Chapter 98: The Request from Yui Zaimokuza

Words : 967 Updated : Oct 3rd, 2025
Completely miscalculated... In the afternoon, after the school bell rang, Hikigaya Hachiman sighed as he recalled borrowing Zaimokuza's novel earlier that morning to keep himself awake. He had underestimated the power of Zaimokuza's writing. Originally, he had planned to endure the morning classes and then catch some sleep during the noon break. But who would have thought that Zaimokuza's novel was so potent that it completely wiped away his drowsiness. "Hikki..." From afar, Yui Yuigahama, who was with Yukinoshita Yukino, waving at him eagerly, was watching the situation inside the Service Club room through the classroom door window. "What's going on? Why is everyone standing outside and not going in?" Hachiman walked over puzzled, following their gaze into the classroom. The familiar figure made his face twitch instantly. Clatter... Opening the classroom door, Hachiman stepped inside the Service Club room. Yukino and Yui followed closely behind, eyes cautiously fixed on the figure who had his back to them. "Oh, my dear friend, I finally waited for you!" Upon hearing the familiar footsteps, Zaimokuza smiled confidently. He then spun around in what he thought was a flashy manner and struck a pose that he believed showed off his charisma. "Hikigaya-kun, do you know him?" Yukino immediately recognized this somewhat strange boy as the one who had come looking for Hachiman. Instantly, the panic in her heart vanished, replaced by her usual calm and aloof demeanor. She twirled her long hair and sat back in her usual seat by the window, pulled a book out of her bag, and put on a "you guys talk" expression. "So, what do you want from me?" Though Yukino said nothing, Hachiman clearly read her unspoken message to quickly get rid of Zaimokuza. Scratching his head, Hachiman asked Zaimokuza why he had come to the Service Club. "Heh heh heh..." Upon being questioned, Zaimokuza emitted a mysterious laugh. Then he leaned in close to Hachiman and whispered, "How was that thing I showed you this morning?" ? Hearing this, Yui and Yukino, who were pretending to be busy but actually paying full attention to Hachiman, perked up their ears immediately. Thing? What thing? Some secretive thing exchanged between two boys? Could it be... At the thought of this, Yui's face suddenly flushed red. "Reading that kind of book is wrong!" The words slipped out instinctively. Seeing Hachiman and Zaimokuza turn to look at her, Yui panicked instantly. She opened her mouth as if to say more but, facing their gazes, finally covered her face and fled to Yukino's side. "What is she saying?" Zaimokuza looked confused at Yui's sudden shyness. He had only asked Hachiman about his impression of his novel. Did the girl think his novel was some kind of taboo?! That was too hurtful! "I don't know..." Hachiman shook his head, equally bewildered. Who knew what nonsense was going through Yui's mind just now. But speaking of Zaimokuza's novel... "It's really boring." Facing his friend's hopeful eyes, Hachiman mercilessly pointed out the flaws of the novel. "Ugh!" Clutching his chest, Zaimokuza stepped back a few paces, then quickly gathered himself. Grabbing Hachiman's shoulders, he asked, "What about the rest? At least I've improved compared to my last novel, right?" "Improved, huh." Hachiman pondered, trying hard to recall any strengths in Zaimokuza's writing. After a moment, his face lit up with a "Got it!" expression. Seeing this, Zaimokuza smiled. "I knew it. After all the hard work, I had to have made some progress." "So this time you copied from a different book, right?" Thud. Zaimokuza dropped to his knees, defeated. "That's a bit too much, Hikki..." At that moment, hiding next to Yukino, Yui looked at Zaimokuza pitifully and launched an attack on Hachiman. "That's true. The Service Club's mission is to satisfy its guests. What you just said was really inappropriate, Hachiman-kun. Even if this guy's novel is truly awful, you should express your opinion more tactfully." Yukino nodded in agreement, supporting Yui's point. Pfft! Just as hope sparked in Zaimokuza's heart from Yui's words, Yukino's addition caused him to spit out a mouthful of old blood. "I'm telling you, you wouldn't say things like that if you'd actually read the novels he's written." Seeing Yukino and Yui ganging up on him, Hachiman quickly defended himself. He'd already been quite polite. If they read Zaimokuza's works, their criticism might be even harsher. "Oh? Is that so?" Yukino looked skeptical of Hachiman's words. Zaimokuza's presence in the Service Club meant he passed the entrance exam to Sobu High School on merit. Even if his writing was bad, it shouldn't be as terrible as Hachiman described. "Well, you'll see for yourselves..." Seeing Yukino unconvinced, Hachiman shrugged and stopped explaining. He had already guessed why Zaimokuza came to the Service Club today. If Zaimokuza only wanted Hachiman's opinion, he could have asked during break time. There was no need to wait for him in the Service Club room. "As expected of my dear friend!" Sure enough, upon hearing Hachiman's words, Zaimokuza sprang to life from his fake death and jumped up. He then pulled out three manuscripts even thicker than the one he gave Hachiman that morning and handed them to the three people in the Service Club. "This is the full version of my novel. Please tell me your thoughts after reading it." Adjusting his glasses, Zaimokuza smiled with mysterious confidence. "Is that so?" Looking at the thick stack of papers in his hands, Hachiman sighed. Then he looked toward Yukino. Speaking of which, was Zaimokuza seriously asking Yukino — the sharp-tongued one — for feedback?

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Contents
The Exorcism Story of Hikigaya Hachiman
The Exorcism Story of Hikigaya Hachiman Author:VarieTL
Chapter 1: A System Appeared in My Mind Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 2: The Girl Who Can See Evil Spirits Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 3 - 3 – The Little Devil, Iroha Isshiki Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 4: The Casually Named Instance Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 5 - 5 – Spiritual Flow Technique Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 6: Hikigaya's All-You-Can-Eat Buffet Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 7: Level Up – Intermediate Spirit Exorcist! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 8: The Times Have Changed Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 9 - 9 – The Advanced Evil Spirit That Launched a Sneak Attack Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 10: The Proper Way to Face a Combat Situation Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 11: A Beginner's Tutorial That Ends Before It Begins Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 12: Tactical Suit Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 13: Clearing the Instance Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 14: Morning Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 15: Kawasaki Saki Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 16: The Family Being Watched Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 17: The Extra Bento Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 18: A Little Trick Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 19: Sorry Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 20: A Chance Encounter at the Intersection Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 21: Big Sister Brought a Man Home! Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 22: As If Understanding Something Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 23: Curious Taishi Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 24: The Deal with Kawasaki Saki Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 25: Isshiki Iroha’s Unlucky Day Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 26: Encountering a Strange Evil Spirit Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 27: Is Isshiki Iroha Starting to Doubt? Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 28: Misunderstanding Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 29: This is a Reward! Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 30: Caught Sleeping in Class Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 31: Hiratsuka Shizuka Senses Something Strange Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 32: A Wordless Lunch Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 33: The Silver-Tongued Yukinoshita Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 34: It Backfired Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 35: A Problematic Commission Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 36: The Cheerful Employer Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 37: Thank You for Coming to Me of Your Own Accord Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 38: You Left Me in Their Hands, Didn't You? Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 39: My Body Isn’t the Same, But My Blade Still Cuts Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 40 - 40 End Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 41: On the Distribution Method of a Huge Sum of Money Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 42: This is Female Equipment! Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 43: Misunderstanding Sep 27th, 2025
Chapter 44: Using Their Own Words Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 45: Hiratsuka Shizuka Cleans Up the Mess Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 46: The Ghastly Spirit with a Truly Horrifying Appearance Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 47: A Communicative Evil Spirit Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 48: Worth Millions, Yet Still a Pauper Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 49: Yuigahama Yui Takes Her First Step Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 50: A Guest at the Service Club Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 51: That Day, Hikigaya Hachiman Saw… Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 52: "You Two Have Such a Good Relationship" Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 53: Congratulations on Mastering It Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 55: The Banquet Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 56: Destroying the Banquet Is Completely Meaningless Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Unique-Thoughted Evil Spirit and the Request for Help Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 58: The System That Wanted to Slack Off but Nearly Messed Up Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 59: Arrival in Another World Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 60: When Slaying Monsters, Aim for the Head Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 61: A Rather Cautious Demon King Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 62 - 62 — Spell — Guard Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 63: Sudden Sunshine Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 64: I’ll Cover the Rear Sep 29th, 2025
Chapter 65: Great Bodhisattva Hachiman Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 66: Return Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 67: Saving Someone Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 68: I Got Seen Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 69: Jealous Miura Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 70: Yurikawa Hana’s Mind is Only on... Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 71: My Family Could Barely Be Considered Nobility Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 72: Yui Yuigahama Comes Again Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 73 - 73 – A Rather Troublesome Dango Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 74: Miura Suddenly Appears Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 75: The Lost Miura Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 76: I Could Smell It All, You Know Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 77 - 77 – The Troubled Siblings Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 78: The Head in the Fridge Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 79: An Excellent Neighbor Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 80: Miko Saw a Ghost Again! Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 81: The Malevolent Spirit That Doesn’t Follow the Rules Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 82: The Frenzied Malevolent Spirit Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 83: Arriving at a Serious Place Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 84: The Power of Talismans Oct 1st, 2025
Chapter 85: The Appearance of the Demon King! Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 86: A Fortuitous Search Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 87 - 87 System: Host, would you like to consider corpse collection service? Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 88: Reinforcements? No! An Open and Honest Vacation! Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 89: Komachi’s Doubts Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 90: There Are No Evil Spirits at Miko’s House Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 91: Meeting at the Amusement Park Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 92: It’s Better When Everyone Plays Together Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 93: Conversation with Haruno Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 94: Yotsuya Miko’s Spirit-Summoning Constitution Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 95: Yumiko Miura Wants to Study? Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 96: Love Often Begins with Attraction Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 97: The Exorcist’s Request Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 98: The Request from Yui Zaimokuza Oct 3rd, 2025
Chapter 99: Trouble Comes Knocking in a Different Sense Oct 3rd, 2025
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