 5: Rabbit will return Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 7 : When the sky blinked Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 8 : When the screams return Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 9 : Woman and Monkey Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 10: When Luck runs out Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 11 : The price of Rage(1) Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 12 : The price of Rage(2) Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 13 : Day 4 (1) Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 14 : Day 4 (2) Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 15 : Interview of the End Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 16 : The king of thunderstorm (1) Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 17: The king of thunderstorm (2) Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 18 : The king of thunderstorms (3) Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 19 : Find You Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 20: Iron blood Rabbit Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 21 : Iron blood Rabbit (2) Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 22 : Iron blood Rabbit (3) Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 23 : Mission # 002 Sep 26th, 2025
Chapter 24 : First Memory Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 25 : Second memory chase Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 26 : Second memory Death Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 27 : Silent screams Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 28 : You’re safe now Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 29 : Goblins in Human Skin Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 30 : 2 Days later Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 31 : Claw necklace Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 32 : Children’s Playground Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 33 : The Shoulder Devil Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 34 : We are Dragon Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 35 : What is Bravery? Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 36 : Mission Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 37: Updated Stat Sheets (1) Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 38 - 37 : Poison Tower Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 39 - 38 : Tower Guardians Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 40 - 39 : White Guardian (1) Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 41 - 40 : White Guardian (2) Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 42 - 41 : White Guardian (3) Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 43 - 42 : Black Guardian (1) Sep 28th, 2025
Chapter 44 - 43 : Black Guardian (2) Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 45 - 44 : Black Guardian (3) Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 46 - 45 : Shopping spree Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 47 - 46 : Mission 4 Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 48 - 47 : The meetings Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 49 - 48 : Wrong Schedule Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 50 - 49 : Former Classmates Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 51 - 50 : Influence Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 52 - 51: Unexpected Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 53 - 52: The clash of Champions Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 54 - 53 : The Bridge They cross Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 55 - 54: Final Clash Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 56 - 55 : Final Blow Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 57 - 56: The Chase Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 58 - 57: The breakdown Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 59 - 58 : Gods and higher-ups Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 60 - 59 : Burial And Mysteries Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 61 - 60: Uneventful Evening Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 62 - 61 : Secrets in stat screens (1) Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 63 - 62 : Secrets in Stat screens (2) Sep 30th, 2025
Chapter 64 - 63 : Mission # 005 Invasion Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 65 - 64 : Don’t Trust anyone anymore Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 66 - 65 : Looking for survivors Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 67 - 66 : Blood Vampire Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 68 - 67 : Vampire Behemoth Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 69 - 68 : Restless night Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 70 - 69 : Dragon’s Judgement Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 71 - 70 : Accusations Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 72 - 71 : Hospital Visit Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 73 - 72 : Blood Vampires part Two Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 74 - 73 : Vampire Aristocrate Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 75 - 74 : The silence before Thunderstorm Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 76 - 75 : Blood in the Streets (1) Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 77 - 76 : Blood in the Streets (2) Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 78 - 77 : Blood in the streets (3) Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 79 - 78 : Blood in the streets (4) Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 80 - 79 : Blood in the streets (5) Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 81 - 80 : Blood in the streets (6) Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 82 - 81 : Meeting The God Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 83 - 82 : My first meeting Oct 2nd, 2025
Chapter 84 - 83 : Unexpected Neighbor Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 85 - 84 : Kimchi Pancake Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 86 - 85 : Past Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 87 - 86 : Unseen Threads Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 88 - 87 : Youthful Mistake Oct 4th, 2025
Chapter 89 - 88 : Promise Oct 4th, 2025
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