Chapter 23: Professor McGonagall

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Chapter 23 of "Harry Potter: The Wandmaker" introduces: The hair-wand project wasn't going smoothly. The main problem was that Harold couldn't find a... Read on to discover!

The hair-wand project wasn't going smoothly. The main problem was that Harold couldn't find a wand wood that matched Professor McGonagall's hair. Wizards had very distinct magical traits, and they subconsciously rejected materials they didn't resonate with. Oak, vine, beechwood... Over the past few days, Harold had tested all the materials he carried with him. Not only did none of them work, but he even accidentally blew apart two strands of hair. That put him in a gloom for several days. He was debating whether to ask Hagrid to take him into the Forbidden Forest over the weekend to find new wand materials. While Harold, lost in thought, passed through the common room, he was suddenly stopped by Harry and Ron. "Hey, Harold, what's up with you lately? You've been out of it all week," Harry finally couldn't help asking. "Yeah," Hermione chimed in, walking over. "You've already been late three times—we've lost twenty House points for Gryffindor..." "What'd you bring that up for?" Ron glared at her before turning back to Harold. "We just want to know what's going on. Maybe we can help." "Oh, it's nothing." Harold rubbed his face. He realized he'd been a bit too obsessed the past couple of days. Making a wand from a wizard's hair wasn't something that could be done in just a day or two. "Sorry," Harold said, trying to clear his head. "Oh, and I'll try to earn back the points I lost." "No big deal. Snape would've found a way to dock points even if you were on time," Ron said, shooting Hermione another look. She turned away, avoiding his gaze. For context, Harold had lost fifteen points just yesterday for being late to Potions. "What's the next class?" Harold asked. "Flying," Harry replied—prompting a chorus of groans. "What, you guys don't like flying class?" Harold asked. "No, we just don't want to take it with the Slytherins," Ron said, pointing to a notice posted behind the door. [First-year Gryffindors are to report to the training grounds at 3:30 p.m. Thursday for flying lessons with Slytherin students – Rolanda Hooch] No wonder. Gryffindors and Slytherins couldn't stand each other. They'd argue the moment they met. Normally, they only shared Potions—and everyone just tolerated that. But now, flying too? "Nothing to be done. It's the school's arrangement," Harold said. "Just pretend they don't exist." "Easier said than done," Harry sighed. "But messing up on a broomstick in front of Malfoy? There's no way he won't notice." Harold didn't respond. Harry's worries were unnecessary—but he didn't know that. And even if Harold told him, he wouldn't believe it. As for Harold himself, he wasn't particularly interested in broomsticks. Flying required one hand on the broom, making it inconvenient to wield a wand. That made Harold feel unsafe. So normally, he preferred keeping his feet firmly on the ground—unless he could ride a wand into the air... Wait. Harold glanced at the broomstick Madam Hooch had placed beside her foot and suddenly blinked. The handle of that broomstick—it looked a lot like... a giant wand. The more he looked at it, the more similar it seemed. The proportions of length to thickness matched a wand perfectly. Harold instinctively reached out for a closer look. At that moment, the broomstick leapt straight into his hand as if summoned by thought. "Perfect demonstration—even I couldn't have done it better," Madam Hooch announced loudly. "Gryffindor gets two points. But next time, please raise your hand before the demo. We'll let it slide this once." Harold wasn't even listening to her. His focus was completely on the broomstick's handle. It was perfect... The surface was a bit rough, but there were no cracks. That meant the core structure was undamaged. Harold pulled out his wand and tapped the broomstick lightly. The wooden handle uncoiled like a roll of paper, separating into a dozen thin sheets in the blink of an eye. Harold picked one up and closely examined the grain. Fir wood. Premium quality. Judging by its condition, it was roughly a hundred years old. It was well maintained too. If he removed the rough outer layer, the inner wood was smooth and fine—like it had been waxed to a shine. Truth be told, what Harold had just done—dismantling a school broomstick without permission—definitely wasn't allowed. But somehow, no one around him stopped him. Not even Madam Hooch. ...Actually, she genuinely hadn't noticed. Because everyone's eyes were fixed on the sky. Perhaps because of Harold's earlier warning to be careful, Neville had been extremely tense. He misheard Madam Hooch's command and shot off the ground prematurely. Then crashed headfirst into a wall. Madam Hooch had already taken him to the hospital wing. Meanwhile, Harry and Malfoy were now fighting over the Remembrall Neville had dropped. Everyone was too busy watching them to notice that Harold had completely disassembled his broom. Ten minutes later, Professor McGonagall came striding over from the castle. "From that high?! What were you thinking... All right, Potter, come with me." "And you—Ollivander! School rules forbid damaging brooms. Gryffindor loses two points. If you can't fix that broom before the next class, it'll be twenty!" No one answered. "Mr. Ollivander, are you listening to me?" McGonagall's tone sharpened, her glasses flashing with frustration. Hermione gave Harold a hard punch on the arm. "Put the broom back together. Now," McGonagall repeated. Though Harold hadn't seen what just happened, he could more or less guess. He immediately nodded. That seemed to satisfy McGonagall, who then left the field with a sulking Harry in tow. "You're way too bold," Hermione scolded. "Why would you take apart a school broom?" "I didn't damage it," Harold said, pulling out another wand. From his earlier inspection, he was already certain this broom handle met all the requirements for a wand shaft—no modifications needed. What he hadn't had time to check was whether any runes had been carved into the wood. If not, he might actually be able to fly on a wand. Harold raised his wand, ready to restore the broom. But the motion accidentally flung something off the wand—a hair. A single strand floated through the air and gently landed on one of the wooden sheets. Professor McGonagall's hair—leftover from his earlier experiments. After they failed, Harold had just stuffed it into his pocket. Now, the hair clung tightly to the edge of the wood piece—so snug it looked glued in place. No matter how he shook it, it wouldn't come off. "Wait..." Harold's lips twitched. A strange feeling crept over him. He might've just found the perfect match for the wand shaft... No, correction—the hair had found it. McGonagall's hair, pairing itself with something that represented Quidditch... a flying broomstick. Well then—this actually made a lot of sense! (End of Chapter)

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Harry Potter: The Wandmaker
Harry Potter: The Wandmaker Author:BlackVail
Chapter 1: Welcome to Diagon Alley Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 2: Golden Legend Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 3: The Giant and the Boy Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 4: The Savior, the Wand, and Fate Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 5: Preparations Before School Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 6: How Could You Say That! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 7: Don’t Call Me a Wand-Maker Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 8: A Completely Unsuitable Wand Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 9: Very Rude Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 10: We're All Half-Bloods, Really Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 11: The Sorting Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 12: Gryffindor Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Wand Chooses the Wizard Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 14: Mrs. Norris Attacked Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 15: Tom's Revenge Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 16: Ron's Desire Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 17: Professor Quirrell’s Scarf Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 18: Wandmakers Are All a Bit Mad Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 19: The Stubborn Old Wand Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 20: The Wand Core Supplier Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 21: A Round Wand Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 22: Dumbledore Is Very Curious Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 23: Professor McGonagall Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 24: Animagus Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 25: The Three-Headed Dog Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 26: Scouting the Grounds Early Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 27: Charms Class Before Halloween Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 28: A Transaction Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 29: Fluffy, the Three-Headed Dog Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 30: The Pointy Hat on the Fang Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 31: Oh, Thank You So Much Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 32: The Timid Quirrell Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 33: Snape’s Concerns Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 34: The Horrifying Office Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 35: That Wasteful Snape Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 36: A Wand Fit for a Giant Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 37: A Miniaturized Wand Core Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 38: Prejudice Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 39: Conflict Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 40: Christmas Gifts Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 41: Are You Planning to Play Baseball? Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 42: Christmas Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 43: Garion and Lila Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 44: Snowball Fight Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 45: Flitwick’s Curiosity Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 46: Midnight Howls Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 47: The Wand Goes Wild Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 48: Dumbledore Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 49: The Flustered Phoenix Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 50: What Does Snape Know About Quidditch Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 51: Stay Low Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Secret Passage Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 53: The Impatient Weasley Twins Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 54: Cooperation Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 55: Walking Into a Trap Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 56: The Forgotten Dragon Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Forbidden Forest Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 58: Mars Tonight... Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 59: Mysterious Runes Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 60: Two Wand Cores? Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 61: The Wand Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 62: Operation Walking Advertisement Cat Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 63: The Vengeful Three-Headed Dog Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 64: The Value of a Half-Giant Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 65: Speedrun Through the Trials Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 66: The Unicorn's Revenge Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 67: Fragment of Voldemort Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 68: Dragonblood Wood Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 69: The Blue Unicorn Outside the Window Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 70: Overload Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 71 - 72: The Leaky Cauldron and Knockturn Alley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 72 - 71: The Wisdom of the Old Wandmaker Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 73: Romania Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 74: The Dragon Sanctuary Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 75: Is Voldemort Even Worth It? Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 76: Newt Scamander Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 77: The Trap in Knockturn Alley Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 78: A String of Six Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 79: Mr. Borgin's Guess Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 80: Making Money to Buy Dragonblood Wood Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 81: Luna and the Crumple-Horned Snorkack Sticker Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 82: Gilderoy Lockhart Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 83: Legendary Golden Wizard Stickers Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 84: Lockhart’s Signing Event Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 85: The Confrontation Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 86: The Gap Between Wizards Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 87: Mystic-Pattern Chameleon Pouch Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 88: Patronus and the Blasting Curse Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 89: Those Blocked Outside the Station... Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 90: The Witch and the Goblins Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 91: Everyone Boards the Train Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 92: Everyone Boards the Train Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 93: Gilderoy Lockhart’s Self-Introduction Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 94: Professor McGonagall’s Concern Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 95: Popular Defense Against the Dark Arts Class Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 96: A Clash in the Great Hall Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 97: Clears Things Up Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 98: Lockhart’s Class Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 99: It'll Stop Once He's Done Vomiting Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 100: A New Collaboration Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 101: Snape’s Carefully Designed Detention Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 102: Unicorns and Ghosts Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 103: The Skeleton Dance Troupe Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 104: The Bloody Baron Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 105: The Basilisk Appears Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 106: Moaning Myrtle Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 107: Riddle’s Note Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 108: The Shameless Lockhart Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 109: The Treasure Room Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 110: Rita Skeeter in the Castle Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 111: The Persistent Lockhart Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 112: Two on One Broomstick Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 113: Lockhart Steals the Spotlight Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 114: A Gift for Hagrid Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 115: Wands at the Ready Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 116: Power and the Wand Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 117: Footprints Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 118: Earth Beetles Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 119: Three-Headed Dog’s Favorite Seasoning Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 120: Yes, I Did It All Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 121: The Marauder’s Map Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 122: Hello, Riddle Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 123: Unicorn and the Diary Oct 5th, 2025
Chapter 124: Wand Core Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 125: The Grimoire of the Horcrux Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 126: The Fallen Malfoy Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 127: The Horcrux Grimoire Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 128: Magic Ball Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 129: Lockhart Returns to Hogwarts Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 130: A Gift Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 131: Lockhart on the Second Floor Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 132: Dumbledore’s Assurance Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 133: Harold Outsmarts Dumbledore Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 134: Harry’s Discovery Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 135: Electives and the Ever-Growing Fluffy Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 136: The Targeted Chamber of Secrets Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 137: Erratic Transfiguration Talent Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 138: The Porcupine Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 139: Dumbledore Leaves the School Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 140: The Basilisk Returns Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 141: The Whistle Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 142: Three-Headed Dog Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 143: The Repaired Blank Pages Oct 7th, 2025
Chapter 144: The Missing Basilisk Fangs Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 145: What Happened Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 146: Special Services to the School Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 147: Another Ending Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 148: The Soulbound Tome's Transformation Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 149: Exams Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 150: Holidays Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 151: Serpentwood and Basilisk Fang Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 152: You're the Worst Grandson I've Ever Seen Oct 9th, 2025
Chapter 153: A Failed Wand Oct 9th, 2025
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